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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jaschick


Naan beach towel 😆



Me too beach towel .. for some swaying palms, gentle Breeze with a Pinacolada and Harit
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SWAN123



Me too beach towel .. for some swaying palms, gentle Breeze with a Pinacolada and Harit
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Oh ❤️ ! Me too pinacolada !!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SWAN123

Really nice writing Nisha.. I loved how you brought out the meal - Roorkee Braeiley.. contrast. The scenario is startlingly different for Teeku! She's sidelined.. not the Princess any more!!
Darn that must be difficult till she becomes Harit's queen!! Although Teeku is perhaps right to think he's gay 😆

Harit has seen her with Chandan ( loving him, taking care of his unmet needs,trying really hard to be there and be right for him). He has also seen her around the table guileless and emotional in her replies.

I wish he would chill a little and be a little more caring. Day 1 at your unfamiliar in laws place is difficult for Teeku. She deserves a little TLC. Some reward for jumping into the fire. He can see that from atop his perch can't he??

Nothing can irritate a girl more asking her if she needs doctor when all she needs is some affection for her to know she's wanted!! I do hope Harit can honestly see through her defense and reach out.
He's on home ground and can be less defensive.

Nisha you have me back here.. forcing me to get here as early as I can and write out when I need to give away my plants and tape my boxes.

Jas thanks for the hugs!! Needed them.
I had not figured out that picking your things and putting them into cartons making sure I still stay under the limits assigned would be so demanding. It more than moving your stuff it's is packing and leaving you life here behind I have learnt. I have some stuff in storage which I need to weed out and I suspect is going to be even more demanding. Can't leave behind memorabilia from people can you 😛
Have good week ahead ladies!!



I can imagine sooo well -you sitting on one of the taped boxes, with tape tool inside one arm, pen inside your top knot and reading n writing CKP reviews (getting glares from better half) 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RedGarnet

Uff... Nisha! How can you stop like this?

Jokes apart, first time these two are having a real conversation. Nice!


Now that she is bemaar', Is he going to accompany her to the school ?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Many gowns & one saree

The next couple days she was in no mood or shape to take Chandu to school but made it a point o sit down with him with the iPad to review progress much to Chandu's chagrin. The tantrums continued. Harit lingered when Suman brought tea.

"Baithein aap aur chai peeyen, almari hum laga denge she promised

"No... I have nothing to do hum laga denge

"Ma aapko khaana banana nahi dengi jab taq aap Roorkee ho aayen Suman explained

"Harit laayen chai aapke liye?

"No Bhabhi, hum bus poochhne aaye ki tabiyat ko kya hua hai

"Dekh lein aap, shaqal inka kitna murjhha gaya hai Suman insisted

Teeku could feel her face being flushed and red from the embarrassment of having him come up and check on her

"Dekh rahe hain hum he played along with his Bhabhi, his eyes intently planted on her cheeks

"Harit hum to dharna karte agar Rishu ne apne kamre ko navy aur greys mein drape kiya ho to. Avantika phir bhi kaafi sanyam dikha rahin hain Suman needled the whole separate bedroom situation

"Chandu hamare bagair nahi sotey Avantika quickly insisted why cant hop on Harit's bed

"Neela rang pasand nahi Chandu ko? Suman mocked

Oh! The mortification, thought Teeku of having to explain to a new relative the quandry of why she cannot ravish a unwilling husband

"Bhabhi hum neeche hain. Avantika call me if you change your mind

"I am Not sick she said firmly

"That's right he bit his lower lip and walking away

Then she accused her SIL of putting her in an awkward spot

"Arey hum Harit ko nahi kahenge aapke tabiyat ki baat to kisko kahenge?

"Bhabhiii... REALLY? I mean its just cramps... I ... he says Doctor... doctor... Doctor bhi kya sochenge Teeku shook her head cringing

"Alka se pooch lein aap who mahiney mein kitne newly wed hubbies ko aadhi raat ko reassure karti hain ki their wives are not dying Suman laughed heartily

"No!!! Teeku looked shocked

"Avantika, Rishabh abhi bhi hamey data te hain jab hum neeche oopar karte hain har mahiney Suman spoke fondly blushing

"You tell him EVERYMONTH even now? Avantika was horrified

Suman held her belly and laughed until she cried, "You do know they find out don't you? "Avantika, when you spend the night with them, they know... umm... aap ek dum nave ho

"Hum Dilli mein job kar chukey hain 4 saal Avantika huffed

Slowly realizing what a fool she was with the prior comment

"I guess... I am sorry... I am just unable to believe you actually called him she shook her head

"Don't be so jumpy. Suman whispered in her ear

"HOW? Avantika begged

"Breatheee ek baar... do baar Suman exhaled and showed her

"I didn't know him before she explained

"Baag ya cheetah to hain nahin Harit Suman laughed

The next couple days, she got Chandu's things together and slowly started to organize his room in the Vaidya annex by herself

She was excused from the morning poojas a couple days because she wanted to sleep in

On Wed morning, Alka Bhabhi helped her drape a saree

One of the the windows in her bedroom was flapping all night unlatching itself so the carpenter that was already working in the other part of the house was expected to come shave the side down.

They were parked by the blind drawn window of Harit's bedroom by a maple ladder leaning against the blackboard wall.

It was a gorgeous Banarsi silk saree she had received as a gift from Rishabh and Suman, in orange and purple.

Alka showed her twice and and draped it for the third time

"Don't even embarrassed, ek saal bhi laga to hum sikhayenge aapko she panted as she bent down pressing down the pleats running down from her belly

"thank you

"BTW I love your blouses haan... Ma kaafi conservative hain, par aajkal thodey relax ho rahe hain she whispered

"I think saree is very boring Teeku whispered

"OMG... Nahiii... its can be a very provocative garment

"KAISE? It covers from head to toe

"Haan shorts ya bikini to nahi hai, it doesn't display the goods upfront but it intrigues Bhabhi insisted

Avantika was not convinced

"Achha aap, matching jewelry pehan ni ho to pehankar neeche aa jaayen, hum log tulsiji ke paas hain inner courtyard mein

She nodded

She walked over to the bathroom looked at her reflection in the waist length sink mirror returned and felt bunched up around her tummy and pulled it all out!!!

Tried, once... twice, thrice to wear it... too many pleats or too long a pallu... she was tearful and in panic

The door opened

"I am so sorry Bhabhi she mumbled as the saree pooled around her feet

She noticed it was Harit

Her insides did a twirl and a somersault, she quickly grabbed the black robe/gown draped on the ladder and held it upfront

She held it like a sheet of paper with both hands

"Do you see Alka Bhabhi? she squeaked

He walked over to her and stood inches from her

"No he said looking down at his robe covering her

"what do you want? she demanded

"My robe he said still gazing down at how she was hiding behind it

"I am trying to wear my saree, I can give you in 5 minutes?' she promised🤣

He folded his arms across the chest and waited

"Not while you are looking!! she scoffed😡

He didn't budge

Boring lawyers don't take good instructions😳

She leaned on his blackboard wearily as they had a staring match

"Didn't she just help you?

"How do you know?😡

"I was hoping to get it she said I need to wait and so bolted the door" he told her coolly

"Umm... she did Avantika admitted

"Andd? he looked at the gorgeous orange silk ina circular pool around her feet

"I thought I should try one time😭 she explained

"How did that go? he asked😆

"I don't know... that's why I am asking if you can come back later? she was infuriated😭

"I need my gown"😳 he told her

"Don't you have MORE THAN ONE? "You have all these scribbles on the wall and ONE gown? "she let go of one bunched up grip to wave mockingly at the blackboard

Quickly grabbing it back again as she saw his eyes glitter with excitement

"Oh I have dozens he said

"Phir please? she begged weakly

"Hamey yeh gown chahiye he said softly

"Aapko aati hai saree pahen ni? she stumbled on the wearing and draping.

Instead of asking do you know how to drape she asked how to wear.

He smiled resplendently

"You don't know how?? she begged hoping if HE helped then she wouldnt have to be embarrassed in front of Bhabhi and her secret (of trying to wear it by herself) will remain safe

"Why? "You think I am gay? he asked blandly, his tone Only a gay man would drape a half naked woman with a saree

She turned the most intense red upon hearing the word

"Not like that at all.. she reassured refuted her not too long ago observation

He took a step forward

She clutched the edge of the blouse at both shoulders as she gripped the gown tighter.

He yanked effortlessly on the left

When she choked for air that side was gone, and then the other side, he held it in one hand carelessly, placed both arms on either side of her head and bend down as she stuck to the wall like a petrified lizard,

He bend down and ogled to his heart's content, roving over her now almost exploding curves fighting for freedom from under what seemed now like a size or two small blouse, the fine black bead necklace tucked well into the luscious dark depths of her valley

wandering down her waist pausing over the delicious navel cavity, nomadic on her neck. The henna clearly going up her arm to nearly the ends of her sleeves.

She stood frozen not breathing at all. She noticed every pore on his green jaw, the weekend freedom taken away by Babuji.


The long audible breathing from both the only sounds for five minutes besides the swoosh swoosh of the carpenter next door sanding down the window.

"Thankx he muttered stepping away

And she waited... and waited... Upstairs until Bhabhi showed up again after half hour to discover she needed help again. This time to an Avantika that was unusually flushed and jittery.

Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nisha, pls pass me my smelling salts.. ☺️ i feel faint!
Ooof...who knew lawyers could be so exciting!!😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
😳 flushed Avantika! Bhabhis are going to talk !

He found out about her gay comment 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
She needs a practical demo for everything!! The LAWYER OBLIGES On two counts... one ... on how a saree could be extremely provocative and 2 ) that he is not gay

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Edited by Errantnomad - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lol ... she is so desperate to get saree tied. She is not realizing what might happen if he attempts to drape her !
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's hilarious ... the trouble of the yards ... of the sari and the yard covered by a green jawed man . Everything stands changed from now. 😊

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