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Posted: 8 years ago
Nisha can we get more updates pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ooo...annalum nokinaan avazhum nokinaal !
(From Tamil Ramayanan - Ram/Sita looked at each other).

Except here, Lilac beauty is focused on the black lace-up shoes :))

The black lace-up shoe owner is awestruck !!!

Wow Nisha - I lost my sleep now !!!

In ashu's style, aage kya whoa
Edited by jaschick - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Did he change for Mangni right after court and forgot to change the shoe 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad

Sonal, is there any way you can the insert the pic of the couple also in there? I saw a pic of a boy somewhere sitting on the the curve of a moon and a couple holding hands staring at the moon

I loved the caption of life isn't perfect but there are perfect moments..that's perfect.



I will Kalpana if I can get the pic...
Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome story Nisha!!!!
I'm totally hooked up to this.
Just a question will Harit and Avantika have big ego clashes like our II and R&B?
Would love to know more about Harit. Will he be possessive and mischievous tormentor like our R&B.
Sorry for comparing with R&B. I simply can't get over him even after all these years. That dude has made so many girls fall in love with him with his half smile.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Involuntary intimacies

She almost walked past him, Himani has texted his outfit description and a sideways picture she had hurriedly taken to Meeta.

Meeta pulled Teeku back, and called out to Harit

"Hi! Harit she screeched

The crowds gawked hoping to see some touching or hugging or lusty glance between the bride and the groom

Avantika turned sideways and came face to face with the black lace up shoe guy, she let her eyes travel from the shoes to the face

He held a glass of something in his hand.

"SHE is your bride Meeta presented Teeku with giant arm waves and sways like she was a prize

"Avantika he said coolly

"Umm.. hi she nodded suddenly tongue tied

Up close and personal he seemed very intimidating today

"We have met before he nudged her memory

She remembered how she sobbed and begged to see Chandan and how she was denied

She nodded lost in the events of that day

"Pehchana nahi na dono ne? Meeta giggled

"I did he said firmly

"Umm Teeku tried to come up with something equally terse but could not

Crowds pushed him forward

He pushed back a lil firmly

"Yaar hamey milwayen

"Hey how about me man

"Bhabhi hum, devar

"Bhabhi, isko line par rakhne waale hum hain

Avantika noticed he did indeed have lots of hair, his chin had a dimple under his lower lip, and his jaw was green

An unusual flutter happened in the pit of her stomach and ascended its way up and trapped itself in her chest

"Umm she looked everywhere trying to get a word out

Himani and Shyam were beside her

"You look stunning Himani gushed

"Ma... where were you Teeku whispered

"Arey aap, baat to karen she nudged and gently shoved her towards Harit

"Did u have a good trip? he asked politely

"Umm.. hmm.. yes she croaked

"Umm she tried to come up with a question for politeness sake

"I live here he said with a taunting twitch of the lower lip (in case she thought she was going to ask the same question back at him)

She nodded dazed

Chandan realized she was there as she was walking toward the engagement gazebo

"U are getting married? he asked delighted

She held him in her arms as he cupped her cheeks

Everyone watched astounded

"No not today she made a face

"You are not getting married? his eyes filled up

"Not today chhotu, in two weeks she said

"Can I come home with you she hugged him overcome with emotion and held him for the next few minutes, squeezing him tight

The pandit, the in laws and the parents hustled them to the havan, key people were introduced

Chandan would not leave her side for one second

It went on for what seemed like 10s of hours to Teeku, but was actually over an hour

"Abhi angoothi badal lewen the pandit urged

Everyone clapped and cheered and teased

"Hamey pehanne ki zaroorat nahi kyon? Harit whispered in his Alka bhabhis ear

"Arey kyon nahi, laayi hongi Avantika Alka screeched

"Laaye kya? Ya inko shaadi taq bina ring ke rehne dene ka permission hai

Teeku didnt know who even had the ring, she was busy playing with Chandan and his action figure

"Umm she turned sideways

"Betaaa, hai na ring Himani hissed "Dhyan do she scolded

Handed Teeku a box, and then took it way since it was his turn to adorn her

"Right? he asked waving the ring at the crowd

"Arey right nahi Ma left... aajkal to sab left mein pehante hain Alka and Suman chorused

He was holding her right hand

He looked at them confused

But sensed her fingers had closed on his left hand involuntarily as the soon to be wed couple looked to the crowd for opinion. Her hand was cold in nervousness, his was sizzling.

"Right... they screamed "Nahii... left "Arey right... hamare mein seedha haath chalta hai pandit said sanctimoniously

"Kaunsa? Harit sighed

"seedha haath beta Lakshmi urged frustrated, she shushed the crowd

It was all a blur for her, the next few minutes. He slid a sparkling rock surrounded by rubies in her right ring finger.

She took her hand and admired the fiery jewel the shimmering sparkle taking her breath away. Or so she thought that's what took her breath away, as his firm grip on her fingers relaxing but not letting go

Everyone clapped and music played

"Aapki baari Meeta giggled

Harit looked at the crowd for input

"Can I see? "Can I see? Chandan jumped up and down

She showed him the box bending down

"Where is my ring? Chandan asked confidently

She chuckled

"Beta seedhe haath instructed her MIL

She put her hand out to grab his, his was on his side, he made no attempt to bring it forward.

She held his wrist with her left hand, and slid the ring in his ring finger and immediately after the loud clapping and drums

"hamey laga haath kaafi der pakda jaayega, ring tight hogi someone hollered, someone else said something and the ribbing began all over again as it does usually in arranged marriages

"I love you keh de boss

"say it man

He turned towards the crowd to find the voice and grinned as they held hands involuntarily for the second time

Edited by Nisha0604 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
😳 ❤️

Lovely ... dreamy !!!
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"Right? he asked waving the ring at the crowd

"Arey right nahi Ma left... aajkal to sab left mein pehante hain Alka and Suman chorused

He was holding her right hand

He looked at them confused

But sensed her fingers had closed on his left hand involuntarily as the soon to be wed couple looked to the crowd for opinion. Her hand was cold in nervousness, his was sizzling.

"Right... they screamed "Nahii... left "Arey right... hamare mein seedha haath chalta hai pandit said sanctimoniously

"Kaunsa? Harit sighed

"seedha haath beta Lakshmi urged frustrated, she shushed the crowd


This is right out of a real life wedding/engagement. Bride and groom always confused and looking for people to say what to do next ... super !!!!
Edited by jaschick - 8 years ago
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"Did u have a good trip? he asked politely

"Umm.. hmm.. yes she croaked

"Umm she tried to come up with a question for politeness sake

"I live here he said with a taunting twitch of the lower lip (in case she thought she was going to ask the same question back at him)

She nodded dazed
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She put her hand out to grab his, his was on his side, he made no attempt to bring it forward.

😉 He is such a tease !!! She is in a lot of trouble !!!
Edited by jaschick - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Avantika is now going to remember a lot more than the black lace-up shoes after this engagement!!!

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