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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Nah! Kalpana

This wont have much super emosunal rona dhona stuff. This is more like a coming of age story of a young innocent girl with a big heart



Too good ...That's even better. Let's ring in the cheer 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ahhh... nice treat Nisha as I land into a rainy gloomy weather.

Kalpana- I think we have a moist panju' here 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Nah! Kalpana

This wont have much super emosunal rona dhona stuff. This is more like a coming of age story of a young innocent girl with a big heart


Greedy me ! Can we have more pleeezzz 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mr Black devil turns into Mr Grey boring ... let's have a peek into his room Nisha ! Let's get some Mr.Blue to relax and calm !
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jaschick

Ahhh... nice treat Nisha as I land into a rainy gloomy weather.

Kalpana- I think we have a moist panju' here 😆



Moist panju 😆 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Haldi shorts

"Haldi ma pair mein laga lenge hum, aur baajuon mein, taangein rehne dein Harit begged

The Vaidyas were hugely traditional and ritualistic. The Sessions Judge's home had taken on a ear splitting, raucus feel. Kids running everywhere, Rishabh's son Suyash was the leader of a gang of boys running through the house carrying the traditional Hindu flag, a triangular scrap of orange with Om on it

The other boys screeched behind him

Gauri and Garima ducked behind aging aunts and grandmas so the boys wouldn't find them

Chandan had kicked a chest of drawer in Vaidya's bedroom this morning, sending a glass bowl with water and rose petals crashing down

Lakshmi had swiftly picked him up so the flying shards hadn't struck him

He refused to drink milk demanding Teeku be brought over there

The other three Vaidya grandkids were quite mellow, feared authority and were reverential to grandparents, understandable given that they were being raised in a joint family

Chandan was a rebel

"Beta aap baat to sun lein. His mother chased him into his room, he just passed through going over to his adjacent office. The 3rd bedroom was cleaned and a new set of furniture put in already.

This bedroom had curtains. His rooms hand bamboo blinds, and so did his office.

He went over to his black leather chaise lounge and bent and picked up his phone

"Ma hum keh diye, hum kewal shorts mein bahar takht par nahi baithenge he blushed self consciously

"Aap bahar padhe hain, swimming pool gaye hain kis baat ki sharam? his mother was relentless

"sharam is baat ki hai ki pool mein hamari mausiyan, bua, tai Dadi Nani, BHABHI nahi rehtin he scoffed

"Who kuch maanengi nahi beta

"No Ma he was adamant

He just picked up the mountains of paper near and under the chaise lounge and stacked them carelessly on a solid oak, century old book shelf with lush floral carving all over the trim with two doors at the bottom, and 5 open shelves on top

"Bhabhi kya sochengi? Lakshmi followed him like a puppy

"Ki humne kapde nahi utaare? he put it crudely

She smacked him

"Ma, hum abhi aate hain neeche aangan mein, but please humse na dhoti ka kahen na taangon mein haldi ka

"Kal aapki bahu humse naraaz huin to

"Chintan a karen hum keh denge agar hum par se haldi aur mogrey ki khushboo nahi aayi to isme aapki galti nahi hai he smiled gloriously

"Beta yeh shubh kaam hota hai

"Hum maante hain Ma, par itne saare... umm... (ladies) se hum haldi nahi lagwa sakte he was firm

"Dhoti pehen lenge? she begged one last time

"Umm.. sochenge he nodded

"Neeche chalen beta

"Jee he smiled at his mother kindly

She ran up to him and hugged him tight

"Natkhat hain beta aap she said teary eyed

He squeezed her arms fondly

He walked over with the remaining sheaf of papers towards the Scandinavian desk by one of the tall windows and opened the drawer, paused, peeked at the picture inside and smiled and shut it, leaving the papers on top of the desk by his laptop

And exhaled audibly, peeking out the window at the pandemonium downstairs in the inner courtyard

Women were dancing with pallu on their heads

He shook his head turned around and walked away

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Posted: 7 years ago
"peeked at the picture inside and smiled and shut it,"
Whose picture is this?
Thanks for double dhamaka!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ooh !!!!! Haldi main hulchul ...What was that!!! Or who is that in the pic? And why is our hero Chunni Lal having an exasperated sigh!!!! toost in the tale' ... is turning up the heat a notch higher.

Halchal hui, Zara Shor hua aur Dil Chor hua... teri aor hua... aisi Chali jab hawa...Ishq hua hi hua
... ooh!!!! Nice Nisha.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nisha you are on a fire today...
And I m loving it
Both the updates were like a marriage is happening in my house
Parlour wali talks.. creating tantrum on haldi saree selections.. new furniture I mean everything is so perfect and the description is so wonderful it's like happening in front of my eyes!!
Beautiful!!
👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
Tuc
Nothing scandalous what so ever

Rest assured

This is not a story of espionage or intrigue or sex scandals or ex or current girlfriends

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