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ishruhi

@ishruhi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

"What we have loved
Others will love
And we will teach them how
❤️

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Neha

@Neha07

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Wow! The story has started to roll in full swing it seems. AVantika does not want to get married to a lawyer and she wants someone who is fluent in English. Bareilly main apni English bolnewala bhi milega aur wo lawyer bhi hoga Miss Avantika 😉 . So will she go to Bareilly now?? Waiting 4 d next update.

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Errantnomad

@Errantnomad

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: ishruhi
He took the kid...
And he speaks english very well...
So two of her favs are at same place...😉

Point point!!!! 😳

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Errantnomad

@Errantnomad

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: ishruhi
"What we have loved
Others will love
And we will teach them how
❤️

❤️ ❤️ me too double love!

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Errantnomad

@Errantnomad

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Neha07
Wow! The story has started to roll in full swing it seems. AVantika does not want to get married to a lawyer and she wants someone who is fluent in English. Bareilly main apni English bolnewala bhi milega aur wo lawyer bhi hoga Miss Avantika 😉 . So will she go to Bareilly now?? Waiting 4 d next update.

Sweety Tera Drama...
Aabra ka dabra mora sawara hai bawra
Dhoti kurta pehan ke ghoome Delhi ho ya agra 😆 😆

Neha, her sawara is certainly no bawra and wears English,black trousers and pants.

Mujik ...

The mujik and Sweety Tiku's song is more going to be like

kaahe maare re taana
kyun banta hai sayaana
na main teri gujariya
na tu mera deewana

Yes Nisha mujik pls 😆 😆 waiting for her to become Bareilly ki Barfi' 😳

Edited by Errantnomad - 7 years ago

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Errantnomad

@Errantnomad

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

I don't love you like salt rose or topaz, my love is more like certain dark things ...
Shadow and soul...

Wowww Nisha ... pablo Neruda ... hmmm... so beautiful, how do these people think like this ... glad to hear about this poet 👍🏼

Vani would love this story I feel 😊

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Errantnomad

@Errantnomad

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

More later...

Keep writing Nisha. It's beautiful. So many characters , the background is awesome ...bas munne ko khud ka ghar jo woh keh sake dila dena...