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Posted: 7 years ago
Plus I am not writing it for the billions that watch Kekta shows. I am writing for the 50? 30? of you that read daily
I will write simple love stories spun around real life situations of almost real like people. No rebirth, reincarnation, mystery death, look alikes, molestation, rape, child marriage, social awakening drama

I am not Akshay Kumar or Salman Khan. I am not dodging jail or trying to churn billions by talking about toilets. I dont have to fake depression or amnesia or Alzhiemers or Parkinsons like Deepika🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
Super Nisha ! Sitaram has always been thinking differently. Solutioning differently. He seems to be a wise man ! Love the FIL/DIL connection !

As Shru mentioned, I can't stop drawing the parallel to Ranjan/II relationship !

Lovely lovely Friday night Nisha ! Thank you !
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Posted: 7 years ago
"Humne kabhi nahi socha, jis din hum Chandu ke peechhe chal padey, ki Chandu ke saath rahenge hum she giggled joyously

Makes me root for Avantika - this heroine is so different from others. She is grown up but with girlish innocence and big heart. Love it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Counting sheep Nisha !

Greedy me is asking ... what next, Enna aparam, aage kya huua I'm waiting for the sweetdream update (as RG callls it )
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
I was knocked out sorry
I just woke

Making my sugarfree coffee😡
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

I was knocked out sorry

I just woke

Making my sugarfree coffee😡


Last week I had a cappuccino and forgot to add sugar. My coworker didn't want to back to the cafeteria and ended up drinking my cappuccino with no sugar. It wasn't too bad. But I can't imagine my filter coffee without sugar !

I'm so glad you are able to keep the sugar free streak going ! Super Nisha 👍🏼
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Giving "pace"

The kids and the newly weds all piled up into a van. Teeku sobbed uncontrollably when she parted from her Dad. Rishabh was already in it along with Harit's Bareilly friend a guy named Puneet

"Meri baat sunen... shhh shhh beta Shyam held her face

"Can you come see me tomorrow? she whimpered

He smiled

"Aaj ja rahin hain aap, kal aa jaayen?

"To hum aa jaate hain? she offered

He kissed her forehead

"Ma humey kehkar bhejin ki na hum royenge na aap he was suddenly fearful of his wife

"Is liye hum kahey ki aap Bani Bhabhi ko kyon laaye? Meeta Bhabhi will never tattle Teeku hugged her Dad tight

"Bhabhi ki shikayat baad mein kar lena. Aap ache se rahen. Ghar mein sabse helpful aur sabse pyaari Gupta choked up

"Daddd... don't gooo she whimpered

Harit stood behind her on his phone

"You would think living independently for 4 years she would be OK with leaving us he smiled sheepishly at his son in law

Harit smiled amused

"She is deeply attached to people she loves Shyam explained

Harit watched his wife's face, her flushed cheeks glowing with moisture.

"Harit chalen betaaa? " Lakshmi hollered from the van before theirs

Hoping that would cause her son to reach out and comfort his new wife and kickstart some intimacy

"Umm yeah... haan Ma he corrected himself switching to Hindi

He paused by Avantika not touching her still.

Gupta was hoping she would be pulled away gently into her new husband's arms

But wasn't...

He gently stepped back, Avantika pulling away finally

She turned and walked towards their van, Chandan almost half out of the window anxious his Teeku Maasi will change her mind in the last minute, waving Spiderman at her "Come... I have PACE... come maasi I have pace (for space)

Teeku quickly pulling her pallu over her head as 10 cars of people watched her with rapt attention

Harit boarded the luxury van after her and sat in the back, she sat between Gauri and Chandan

Shyam watched that his heart hurting.

Teeku's eyes too filled up for her to see Shyam again

Dhruv and Vibhu on both sides of Gupta now, holding him firmly

The van slid out of the hotel portico.

The six or so hour journey would be done in two groups. Harit chatting with his brother and friend about the match, during break Teeku switching with Chandan and Garima to the van the bhabhis were in upon their insistence and sleeping the way home.

Dreaming about Srishti and Hemant and waking up with a start, finding Chandan's head on her lap as he snored softly, the Superman resting in the folds of her saree on the front.

She picked it up and looked at it, her hand smelling like cypress and lime. She had gone back up to their room to pack and found her astringent bottle smelled like that. It had never smelled like a male cologne/aftershave outside the bottle in all these years😆. (He had tipped it into the sink accidentally with slippery aftershave hands in the morning)

She now knew someone that wore that scent...

She inhaled her palm again

Set the action figure back down and dozed off

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Posted: 7 years ago
Jas if the weight was not dropping I would have given up looong ago
It seems to be having an effect so I am hoping I can keep it up
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Posted: 7 years ago
Bhare Bhare Naina Tere...
Chookhe bole na choohna mujhe

Every now and then, almost unpermitted , the trespasser in the form of a certain cypress and lemon scent, manages to invade her senses and space not withstanding the invisible private property' board stuck on her person.

Giving pace'( space ) is being watched by set of people with hearts hurting , heavy beats as if they were beating with an aid of a pace'maker.

Understandable, Himani and Meeta are not there to see her off...Tugging ... as a couple of moments personal passing through my eyes as if it happened yday. What a lovely start to my morning. Thank you very much Nisha.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Not only Lakshmi vaidya and Shyam Gupta, it was me as well imaginatively egging Harit , saying cmon man , surely you can do that, just put a hand over her shoulder ...she wouldn't mind...
But...

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