FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed

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Hi Friends 

am starting a new story, it starts from the third Tallaq and is redemption with a twist. I have changed few situations, added few characters and absolutely deleted few not so lovable ones๐Ÿ˜†. Its Beintehaa with

a bit of Tadka, might be a bit heavy emotional at times. In case you all like
it, please like and comment so I can update faster. In case you all don't like
it ...Then kaha suna maaf...


Introducing"Beintehaa ...Ishq"


Chapter  1


Tera Dedaar..


He kept on staring at infinity...was this true or was this a
dream just like the other ones. But then he saw her again and he was sure it
was his Aaliya ...He finally found her. One year and several cities , and
finally his search ended today. He closed his eyes and remembered the last day
he had met her a year back...it was a dark day in his life ...in her life.


A year back...


They had reached the hotel and his mom and entire family
were waiting for him to tell his final TALAQ ...he vividly remembered moving
towards her and just taking her to a secluded room. Their last lonely night in
the jungle and her words from his love notes had compelled him to make this as
private as possible. He still hated her, but it hurt him too...to see her pain.
Behind this stone faced Zain...still buried was a lovable hubby who had adored
his wife. Inside the room, he closed the door and ...


Aaliya had fainted ...and all he had remembered was waiting
in his room when Rehan had walked in with the tape. By the time he had heard
the truth, it was too late. He had called her ...begged her...but she had just
walked away...sealing his fate forever. It was an end of the road for her with
him , he still felt the pain of not able to find her next to him every morning.
His heart still murmured her name...why did she leave him...why she had not heard
his pleas...A why which had no answers ...


Zain Abdullah was a changed man, and just about no one knew
the fears and shadows of grief that had been following him for the past year. A soulless person ...who lived only to search for his love ...to seek his answers ...to ask for one smile form his Mamu ki Bhanji...that
could get him back to life.

But today...he felt Allah was finally having some mercy on him...He saw her ...near the window ...but this was Rajasthan ...and a SCHOOL.

What was Aaliya doing here... Will she forgive me ...leave apart Forgiving will
she even look atme?
His heart was fluttering, his face was sweating and his
eyes were crying...He will find out...This time he won't leave her ...This time
he will make things go correct... He will just listen to his heart...and only his
heart ...he assured himself ...


He remembered Osmans words

Agar khud pe yakken hai toh
...takdeer usko tumhare paas zaroor le aayegi...

Zindagi ek din bahe failaake tumhe
...apne sarghoshi mai zaroor chupayegi...


He took a deep breath and walked towards the school entrance...


Please do comment


Sim



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Links


"Tera Deedar" Chapter 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490

"Ek Adhoori Mulakat"Chapter 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=3 

"Ajjeb si Uljhaan"Chapter 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=6

"Anjaane"Chapter 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117188626

"Kadva Sach"Chapter 5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117349075

"Forbidden Words"Chapter 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117672962

"Ajnabee"Chapter 7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117928547

"Ek naya rishta"Chapter 8:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118081963

"Tu Noor hai"Chapter 9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118202581

"Saathiya"Chapter 10:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=24

"Phir waise hi"Chapter 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=24

"Kya yehi Pyaar hai"Chapter 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118313056

"Ek Sharth"Chapter 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118353957

"Beete Yadeein"Chapter 14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118464173

"NokJhok"Chapter 15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=37

"Teen Narazgiyaa"Chapter 16:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118535681

"Adhoore Geet"Chapter 17:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118562009

"EK Khwahish"Chapter 18:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=45

"Humsafar"Chapter 19:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118687405

"Sapno ki Duniya" and "Choti si bhool"Chapter 20-21: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118759675

"Azmayish"Chapter 22:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118759736

"Palchin"Chapter 23:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118827331

"Dil ki Baatein"Chapter 24:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118829018

"Haseen Pal"Chapter 25:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118864443

"Irsha"Chapter 26 Part A/ Part B/Part C :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118941413

"Khamoshi"Chapter 27:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118975716

" Notes" Chapter 28: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118980131

"Lamhein" Chapter 29:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119020004

"Khoj" and " Laut Aayi Woh" Chapter 30/31:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119037030

" Kuch Ehsaas" Chapter 32:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119118818

" Dawat-e-Khaas" Chapter 33:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119160262

"Rishton ki Dor" Chapter 34:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119253417

"Tera Saath"/"Doobara Boliyae" Chapter 35: Part A/B: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119262205

"Darr"/"Judi hui ek Raat"/ Suhani Subhah Chapter 35/:Part C/D and Chapter 36::https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=81

"Tera Saaya" Chapter 37:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119333238

"Choti Choti Khusiyaan"  " Pal"Chapter 38 Part A/B: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=86

"Shikayat", "Choona" "Tadap" Chapter 39-41:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119380288

"Ek Mulakaat" Chapter 42:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119506102

"Bhooli Dastaan" Chapter 43: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119550422

"Hosh" ," Shukriya"Chapter 44/45:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119574588

" Har baat ki ek baat" " Choti Choti Baatein " " Dekhte hain" Chapter 46/47/48: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119626518

"Zidd" Chapter 49: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=102

"Aap Kaun" Chapter 50 (Part A/B/C):https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119738503

"Waqt tere saath" Chapter 51:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119773674

" Guzri ek Raat" Chapter 52: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119805146

"Kaun" Chapter 53: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=111

" Parvaah" Chapter 54/ " Tayariyaa" Chapter 55: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=113

"Chitthi" Chapter 56:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119951833

"Woh Pehli Baar" Chapter 57: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119988620

"Office Office" Chapter 58: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120048316

" Cartoon Aur Zain" Chapter 59:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=122

"The Winners Pappi" Chapter 60:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120241099

"Police wale Uncle" Chapter 61:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120273098

"Gabbar se Mulakkat" Chapter 62:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=132

"Dhamaka" Chapter 63:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120330070

"Khana aur Chupana" Chapter 64:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120344154

"Zain ki Parikhsha"Chapter 65:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120381230

" Safai" Chapter 66:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120417213

"Sailab" Chapter 67:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120492556

"Sahil" Chapter 68: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120515210

"Izazzat" Chapter 69: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120549305

"Kaun hai Woh" Chapter 70: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120596290

"Izhare Mohabbat" Chapter 71:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120613860

"Dawat Naama" Chapter 72 and chapter 73 "Toote wade" https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120675777

" Nashukra" Chapter 74 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=164

"Nazdeekiyan" Chapter 75:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4246490?pn=165

"Mehndi ki Khusboo" Chapter 76:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120759952

"Dastak" Chapter 77 and "Alvida" Chapter 78:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120782871


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Edited by Zainedil - 9 years ago
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Awesome concept...
Waiting to see how this unfolds...can I guess Aliya is a teacher here??? 
Cont soon...btw your name is sim, right???

And YA...please PM me...
Edited by 786ahf_bi - 9 years ago
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first part is really superb.continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice concept.
Continue soon.
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Res๐Ÿ˜ณ
Maaf kardena baad me padlungi
Btw best wishes on ur first work

Awesome yaar loved it, 
Amazingly written
Hayee another writer in forum, I'm happy happy, forum activities are increasing...
Keep writing Simon, u write really good
Sorry for late comment
Continue.soon!!
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Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Awesome concept...

Waiting to see how this unfolds...can I guess Aliya is a teacher here??? 
Cont soon...btw your name is sim, right???

And YA...please PM me...


Thank you ...yup my name is Sim ...will PM you ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: -ZaYaholic-

first part is really superb.continue soon.

Thank you ...will do
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Originally posted by: Sobtian...

Nice concept.
Continue soon.

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Res๐Ÿ˜ณ

Maaf kardena baad me padlungi
Btw best wishes on ur first work

Thanks Madhu...yup just trying to write hope you like it