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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..aww..poor zain..feeling bad for him..cant wait for d next updates..cont fast..n get well soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Holiday update ...Enjoy 😃

Chapter 44

Hosh ...

Rhea finally gained consciousness ...

Rehman informed Fahad ...who called up Zain ..

Zain walked inside ...not caring if he would be thrown out again he had to see her ...

She smiled weakly looking at his face ...

Dad ...Zain aa gaya ...

Rehmaan turned around to see Zain standing at the door ...

He just stood there gazing at Rhea ...smiling ...

Aree andar aao na ..Rhea invited him ...

Rehman walked out coldly ...

Da..the words were difficult to say now...

Zain ...she just opened her arms ...

Huggie chaiya ...

Zain rushed towards her ..taking her in his arms ...

he had enough of this ...he wont distance himself ..atleast till she recovers

Kaise ho ...

She smiled showing him her IV lines ...

Zains eyes bore the prick that the needle had made while entering her paper like skin ...getting inside her vein...his eyes gelled with tears ...

He gently placed a kiss on her forhead and then on her hand ...

Da...yeh kya marizako ke tarah padhi ho ...

chalo utho ...kuch nahi hua hai tumhe ...

She smiled ..Zain ...woh kaun the ...

He was speechless ...without thinking he just blurted out ...

Aayat ke Ammi Abbu the ...

Woh Aayat naraaz hai aaj kal Rizwan se ...hum sab unhe milane ki koshish kar rahe hai ...saying the lie he looked around ...

Toh who tum par kyu ghussa kar rahe the ...

Aur uski Ammi itna kyu roh rahi thi ...

Da...unhe lagta hai ...he took a half hearted breath ...Mai zimmadar hu ...isliye ...

Chalo chodo sari baat ...ab kya yehi assan graham karna hai ...

Tashreef uthao ...aur office bhi chalna hai na mere saath ...

She smiled back ...

The moment Rehmaan walked in again to check her Zain silently moved out ...

Bahar wait kar raha hoo..She held his hand ...

Rehman looked at her now ...

Rhea ...his prickly voice ..was more authoritative ...

Mujhe tumhe akele mai checkup karna hai ...

in sahab se kaho ...yaha se tashreef bahar le jaaye ...

Zain looked up towards Rehman, angry ...

Rheas eyes numbed to see sparks of hatred between the two people she so desperately wanted to be together...

Zain held Rheas hand and assured her he will be out ...

Rhea was discharged by evening and Zain happily took her home ...

Da...aaj hilogi nahi is bistar se ...his voice was commanding her now ...

Jee Sarkar aur kuch hokum mere aaka ...her smile and zing to her voice was back ...

Ha...ek aur cheez ...

He sat down ...and again placed a kiss on her forehead ...

Subhah ki baaki thi ...ab se roz milegei ...

aur haa meri adate asani se chooti nahi hai ...he winked at her and walked out ...

She slept ...to be woken after two hours ...

Soup ...Suraiya was standing there ...Rhea smiled ...a bond was formed ...gentle and strong ...

Zain peeked ..and walked away ...Maybe ..there was still hope ...somewhere ...

Bade hassen hai yeh rishte ...

Tod marod kar phir apni dor band hi jaate hai ...

Jitna bhi muh pher lo...

...ek hassi toh in bezubaan hoton par le hi aate hai

SIM

Pre-cap: Taking care of Rhea ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Surraiya is slowly but surely melting for Rhea , it'a good change , i don't know what obstacles , he has to surpass before reaching his Aaliya but i know that he is strong and he will conquer it all and i hope he will be able to found his lost smile , continue soon ! Lots of love !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow finally something came some happiness I am super happy I love this sim ...hope things work out for my zain soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..waiting for d next part cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was really a cute update
vry beautifully written
jst loved it
do cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago

Surprise update 😉

Enjoy

Chapter 45

Shukriya

Rhea woke up to a new world of pampering ...Zain made sure he spent every waking hour with her ...every second taking care of her ...under Rehmans prying eyes ...

He gently placed the tray of lunch next to her bedside ...

Kitkit ...kaha gayab ho gaye the ...tum bade ajeeb ho ...subhah se do ghante ke liye gayab the ...She spoke sternly ...

kaha the ...

He smiled ...pata hai ...namaaz padne gaya tha ...masjid mai ..

His voice sounded dry ...

Khana khaya ...

Nahi ..she said smirking ...

Kis khushi mai ...

Ghum mai ...tum nahi deekhe na ...isliye ...

Pata tha ...tum sudhrogi nahi ...

He smiled and extended the tray ...bland food ..she looked up ...

Mariz banakar rakhoge ...toh wahi bankar rahungi ...

Chupchap kha lo ...

She put the first spoon and made a disgusting face ...

He laughed ...she offered him a spoon he refused ...

tumhe Mubarak yeh beswad khana ...waise bhi mai lunch kha chukka hu ...

Haww ...akele akele ...haa ...

Kya khaya...he laughed her obseeion for food would never go ...

Jyada kuch nahi Chicken Biryani..Kabab ...aur chochlate ice-cream tha ...

She eyed him with jealousy ...

Sharam nahi aati ...mujhe khichdi khila rahe ho ...aur khud thoos thoos ke itna badiya khana kha rahe ho ...

Nahi aati ...bilkul tumhare dad par gaya hu...

Rhea got irritated her illness had made the rift between Zain and Rehman more prominent now ...

Kit kit mujhe chochlate chaiye ...

Nahi mil sakta ...

Par kyu ...

Gabbar nai mana kiya hai ..ab bhi bahut kamzor hu ...

woh mujhe jaan se maar dalenge ...

She smirked ...itni choti khushi nahi de sakte ...kya kaam ke boyfriend ho tum ...

He smiled ...from husband to boyfriend their relationship was on a reverse gear ...

Accha ...lekar aata hu ...par unhe pata na chale ...

Zain stepped out of her room ...

Rhea kept on blushing ...he would obey any atrocious demands ...

In few minutes she was munching on a big chocolate bar ...Zain looked on ...

Thank you the filled mouth uttered those words ...

He offered her some water ...

Chalo tum aaram karo ..mai chalta hu ...

Kaha jaa rahe ho ...

Namaaz padne ...

Aaj kya baat hai din ke paanch namaaz kea lava extra bhi padh rahe ho ...

Haa shukrana ki namaaz padhni hai ...

he remembered how he had mocked Aaliya when she had prayed for him after the accident ...

Mere liye ...

He knoded ...How sweet ...jao jao ...

Zain walked out still smiling ...her innocence always touched him ...

Night he walked in with another tray of food...much better than his previous versions ...

Aree davat hai kya ...itna saara khana ...

Haa tumhare sehat theek karni hai ...

Aur phir petu bologe ...

woh toh tum ho hi ...

She started taking large bites ...

Da dheere ...he gently spoke ...

Yeh lo ...she offered him a bite ...

Nahi ...abhi bhook nahi hai ...baadmei ...

She looked at him with irritation ...

Rhea ate ...and Zain kept on looking ...finally he left for his room ...

Aree papi nahi di ...subhah se ek baar bhi kareeb nahi aaye ...kya hua

Raat koh aaunga ...promise

He walked back to his room and closed the door ...taking the tray of dates out ...

Unaware to her ...he was offering his thanks to Allah for keeping her safe ...

his promise fulfilling as a Wajib Roja(Kept to fulfill a promise) ...slowly eating the first morsel of food in the day ...

He remembered a conversation that he had with Aaliya ...

she was happy eating only the roti and he had demanded a big shehri ...

keeping Rozas was never Zains forte ...staying hungry was a big challenge for him ..by mid -day he would always struggle...the Eid after Aaliya had left ...the entire year ...had changed him ...

Today ...he had kept a Roza ...but he had not eaten even the shehri ...it was as though the change in him had made him more stronger ...

Outside the door Rehmaan stood and looked inside ...seeing him breaking his fast ...a tinge of sadness engulfed him ...Zains love was pure ...he could do anything to protect Rhea ...but will his Aaliya ever surface back ...

Maybe never ...and Rheas growing love for Zain was compelling him to accept Zain ...a thought that still irked him ...

Tere sajde mai kab se khada hu ...

Kab karam bakshega ...yahi soch raha hu

SIM

Pre-cap: Rhea and Zain will their journey pass through this difficult phase
Edited by Zainedil - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 45:
I was smiling like a fool during their conversation...
But after that..breaking the fast alone...no shehri..those flashbacks...brought tears in my eyes..
And if I think anymore about it,I am sure they will flow out any moment...
Continue soon..
Take care too
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 44:
I didn't expect Suraiyya to be that good to her... I cant see Zain in this much pain...
Yet it was a fabulous update...
Flawlessly written
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 43:
Awesome chapter...Bahut saari qualities change hui Zain ki but zidd waisi ki waisi hai...bas tareeka change ho gaya...
It was really very good...
Continue soon..
And thanks for pm...i forget everytime:P
P.S- We want a treat, you are gonna complete 100 pages very soon;)

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