FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 72

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

amazing trio chapters..
Vry vry beautifully defined
jst loved it
do cont soon

Glad u liked all the three
Keep reading
Sim

I m late again
Hope u r all right now.

Update was wonderful
U hav pulledout rhea's character so well.

Loving rhea more n more vo to nikah tak pahunch gayi hai.par ye aliya k parents kyon aa gaye.i just hate them.

Ab darr lag raha hai kahin aliya laut aayi to kya hoga?
Luv u dear n take care

Originally posted by: Aarohi2009

I m late again
Hope u r all right now.

Update was wonderful
U hav pulledout rhea's character so well.

Loving rhea more n more vo to nikah tak pahunch gayi hai.par ye aliya k parents kyon aa gaye.i just hate them.

Ab darr lag raha hai kahin aliya laut aayi to kya hoga?
Luv u dear n take care

Aree koi Baat Nahi u read that matters
Ya I myself am surprised, the mid sections of story I wrote don't go with the rhea I hve created now , I scrapped abig chapter after realizing this
Feeling a bit better, thanks
Basically drowsy Thnks to the cough syrups 😆
Chal u enjoy match
Will update tonight
Love
Sim

Sorry Sorry for the late update, feeling really sick ...fever is not letting me think or write.

Will answer all your comments soon..

The next few chapters are not upto the mark..maybe the fever crippled my writing a bit...hopefully I will overcome this ..

Stay tuned and Enjoy😉

Chapter 43

Bhooli Dastaan...

When Rhea fell in his arms ...all Zain could think about was ...how to protect her ...and the only face he could recollect was Rehmans...

putting her in his car ...Zain called up Rehman his hands were shivering now...dialing the numbers while driving like an insane man ...

Rehmans tone send the shivers in his spine ...

Rizwan had warned him ..one mistake and Rehman would not let her stay with him...

The moment he reached Barkat Villa ...Rehman was already on the door followed by Suraiya and others ...

Zain quietly took Rhea in his arms...and ran upstairs to her room ...

No one spoke ...Zain kept her gently on the bed and walked out ...completely aware that Rehman psyche wanted peace to treat Rhea ..his presence would just aggravate the situation ...

He walked back downstairs unable to see her ...the fragile face ...her pale skin ...the life less form ...

Reaching the living area ...was another incredible site ...Ghulam and Shabana ...were facing Suraiya ...

Zain knew it was an explosive situation ...

he didn't know what were his actions supposed to be ..

Suraiya who would hate him for just looking or talking ...

Ghulam who looked as though he would kill him or his Phoops who was crying bitterly ...

He walked straight towards his Phoops ...selecting the most sane choice amongst the three

Holding her in his arms he made her sit down on the couch ...walked towards the dining area to get her a glass of water ...slowly consoling her and giving her the glass ...not daring to look towards others ...

Suraiya ...walked upstairs ...to his surprise without uttering a single word to him or to her unwanted relatives ...straight to Rheas room ...

Shabana finally consoled Ghulam ...whose anger had subsided now ...all three waited down stairs ...

Zain who was pacing like a caged animal finally stopped on his track...when finally Rehman walked down after one hour ...

He walked straight to Zain ...

Zain looked down ...he knew this is going to be rough ...

Mubarak ho ...Zain looked up puzzled ...Aaliya was back ...he smiled ...finally

Rehman held Zains shoulder now ...

Tumne usse humehsa ke liye kho diya hai ...

The words hit Zain like a slap ...

Joh bacchi kuccha ummed thi ki shayad who theek ho jayegi ..aaj who bhi mit gayi ...

sirf tumahre wajah se...he was shaking Zain now ...where Shabana and Ghulam just stood still

Maine kaha tha ...usse koi bhi tanav nahi hona chaiye ...aur tum ..

he turned towards Rheas biological parents ...inhe le aaye uske saamne ...Rehman was crying for Rhea ...

Zain looked down ...in a daze ...unable to assimilate the verdict ..

Kya woh sab bhool chuki hai ...he couldn't believe that Aaliya would never surface back from her lost world ...

Rehmaans dry voice came back...shayad ...

usse hospital le jaa rah ahu ...aur khuda ke vaste uske samne phir se inhe mat laana ...his folded hands begged Zain ...

Both Ghulam and Shabana were crying now ...

Zain walked towards them and hugged them both ...

They needed a son ...and he was there son too, he had always loved and respected them ...and in absence of Aaliya he would not sheen away from their responsibility...

They embraced him back with a equal vigor ...

Please abhi aap Aayat key aha jaiye ...mai aapse baad mei milta hu ... wiping away their tears he rushed back to see Rhea ...

Rehmans ward boys had already shifted her to a stretcher ...carrying her down ...her lifeless hand pinched Zain ...he walked mutely with them towards the ambulance ...

Following them in his car...a dead man ...with no emotions ...

The next couple of hours Zain was standing in the corridor of the neurology unit ...folded hands and a tensed jaw ...his eyes were still blank ...

He kept on praying for her recovery ...Promising his Allah that he would pay it back whichever way he could...

Fahad finally walked inside Rehmans cabin ...

Zain stood out hearing their conversation ...

Rhea ke nerve damage bahut zyada tha...socha shayad dheere dheere usse sab yaad aa jaygea...par ab ummed na ke barabar hai ...

Woh humesha ke liye kho chuki hai ...ab Aaliya kabhi nahi aaeygi ...

Par yeh aap yakeen ke saath kaise keh sakte hai ...

Fahad pleaded ...

Yakeen nahi ...par bahut mushkil hai ...aise emotional shock se uske recovery par bura asar padha hai...he shook his head in a loss of expressions

Mai usse kal hi wapas le jaunga ...jaipur ...

The last word hit Zain the most ...he walked in almost barging ...

Nahi mai usse nahi jaane doonga ...the voice steady now, he had shaken off all the pain ...

Toh kya karoge ...Rehman was bitterly looking towards his direction

Intezaar ...

Pagal ho gaye ho...who nahi lautegi ...He was angry and disgusted with Zain now

Aap yaha teen mahine ke liye aaye the na abhi toh sirf ded mahine hi hua hai ...mujhe bacha waqt chaiye ..mai ummed nahi chodunga ...Zains voice was calm

Rehman stood up with anger ...

Pehle uski zindagi barbad karte ho ...aur phir yeh sab ...

Maine aapse kaha tha Dr.Quereshi mujhe sunane ka haq sirf uska hai ...sirf woh faisla karegi ..aur koi nahi ...

Rehman sat down on his chair ...feeling like an outsider ...Zain was right ...but he couldn't let her get hurt again ...

Theek hai ...par sirf teen mahine ...phir who laut rahi hai mere saath ...

Zain smiled ...

Aur haa who aaj raat yehi rukegi ...tum ghar jao...Rehmaan looked sternly at Fahad ...instructing him to hold back Zain ...to leash his wild emotions that might hurt Rhea ...

Nahi jaunga ...Rehmaan looked up frustrated ...this guy was so stuborn ...

Toh is hospital mai bhi nahi rahoge ...mai tumahri shaqal nahi dekhna chahta ...Niklo bahar yaha se ...

Zain looked down ...humiliated but not broken ...

Theek hai ...and walked out ...

Fahad ran behind him ...

It was around mid-night when Rehman walked towards Rheas room again ...

he felt he could feel Zain was around...in the darkness he peeked out of the narrow window of his floor.

.a shadow was sitting on the bench in the garden ...peeking inside ...trying to see who was in Rheas room ...

Rehmans heart was restless...He was on the verge of losing his daughter ...and all thanks to this man ...his impulsive behavior had costed her so much pain ...

In the darkness Zains eyes ...were staring back at Rehman ...holding him accountable ...he would not face defeat ...he will win over destiny ...

Rehman closed the curtains ...and walked back ..

Intezaar karenge tere kab tak

...yeh duniya poochti hai ...

Nahi jaanti yeh ...

teri na aane ke khayal se hi meri rooh bemaut marti hai ...

SIM

Pre-cap: Will Zain ever able to get Aaliyas memory back

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Sim I liked it but bechaara zain y do u like him in pain ...

Originally posted by: katmaan

Sim I liked it but bechaara zain y do u like him in pain ...

I can't see him in pain anymore please please bring him out of this please ... I want him to be happy

And my u take rest madam Its k if u give me the red line compilation later

I haven't even started his pain yet, well it's a redemption track n if he has to mend relationships thn he has to fight his way out
Now I m scarred u all will kill me for the future tracks 😉
Trying to rest
Love you
Sim

I Hope you Will recover soon enough , i am scared for Zain , he has suffered a lot i really Hope he gets a his Aaliya back with that pinch of Rhea , as always it's beyond words !
Take care and get well soon !

Emotional update
Hamare zain par itna emotional atyachar
Aur aage aur...zain a dil i can't see zain like this.pata nahi kaisa redemption plans hai aapka darr lag raha hai?

Kahin aaliya memory loss ka natak to nahi karegi memory lautne k baad.

Luv u take care
Waiting for next update