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Posted: 10 years ago
Sim seriously want to read... but I'm fully... occupied...
Will read after my exams...
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Sim I am sorry to comment late
Hell what was it
I mean nothing happened
Ohhk I mean nothing happened but so much happened I was gasping and smiling as well sad in the end ...
I love u for what u write
Ek khaani Jo rooh chooi gayi mera

Love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful updates..loved it..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hai sim!no reply no updates
Naraaz ho kya?
Sorry agar aapko kisi baat ka bura laga ho to..


Ur great pankh 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all the chapters but the 41st ,
Ohk now...the chapters were amazingly written .
Bas ab. Aaliya ki yaad aa rae hai!!!
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aarohi2009

Hai sim!no reply no updates
Naraaz ho kya?
Sorry agar aapko kisi baat ka bura laga ho to..


Ur great pankh 🤗


No re hve been down with fever, n had to update today but harshu n Devdas I went crazy, ur tonight will upload
Sorry
Loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry sim i late again
Ok coming to chapter 39
It was jst amazing
I could actually sense rheas desperateness and zain's fears ..
Hope everything comes out well
Chalo running to read next part
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Chapter 40
Again n amazing chapter by u ...
Aww my poor zainu is strugling so so much
Hope he will get some relieve
Running to read the next one
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 41
It was so passionate sim
I could imagine each n every word

Thanks for giving us this amazing story
Will always b grateful to u for this
Take care
Plzz update soon
Lots of love

Alina
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry for this late update, was not well...Have to still reply to your lovely words

Welcome to Weekend Dhamaka ...

Dedicated to .. Rida ...another great friend from Twitter world ...Always there to read my update and comment ...this ones for you dear ...enjoy😛

Welcome to twist and turns ...my way

Enjoy



Chapter 42

Ek Mulakaat...

That night was the most peaceful Zain had slept in ages ...a placid sleep ...a tranquilizing form of love ...He was smiling all through his sleep.

Rhea caught a glimpse of that mysterious smile on his face ...still wondering why was he so stubborn ...

why was he physically keeping this ridge between them...was he old fashioned maybe...but last night she had seen his desires ...his eagerness and madness just to touch her ...yet he had maintained his posture...distancing his touch from her body. His eyes when they had opened told her a saga ...of deprivation ...it was as though he was intentionally avoiding being loved ...

She wanted to know ...why he kept on saying Tum nahi samjhogi ...why ...what was the thing that he kept on barging on his soul ...the answers ...she needed them ...

The dawn was about to set on the dark bluish skyline ...

Rhea walked close to where he was sleeping ...his head slightly falling off the pillow...he looked so adorable ...she held his hand again, these two days were blissful and today they will be back to Mumbai ...What had life in store for them she had no clue.

Dad se baat karni hogi Zain ...

sari umra tumhe mujhe se yeh dooriyaan nahi banane doongi.

.hum nikaah karenge ...aur phir tumhe apne se kabhi nahi door jane doongi ..wada hai mera tumse ...

Allah meri dua kabool kijiye ...she blew a dua that Rehman had taught her on his face...and gently placed his hand back ...sleeping next to him ...on the ground ...leaning on the couch for support ...

Zain got up in the morning to feel a gentle tug on his hand ...his face was starring right into hers ...she was sleeping on the ground ..uneasily kneeling and inadverantly holding his hand ...his eyes were numbed ...her love was as pure as his ...then why were they suffering ...

Allah ...kya karu ...kaise samjhao isse aur apne aap koh...his eyes softly followed her face ...

Sab theek karunga ...wada karta hu ...he blew a flying kiss at her ...

The rest of the morning was spent packing ...they left for Mumbai ...both with a heavy heart ...

Reaching Mumbai airport, Zain realized Rhea was quiet ...

he felt bad for his last night act, he should have not loosened his guards ...she was his responsibility ...under his care ...how could he misuse her feelings ...

the weird feelings and questions made him turn the car towards the place that he knew would forever give him respite ...towards the dargah ...

Rhea peaked out ...

Kitkit ..kya hua yaha kaise ...

Ek bechaini si ho rahi hai ...bas wahi door karni hai ...chale ...

They walked in and his eyes were dosed with the images of Aaliya showing him to do his first wuzu ...

they way they had tied the mannat ka dhaga ...

and her immense faith on HIM ...

that had paved his way to the spiritual world ...

he was turned from a care-free guy to someone who kept on thanking Allaha for every small happiness that was trickling in his life now ...

The serenity of the shrine gave him the peace...

He had a deep conversation with his god...

Aap jaise chaiye waise meri zindagi badal sakte hai ...

nahi jaanta hoon kya karunga ...

sirf apni dil ki baat sunana chahta hu...mera pyaar paak hai ...

jaanta hu bahut nadani ki hai ..ab aap par har faisla chodta hu...he closed his eyes and moved his palms on them ...

Rhea was already standing out ...after finishing her prayers, waiting near the car ...

Zain walked out with a heavy heart ...waiting for Allahs decision ...tensed

Just before he reached Rhea ...a voice stopped him from back ...

Zain ...

He turned around to see Shabana and Gulam standing there...

Zains feet had buried in the ground ...as though a new storm was about to emerge ...he silently stood there ..unable to proliferate his thoughts into action...

Both Ghulam and Shabana walked towards him ...

Zain ...the name itself stated no previous relationships with him ...a blank expression of his face met theirs ...

Hume batana munasif nahi samjha ...humari beti mil gayi ...aur tumne itni badi baat humse chupake rakhi ...Ghulam was almost shouting at him

Zain knew his words will be useless ...they were angry and all his explanations would further fuel their turmoil ...

He had suffered enough thanks to their foolishness...but not anymore ...

If Rhea would be hurt ...he wont spare anyone ..not even them ...controlling his anger he spoke..softly yet strongly ...

Aap ki beti nahi mili ...Rhea hai woh ...

joh kuch mahino pehle tak na aapko aur na mujhe pehchaanti thi ...

Aap yakeen toh nahi karenge ...par wada kiya tha maine jis din uski yadaasht wapis lautegi us din aapke paas le kar aaunga usse...

Their silence was indicating a storm was about to emerge ...

Zain ...

tum samjhte kya ho apne aap koh...ek baar uski zindagi barbad kar chuke ho ...aur ab phirse yeh khel khel rahe ho ...

their words stabbed him ...with memories that he was struggling to eradicate so far ...

Jaanta hu uska gunehgaar hu ...par aap yeh sab kis muh se keh rahe hai ...

aapne hi toh uske nakli dastakht liye the us police complaint par ...

mujhe chodkar usne aapko bhi chod diya tha ...bhool kaise gaye aap...

Hum sab barabar ke khatghare mai khade hai ...Zain fearlessly spoke

Ghulam started clapping seeing his attitude ...

Wah ...pehle humari beti ke saath berukhi karte ho ...phir talakh ...

jab who dar dar ke thokre kha rahi thi ...tab kaha the tum ...

aur ha joh jilat usse tumhare office mai mili ...uski bhi koi wajah hogi tumhare paas...

Dekhiye ...mai jaanta hoon ...Zain spoke softly

maine kya galtiya ki hai ...par iska matlab yeh nahi ki aapke diye zakhm kam hai ...hum dono sirf aur sirf apni galti sudharna chahte hai ...

aur is waqt Aaliya koh humari zaroorat hai ...

Usse theek kar ke ..uspar faisla chodunga ...agar pyaar karegi to allaha ki marzi aur agar thukrayegi ...the pitch of his voice fell ....toh har sazaa bhugat lunga ...

Zain ...Shabana finally spoke...

Maine humesha tumhe beta ka darza diya hai ...ab bhi deti hu...

Osman bhai ke jaane ke baad ..us ghar se koi naata nahi hai humara ...khuda ke liye humari beti lauta do ...she started weeping holding her hands in front of Zain ...

Zains eyes mellowed down ...

Aapko phupi bula sakta hu ...he asked ...with so many people breaking off their relationships with him he was not sure ...

Shabana knodded her head ...

Zain smiled ...Phoops ...mera yakeen manye ..usse koi nuksaan nahi pahchaunga ...aapki amanat hai ..aapko lauta doonga ...bas thoda aur waqt chaiye ...aap degi na mujhe...

Unknown to the fact ...Rhea stood silently from far ...slowly starting to walk towards Zain ...who were these people ...and why was the lady crying ..as though a cord ...an uncut relationship was calling her ..she walked in their magnetic field ...dazed unaware where her feet were dragging her

The closer her footsteps came ..the heartbeats rate fluttered ...she was hearing their voices ...heated arguments ...

Phoopa ...kaise yakken dilao aapko ...

Kya yakeen dilana hai Zain ...he turned around shocked Rhea was staring at her parents now...their eyes bleeding to hug her ...

Aree Rhea tum ...his voice cracked ...he didn't know how to hide her from them

Zain yeh kaun hai ...saying that she walked like a ghost towards her mom ...and all of a sudden hugged her ...crying ...with a blank mind ...

Rheas cries were hysterical now...Zain moved behind her ...and in few moments Rhea was in his arms ...with a lost conscious ...

All three were standing in a quicksand of time and life was gently dragging them in ...

Bhule nahi bhulte ...woh rishte ...

Toote nahi toote aise dor ...

Ab Khuda teri haton mai hai meri takdeer

Tu chahe le jaaye kisi bhi aur

SIM

Pre-cap: Will Rhea dwindle away ...

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