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Posted: 10 years ago
I am approaching my 100 page anniversary ...
It was an amazing journey ...
I had written 18 chapters ...and now I am uploading my 46th one...I dont know when I started extending the story ...
I will be soon reaching the mid-point that I had written two months back ..it does flow through maybe with slight modifications ...
Maybe I myself dont want to end it soon and thats why I keep on writing more ...but yes as every thing this too will end ...
And I dont know if I would write another fan fiction ... I had been always a silent reader enjoying the great stories here, discovered BI in September...and by then everyone had either left or planning too. I still dont know why I am writing this message, but as the chapters are coming to an end its a sad feeling ...same way that I felt when BI ended.
Thank you for all your kind words ...were my real inspiration ...
Love you all
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

I am in a sort of weird mood today, scary for a writer...one of those days that you dont feel like doing anything ...maybe just cuddle and sleep.

Approaching my 100th page 😃...means celebrations ...my way ...multiple updates ...stay tuned ...

Dedication ...

I have a group of 10-12 followers here ...who have been reading this story right from the start...few silent ones from Twitter world ...few DM ones ...and few who silently read and maybe enjoy but never leave a comment ...this ones to all of you ...

Got really good people here...few who shared the same passion of BI that I had ..we all are hooked by a common bond ...love for ZaYa ...that would never change ...to be frank when I write I imagine Zain ...Harshads face ...and just type ...good bad ugly the words just flow for him...needless to see he was my nariyal(coconut) for my tiny step in this forum and fiction writing world...

All your love and words are priceless ...I might have forgotten to reply someone then really sorry ...every comment is my boaster dose ...

Love you all

Multiple uploads ...stay tuned



Chapter 46

Har Baat ki ek baat...

Life ...it's a mix of maze ...the turns and twists that it holds are unpredictable.

Rhea whose life was getting twisted in hands of destiny was unaware what her loss of memory had done around her.

Ghulam and Shabana slowly started making a new relationship with her just how Aayat had done...

Rehman who had apologized to them about his behavior was now on cordial terms. Slowly accepting the bitter truth that they have lost a daughter forever ...and he had one for life now. It was a bit selfish to think but just the thought that Rhea would never be her old self again was hurting as well as soothing him. He was a lonely man with a son in Dubai and no wife..his life was fully occupied with clinic and his patients. Rhea was his life-line ...

Zain...was on a different level ...as the days passed by when Rhea was not well..he withdrew himself in a shell..No one knew in the fifteen days that Rhea was on bed rest ..when Zain came and when he left...it was as his existence had ceased. He only lived around her,the silence he had engulfed himself was evident to all.

Fahad had tried talking him out, but he refused to listen to anyone. A fear that Aaliya was lost forever and he would probably never be able to redeem from his past was settling in .

What will happen when the time-line settles out when Rhea would have to leave ...Zain had no clue. He was more determined to get his Aaliya back, though Rhea was more dear to him now.

Rhea whose flashes had totally stopped as Rehman had predicted was made to recall things now ...small incidents were repeated to make her re-collect her past.

Her relationships were played back in front of her so that subtly it would make her recall...

Rheas love for Zain had crossed her sane borders now...she had boldly told Rehman that she wanted to settle now , hinting about Zain.

As expected Rehmaan had walked out of the room.

Finally on the fifteenth day, she walked out and was sitting near the pool...

Da...yaha kya kar rahi ho...

Time-pass she looked away..

Kya hua ...koi baat hai ...share kar sakti ho...

Zain ...his full name meant some issue was loitering in her mind ..

Tumne Mami se mere bare mei baat ki...

He knew what she was trying to tell but he acted ignorant...

Kis barre mai...

Yahi ki hum ek doosre koh pasand karte hai ...

He looked at her and didnt know if he should smile or cry on that statement...pasand and marriage and ...

Da..mujhe unse baat karne se darr lagta hai...partly true ...

She was laughing ...Fattu ...

Dekho gai baar tumne fattu bulaya toh kya hua tha ...yaad hai na ...

She laughed at those memory ...that itself was faded now..her trauma had wiped up few recent events too..

Kya hua tha ...mujhe yaad nahi ...

He looked at her with tears in his eyes now ..he was losing both Aaliya and Rhea ...

Da..tum mujhe bhool toh nahi jaogi na ...he wanted to add phirse ...but stopped..

Aree koi sadme koh bhi bhulta hai bhala...she was giggling now..

He looked away..

Accha Mami koh toh mai pata lungi ...par tum bhi koshsih karna ...

He nodded...chalo shurvat karte hai ...

She looked towards Rehmans room his light was switched on ...

Dad se jakar haal chaal poocho

Kiska he asked tensed...

Unka ...she rolled her eyes..

Dimag kharab hai kya ..gabbar keh muh mai haat dalu ...na baba mai nahi jaata ...

Fattu ..

dekho Rhea tum mujhe yeh baar baar fattu kehna band karo ..

waise bji 3 ghante us swimming pool ke pani mai barish mai khda rehkar maine sharth jeetha tha ...kuch yaad aaya he said angrily ...

And she did remember those flashes ...

Aree haa toh ..par galti tumhari bhi toh thi ...challenge aur fattu hone mai farak hai...

Chalo ab jao ...she held his hand and dragged him upstairs ...

He felt as though someone had given him a dare ...he was sweating now ...

Just outside the corridor in front of Rehmans room he stopped...

Da ..chalo bhagte hai yaha se ...woh shayad so rahe hai ...

His murmuring didn't deter Rhea ...

Tum andar jaaoge ...aur unse baat karoge ...aur haa agar adhe ghante se pehle bahar nikle toh ..

Toh kya ...dhamki de rahi ho ...mujhe ...

Haa...

She crossed her arms ...tum jante ho mai tumhare saath kya kya kar sakti hu...her threatening tone was evident

He moved back ...tensed ...Da, yeh galat baat hai ..mai tumpar naraaz nahi ho sakta iska undue advantage mat uthao ..

She chuckled ...chalo jao andar ...

Accha bolo toh sahi agar nahi gaya ya jaldi bahar aaya toh kya karogi..he wanted to see what few options he had ...

Toh ...she thought for a minute ...mai tumse baat nahi karungi ...

She blew air inside her cheeks to give a puffy fishy look ...

Bas itna hi na ...tab toh mai bilkul anadar nahi jaunga ..

waise bhi tumse baat nahi karna ka suhnaa mauka kaise jane du...

Zain ...mai tumhara muh bhi nahi dekhungi ...

Aree wah yeh toh aur bhi badiya hai ...

She was irked by his behavior...

Poore ek din ke liye soch lo...he was still laughing ...

Na khana khaungi na hi davai ...darvaza band karke baithungi ...

Zain went quiet ...

Da..kya bachpana hai ...his eyes showed he didn't like her terms ...

Chalo jao andar ...

She pushed him towards the door ..he looked at her with a mild anger ...she giggled and hid behind the walls

SIM

Chapter 47 coming in few minutes ...stay tuned

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Chapter 47

Choti Choti Baatein...

Zain knocked secretly praying that Gabbar doesn't reach the door ...

He opened ...

Zain looked for words ..

Woh Dr.Quereshi saying that he stepped inside ...forcibly ...and closed the door behind ..

he had no idea what he was going to do for the next half hour with Rehman starring angrily at him ...

Kaha ghusse chale aa rahe ho ...

Zain prayed that Rhea would have walked away ...maybe he should tell him the truth ...

Jee ...aapne khana khaya ...

Haa ..kyu...

Nahi mai soch raha tha ..aaj khana kitna accha bana tha ..he sounded lame ...

Rehman looked up puzzled ...yeh baat kehne aaye ho..

Nahi ..aaj mausam kitna accha hai na ..saying that he walked over the window

Rehman was irritated to see him walking in his room...

Mujhe shanti se sone do..jao yaha se...

Nahi jaa sakta ..he finally told him in a slow tone..

Kyu ...

Nahi bata sakta ...

Toh tum raho ..mai jaata hu ..

Aapko bhi nahi jaane doonga ...

Aree ajeeb zabardasti hai ...

Zain smiled and looked on the bed...

He bolted the door from inside and walked and sat near the bed ...

Aap bhi baith jaaye ...looking at his watch he said Time lagega

Please ...

Rehman was cursing him ...but he sat down on the chair..

Pata hai Sir ..the word Sir ..mocked at Rehman ...his words to address him never with Uncle ..

Meri Aaliya se shadi zabardasti hui thi..

maine usse bahut tang kiya ..

bahut baar itna parehsan kiya ..din ginta tha ki kab jayegi woh meri zindagi se ...

Pata hi nahi chala kis lamhe mai woh dost ban gayi...

Rhea jaise nahi hai Aaliya ...bahut hi samajhdar hai ..his voice was heavy now

Rhea mai bachpana hai ...toh Aaliya bahut hi suljhi thi ...Deene taleem ki bahut pakki thi ...

Mere Dad bahut pasand karte the usse ...

unka kehna tha ki hum dono ek jaise hi hai ..

dono ki shadi best insaan se karane chahte the ...kara bhi di ...

bahut shidat se humara rishta bandaha tha unhone ...he sighed ...

Hume takdeer ne milaya tha ...jab dono ek doosre se payyar kar baithe toh sare problems koh saath mai face kiya.

Har waqt uske liye khada tha mai ...Maine uska saath kabhi nahi choda...

Par kisi ek lamhe ki galti kehiye yaa meri takdeer ...

dad ke guzar jaane par ...maine ek bahut bada gunaah kiya ...

Aap nahi the ...aapne shayad sirf uski diary mai padha hoga ...

Bahut zilat uthani padhi usse meri wajah se...

par mai akela galat nahi tha ...Phoops aur Phoopha ...aur ...he kept quiet sealing Nafisas name ... bahut saare log shamil the ...

Woh alag baat hai ...ki shayad uska sabse bada jurmana mai bhar rah ahu...aur shayad age bhi bharta rahoon..

Aapne mera pyaar nahi dekha hai ..meri tadap nahi dekhi hai...isliye shayad aap samajh nahi sakte ...

Na hi aapse koin ummed hai mujhe ...mai jaanta hu mera pyaar kitna paak hai ...

Dr.Quereshi ..aapki biwi bhi toh is duniya main ahi hai ...kya aapko kabhi uske saath kiya kuch galat palon ka dard nahi hota ...Rehmaan looked down...

Hota hai na ...

Mujhe bhi hota hai ...farak itna hai ..ki aap shayad kabhi nahi dekh payenge apne begum koh ..aur mai roz dekh kar bhi kabhi maafi nahi maang paunga ...

Rehmans silence was evident now...

Zain looked the watch it was almost 15 minutes ...he knew he would convince Rhea to at least cut his challenges in half ...facing whatever consequences she had in store

Aapki izzat karta hu ...aapko Aaliya bhaut pyaar karti hai..aur mai use ...beintehaa ..

Tayar ho jayiye ...mai aapka damaad banne wala hu ...

Hum nikaah karenge ...Uska peecha kabhi nahi chodunga ...chahe woh mane ya na mane

yehi baat kehne aaya tha...saying that he opened the door and walked out not looking back at Rehmans shocked face and open mouth...

SIM

Precap: Chapter 48 coming in few minutes ...
Edited by Zainedil - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for next one ...I love u for writing this u know whenever I read this I have small smile on my face and then a sadness also covers me seeeing zain in pain
But basically u know what this is what it is meant to be the story would have been bad if zain got happy soon and u are right the redemption track in your story is awesome I love it and I know when aaliya will resurface all the pain all will go and what happiness he will get will be much better than the pain
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Chapter 48

Dekhte hain...

When Zain walked to his room he was secretly smiling ...he felt better ..maybe Rhea was right ..

The door of his room closed again ...Rhea crossed her arms ...

Dekho Da ..maine sharth poori Karli

Sirf 15 minute the anadar ...sharth adhe ghante ki lagi thi ...

Zain tried to pursue her with a wink ...

Da...accha dekho adhe baat mane mani ...ab aadhi tum mano...please

Rhea put her chin up ...dekhte hai ...

Da...please na...

Theek hai toh kal mera fast hai ...mai nahi khaungi ...

Da...yeh galat hai ...maine baat toh kin a who bhi poore 15 minute ...

Tumhari tabiyat kharab hai ...tum aisa kuch nahi karogi ...

Tum kaho toh mujhe bhooka rakho ...chahe toh koi bji sazaa de do ...

She smiled ...he was too sweet to be threatened ...

Theek hai kal mai tumse bat nahi karungi ...poore din ...

Zain looked down ...par khana aur davai toh logi na ...

Haa..aur tumhare saath office bhi aaungi ...

Sab se baat karungi sivya tumhare ...

The thought scared him ...as it is his world was already lonely ...another 24 hrs would just increase his anguish more...

Da...kitni buri ho tum ...dekho toh sahi mai kitna massom hu ..he held her hand on his face ...she was feeling his skin the tinge of after shave ...

Fuslau mat ...

Da..he placed her second hand on his waist ...

she was feeling erotic now ...

Soch lo...shayad kal mai bahut hot lagne wala hu ...he was standing very close to her now ...

She was breathing shallower ...enjoying his physical touch ...

Lago meri balla se ...kal 12 baje tak ...jitni koshish karni kar lo ...

Da...he kissed her neck ...and turned her back now ...

Tumhe mujhe tadpane mai mazaa aata hai ...

Haa ...she was shivering now under his spell...

Tum mujhe ignore karogi ...he planted the second kiss...

Haa..less audible and firm then the first one...

Dekhogi bhi nahi ...meri taraf ...he moved his lips on her ears ...

Ha...the voice was struggling

Manzoor hai ...he turned her around abruptly twisting her wrist with the same old passion of hate and love ...

She felt a cord of an old bond ...

She pulled herself away and walked out blushing ...the game had begun ...

Da...she stopped near the door before opening ...

Tayaar rehna ...kal tumhe rizhane wala hoon mai ...kaise bachogi soch kar rakhna ...

He moved and again kept his hand on the door blocking her from escaping ...

Goodnight ...a firm kiss on her forehead ...

Da ...I love you ...

She walked out shy ...and he was grinning to break her challenge at any cost.


Tere saath mai ek ajeeb sa sukoon milta hai ...

Dil Bechain ...koh chain milta hai...

Bezubaan sa khada rehehga ...

...Tere deedar koh kab tak ye yuhi tarsega ...

Tu ...is ret par likhe naam ki tarah hai ...

Jise sahil har lamha mitane ki koshish karta hai...

Nahi jaanta hai yeh pagal ...ki meri bhi zidd hai ...

Tujhe pane ki kasahish hai...

Ek lamhe mai tujhe is tarah choo loonga ...

Markar bhi teri rooh mai jee loonga ...

SIM

Pre-cap: Will Zain be able to break Rheas Vow...role reversal of Vishvamitra and Maneka ...stay tuned

Edited by Zainedil - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 47
I loved it I loved it a lot tysm for writing
My confident zain I know he somewhere very day but he loves aaliya so much

And rehmaan lol bechara he was shocked
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg vishamitra and menka waiting
Next I loved this part aah haaa the kisses next their talk
I know aaliya will come back soon
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I am going to love the role reversal , the conversation With rehman made me realize the contrast between Rhea and Aaliya , they are really different I know that behind that chirpy Rhea there is his lovely Aaliya , continue soon !
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Happy 100 pages ! Ek treat to banta hai ! CONGRATULATIONS SIM !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats on completing 100 pages.

All the chapters were fab.Hamara fattu zain to daring bann gaya.Loved the way he shocked rehman.


Luv u sim!continue soon.

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