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Posted: 10 years ago

And the updates continue ...Long chapter so four parts ...every part has a different touch ...a different feel. I was planning to make it romantic, but I am not as good as some talents here like Ann, Khyati and Alina ...😉

This ones a very special dedication to @shatakship29 /Robsten(IF), She demanded so I wrote. A silent reader on our forum, shy and friendly. This ones for you ...and all the 4 parts including three chapters after that are just for you

No demands...you smile I get my reward ...Enjoy 😛

Love you all


Chapter 35

Part A: Tera Saath...

The day was filled with excitement ...Zain felt he had become insomniac ...either he was too happy ...too sad ...too stressed ...or too excited ...he just couldn't sleep.

He went towards the breakfast table ...fully knowing Suraiya would be walking out any second now...

Chale ...

Rhea chirped ...haa bas ..ek min ruku Mami koh bhi bye bolu ...

Zain didn't look back ...

Rhea and Suraiya bade their good byes ...

Zain wanted to say his too...but he knew she wouldn't care ...

So he just walked out ...

Suraiya silently saw him walking out...a silent tear passed through her eye, the feeling of losing something so close to your heart ...one day ...one moment ...at a time was just like walking on ice...the coldness cuts you just when you think you have grown so numb that nothing can hurt you.

The airport ride was always memorable for Zain ...with no Rehmaan to terrorize him he was having a breather. They reached the airport and stood in the security lines.

These came after a well-delayed start ..

Rheas bags had outweighed the scale....Zain remembered how he had worn the extra jackets when he was flying back from London ...he smiled ...those were the days ...

He had never bothered about anyone ...and now he looked at Rhea ...

She was messily transferring clothes from one bag to another ...Zain smiled ...what all love can make you do ...he sighed ...

Da ...yaha do ...he transferred half of her stuff in his almost empty bag ...

Ab chale ...she smiled ...

The security line was long and treacherous, Zain felt the whole of Mumbai was flying out ...today itself ...

Before the flight, it was just 8:00 am, two hours since they had left the house ...Rhea demanded for breakfast again ...

Da...tumhe sach mai bhook lagti hai ...ya tum sirf mujhe pareshaan karne ke liye ye karti ho...

Kitkit ...mai jhoot nahi bolti ...ab chalo...

she pulled his hand and took him for another round of food

She ended up making Zain eat his lunch under the disguise of a second breakfast.

Rhea never left his hand in the whole flight ...sometimes she used to snuggle at other times whisper in his ears almost tickling him ...

Thrice the air-hostess had eyed Zain ...he was so cute ...

She had intentionally tried serving him things that he had not even asked for...a glass of water ... a complementary snack ...the list was endless

Her short skirt ...a blazing red one and Zains cheeks with a blush matched evenly now ... and Rhea had realized that her Zain was being flirted around...

The next round when the pretty lady came ...Rhea nicely spilled some juice on her ...accidents happen...she claimed...

Zain laughed at all the extra attention he was getting ...he was loving it ...after a long time he was feeling happy ...content ..

They landed in Bangalore ...and Zain woke Rhea up who was nicely sleeping on his shoulders ...

Chale ...she smiled ...

The international airport located far far away from the city ...was beautiful and stunning ...Rhea was astonished looking at its humongous size ...

Bangalore ...now the Bengaluru ...sounded more Southern now..

The driver took them straight to their hotel ...Rhea looked a bit tired ...

Da...abhi aaram kar lo ...Shaam koh ghumne chal lenge ...

Nahi kitkit ...time waste nahi karna hai ...she was beaming

Chalo lunch bahar khate hai ...aur phir room mai chal lenge ...food forever played on her mind

He laughed...petu ...

kya kaha ...

Petu ...

Theek hai tum ho toh maaf kar diya ...varna ...

he winked at her ...Crazy and Hungry Rhea ...

SIM

Part B coming in some time ...stay tuned ...


Edited by Zainedil - 10 years ago
Aarohi2009 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Gud morning sim! Nice update but itna chotu sa!
Waiting to reach banglooru


Zaldi continue karna
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aise kishton mein update kar rahi ho humein satane k liye

Nice chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
Holla!Good Morning Sim.awesome so far continue soon...waiting😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg good morning ...actually I didn't sleep while night...thought of coming here for some minutes but now I am not going till I read ur whole update jaldi ...karo ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

😆

😆😆

The trip has just started ...stay glued ...and itne jaldi kyu uthe ho sab 😉...ab dheere dheere dose milega ...😳

Enjoy

Part B:

Dubara Bolian ...

He asked the driver to take them to a restaurant for lunch ...

A bit lazy ...the driver took a short cut to a traditional South Indian place ...unheard by tourists

The place looked crowded ...with loads of south Indian foods doing the rounds of the tables, Rheas nose was hyper activated ...

They took a secluded table ...the cute waiter was standing over there head before Zain could even open the menu ...

Order ...Sir ...he spoke in a heavy south Indian accent

Zain said ...do minute...he stared blankly at him ...

Zain again showed him tow fingers suggesting him to give two minutes...the waiter pointed towards the washroom ...

Rhea laughed uncontrolled now...

Finally Zain digged his head in the menu ...

Do dosa ...aur do chai...

He asked in chaste kannada ...Yenu dosa beku (which dosa you want)

Now Zain and Rhea starred at him ...point blank ...

neevu kannada maataadteera(you don't know kannada) ...he asked shaking his head

they were still blank ...

He confidently decided to decode their hindi ... inn'ond'sala h"i(repeat again )...

Zain thought he was hearing French ...he couldn't understand not a single word ..and now he was starving ...

Do you know English ...Zain asked him in English...

Yes yes ...the waiter smiled happily ...

Zain and Rhea were happy ...

I want two dosas ...Zain tried conveying his hunger pangs now

Yavadu (which) came the prompt reply ...

Both Zain and Rhea were tired now ...

Zain looked around to seek help ...the waiter still gave him the silly smile ...

The waiter said ...Nana hesaru ...Ramchandra ...(my name is Ram Chandra) ...

Zain laughed ...if the introduction took 15 minutes the order might take forever ...

With broken English Rama explained ...I artha saulpa ...little English(I can understand little) ...

Zain saw towards Rhea ...

She was sleeping on the Menu ...Zain smiled...

He opened the menu and indicated the number ...and then showed one finger at her and another for him ...

Rama the smart one instantly understood and rushed away ...

Rhea finally woke to the yummy smell of a big paper dosa that was falling off the table with the length and steam piping sambhar ...She sniffed it ...and just started digging in ...not once looking up ..

Zain ate his and smiled at her ...the child like Rhea and her hunger ...

Rama was back in no time before Zain could even finish half of his Dosa...

Yeenu beku ...(What else do you want) ...Rama quizzical eyes seems like were forever hell bent on making the customers leave this table before they go insane ...

Zain smiled ...and sipped on an imaginary cup...

Rama understood and dashed inside to get them two hot cups of Kaafi ...

Rhea was still finishing Dosa ...hers was long over ...

right now she was feeding on Zains share...that Zain had reluctantly given away ...

she looked as though she would have snatched it ...

Da...Dheere se...koi nahi cheen raha...

Rhea looked up with mouthful of food...

Rama came back with the Kaafi(coffee) in two small stainless glasses that were inverted in a small stainless steel cup...for cooling purposes ...

Aayo Amma ...nidhana eat (slowly eat) ....Zain was laughing seeing Rheas furious eyes on Rama ...

Mai waise hi khaungi jaise mera man kare ...tumhe kya ...

Rama looked down ...maybe the Rheas sharp words had indeed crossed the language barriers ...

Rhea felt bad for Rama ...

She smiled towards him ...Rama immediately gave her a 100 watt bulb smile ...flashing his white pearls at her ...

dhanyawada ...neevu bahut sweet ...his efforts in mixing three languages in one sentence was mind blowing ...

Zain and Rhea both left him with a generous tip ...and moved towards their hotel...

SIM

Part C : plans for the evening ....😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aarohi2009

Aise kishton mein update kar rahi ho humein satane k liye

Nice chapter


😉 bina sataye mazaa kaha ...enjoy ...
love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg...these two are awesome...specially the trip
..thanku for this one...waiting for the next..
Edited by robsten_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

The journey continues ...Enjoy



Part C

Darr...

Finally, they both reached the hotel...a magnificent structure ...with a twenty storied view...giving an amazing view of the silicon valley ...

Zain walked in with the suitcase when Rhea flicked her shoes upwards in the air before running in and lying on the bed ...

Zain was just observing her quietly...her memory loss had changed her personality too...the inner innocent childishness was now out in the open with no borders of shame or discipline ...

Kitkit ...wow ...she said when she pulled the large peach curtains back ...

The whole city was looking like an orange pearl scattered on a black sky ...

It had changed so much ...bustling with energy of the IT youth ...every nook and corner was westernized with KFC and pizza huts peeking out ...

the young and restless an ideal...perfect place for Zain and Rhea ...

Rhea came very close to Zain ...holding his hand ...

The sun was about to descent down and the saffron tinge made her face glow out...re-defining her sharp features ...and those beautiful eyes...

Zains heartbeats were irrationally fluttering around her ...

Accha bolo Shaam koh kaha jaana hai ...

Still playing with his long and slender fingers she spoke...

Movie dekhni hai ...

Zain never liked going to the movies...spending three hours in total darkness was not his idea of a romantic date...but seems like Rheas idea was more interesting ...

Theek hai ...tum tayar ho jao ...mai jara neeche jaakar tickets ka intezaam karta hu ...

When Zain reached the reception he had an amazing idea in his mind ...he smiled wickedly ...with a thought ...

Pichar dekhni hai naa..ab dekho ...his smile complemented his aim

When he reached the room she was ready ...

Aree bahut jaldi taayaar ho gayi ...

She was wearing a skirt again ...a long pink one with a bead work on the waist ...

her waist looked so appealing that he just wanted to instantly lift her and place in his laps...

Kitkit chalo na...she pulled him fast ...breaking his brittle dreams ...

The theater was crowded as the rest of Bangalore city ...

When Rhea entered the theater she never bothered to see the advertising posters ...it was a horror movie...

When the lights went out ...Zain wanted the show to begin to have fun ...

The movie began ...and Rhea was involved ...munching on her popcorn ...unaware...happy

Zain felt his heart racing faster ...but he did a big mistake ...a big one ...

a mere glance on the screen in the dark ...Zain shouted ...shrieked out loud

Grabbing Rheas hand ...putting his face towards her ...not wanting to look up...the darkness with the Dolby stereo sound effect ...the goosepumps were giving a standing ovation ...

Why had he selected a horror movie ...his fantasy that Rhea will be scared and will cling to him ...

how he would have loved to see her clinging on his hand ...

immersing her face in the warmth of his chest for protection ...

he wanted to have some fun... at the expense of Rheas shouts and cries ...

he had been dreaming about her nightmares slowly smiling ...

Now, the beading sweat drops on his forehead made him realize a cruel fact ...he was horrified of horror genera ...

he had never ever bothered in his life to find some embarrassing facts about himself ...

Rhea was laughing ...as though a comedy scene was being projected...

Every dark scene ...Zains hand inevitably held Rheas arms ...almost digging in it ...he was sweating ...and the prowling evil scream freaked him out...

An English movie with no intervals ...but one and a half hour of darkened blood and ogling terror had scarred Zain ...

it went so bad that he closed his ears and shut his eyes seeking refuge in Rheas arms ...like a small kid ...

when the lights finally came up ...the small six year old boy next to Zain giggled ...

Uncle ...ho gaya ...aapko bathroom jaane mai dar lag raha ho , toh mai chalo...he burst out mocking

Zain growled at him back ...

His plan had backfired ...and he was at the receiving edge of his own bitter medicine...

He was still trembling when Rhea whose laughter was uncontrolled ...almost falling on the ground ...

Kitkit ...tum kitne darre hua ho ...sahme se ...a burst of giggles followed ...

Zain felt humiliated ...he never knew he was scared of Horror movies ...maybe this one was really a dark one...assuring himself that it was the truth they drove back...

SIM

Part D: Raat koh kya kya hota hai

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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a wonderful chapter... A treat for us on the Sunday morning.😊
Edited by robsten_ - 10 years ago

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