FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 66

Chapter 36
Lovely chapter sim
How u described each n every line in his hand ..
I really want to see his 3 kids ..
Aww the last part was cute
That jaan sentence was just wow ..

One again sorry for being late ...
Plzz update soon
Thanks for the pm
Lots of love .
Your romantic chudail
Alina

Ann and Alina you both make me blush
Love you both
Sim

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Ann and Alina you both make me blush
Love you both
Sim

Aww sim
I m actually very proud that u r my frnd ...and actually one of the best writer i have ever came across

Love ya too
Muaahhh :-*

Originally posted by: zayalove

Aww sim
I m actually very proud that u r my frnd ...and actually one of the best writer i have ever came across

Love ya too
Muaahhh :-*

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

North,South,East,West- our Simg is the Best. Loved A,B,C,D.. seems like am back to nursery :"D

Jokes apart,lets get onto some serious business..:)

My first thought when I completed reading the 4 parts..

Just like Mr.Arora you beguile me...you leave me in a trance..with a feeling of disappointment when u sign off every chapter,leaving us wanting for more..

From the scene in the South Indian restaurant,which was beautifully crafted..to the last part..where Aaliya wants him,and Zain is holding back..

You leave me speechless...really Sim,wish you were in front of me..then i would have hugged you really tightly..:)

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

The last update..I will readily accept if someone gives me such beautiful updates every year on v-day..

I would like to quote someone..

Of course its fictional...yet you make it feel real..you bring zaya to life...and I believe that this world is in need of a writer like you..

Loved all the updates..Love you and Jr. is one hell of a proud daughter.. :)and we are proud of you too :*

Update soon :P

Originally posted by: zayalove

Chapter 36
Lovely chapter sim
How u described each n every line in his hand ..
I really want to see his 3 kids ..
Aww the last part was cute
That jaan sentence was just wow ..

One again sorry for being late ...
Plzz update soon
Thanks for the pm
Lots of love .
Your romantic chudail
Alina

Thank you lovelies for all those wonderful words ...every time I read them I am blushing ...

Love you all...

This is a very special one, It has a poem that I had written 12 years back...one of the most closest to my heart still...

This update is a very small one...infact only a simple scene...but the next one will have multiple parts again ...

Hope you devour the shayri...my life-line

Enjoy😳

Chapter 37

Tera Saaya...

A heavy breakfast later ...

where next ...Zain held her hand ...

Chalo ...

Kaha ...

Surprise ...

He instructed the driver something ...and they both sat in the car ...

she was inquisitive now...he told her ...why don't you close your eyes ...I will tell you a shayri ...

Rheas eyes popped open ...

Kitkit ...tum aur shayri ...tabiyat theek hai na ...

Kyu mai nahi kar sakta...his spit chin ...deepened its effects now...

Theek hai bolo...aur agar mai so gayi toh utha zaroor dena ...she giggled again

Chalo aankh band karo ...she followed his instructions...

...secretly praying that he would kiss her ...

His husky and profound voice boomed in the silence of the car now...

Tera Saaya...

Mai ek Saaya hu ...joh har pal tere saath rahunga ...

Tu chahe laakh koshish kare ...

...mai tujhse kabhi door nahi jaunga ...

Teri har ahat par...aata hu mai tujhse pehle ...

Tere har thokar par...thokar khata hu tujhse pehle...

Tu har pal mujhe andhere mai chupane ki justaju mai

lagi rehti hai ...

Mere vazood koh mitane ki ...

...har pal koshsih karte rehti hai ...

Tu jaha chaelgi ...wahi tere saath chalunga...

Saath dunga ...haath thamunga ...muh nahi modunga ...

Mai tera saaya hu ...jiska astitva tere rooh se juda hai ...

Tu nahi jaanta ...tu hi mera bin bola khuda hai...

Dekh tu nahi chali..to mai bhi reh jaunga theara...

Tu toh ek baar maregi ...

par meri maut andhere mai aati hai har ghadi ...

Kabhi tere aage toh kabhi tere peeche chalta hu ...

Teri jism mai... bin dhoop mai ghulata hoon ...

Jitna bada dhoop...

Utna bada tera yeh saaya hai ...

...Gaur se dekh aaj yeh phir tujhse milne aaya hai ...

Saaya kahu ...ya teri parchaye hu mai ...

...Joh bhi hu ...tujme basa hu mai ...

Mera haath nahi chodna kabhi ...kisi bhi mod par ...

Saaye nahi chal paate apne ...jism koh chodkar ...

Rheas eyes ...didn't open ...they were glued with tears ...

Zain was still holding her hand ...waiting for her to open her eyes ...looking in them ...

Rhea ...

Ho gaya ...his smile was evident in his voice ...

She looked up at him ...still crying ...

Yeh sach mai tumne likhi hai ...

He smiled nahi ...

Toh kisne ...she asked with still a looming sadness in her voice

meri ek dost hai ...theek thak likhti hai ...uske lafz hai ...Zain smiled back

Socha tumhe impress karne ka isse accha mauka nahi mil sakta ...

Rheas eyes were still clouded ...

She hugged him tight...an embrace filled with love and warmth ...

Bahut acchi thi...

saying that she placed a gentle kiss on his cheeks...

the smooth buttery complexion ...now resonated with a slight pink shade ...less from her lips stick and more from his blushing ...

He was shy ...

Aree kaam kargaya ...

Kya

Paitra ...

Bolunga usko ...bahut khush hogi woh...

Bhaut acchi dost hai ...Rheas eyes spoke with a tinge of possessiveness

Dost Nahi ...meri ankhon ki kayal hai ...fan hai meri, he was shy now

She laughed out aloud ...

Fan ...

Haa ...College mai kai deewaniya thi meri ...

bahut handsome or cute hu na ...his smile stated some facts ...

...he elbowed her arm ...still blushing

Unme se ek

Oh ...kya naam tha ...Rhea said with a tinge of Jealousy ...

Sim ...

😉

Pre-cap:Zains plans for Day 2 ...

Amazing updates they are awesome

I don't y it wasn't emotional but I cried the poem I mean so true so awesome it was and yes I agree with the words simg tusi great ho ...I am in love put this poem my red line compilation samjhi I need it ...