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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zayalove

Chapter 36
Lovely chapter sim
How u described each n every line in his hand ..
I really want to see his 3 kids ..
Aww the last part was cute
That jaan sentence was just wow ..

One again sorry for being late ...
Plzz update soon
Thanks for the pm
Lots of love .
Your romantic chudail
Alina


Thank you so much Alina ...your comments help me rewind my flashback ...in one go 
No need to say sorry, I am glad you could read it ...
Romantic chudail...jaldi update karna ...will be waiting to see what happens after the cake romance 
Loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you lovelies for all those wonderful words ...every time I read them I am blushing ...

Love you all...

This is a very special one, It has a poem that I had written 12 years back...one of the most closest to my heart still...

This update is a very small one...infact only a simple scene...but the next one will have multiple parts again ... 

Hope you devour the shayri...my life-line 

Enjoy😳


Chapter 37

Tera Saaya...

A heavy breakfast later ...

where next ...Zain held her hand ...

Chalo ...

Kaha ...

Surprise ...

He instructed the driver something ...and they both sat in the car ...

she was inquisitive now...he told her ...why don't you close your eyes ...I will tell you a shayri ...

Rheas eyes popped open ...

Kitkit ...tum aur shayri ...tabiyat theek hai na ...

Kyu mai nahi kar sakta...his spit chin ...deepened its effects now...

Theek hai bolo...aur agar mai so gayi toh utha zaroor dena ...she giggled again

Chalo aankh band karo ...she followed his instructions...

...secretly praying that he would kiss her ...

His husky and profound voice boomed in the silence of the car now...



Tera Saaya...

Mai ek Saaya hu ...joh har pal tere saath rahunga ...


Tu chahe laakh koshish kare ...

...mai tujhse kabhi door nahi jaunga ...

Teri har ahat par...aata hu mai  tujhse pehle ...

Tere har thokar par...thokar khata hu tujhse pehle...


Tu har pal mujhe andhere mai chupane ki justaju mai 

lagi rehti  hai ...

Mere vazood koh mitane ki ...

...har pal koshsih karte rehti hai ...


Tu jaha chaelgi ...wahi tere saath chalunga...

Saath dunga ...haath thamunga ...muh nahi modunga ...


Mai tera saaya hu ...jiska astitva tere rooh se juda hai ...

Tu nahi jaanta ...tu hi mera bin bola khuda hai...


Dekh tu nahi chali..to mai bhi reh jaunga theara...

Tu toh ek baar maregi ...

par meri maut andhere mai aati hai har ghadi ...


Kabhi tere aage toh kabhi tere peeche chalta hu ...

Teri jism mai... bin dhoop mai ghulata hoon ...

 

Jitna bada dhoop...

Utna bada tera yeh saaya hai ...

...Gaur se dekh aaj yeh phir tujhse milne aaya hai ...


Saaya kahu ...ya teri parchaye hu mai ...

...Joh bhi hu ...tujme basa hu mai ...


Mera haath nahi chodna kabhi ...kisi bhi mod par ...

Saaye nahi chal paate apne ...jism koh chodkar ...

 

Rheas eyes ...didn't open ...they were glued with tears ...

Zain was still holding her hand ...waiting for her to open her eyes ...looking in them ...

Rhea ...

Ho gaya ...his smile was evident in his voice ...

She looked up at him ...still crying ...

Yeh sach mai tumne likhi hai ...

He smiled nahi ...

Toh kisne ...she asked with still a looming sadness in her voice

meri ek dost hai ...theek thak likhti hai ...uske lafz hai ...Zain smiled back

Socha tumhe impress karne ka isse accha mauka nahi mil sakta ...

Rheas eyes were still clouded ...

She hugged him tight...an embrace filled with love and warmth ...

Bahut acchi thi...

saying that she placed a gentle kiss on his cheeks...

the smooth buttery complexion ...now resonated with a slight pink shade ...less from her lips stick and more from his blushing ...

He was shy ...

Aree kaam kargaya ...

Kya

Paitra ...

Bolunga  usko ...bahut khush hogi woh...

Bhaut acchi dost hai ...Rheas eyes spoke with a tinge of possessiveness

Dost Nahi ...meri ankhon ki kayal hai ...fan hai meri, he was shy now

She laughed out aloud ...

Fan ...

Haa ...College mai kai deewaniya thi meri ...

bahut handsome or cute hu na ...his smile stated some facts ...

...he elbowed her arm ...still blushing

Unme se ek

Oh ...kya naam tha ...Rhea said with a tinge of Jealousy ...

Sim ...


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Pre-cap:Zains plans for Day 2 ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updates they are awesome 
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I don't y it wasn't emotional but I cried the poem I mean so true so awesome it was and yes I agree with the words simg tusi great ho ...I am in love put this poem my red line compilation samjhi I need it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏Super se uparrr walaa update👏
Okay,finally I am writing this after deleting my comment atleast 10 times...
...I have no words to describe that fantastic poem of urs!!!
Keep writing and sharing such wonderful poems with us...
Continue soon...


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"Saaya kahu ...ya teri parchaye hu mai ...

...Joh bhi hu ...tujme basa hu mai ...

 


Mera haath nahi chodna kabhi ...kisi bhi mod par ...

Saaye nahi chal paate apne ...jism koh chodkar" ...
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THESE LINES LEFT ME SPELLBOUNDED! I M AWSTRUCK RITE NOW BY THIS POEM OF YOURS THAT I AM GOING SHORT OF WORDS TO WRITE IN THE COMMENT! I JUST CANT TELL U HOW THIS WONDERFUL POEM HAS TOUCHED MY HEART... IT WAS TRULY A MASTERPIECE! SIMPLE YET FILLED WITH TREASURES OF EMOTIONS!!! U REALLY DESERVE AN APPLAUSE👏!! N THE LAST WAS TOO GOOD WHERE ZAIN APPRECIATED UH! THAT WAS A NICE ONE!😉 THANX FOR SHARING SUCH A WONDERFUL POEM! DO UPDATE SOON DEAR!:):)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Again u nailed it.When I started reading the shayari it was like normal one like your other ones but the last line u were just amazing.
Thanku Sim For the beautiful chapter n for the PM.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Surprise and special update ...dedicated to Khyati ...have to leave for work and updating early morning only for you. I am being bribed and I cant help it 

Love you all

Enjoy😉


Chapter 38

Choti Choti Khusiyaan...

Part A

The car stopped when Rhea was still reeling under the Saaya spell that Zain has casted on her ...

She was happy to be in love and he was happy to re-live his dreams...life had given him another chance. 

He didn't want to lose it ...not even a single moment of the new discovered happiness

Rhea peeked out ...it was a shopping mall...on Brigade road ...

Yaha ...yeh surprise tha tumhara ...

Haa...kyu pasand nahi aaya ...

Nahi accha hai...she tried to keep his heart ...not showing her disappointment,

 she expected him to take her to a quieter place where they could spend some quality time ...not in a crowded place where you could barely hear anything ...

He pulled her hand and took her inside...a mall just like the Mumbai one...

branded shops lined both sides of the corridor ...people busy bustling in and out with shopping bags...

Rhea held Zains hand more firmly now...her memories of beach where she got lost were still fresh in her mind ...

They walked inside a shop...a saree shop ...

Zain went ahead and told something to the salesperson ..

a lady who examined Rhea from head to toe...Rhea tried to hide behind, an imaginary shadow now...what was Zain upto ...since morning he had been mumbling to people ...

The Lady ..in a vibrant kanjeevaram ...decked up as though she was about to attend a marriage ...walked closer to Rhea now...

Madam ...she pointed in the direction of the changing room ...

Rhea looked reluctantly at Zain ...

Kitkit ...mujhe nahi jaana...

Da ...ek baar mere khatir ...he smiled...

Rhea, walked behind the saleswomen like a small child was walking behind her mom...afraid to be lost again ...

Zain ...looked around ...

The clock ticked ...around 20 minutes later ...the saleswomen walked out and asked him to step in ...

It was one of the designer boutique showrooms, where every customer had a private changing room ...

Zains heart was beating faster now...

The Saleslady pointed the room that Rhea was in and smiled at him ...

Zain walked past two doors and finally reached his destination ...opening the door with anticipation ...

Inside in the mirror ...he saw her...

The most docile image... 

She was clad in a light blue silk saree...a short blouse around her arms ...

the nine yards of untailored silken heaven wound up around her petite figure ...

the midriff adorned by a silver waist chain ...

the bit of milkish complexion exposed almost for the first time ...

her palu almost touched the ground. 

The salesperson was amazing she had adorned her with accessories ...a beaded bangle ...a light golden chain and a jhumka ...golden in shade with a blue tinge ...

 A mystical looking Rhea ...with a silver specked for a bindi...

Her short hair was braided ...just two incomplete ones ...and spiked with a jasmine ...the local mallige ...the scent had filled up the room ...

Zain stood non -pulsed ...not knowing if moving ahead would actually make him crumble in front of her ...

Da ...he finally mustered up the courage to speak ...

Closing the door ...enriching her smell and trapping her stunned image in his heart to be revived forever ...

She turned back ...anxious...she had never changed her look so much ...Saree was occasional ...but right now she looked more like a heroine ..a southern belle ...

Bolo...she consciously wrapped her midriff ...covering it with her pallu ...he smirked to see her cover the most appealing part ...

Bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho ...

Cartoon toh nahi lag rahi hu na ...

He chuckled ...ab chale...

Aise ...

Haa ...aise ...hi, his warm words always melted her decisions ...

She slowly walked out ...still wondering if she was even presentable ...

He walked besides her with a pride ...the saleswomen had a flashy smile ...

Settling the bills...he took her to his next destination ...

SIM

Part B coming up next ...
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Part B

Pal...

A mehndi parlor ...Rhea looked surprised ...

Kitkit agar mehndi dalungi ...toh saree kharab hogi na ...she looked concerned knowing well the cost of the silky heaven that she had draped...

Mai hoo na ...he winked...

He had instructed the person to get her two full hand designs ...no space should be left ...

Rhea sat there patiently ...

her hunger pangs were back and she feared her growls should not reach to the artist...

Zains eyes never left her even once in that two hours ...

intrinsically designed ...her palm and back of her hand ...were covered with the green paste...

the aroma of heena mixed with her flowers was almost making her sneeze now...

Finally, they walked out ...her palms still wet and she doing every possible efforts not to touch something or someone ...the strong aroma following her ...

He made her get in the car ...and stopped at a beautiful lake ...

a few kilometers away from the city ...she was surprised to see it so secluded ...

the Hesaraghatta Lake was a pristine and untouched water body

They walked in towards the water front ...he opened up a  news paper and made her sit on it ...

Clumsily she sat ...still not sure if she had spoiled her saree...

the thin zari layer almost shone in the sun now ...

the glint on Zains face warmed with his serene expression ...

he opened up another newspaper while she was still holding her mehndi clad palms as straight and as high as possible. 

Her hands were straining now ...

Da ...he looked at her straight in her eyes ...he was sitting right in front of her ...

Bhook lagi hai na...

She nodded trying to save in the left over energy ...

Par khaogi kaise ...

She looked at her hands ...the dark green shades and again towards him ...

Mai khilaunga ...he smiled ...

She suddenly felt a strange weirdness ...she was actually shy ...

He opened up a container ...Zain was a perfectionist when it came to planning ...

the whole lunch ..with napkins ...spoons and yes a bottle of buttermilk ...fully south indian style

He opened another bag ...out came a banana leaf ...

he arranged the food items on it ...one by one ...a tinge of chutney ...

followed by rice ...a mixed vegetable and a bit of sambar ...

doused on the pile of rice. Very symmetrically he had dug a well in the middle of the rice hill..

the rice was soaking the multi-flavoured lenthil soup ...

He looked up gain ...

Kitkit ...yeh kya hai ...

Yeha aaye hai ...toh yaha ke logon ke tarah khayenge ...

He slowly gave her mini bites ...she was enjoying eating it ...

almost when the food was about to be done ...she realized he had not eaten ...

Tum bhi lo na ...he started taking the next alternate bites...

It was a blissful feeling to be fed ...

almost her soul was being filled with love ...

an untouched and divine feeling ...

Around the second last bite she forcefully snatched away his spoon with her bite and spit it down ...instructing him to feed with his hands ...

A small bite with three fingers reached her mouth ...

she was almost licking his fingers now ...

her touch on his skin ...

the erotic sensation was making Zain uneasy ...

She was nibbling his fingers now ...clean dry ...

Zain quickly took away his fingers and offered her some water followed by the buttermilk ...

small moments that made up his dream ...

She saw the waist chain falling out ...it had broken ...dangling from one end of her waist ...a silver line half broken ...

He looked at her waist again ...an alluring and inviting sight ...

Coming close to her he touched her waist ...

his eyes held hers ...captivating the moment ...

she closed her eyes when he came very close ...

his touch was filled with passion ...an igniting one ...that had burned her body ...

And a flash came...a distinct memory ...

the touch the closeness was an old one ...

she had a mehndi on both her hands and he had pulled out a cell from her waist pouch ...

placing it on her ears...the touch was a familiar one ...and the hands were as soft as his ...

she had known him ...lived this scene ...

but who was he ...he was wearing a coat ...

a blurry face ...a smile ...

She opened her eyes realizing Zain was still starring at her face ...scared ...

He had moved away in an instant ...creating a physical rift big enough to be filled with an uneasiness

Da...

Chale ...she abruptly got up before he could even ask ...

He wrapped everything ...unaware ...what she had seen ...opening the door of the car and calling the driver on his cell -phone to be back ...

The drive to the room was a silent one ...

Teri khamoshi se ek ajeeb sa daar lagta hai ...

Dil bewajah hi zoro se dhadkta hai ...

SIM

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