Os Pyaar ki intehaan [chap 30 page 137

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After so much time writing my os.Please bear me



Solanki house:

Mallika: chaliya uncle apna haath badhaiye.Muze aapka BP check karna hai aur blood bhi lena hai.

Solanki: hs,subah ho gai aur baj gaya tera alarm.Kabhi toh thodi der se aaya kar.Time to time.

Mallika: [shyama anty se] check ke naam pe yeh aise hi frustrate hote hai nahi aanty?

And they both smiled.

Mallika: Bus ho gaya.Chalo bp toh normal hai.Lekin aanty inhe khane me namak kam dena.theek hai main chalti hoo.Warna DB baba aur Nidhi meri classs le lenge.Sab ko dining table pe bithake aayi hoo.


Verma niwas:

Mallika entered in a house.

DB: ha ha dekh aayi apne pyare uncle ko.Hum toh koi nahi hai na tere.Subah subah chali jati hai.Chai nashta toh karke jana chahiye na?Humare liye toh tum dono ke pas time hi nahi hai na?

Mallika come from back and give a tight hug to DB.,"oh meri sweet bua.Kyon shor macha rahi hai aap?shaam ko aapko mandir leke chalongi bus.Khush?

Nidhi: lo di ki shuru ho gai maska polish.Di,aap late ho gai toh main to chali jaoongi dekh lena fir mat kahena ki mere liye nahi ruki chhutki.

Mallika: aha!tu kaise jaegi muze chhod kar?chal ab jaldi se Breakfast ker lehume der ho rahi hai hospital ke liye.

DB: dekho Lunch bhej dungi dono ka.kha lena.kisiko khila mat dena.Tum hospital me jake sab bhul jati hoo.Warna main hi aaoongi dene lunch.

Mallika and nidhi both,"aap nahi db aap nahi.Hum kha lenge.

And they both left for kgh.

CV and DB

CV: samay kitni jaldi beet jata hai na DB.Kal ki hi baat lagti hai.Nandini ki saheli Dr Mandira ne yeh chhooti si mallika ko nandini ko sopa tha.Baad me nidhi ke janam ke baad nanadini bhi chali gai.Maine dono ko ek sa [pyaar diya.Mallika kitni bar muzse puchhti hai ki mere baareme bataiye lekin main sirf itna hi keheta hoo ki tu Mallika Verma hai nidhi ke badi di.Bechari bachi,ab toh use zindagi me khushi chahiye nahi.

DB:ha yog,dekh lena woh ek achhi ladki hai aur achhi dr bhi hai.Use achha ladka jaroor milega.agar woh shadi ke liye raji ho jaye toh!

In KGH:

In OT

Nidhi: dr Mallika aur dr jyotika ko jaldi bulaiye janaki bai.patient ka operation karna padega turant.

Nidhi on phone: hello sir,please come soon.Ek emergency case aaya hai.Operation jaldi karna padega.Theek hai hum shuru kar rahe hai operation aap aa jaiye.Maine dr mallika ko aur dr jyotika ko bulaya hai.

Nidhi,Mallika aur jyotika teeno operation theatre me hai .Jyotika ne Anesthesia diya aur pure 1 ghante ke compicated surgery ke baad teeno relax ho gaye.

Mallika: chalo,patient ab stable hai.Lekin Nidhi,ise 24 hours observation me rakhna padega.Toh main dhyaan rakhungi aur Monitor karti rahoongi.

Nidhi: theek hai dr.abhi toh ek ek cup coffee ho jaye.

Jaise hi teeno OT se bahar aaye Dr Kulkarni waiting for them outside the oT.

Dr Kulkarni: oh my little faires.Muze yakeen tha ki jahaa aap dono behene ho wahaa fail ki koi gunjaish hi nahi hai.Well done my darlings.

Nidhi and Mallika: thank you sir.

Dr Kulkarni: pata nahi main dean kyon hu yahaa ka?dean toh tumhe hona chahiye.

Nidhi: toh muze bana dijiye.I am ready for that

And dr kulkarni came to Nidhi aur unhone uske sur par haath rakha.,Naughty girls."

Dr kulkarni: Dr Mllika,i am proud of you both.You are truely a deserving drs.aap dono mere cabin me aaiye.Muze aapse kuchh jaroori baat karni hai.

In dr Kulkarni's cabin

Dr Kulkarni: dekho Nidhi aur Mllika.Gujarat ke kuchh me har saal Ranhotsav hota hai.Wahaa medical camp bhi lagaya jata hai.Lekin is saal wahaa ek doctory seminar bhi hona hai.Toh main chahta hoo ki tum dono aur dusre teen drs matlab 5 persons us seminar attend karo.That will be a great experience.

Mallika and Nidhi got excited,"lekin sir KGh me.

Dr Kulkarni: yahaa main sab sambhal loonga.Aap bus yeh batao ki aap kaise jana pasand karenge?flight se ya

Nidhi aur mallika ,'Train se?

Dr Kulkarni: thek hai main tumhari sari arrangements kar deta hoo.Lekin ha MRs Kulkarni ko milke jana

Mallika:aanty theek toh hai na?

Dr Kulkarni: use pata chala hai na tabse chillaye ja rahi hai ki dono bachiyo ko akele kaise bhenjenge?maine kahaa yeh bachi ab bachiya nahi hai Neurosurgeon hai lekin use kaun samazaye?tum sham ko jate hue usse milkar jana theek hai

Nidhi aur mallika cabin me se bahar aaye.

Nidhi: di,kitna majaa aayega na?hum bahoot dino se bahar nahi ja paye the.Yeh toh mauka bhi hai aur dastoor bhi.

Mallika: ha Nidhi,is se hume bahoot kuchh sikhane milenga.Aur outing bhi ho jayegi.Lekin DB ko bhi toh samazana padega.Humare liye woh kitni possessive hai pata nahi na?

Nidhi: hum baba ko bolenge.Woh db ko samaza lenge.

Mallika:pata nahi Nidhi,lekin muze yeh lagta hai ki yeh safar humare liye yaadgaar sabit hone wala hai.humari zindagi shayad is safar se badal jaye.

Nidhi: Di,muze bhi aisa hi lag raha hai.Chalo,Anji ko bhi batate hai.Woh toh apne fashion designer ke raw material ki puri list taiyaar karengi.yeh lana woh lana.

Mallika: ha bhai dosti ki hai nibhani toh padegi.

On Railway station:

DB :dekho bachiyo,tum sab log saath me rehena.Aur mallika tumhe aaloo se alergy hai toh tumhare liye babana waffers pack kar diye hai maine.Bahar ka kum hi khana.Nidhi tumhara pine apple ka achar bhi rakh diya maine.Raste me kha lena.

Tabhi Mr and Mrs Kulkarni bhi aaye.

Mrs kulkarni: jao muze toh tum dono se baat hi nahi karni hai.agar main yahaa nahi aati toh tum muze bina mile hi chale jate na?

Mallika: sorry anty,woh humara programme itni jaldi fix ho gaya ki hume kuchh bhi taiyaari karne ka ya kisi se milne ka time hi nahi mila.

Mrs Kulkarni: yeh lo.isme tumhare liye Puranpolhi banayee hai aur dry nashta hai.Raste me kha lena.Bahar ka kum khana.Apna dhyaan rakhana aur muze phone karte rehena.

Mr Kulkarni:are yeh dono conference ke liye ja rahi hai.jung ladne nahi ja rahi hai.Chalo ab train ka time ho gaya hai.

Tabhi train ke chhutne ki whistle baji aur sab ne ek dusreko bye kahaa.

Nidhi ,Mallika,Rohan,priyanka aur Aman sare drs ne apna apna saman birth par rakha aur relax hoke seat pe baith gaye.

Nidhi [Mun me] pata nahi aise kyon lag raha hai ki yeh safar meri zindagi ka sabse khubsurat safar hoga.
Mallika: [mun me] muze aise kyon lagta hai ki mere liye yeh safar zindagi me khushiya lekar aayeg.


I will update next part soon.

in next part.

Jab Nidhi met Ashutosh at first time
Mallika ko milega naya saathi

Aisee mulaqat nidhi aur ashu ki jo kisine dekhi hogi na sochi hogi

Till than bye.

Hope you all like this concept.Comments please



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ttrocks thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are still writing... Then I will read it tmrw morning Alkaben. 😃
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Awesome!! Am speechless at the beautiful begining of a lovely story was all smiles while reading it!! Terrific!!
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Just saw your message on FB Alkaji,will read asap
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The os has evrything in it a dependable father daughter relationship that col verma shares wd his daughters Mallika n Nidhi.Certain is it that there is no kind of affection so purely angelic as of a father to a daughter.To their daughters there is something which there are no words to express.
Mallika n Nidhi not only are efficient n responsible doctors but also share a friendly amiable bond something i wanted to c in the show...thank u for bonding them so beautifully❤️
Dr. Kulkarni is another fatherly figure showering his love on Malloka n Nidhi...which shows how lovable the two girls are for KGH n the entire staff
A very heartwarming❤️ os alka!!👏 Cant wait for the second part that wud bring new partners n more happiness into Mallika n Nidhi's life
Thank u for this lovely OS😊

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Lovely OS Alka di ! i will write more a bit later... 😊😊
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Beautiful version of what we always wanted in the show ! The new beginning of a new life ! ⭐️👏
Very nice n pure thoughts of two .. Mallika n Nidhi.. not away from each other... The love n bond they share is so lovely. I wish we had this Mallika on the show as well.. ! Loved the way she is been adopted n brought up along with Nidhi. Asking abt herself n wishing for a new n lovely life ahead ! Nice scenario at home.. with Dadi bua n CV taking so much care of both.. At KGH as well.. the work they do with full efforts. n the appreciation they get in return.. Awesome use of emotions n the relations. !!!
Going to Gujarat, with new aspirations n hopes.. will be waiting for that..
Nice OS Alka di. Now waiting for the naya saathi for Mallika and the Nidhi Ashu ki mulakaat...🤗
Glued to this OS.. update soon di... 😊
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

You are still writing... Then I will read it tmrw morning Alkaben. 😃

Sure Tupu,i will wait for your comment
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Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Awesome!! Am speechless at the beautiful begining of a lovely story was all smiles while reading it!! Terrific!!

Thank you Deepali
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Just saw your message on FB Alkaji,will read asap

will wait for your reply sony

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