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Posted: 11 years ago
My review for Chapter:17:

Do lafjo ki premkahani aankhose kaise bayaa ho?
Mile jo do dil toh jajbato ka afasana toh hoga

Haaye... what a beautiful shayari... ❤️

The dining table scene was so cute. Pineapple ka achar toh ab famous ho jayega, waise hi jaise ktlk ki baaki sab recipes ho gayi hai!! 😃

Mrs. Kulkarni dots so much on Nidhi 👍🏼 Armaan the foodie was so funny in this dialogue: 😆😆😆

Armaan:Jyada bolnese pet nahi bharata khana khanese bharta hai.Abhi main baten karoonga toh bhukha hi rahoonga.Fir wapis se bhuk lag jayegi.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

What a beautiful and most romantic way of wishing Happy new yr!! Absolutely loved the idea... It was so lovely to visualize Ashuji holding the candle in dark and stepping towards Nidhi; counting the seconds and Nidhi supporting him in counting... Awesome scene!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Ashuji called Nidhi Kiddo and Kiddo pouted... Aisa zor ka zatka diya Ashuji ko ki bechare MajorSahab ek zatke mein "Nidhi" par wapa aa gaye... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
🤣

Ashutosh: Nidhi,Paheli saas ka toh muze pata nahi.Lekin Naye saal ki paheli saas tumhare saath li hai maine.Toh lagta hai

Stupendous dialogue... followed by awesome song!! Perfect for Ashuji's feelings!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

So amazing of Ashuji to have said that he would learn how to dance from Nidhi and he wishes to do something special for her in life. ❤️ Another beautiful dialogue when he explains why is he envious and angry at the same time "
Tum itni pyari kyon ho?Aur Gussa apne aap se ki main tumhe pahele kyon nahi mila?"

AshNi convo. is so cute and Ashuji offering his CC to Nidhi is so wonderful!! 😃 But the gift that Nidhi wants is so lovely... nothing material; only and only happiness of Ashuji ☺️

hug, I Love You kehna, Sundar se Zumke matching with Anarkali dress... Aapke Ashuji pyar jatane mein koi kasar nahi chhodta Alkaben!! Mujhe yeh Aashuji bahot pasand hai... perfect as Nidhi's betterhalf 😃 Aur hamari Nidhi bhi koi kam nahi... Us ne bhi matching cufflinks already rakhe hai as a new year gift for Ashuji... Haaye kya ishq hai hamare tota-maina ka!! ❤️

Ashuji thinks whether Nidhi would like him with stuble or clean-shaven and the angel assures him that she loves him just the way he is!! I so recalled Fashion-show track and same dialogue from Nidhi here. 😳

And, stage ki sajawat toh kya shaandaar ki hai... Orchid flowers and all photos of family - enough to make everyone nostalgic!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

This convo. between 2 samadhis is so amazing: Kaash har ladki ke pita ko aise hi samdhi mile... ❤️


Col Verma: Alok,badhai ho.Tera beta mera hua.Hum dono samdhi ban gaye.

Col Mathur: main ghate me nahi hu.Muze bhi toh beti mili hai.

Arman-Mallika ki Sagai ka karyakram toh sucharu roop se sampann hua but naye character Abhimanyu ki ann mauke per entry se Ashu-Armu zaroor chaunk gaye honge... 😆😆😆 Though I am not worried at all coz I know, AshNi forever!! ☺️

Awesome update Alkaben!! Loved it from start to finish!! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Alkaben, Here's my review for Chapter:18:

As I had believed, Abhi isn't a competitor for Ashu or Armu but a brother figure for Nidhi and Mallu. He seems to be such a good boy!! 😃 Mr. and Mrs. Kulkarni ki taraha woh bhi Nidhi-Mallu se bahot pyar karta hai 😃

Lovely scene where youngsters are enjoying the chitchatting at night and Armaan understands "Ashu ke dil ke armaan" and sends him off with Nidhi to make coffee!! Bada bhai ho toh Armaan ke jaisa... 😃 He stopped Mallu from going with Nidhi and gave AshNi some time together☺️ So thoughtful of him!!

AshNi in kitchen were so adorable and so is this convo: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️


Nidhi: Yeh bhi kya puchh ne ki baat hai?jaroor dungi.Dil de diya hai jaan tumne denge.

Ashu:ab yeh filmi line marna band karo aur yeh mat bhulo ki main fauji hu.Jaan bachana mera kaam hai.jaan lena nahi.

Nidhi ne Ashutosh ko sirf uske naam se hi bulaya aur apni bechaini ka izhaar bhi kar liya... Heard the song coming next, for the first time ever but it fitted perfectly in this scene!! Great choice of song Alkaben!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


Nidhi:aur mera kya?aapne jo mere haath baandh diye.

Ashutosh: Nidhi,rishte me toh hum badhe hai.Ek ankahe se

Nidhi:Ankahe se nahi.Pyaar se

Loved these dialogues too!! How sweet... ek anokhe, ankahe se bandhan mein dono bandh chuke hai jis bandhan ko log pyar kehte hai ☺️ ❤️


Ashutosh: Nidhi pata hai mera kya sapna hai?main tumhe lekar kahi dur jana chahta hoo.Bus tumharee bahome aake duniya dekhna chahta hoo.Kabhi sirf tumhare liye kuchh karna chahta hoo.Tumharee god me sur rakhkar sona chahta hoo.Kabhi tumhe apni bahome uthakar duniya ko batana chahta hu ki Dekho meri Nidhi kitni pyari hai.Har rang hai usme.

The above lines from Ashuji are to die for!! Nidhi is so lucky to have got a man who loves her so much and so deeply!! 👍🏼

Uske baad toh kya kehna... lovely hug and AshNi's first kiss ☺️
☺️☺️

Per yeh darwaze per kabab mein haddi koun aa gaya Hope he/she is someone supportive to AshNi story and pushes the matter forward... 😳

Thank you for this lovely update Alkaben. 🤗 Please give next update asap... Am waiting!!

Edited by ttrocks - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

A spectacular update Alka❤️ so very endearing⭐️ so many wow moments but this was the bestThank you Deepali

Ashutosh: Nidhi,rishte me toh hum badhe hai.Ek ankahe se

Nidhi:Ankahe se nahi.Pyaar se

Ashutosh: Nidhi pata hai mera kya sapna hai?main tumhe lekar kahi dur jana chahta hoo.Bus tumharee bahome aake duniya dekhna chahta hoo.Kabhi sirf tumhare liye kuchh karna chahta hoo.Tumharee god me sur rakhkar sona chahta hoo.Kabhi tumhe apni bahome uthakar duniya ko batana chahta hu ki Dekho meri Nidhi kitni pyari hai.Har rang hai usme.🥱

This was so beautifully etched out...their love , their feelings These are true Ashni love birds..it was as if the pale stars were sliding into their places. The whispering of the leaves was almost hushed. All about them it was still and shadowy and sweet. It was that wonderful moment when, for lack of a visible horizon, the not yet darkened world seems infinitely greater"a moment of love n affection . So very beautiful. Thank yu once again.They are understadning their love slowly but truely great feeling of love.
I forgot to mention the scene where Nidhi falls asleep in Mallika's laps...very very heartwarming⭐️Thank you again
B back wd more 😃

Thank you deepali foa beautiful comment
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

My review for Chapter:17:

Do lafjo ki premkahani aankhose kaise bayaa ho?
Mile jo do dil toh jajbato ka afasana toh hoga

Haaye... what a beautiful shayari... ❤️Thank you Tupu

The dining table scene was so cute. Pineapple ka achar toh ab famous ho jayegaI love this pineaple achar truely delicious., waise hi jaise ktlk ki baaki sab recipes ho gayi hai!! 😃 Ha lekin muze pasand hai HCKWMM

Mrs. Kulkarni dots so much on Nidhi 👍🏼 Armaan the foodie was so funny in this dialogue: 😆😆😆He is too cute in my os.

Armaan:Jyada bolnese pet nahi bharata khana khanese bharta hai.Abhi main baten karoonga toh bhukha hi rahoonga.Fir wapis se bhuk lag jayegi.

🤣

What a beautiful and most romantic way of wishing Happy new yr!! Absolutely loved the idea... It was so lovely to visualize Ashuji holding the candle in dark and stepping towards Nidhi; counting the seconds and Nidhi supporting him in counting... Awesome scene!! 👏Trulely mesmerising movments of Ashni👏

Ashuji called Nidhi Kiddo and Kiddo pouted... Aisa zor ka zatka diya Ashuji ko ki bechare MajorSahab ek zatke mein "Nidhi" par wapa aa gaye... 🤣
🤣Woh Nidhi ke samne apne shastra daal deta hai.😆

Ashutosh: Nidhi,Paheli saas ka toh muze pata nahi.Lekin Naye saal ki paheli saas tumhare saath li hai maine.Toh lagta hai

Stupendous dialogue... followed by awesome song!! Perfect for Ashuji's feelings!! 👏

So amazing of Ashuji to have said that he would learn how to dance from Nidhi and he wishes to do something special for her in life. ❤️ Another beautiful dialogue when he explains why is he envious and angry at the same time "
Tum itni pyari kyon ho?Aur Gussa apne aap se ki main tumhe pahele kyon nahi mila?"Thank you once again

AshNi convo. is so cute and Ashuji offering his CC to Nidhi is so wonderful!! 😃 But the gift that Nidhi wants is so lovely... nothing material; only and only happiness of Ashuji ☺️ totally in love Nidhi

hug, I Love You kehna, Sundar se Zumke matching with Anarkali dress... Aapke Ashuji pyar jatane mein koi kasar nahi chhodta Alkaben!!Woh toh hai.Mere Ashuji Nidhi ke pyaar ke bawre ho gaye hai.And girl like Nidhi deserved to be pampered Mujhe yeh Aashuji bahot pasand hai... perfect as Nidhi's betterhalf 😃 Aur hamari Nidhi bhi koi kam nahi... Us ne bhi matching cufflinks already rakhe hai as a new year gift for Ashuji... Haaye kya ishq hai hamare tota-maina ka!! ❤️

Ashuji thinks whether Nidhi would like him with stuble or clean-shaven and the angel assures him that she loves him just the way he is!! I so recalled Fashion-show track and same dialogue from Nidhi here. 😳Maine bahoot sare dialogues ktlk ke dale hai

And, stage ki sajawat toh kya shaandaar ki hai... Orchid flowers and all photos of family - enough to make everyone nostalgic!! 👏

This convo. between 2 samadhis is so amazing: Kaash har ladki ke pita ko aise hi samdhi mile... ❤️


Col Verma: Alok,badhai ho.Tera beta mera hua.Hum dono samdhi ban gaye.

Col Mathur: main ghate me nahi hu.Muze bhi toh beti mili hai.

Arman-Mallika ki Sagai ka karyakram toh sucharu roop se sampann hua but naye character Abhimanyu ki ann mauke per entry se Ashu-Armu zaroor chaunk gaye honge... 😆😆😆 Though I am not worried at all coz I know, AshNi forever!! ☺️For me Ashni forever and Armall are forever

Awesome update Alkaben!! Loved it from start to finish!! ❤️
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Thank you once again Tupu

Thank you Tupu for awsome feedback
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Alkaben, Here's my review for Chapter:18:

As I had believed, Abhi isn't a competitor for Ashu or Armu but a brother figure for Nidhi and Mallu. He seems to be such a good boy!! 😃 Mr. and Mrs. Kulkarni ki taraha woh bhi Nidhi-Mallu se bahot pyar karta hai 😃Woh toh hai.Totally family together.

Lovely scene where youngsters are enjoying the chitchatting at night and Armaan understands "Ashu ke dil ke armaan" and sends him off with Nidhi to make coffee!! Bada bhai ho toh Armaan ke jaisa... 😃 He stopped Mallu from going with Nidhi and gave AshNi some time together☺️ So thoughtful of him!! Ashuji jealous ke baad unko ek pyaar ka dose jaroori tha.

AshNi in kitchen were so adorable and so is this convo: ⭐️Thank you Tupu

Nidhi: Yeh bhi kya puchh ne ki baat hai?jaroor dungi.Dil de diya hai jaan tumne denge.

Ashu:ab yeh filmi line marna band karo aur yeh mat bhulo ki main fauji hu.Jaan bachana mera kaam hai.jaan lena nahi.

Nidhi ne Ashutosh ko sirf uske naam se hi bulaya aur apni bechaini ka izhaar bhi kar liya... Heard the song coming next, for the first time ever but it fitted perfectly in this scene!! Great choice of song Alkaben!! 👏It is too romantic song.Though i don't like this song from film but lyrically it is perfect


Nidhi:aur mera kya?aapne jo mere haath baandh diye.

Ashutosh: Nidhi,rishte me toh hum badhe hai.Ek ankahe se

Nidhi:Ankahe se nahi.Pyaar se

Loved these dialogues too!! How sweet... ek anokhe, ankahe se bandhan mein dono bandh chuke hai jis bandhan ko log pyar kehte hai ☺️ ❤️Yes unique people unique love


Ashutosh: Nidhi pata hai mera kya sapna hai?main tumhe lekar kahi dur jana chahta hoo.Bus tumharee bahome aake duniya dekhna chahta hoo.Kabhi sirf tumhare liye kuchh karna chahta hoo.Tumharee god me sur rakhkar sona chahta hoo.Kabhi tumhe apni bahome uthakar duniya ko batana chahta hu ki Dekho meri Nidhi kitni pyari hai.Har rang hai usme.

The above lines from Ashuji are to die for!! Nidhi is so lucky to have got a man who loves her so much and so deeply!! 👍🏼
Now Ashu totally in love with Cutie Nidhi.Till the date he didn't knew what is love?aise log pyaar me kuchh bhi kar sakte hai.

Uske baad toh kya kehna... lovely hug and AshNi's first kiss ☺️
☺️☺️

Per yeh darwaze per kabab mein haddi koun aa gaya Hope he/she is someone supportive to AshNi story and pushes the matter forward... 😳
Let's see

Thank you for this lovely update Alkaben. 🤗 Please give next update asap... Am waiting!!I will update soon shayad abhi 😛

Thank you once again for awsome feedback.
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sorry Tasha i didn't see this.But will update soon
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Chap 19

Nidhi aur Ashutosh ne darwaje ki aur dekha aur un dono ke muh se nikal gaya,"Aap?

Darawaje par Anji Rangu aur Abhi the.

Abhi ko dekhkar Nidhi aur Ashu chauk pade.

Ashutosh: Main chalta hoo.

Abhi :Aap kahaa chale chhote jijaji.

Ab Ashutosh shock ho gaya.Aur woh Nidhi ki taraf dekhne laga.

Abhi: Uski taraf kya dekh rahe hai Ashutosh?usko main bachpan se janata hoo.Toh Nidhi aur Mallika di ki man ki baat main janata hoo.Aakhir meri bahene hai woh.

Nidhi: Lekin Abhi tumhe yeh sab

Aur uski najar Anji par padi.

Nidhi: Anji,toh tune Abhi ko sab bataya na?

Anji: usne puchha aur maine bata diya.

Nidhi:Matlab agar kal di bhi puchhegi toh tu bata degi nahi?

Anji:chal ab muze jyada dhamaki mat de.Warna toh main jakar direct Mathur uncle ko bata dungi.

Nidhi: are baap re! please unhe kuchh mat batana.

Anji:ha chal nahi batati.Coffee ho gai ho toh hum sab chalte hai.

Ashutohs: Anji tum Nidhi ki help karo main bahar jata hoo.Muze thoda kaam hai.Bye.

Aur jate jate usne Nidhi ke kaan me whisper kiya,"Raat ko mere kamre me yaad hai na?

Aur Nidhi kuchh nahi boli aur woh chala gaya wahaa se.

Bahar loan me Mallika aur Armaan baithe the.

Armaan: Mallika,ab hum ek majboot rishte me bandh gaye hai nahi?i am so lucky that i have a life partner like you.

Mallika: main bhi bahoot lucky hoo ki muze tum mile.

Armaan ne Mallika ko hug kiya.

Armaan: yeh sari bandaro ki sena hume disturb kar rahi hai.Chal mallika hum log ek long drive marke aate hai.Is se pahele ki woh koi bhi bahar aa jaye.

Mallika:ha chalo.Lekin main Nidhi ko bol deti hoo

Armaan: aha Nidhi ko bologi aur woh chup baithegi?AIR ki tarah pure ghar me baat faila degi.Chalo

Aur Mallika aur Armaan daudke car ki taraf aaye aur wahaa se nikal gaye.

Ashutosh bahar aaya toh wahaa koi bhi nahi tha.

Ashutosh mun me soch raha tha,'Bhai toh mera hi hai.Bhaag gaya bhabhi ko lekar." aur woh khud hi apni baat pe hans diya.

Sab bahar aaye dekha toh Ashutohs akela hi baitha tha wahaa.

Nidhi: Di aur Jiju kahaa gaye?

Ashutosh: premi bhagne se pahle address batakar nahi jate Nidhi aur woh darling bolte bolte ruk gaya.

Nidhi:matlab di aur jiju ghumne gaye hai.

Ashutosh: aur khabardaar tumne is baat ka ghar me dhindhora pita toh.

Nidhi : lekin main toh

Aur woh sab baithke gappe hankne lage.Der raat ke 12 baj chuke the.

Abhi: Nidhi,main jata hu sone.Muze neend aa rahi hai.

Rangu:chalo main bhi chalta hoo.

Ashutosh:Is waqt?tum Abhi ke saath so jao.Warna main aata hu tumhe drop karne.

Abhi: Rangnath,mere saath so jao.Kal hum dono saath me hi ghar jayenge.

Rangu:ha toh theek hai fir.Aaj ki raat Verma house ke saath

Aur sare sone chale gaye.

Ashutosh aur Nidhi sidhiya chadh rahe the.

Nidhi:Aapko kuchh chahiye?tea ya coffee?main banakar lati hu.

Ashutosh: Nahi muze kuchh nahi chahiye.Bus thoda waqt chahiye tumhare saath bitane ke liye.

Nidhi:main aati hoo aapke kamareme.

Ashutosh:Jaldi aana.I am waiting for you.

Thodi der baad Nidhi Ashutosh ke kamareme gai.Ashutosh ka kamra terrace se atach tha.Kyonki use khule aasman ke tare bahoot pasand the.

Nidhi ne dekha toh Ashu apni room ke balcony se taro ko dekh raha tha.

Nidhi uske pas jakar khadi ho gai.

Ashutosh ne Nidhi ka haath apne hatho me liya aur bola,"Nidhi,tum muze ek baat bataogi?tum muzse itna pyaar kyon karti ho?"

Nidhi: Aapko pata hai Shyama anty kya keheti hai?Aap agar sochke pyaar kare toh woh pyaar nahi pyaar ki haar hai.Pyaar toh sochke samazke nahi kiya jata.Main aajtak is pyaar se anjaan thi kyonki mere dil ko koi pasand hi nahi aaya.Lekin maine aapko dekha aur do teen mulakato me muze pata chal gaya ki muze koi kyon pasand nahi aata tha.

Ashutosh: matlab main stranger hu?

Nidhi: Nahi aisee baat nahi hai.Pyaar me kabhi kyon?kya?sawal ka jawab nahi hota.Pyaar toh ho jata hai.Waise ek baat kahoo?yehi baat toh muze aapse bhi puchhni thi.Muze pata hai ki main toh pagal hu.Utpatang harkate karti reheti hoo.Lekin aap toh sulze hue insaan hai.Fir aap muzse pyaar kyon karne lage?

Ashutosh: bus mera bhi yahi jawab hai.Tum pagal toh ho [Haste hue] lekin saath me ek jimmedar ladki ho.Family values ko samazti ho.

Nidhi:Bus itna hi?aur tarff karo meri.

Ashutosh: he!Nidhi tum sachmuch pagal ho.

Ashutosh ne Nidhi ko peechhese hug kiya.

Nidhi:Suniye,aap wahaa jakar muze phone karenge roj.Yeh mera hukum hai.

Ashutosh ne Nidhi ke gale me bahe dali aur uska muh apni taraf kiya.

Ashutosh: Nidhi,tumhari aankhe bahoot khubsurat hai.

Aur usne Nidhi ki aankhoko chuma.Aur fir Usne Nidhi ka chehere apne hathome liya aur usko forehead pe kiss kiya.

Nidhi ne Ashutohs ko kaske gale laga liya.Uske sabr ka baandh tut chuka tha.

Nidhi rone lagi.Uske aasoo Ashutosh ke kandhe ko bhigo rahe the.

Ashutosh ne Nidhi ki woh dard woh tadap Mehsoos ki aur usne Nidhi ka chehera upar uthaya.

Nidhi:Aap ko toh achha lagta hai muzse dur jana.Lekin muze aapse dur jana achha nahi lagta.Yeh tadap yeh duriya meri jaan le legi dekhna.

Ashutosh: shh Nidhi,Ab tum muze kamjor bana rahi ho.

Nidhi:bus ab main baba se humari baat karoongi.Aur dur nahi reh sakti main aapke bina.

Ashutosh: Nidhi

Nidhi: ha aap toh yahi kahenge na ki hum di aur jijaji

Ashutosh: Nahi Nidhi,ab main hi yahi chahta hoo ki tum mere pas raho mere saath raho.Bus tum ab meri banake raho.

Nidhi:toh fir kal hi hum baat karenge baba se

Ashutosh : Lekin tab tak?

Nidhi:main aapki bahome aise hi so jaoongi.

Ashutosh:soch lo,subah tak tum yahaa ruk sakti ho?

Nidhi:challenge kar rahe hai?

Ashutosh: ha bolo rukogi?

Nidhi: Ruk sakti hoo.Aapke liye.

Ashutosh: hey bhagwan!yeh ladki muze paagal kar degi.

Nidhi: nahi aapke pas rehekar main sudhar jaoongi.

Ashutosh:Mere pass tumhare liye surprise hai.

Nidhi:Kya?

Ashutosh:Aise nahi.Aakhe bund karo.

Nidhi:theek hai Aakhe band kar deti hoo.Jaldi dijiye na?

Aur Ashutosh ne Nidhi ke hatho me ek packet rakha.

Nidhi ne khola toh usme Sitaro wali chunar thi.

Nidhi ne aankhe kholi aur bol padi,"kitni sundar hai yeh toh.Thank you"

Ashutosh ne woh chunar Nidhi ke surpar rakhi.

Ashutosh:Bahoot pyari lag rahi ho Nidhi.

Nidhi Ne Ashutosh ke dono haath apne haath me liye aur unhe chum liya.

Ashutosh chair par jake baith gaya.Nidhi uske pas gai.Ashutosh aur Nidhi thodi der tak khamosh rahe.

Tabhi Nidhi Ashu ke pas jakar khadi ho gai aur boli,"Muze baithna hai."

Ashutosh: ha toh chair le aao

Nidhi:nahi muze dusri chair par nahi baithna.

Ashutosh:toh fir?

Nidhi ne ashu ke lap pe ishara kiya jahaa Ashutosh apne knee pe apne dono haath rakhkar baitha tha.

Woh ab bhi kuchh samaz nahi paya tha.

Nidhi ne uske dono haath uthaye aur uske lap me baith gai aur usne Ashutosh ke dono hatho se apne aapko baandh liya

Nidhi: samze saiyaan?

Ashutosh aur Nidhi aur pas aa gaye.Ashutosh ne Nidhi ko pahli baar itne kareeb se aur woh bhi aise touchy position me.

Nidhi aur Ashutosh ki sanse tej ho gai.

Ashutosh ne Nidhi ke kaan me kahaa,"ab agar muzse galti ho gai toh muze dosh mat dena."

Nidhi : main toh aapke galati ka intejaar kar rahi hoo.

Ashutosh:Kya? matlab?

Nidhi:apkee saso ko main mehsoos kar sakti hoo.

Aur Nidhi ne Ashutosh ki taraf apni najar ghumai.

Ashutosh ne apne tadapte hoth Nidhi ke hotho par rakh diye aur Nidhi ne apne haath Ashutosh ke chest par rakhe.

Fir Nidhi ne apni dono baho se Ashutosh ko hug kar liya.

Thodi der baad Ashutosh bola,"Nidhi,tum jao abhi."

Nidhi:kyon?muze nahi jana

Ashutosh:Nidhi dekho ab tum mere samne khadi reheke muze chidhana mat.Warna main

Nidhi:Warna aap kya karenge?

Ashutosh:bus tumhe raat bhar pyaar karoonga.

Aur Ashutosh ne Nidhi ko apne dono hatho se utha liya

Nidhi:Are aap muze kahaa lekar ja rahe hai?





Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago
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Me second...Off to read it
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You are welcome Tasha
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Thank you Tasha

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