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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update...👏 Armaan is the first to know AshNi relation...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
What a fabulous update Alka ji...Superb!

Loved these lines...

Tasveer dil me basi hai kaise sambhaloo
Takdeer se paya hai paagal dil ko kaise samazaoo?


And these...

ab tak dil laga nahi tha kisi se toh dil muthhi me reh sakta tha.Ab toh main aur mera dil dono bechain ho rahe hai.

Wow Alka ji...

Aapne kitna bhi dheere se kahaa ho lekin agar main aapke dil ki aah sun sakta hoo toh bole alfaaz toh sar aankho par.

What a lovey-dovey update...you're in great mood when you wrote the chap? Seriously superb narration. WOW...and...WoW 👏.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 13


Ashutosh aur Armaan Nidhi aur mallika ko drop karke wapis aa rahe hai.

Armaan is driving the car and Ashutosh is sitting next to him.

Armaan ne ek najar ashu ke upar dali.Woh udas chehre se bahar dekh raha tha.

Armaan: Meri jaan,kahaa kho gaye?Nidhi ki yaad aa rahi kya?

Ashutosh chauk gaya.Usne hairat bhari nigaho se Armaan ki taraf dekha.

Armaan: kya?aise kya dekh raha hai be?meri jaan yuhi nahi keheta tumhe.Muze pata hai tere aur nidhi ke beech me kuchh chal raha hai.Lekin seriousness kitna hai yeh muze janana hai.Kyonki main tumhe janata hoo.Tere liye teri duty sabse upar hai toh pyaar tere liye baad me aata hai.Achhi baat hai lekin agar pyaar kiya hai toh priority bhi pyaar ko deni padegi na?

Aashutosh: woh bhaiya.

Armaan: sharma mat.pyaar hai toh achha hai na?tabhi toh tu aajkal muze zatke pe zatke de raha hai.Kahe toh baba se teri bhi baat karoo kya?

Ashutosh: Nhai bhai abhi nahi.Humne yeh decide kiya hai ki hum pahele aap logo ki baat karenge aur fir aap ki shadi ke baat hi hum humare bareme sochenge.

Armaan: hum matlab kaun?

Ashutosh:kya bhaiya?mat chhidao na?

Armaan: haye mere mitti ke sher.

Ashtuosh: lekin bhaiya aap yeh baat bhabhi ko nahi batayenge.
Armaan:kyon be?

Ashutosh: Nidhi keh rahi thi ki unhe bura lagega ki unhe Nidhi ne nahi aapne bataya.Aap samaz rahe hai na?bhabhi ko pata chala toh woh pahele Humare bareme sochegi.Toh pahele aap fir hum.

Armaan: lekin ek baat kahoo?ashu,nidhi ko jahaa tak main janata hu,woh aisee ladki hai jisne agar ek baar pyar kiya toh woh marte dum tak nibhayegi.Lekin woh apne pyaar ko miss bhi karegi aur kabhi kabhi muze lagta hai ki judaai use bardasht bhi nahi hogi.

Ashutosh:woh toh hai bhai.Lekin maine use samaza diya.

Armaan:kya ki tu muze miss karna lekin muzse koi pagalpan ki ummeed mat karna?aisa hi hu main?

Ashtusoh: nahi bhai,main bhi toh use miss kar raha hoo.Main toh milne jaoonga

Armaan: Lucknow?

Ashutosh: ha toh!usme kya hua?teen ghante ka toh rasta hai Kanpur se.

Armaan: he!~lo!ek aur shock.Armaan ka laadla bigad gaya.

Ashutosh: nahi pyaar me sudhar gaya.

Armaan :chal theek hai.hume bhi packing kar leni chahiye ab hume bhi toh kal nikalna hai na Kanpur ke liye?baba ko bhi sabkuchh batana hai.

Ashutosh:unki fikar aap mat kijiye.Main bhi rahoonga na aapke saath.

Armaan: ha bhai tu toh rahega.tumhe rehena padega.warna tumhare liye baat kaun karega?


Nidhi ke ghar pahuchane ke baad sham ko

Nidhi ne baba ko ishara kiya aur Anji ko bhi bulaya.

Anji: kya hai?

Nidhi: [dheere se] Anji chal baba se baat karte hai.

Anji: lekin di

Nidhi:unhe sone bhej dete hai.

Nidhi baba ke pas aayi aur boli,"Baba aapke saath coffee pine ka mun hai terrece pe chale?

Baba: theek hai chal.Muze pata hai jab tumhe koi baat karni ho toh tu yahi karti hai.Di ko bula le.

Nidhi: di ke liye baat karni hai.Unhe jane do sone.

Baba:koi serious baat toh nahi hai na?woh theek hai na?use kuchh hua toh nahi?

Nidhi: baba,kuchh nahi bus aapki laadli ki zindagi badalnewali hai.Baki baten baad me.pahele di ko sone ko toh bhejo?

Baba: chalo,nidhi mallika so jao abhi safar se thak gai hogi na tum?
Mallika: main DB ko kitchen me help karke fir so jaoongi.

DB: badi aayi help karne wali.Ja jake aaraam kar.ghar aayi nahi ki ghar ke kaam apne sar par lena shuru.Chhote sarkar kar lega.Tu jake aaraam kar.Kal se hospital bhi toh jana hai.


Terrece par Nidhi,Anji,Baba aur DB baithe hai.

Nidhi:Baba,DB shayad di aapko na bataye abhi.Kyonki aap toh janate hai unhe woh apni dil ki baat kabhi khulke nahi keheti.

DB:Jaldi bata na baat kya hai?mera BP badh raha hai.

Nidhi: DB aapka BP ab kabhi nahi badhega.Di ne apne liye ladka pasand kiya hai.

DB aur Baba:kya?kaun hai woh?kya karta hai?khandaan kaisa hai?achha toh hai na?

Nidhi:waah kya telepathy hai dono ki?ek saath ek jaise hi sawal?main batati hu.Unka naam armaan hai.Military me major hai.Kanpur me rehete hai.Di ke saath school me padhte the.Dono bahoot achhe dost hai.Unke pitaji bhi military me col the.

Baba:col the?naam kya hai unka?

Nidhi: retired col Aalok Mathur.

Baba: kya Aalok mathur?

Aur unke aur DB ki aankhome chamak aa gai lekin Baba ne DB ko chup rehene ka ishara kiya.

Baba: muze unka number de Nidhi.Main do teen din me baat kar loonga unhe.Chalo ab tum bhi so jao.Main aur DB sab sambhal lenge.

Yahaa Kanpur me bhi Ashu ne bhi mallika ke bareme apne baba ko bataya.

Col Mathur:kya naam bataya unka?

Ashutosh: retired col Yograj verma

Col Mathur:muze tu unka number de ja.main unse baat kar loonga.

Ashtuosh ne unhe Yograj ka number diye aur wahaa se chala gaya.

Abhi Mathur saheb soch hi rahe the ki phone karoo aur unka cell baja.

Col Mathur: hello

Col Verma: jyada hilega toh gir jayega col.

Col Mathur: kaun?

Col Verma: nahi pahechana?budha ho gaya hai tu?yaaddasht chali gai teri.Pahele toh teri yaad dasht kafi achhi thi.Kya hua bete badam nahi khilate kya?

Col Mathur: Abe tu?mere bete toh nahi khilate lekin lagta hai Buaji tumhe bahoot khilati hai.Kaisa hai yaar tu?

Col verma: chal shukr kar apne bete aur meri betiyo ka ki usne hume mila diya.

Col Mathur:sahi kahaa yaara.

Aur unki aankhe bhar aayi.

Col verma: milne aa na yaar.Tu akela hi toh mera dost tha aur hai.Teri kami muze bahoot khali hai yaar.

Col Mathur: muze bhi toh teri bahoot yaad aati thi yaar.Chal kal hi aata hoo.

Col Verma: apne bacho ko lekar aana.Warna ghar me ghusne nahi dunga.

Tabhi DB ne mathur saheb se baat karne ke liye phone maanga.

DB: Hello Aalok?

Mathur: are DB.Paay lagoo.kaise ho aap?

DB: theek hu aur ab tu aayega milne toh achhi ho jaooongi.tum theek ho na?tum charo ki dosti ki main gawah hu.Tum,Aashna,Nandini,aur yog.Sab college me tumhe chandal chokadi kehete the.

Mathur:ha Buaji.aur shadi ke baad turant hi yog ne nandini ko khoya aur maine ashutosh ke janam ke baad aashna ko.

Mathur: lekin bua ji ap yog ko batana ki abhi bacho ko iss bareme kuchh na bataye.hum sab ko surprise denge.khaskar Nidhi aur mallika ko.

Hope you will like this chapter.
Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
While liking I read "Still editing"... Edit it will read later...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great ! Nice one Alka Di ! 👏 Will review later ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Alkaji,
Both chapter 12 and 13 are really very good. Arman's quip regarding strawberry ice cream is endearing.

It is good for both the pairs that their fathers are friends. I hope and wish there are no twists and it will be a smooth love story.

Waiting to read the surprised look on the young doctors' faces.

Thank you Alkaji and a Merry Christmas to you and your family.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Alkaji lovely chapter again. Loved Arman- Ashutosh bond, their conversation- meri jaan youn hi nahi kehta tumhe- I think this is turning a smooth love story. loving the way story is moving 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u for the beautiful update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This update had a comical touch that elicits a reaction of laughter along with emotions😆

Armaan: he!~lo!ek aur shock.Armaan ka laadla bigad gaya.

Ashutosh: nahi pyaar me sudhar gaya.

But still it reflects the emotional bonding of love, care n thoughtfulness between Armaan n Ashu...how well they r known to each other!It's a summons to an authentic exchange that will foster friendship, deepen fellowship, and encourage a truthful dialog about things that really matter in life.

Also the father daughter bonding...Fathers and their daughters share a special and unique relationship that can help them successfully make that journey from "Daddy's little girl" into a young, capable, independent, successful woman , be it Nidhi or Mallika. Infact both col vermna n DB r more sensitive towards Mallika . They have always treated her with the utmost respect and given her the message that she was very capable, allowing her to pursue her passions in life and become successful.

Col Verma n col Mathur r friends!!
Aur unki aankhe bhar aayi.

Col verma: milne aa na yaar.Tu akela hi toh mera dost tha aur hai.Teri kami muze bahoot khali hai yaar.

Col Mathur: muze bhi toh teri bahoot yaad aati thi yaar.Chal kal hi aata hoo.

Both friends falling into a whirlpool of emotions with joy ,pain, and past memories colliding into one another forming the most pleasant feeeling .

Very beautifully written update...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Welcome back... U were missed...

i missed you all so badly tupu.🤗

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