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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suku_07

Me second...Off to read it

Congrates and will wait for yur review
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the chapter Alka Di !
Review by tomorrow.. pakka 😃
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Nice continuation Alka Di ! A good atmosphere with lovers meeting ! šŸ‘
So Abhi also comes to know abt Ashni's love ! Chalo achha hai, Baba n DB se baat karne wale badhte jaa rahe hain 😊
Chhote jijaji... nice name for Ashu.. shocked.., haha.. ab ye sab sun ne ki aadat daal lo Ashu.. šŸ˜† aur karo pyaar.. šŸ˜‰

: yeh sari bandaro ki sena hume disturb kar rahi hai.Chal mallika hum log ek long drive marke aate hai.Is se pahele ki woh koi bhi bahar aa jaye.

'Bhai toh mera hi hai.Bhaag gaya bhabhi ko lekar." aur woh khud hi apni baat pe hans diya.

I knew that sumthing is gonna happen thru Armaan's mind.. but this.. haha love him to take away Mallika šŸ˜› Even Ashu is amused.. šŸ˜† O Armaan meri jaan .,., šŸ¤—

A lovely scene at Ashu's room ! A natural with a fantasy to enjoy ! Thanks for this treat !

Meeting of Ashni is not new, but here the heart and mind who have already become one are truly ready to say whatever they wanna say to each other.

Aapko pata hai Shyama anty kya keheti hai?Aap agar sochke pyaar kare toh woh pyaar nahi pyaar ki haar hai.Pyaar toh sochke samazke nahi kiya jata.Main aajtak is pyaar se anjaan thi kyonki mere dil ko koi pasand hi nahi aaya.Lekin maine aapko dekha aur do teen mulakato me muze pata chal gaya ki muze koi kyon pasand nahi aata tha.


Yes, so true ! Love never knocks at your door, wo toh chupke se aataa hai aur bas ho jata hai.. ! Phir har baar aur har cheez pyaari lagti hai lover ki !

Ashutosh: bus mera bhi yahi jawab hai.Tum pagal toh ho [Haste hue] lekin saath me ek jimmedar ladki ho.Family values ko samazti ho.

Pyaar mein ek dusre ko had se zyaadaa jaan lena zaroori hota hai.. aur Ashni ki yahi baat unhe itne pyaar mein dhaal rahi hai ā¤ļø

Ek doosre se bichadne ka gham.. This moment is special cos Ashu will leave soon n then dont know how n when they both will meet.. Thats the reason that they both are here in this room, kisi ki bhi parwaah kiya bina !
A beautiful gift ot Sitaron wali Chunar !
Nidhi is looking so lovely in that n now Ashu is unable to control himself.. šŸ˜³šŸ˜‰
Hmm. Nidhi sat on his laps and is ready to surrender herself.. But Ashu wanna control and asking her to leave..
And he is taking her to ?
kahaan ?? šŸ˜‰
Jaldi se update de do Alka Di,.., its like hum adhar mein latak gaye aur Ashu Nidhi ko pakde hue hai dono haathon mein ā¤ļø
Good one Di.. liked it n now eagerly waiting for the next 😃





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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nice continuation Alka Di ! A good atmosphere with lovers meeting ! šŸ‘Yes true Bawa.Thank you

So Abhi also comes to know abt Ashni's love ! Chalo achha hai, Baba n DB se baat karne wale badhte jaa rahe hain 😊Anji hai na AIR bankar boneke liye.
Chhote jijaji... nice name for Ashu.. shocked.., haha.. ab ye sab sun ne ki aadat daal lo Ashu.. šŸ˜† aur karo pyaar.. šŸ˜‰He was too shocked after hearing this.Lekin jo fact hai woh hai.

: yeh sari bandaro ki sena hume disturb kar rahi hai.Chal mallika hum log ek long drive marke aate hai.Is se pahele ki woh koi bhi bahar aa jaye.

'Bhai toh mera hi hai.Bhaag gaya bhabhi ko lekar." aur woh khud hi apni baat pe hans diya.

I knew that sumthing is gonna happen thru Armaan's mind.. but this.. haha love him to take away Mallika šŸ˜› Even Ashu is amused.. šŸ˜† O Armaan meri jaan .,., šŸ¤—Mera bhai hai pahechan gaya bola na ki bhag jayega.šŸ˜†

A lovely scene at Ashu's room ! A natural with a fantasy to enjoy ! Thanks for this treat !I want to show that kabhi kabhi dil aur humare jajbaat humare bas me nahi hote aur pyar toh in sabse pareh hai na?Sparsh ki bhi ek anjani bhasha hai.

Meeting of Ashni is not new, but here the heart and mind who have already become one are truly ready to say whatever they wanna say to each other.So true Bawa.expression has so many ways sometime it speaks language of silence sometimes only tocuh convey love and sometimes needs words to express love.

Aapko pata hai Shyama anty kya keheti hai?Aap agar sochke pyaar kare toh woh pyaar nahi pyaar ki haar hai.Pyaar toh sochke samazke nahi kiya jata.Main aajtak is pyaar se anjaan thi kyonki mere dil ko koi pasand hi nahi aaya.Lekin maine aapko dekha aur do teen mulakato me muze pata chal gaya ki muze koi kyon pasand nahi aata tha.


Yes, so true ! Love never knocks at your door, wo toh chupke se aataa hai aur bas ho jata hai.. ! Phir har baar aur har cheez pyaari lagti hai lover ki !True

Ashutosh: bus mera bhi yahi jawab hai.Tum pagal toh ho [Haste hue] lekin saath me ek jimmedar ladki ho.Family values ko samazti ho.

Pyaar mein ek dusre ko had se zyaadaa jaan lena zaroori hota hai.. aur Ashni ki yahi baat unhe itne pyaar mein dhaal rahi hai ā¤ļøYahi baat unhe majboor bana deti hai.Pyaar itna karte hai ki mat puchho.

Ek doosre se bichadne ka gham.. This moment is special cos Ashu will leave soon n then dont know how n when they both will meet.. Thats the reason that they both are here in this room, kisi ki bhi parwaah kiya bina !Ishq ko kisiki parwah kahaa hoti hai?
A beautiful gift ot Sitaron wali Chunar ! His every gift has a purpose
Nidhi is looking so lovely in that n now Ashu is unable to control himself.. šŸ˜³šŸ˜‰Kaise kare bechara?šŸ˜†
Hmm. Nidhi sat on his laps and is ready to surrender herself.. But Ashu wanna control and asking her to leave..Bechara sochta hoga ki kash humari shadi ho chuki hoti?
And he is taking her to ?
kahaan ?? šŸ˜‰Bahoot matured hai humara ashu.Dekhte hai matuarity kitni der teek pati hai?
Jaldi se update de do Alka Di,.., its like hum adhar mein latak gaye aur Ashu Nidhi ko pakde hue hai dono haathon mein ā¤ļøShimla ya Manali?šŸ˜†
Good one Di.. liked it n now eagerly waiting for the next 😃





Will try to give update soon.Thank you Bawa for awsome feedback
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Posted: 11 years ago
All updates are beautiful AlkaJi. šŸ‘
Ashutosh's selection of gifts for Nidhi and New Year celebration idea is lovely!
Theme of stage decoration is so royal!
Awaiting to see where Ashutosh takes Nidhi holding her in his arms

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kritika4ever

All updates are beautiful AlkaJi. šŸ‘Thank you Akruti
Ashutosh's selection of gifts for Nidhi and New Year celebration idea is lovely!made for each other
Theme of stage decoration is so royal!Orchid flower.What else want to decorate
Awaiting to see where Ashutosh takes Nidhi holding her in his arms I will give my next update soon

Thank you Akruti
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi alka Ji. how are u. waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago

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hi alka Ji. how are u. waiting for the next update

Me fine Tasha.Thank you dear.Will give update by tomm for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Me fine Tasha.Thank you dear.Will give update by tomm for sure

woohoo 😊 waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap 20



Nidhi Chilla rahi thi,"Ashutosh muze kahaa le ja rahe hai aap?"

Ashutosh : Dhire Nidhi,koi jaag gaya toh hume kal ki jagah aaj hi batana padega sabko.

Aur woh Nidhi ko terrace ki khuli hawa me le gaya.

Usne Nidhi ko dheere se pyaar se terrace wale zule pe bithaya aur khud uske baju me jake baith gaya.

Nidhi:Aap muze yahaa kyon laye?

Ashutosh:Bus chandani raat ki sair karane.

Nidhi:aapke saath toh chandni raat ka alag majaa hai.

Ashutosh ne Nidhi ke gale me apni bahe dali,"Sirf chandani raat hi kyon?amavas ki raat,har raat har din khas hoga mere liye.Bus tum aa jao meri life me meri bankar.Tum duniya ko bhul na gai toh kehena.

Nidhi:Ashutosh ab yeh sabar kab khatam hoga?

Ashutosh:Bahoot jald Nidhi.

Aur Ashutosh zule par let gaya Nidhi ki godi me apna sur rakhkar.

Nidhi:Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?

Ashutosh:bus thodi shanti pana chahta hu.Aur is jagah ke alawa koi aur jagah nahi hai sukun pane ke liye.

Nidhi Ashutosh ki balome apni ungaliya ghumatii rahi aur Ashu uske is sparsh se bhavuk ho raha tha.

Ashtuosh:Nidhi mere kitne din ka sapna tumne sach kar diya.You will be very good wife and mother i bet.

Nidhi:Ab kya aapko lori gakar sulana padega?

Ashutosh:Kaun kambakht sona chahta hai tum agar pas ho toh?I love you Nidhi so so so much.Yeh zindagi ke jitne pal hai unhe yuhi jee lene do muze.Pata nahi kal mile na mile.

Nidhi ne ashu ko kaske pakad liya.

Nidhi:Aap muze dara rahe hai.

Ashutosh : Nahi Nidhi main dara nahi raha hu tumhe.Bus thoda khud dar raha hoo.

Nidhi: main ek dr hoo.Muze bhi pata hai ki zindagi ka koi bharosa nahi lekin fir bhi hume zindagi jini padti hai.Main aapse pyaar karti hoo aur isse bada such kuchh nahi hai mere liye.Aap yahaa ho ya kahi aur.

In labjo pe Ashutosh khush ho gaya.

Nidhi:Ab aap so jaiye.Subah aapko nikalna hai.Aur muze bhi hospital jana hai.

Ashtuosh: lekin uske pahele hume gharwalo ko humare bareme batana hai.

Nidhi:woh toh hai.

Ashutosh:Muze toh laga tha ki tum sari raat mere saath bitaogi.Lekin tum toh bhaag rahi ho muzse.

Nidhi:Main nahi bhaag rahi major sahab.Aap apne aap se dar rahe hai ki aapke emotions control nahi ho rahe hai.Main toh aapke liye jaan tak dene ko taiyaar hu.Aur koi pal jo muze aapse kareeb rakh sake mere liye kimati hai.Chahe woh kaise bhi mile.Muze emotions me behek jana pasand hai.Kyonki main aapse dil aur jaan se pyaar karti hu.Aap ki soch galat nahi hai.Lekin mera aur aapke pyaar me farq hai.

Ashutosh yeh sunkar soch me pad gaya.

Nidhi: Aapka pyaar ped ki tarah hai jo ful bhi dena chahta hai aur chhaya bhi.Aur ,mera pyaar tufani nadiya ki tarah hai.Sagar se milan ke liye woh har had paar kar sakti hai.Muze intejaari hai apne sagar me samaneki. Mere liye toh yah sher fit hai..


Tuze barbaad hona hi tha Barah_haal
Naaz kar tuze usne barbaad kiya


Chalti hoo.Good night darling.

Nidhi ne paheli baar use darling kahaa.

Ashutosh: Nidhi,tumne muze bahoot badi jagah di hai.Tumne muze darling kahaa?lekin Nidhi main darta nahi hu emotions ke bahekne se.Lekin tumhare liye main apne aap ko control kar raha hoo.Baki toh tum khud samazdaar ho.

Nidhi ne Ashutosh ke dono hatho ko apne hathome liya aur use apne aankhopar rakha.

Ashutosh:Nidhi,main tumhe apni zindagi me bahoot jald laoonga meri banakar.

Nidhi:Main us din ka intejaar karoongi.Good Night

Ashutosh: Good night

Subah 9 baje Ashutosh breakfast table par aa gaya.Use Nidhi kahi najar nahi aayi.

Sare Breakfast table pe jama ho chuke the.

Ashutosh ko samaz nahi aaya ki woh baat kare na kare.

Usne apna moby check kiya toh 8 baje ka Nidhi ka message tha,"Going to Hospital Emergency hai."use yaad aaya tab woh shower le raha tha.

Woh Dining table pe aaya toh sare chup ho gaye.

DB: chal chhhote,Nashta kar le.

Koi aur din hota toh Ashutohs chid jata lekin aaj woh khamosh raha.

Tabhi col Verma ne bomb blast kiya,"Ashutosh,Tum Nidhi se pyaar karte ho?

Ashutosh ko laga Nidhi ne sab bata diya.

DB,Col Mathur aur sare chauk gaye.

Col Verma:Jawab doge Ashutosh?Kya Mallika ne jo kahaa woh sach hai?

Ab toh Armaan bhi chauk gaya."Maine toh Mallika ko kuchh nahi bataya."

Aur Ashtusoh ne Armaan ki taraf dekha.Armaan ne ,"muze kuchh nahi pata"aisa sign karke kahaa.

Ashutosh: Ji woh...Mallika ji ne matlab bhabhi ne matlab honewali bhabhi ne

Col verma:Ashutosh,fauzi hokar attack se dar gaye?samna karo datkar.

Ashutosh: Ha uncle main pyaar karta hu Nidhi se.Aur woh bhi.Lekin main kuchh jyada karta hoo.

Col Verma:Achaa toh aajma lete hai.

Ashutosh: Matlab?

Col Verma : Haath mango uska muzse?

Ashutosh ne col Mathur ki taraf dekha.Woh mun hi mun hans rahe the.

Ashutohs ab ekdum se chup ho gaya.

Thodi der yuhi khada raha aur fir Armaan ko dekha aur gussa hokar bola,"BHai yeh kya tamasha dekh rahe ho?yeh kaam toh tumhe karna chahiye.Maine tumhare liye baat ki thi na baba se?Ab tumhari bari hai."


Aur uske is gusse par sare log jor se hans pade.

Col Mathur:chal bhai yeh kaam main karta hoo.Yog Verma kya aap apni beti Dr Nidhi verma ka haath mere bete ke haath me denge?

Col Verma:[thoda sochne ki acting karte hue] Ha de toh sakta hu.Lekin muze meri beti se puchhna padega.

Tabhi Ashutosh bol pada,"Woh bhi taiyaar hai."

Aur apne khud ke hi batose woh sharma gaya aur wahaa se chala gaya.

In KGH

Nidhi aur Mallika surgery khatam karke wapis aa gaya.

Mallika: Apne cabin me jakar celebrate kar matlab Aaram kar Nidhi.

Nidhi: Ji Di.Lekin yeh aapko muh se yeh celebrate kaise nikal gaya di?

Mallika:woh toh bus yuhi.

Nidhi: di,celebration toh aapka hua tha na kal?kitna maja aaya tha na?

Aur doni Nidhi ke cabin me aa gaye.Nidhi ne drower me se apna phone nikala aur dekha toh voice message tha.Ashutosh ka tha woh.

Tabhi Mallika ka phone bhi baja.Armaan ka call tha.

Mallika:tu apna message enjoy kar.Main call attend karke aati hoo.

Nidhi:Sure di.

Mallika ke jate hi Nidhi ne voice message on kiya.

Ashutosh:zumati baharon ne kahaa,khilkhilati fizao ne kahaa.Hume humari mehbooba mil gai aisa hume pyaar ki kiatbo ne kahaa.

Nidhi Tumhari di ne matlab meri pyari bhabhi ne toh pahele se hi tumhare baba ko sab bataya tha.Ghar pe breakfast table pe mere baba ne tumhare baba se tumhara haath manga aur unhone ha kar di.Oh Nidhi!i am so happy.I love you love you love you so much.Waiting for you darling.

Aur uske hansne ki aawaz bhi record ho gai thi.

Nidhi soch me pad gai.

Yahaa mallika bhi Armaan se baat kar rahi thi.

Armaan: Hello chhupi rustam.Muze bhi nahi bataya?

Mallika:Tumne bhi toh muze nahi bataya.

Armaan:Are lekin tumhe pata kaise chala?

Mallika:jaise tum tumhare bhai ko janate ho waise main meri gudiya ko janati hoo.Uske jajbaat uske chahere ki khushi muzse chhupi nahi thi.Aur fir woh meri parchhai hai.Uski rug rug main janti hoo.

Armaan: Love you meri jaan.Aaj toh main bahoot khush hu.Mangiye Mallika e Armaan.Kya m,angna chahti ho?

Mallika:Bus ek mulaqaat jaroori hai sanam.

Armaan:At your service mama.

Aur Armaan uske samne khada tha.

Nidhi cabin se bahar aayi aur usne Mallika aur Armaan ko ek saath dekha.Woh Mallika ki taraf daud padi.Aur usne mallika ko hug kiya ekdum tight wala

Nidhi:I am sorry di.

Mallika:kisliye?

Nidhi:maine aapko nahi bataya isliye

Mallika:muze pata hai ki tumne muze yeh sab abhi kyon nahi bataya.Lekin main bhi tumhari di hu na?Samazna toh tha hi muze.

Aur Armaan ne bhi apne bahe faila di,"Sali saheba,hume bhi ek hug please."

Aur Mallika bhi muskurane lagi.

Nidhi ne Armaan ko bhi hug kiya.

Mallika:Yeh KGH ka coridore hai.Kuchh toh sharam karo Armaan.Chalo mere cabin me aaraam se baithte hai.Lekin Nidhi,tumne ashu ko phone kiya ki nahi?

Ashtuosh samne se aa raha tha,"Nahi yeh kyon karegi?yahaa sab celebration jo kar rahe ho aap log mere bina."

Armaan:Aa gaya jalkukda.

Sare mallika ke cabin me aa gaye.

Nidhi ne Mallika ko hug kiya aur Armaan ne nidhi ko.

Nidhi mallika aur Armaan ko hug karte dekha Ashutosh,"Main bhi karke ghus gaya

Aur charo ne ek group hug kiya.Ashutosh ne Nidhi ka haath dhire se pakadke use halke se sehelaya.

Aur fir woh dono bahar nikalkar Nidhi ke cabin me aa gaye.

Wahaa Nidhi ne Ashutosh ko hug kiya,"THank you thank you so much.I am so happy."

Ashutosh ne badle me use tight hug kiya,"Me too happy doc!"

Nidhi:KYa khaa?doc?Mera nayaa naam

Ashutosh: Yes,doc!meri doc! Happy?

Nidhi:very very much happy Suniye ji!


Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago

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