Os Pyaar ki intehaan [chap 30 page 137 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

115.8k

Users

25

Likes

2k

Frequent Posters

parmarA thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Double bonanza😃 awesome chapter 3!!!

Nidhi: woh kya hai na main aapko maaf nahi karti.Lekin di ko bahoot dino ke baad itna happy dekh rahi hoo.Aur woh bhi Armaanji ki wajah se.
So beautiful wat Nidhi says...shows the loveable bond the two sisters share...not only Mallika cares for her baby sis but Nidhi too adores her sister Mallika!!!
So Ashu n Nidhi heading for the same medical seminar...unki manzil sachmuch ek hai😊
Ashu is true to his profession n doesn't want to violate any rules!!! He even admires Mallika n Nidhi for fulfilling their duties as responsible doctors!!!
Nidhi jealous...so she is possessive abt her sister...interesting to know wat u plan in the further chapters😊.
The story not only rings a chord with the reader but also leaves the reader with a long lasting thought...thots abt relationships , family , duties...perfect Alka👏

Thank you once again deepali.yes i personally shared all type of relations.Even when i was working under hight court advocate their wife treat me as their daughter.And their daughter treated me as her sister.I am not a part of that company but they call me and even send me gifts on every occassion.Sofamily and relation are means a lot for me
bawaswift thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Lovely n beautifully written Alka di ! i am so happy to read a total different background of Ashu n Armaan's profession.. a military background ! 👏 The way you have introduced both of them in the OS.. its par excellence ! Loved it.. ! ⭐️
Armaan n Ashu are brothers.. n so are Mallika n Nidhi.. what a coincidence but a beautiful n realted to the story. ! Mallika is so sober n soft in her nature.. n Armaan is back to " meri jaan " Ashu is hardstone as ever n Nidhi a kinda chulbuli.. but thodi naraaz to Ashu.. loved Ashu in a repenting manner asking for forgiveness to Nidhi.. Ek lambe safar ki shuruaat ! 😉😛
Doordarshan ki newsreader.. 😆 How funny is the scene where the girls cud nit stop themselves laughing.. The chapter of laughs, giggles, knowing each other more and romance begins.. huhooh ! i am enjoying every bit of it !
Mallika's words to Armaan... She is so alone in her life, yet the family she is living with has given her so much of love, affection n adore that she is fully satisfied in her life.. She has everything n content.
Mere liya issse khubsurat duniya koi nahi hai armaan.

Loved this chapter Alka di, you have given a pure n blessed scenario to make us glued to this OS,, Thank you so much ! 👏😊

bawaswift thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Haha,, kitni baar sorry bole Ashu 😛 What a lovely beginning of the chapter 3 ! ⭐️👏
Nidhi is happy that Mallika is happy with Armaan.. n so is Armaan.. This is the truth that Ashu n Nidhi are aware of. n this will be the beginning of their own lovely relationship.. Right ? O yes, me so very right ! ⭐️ Loving this feeling n imagining Ashni in the train .. 😉😛
They are on the same destination.. what a coincidence once again.. N Nidhi n Ashu loves pine apple ka achar.. hmm main bhi taste karoonga.. i have never ... 😛
Eating together n Nidhi taking care of the patient meanwhile.. making Ashu realise her caring nature n Nidhi also looking at him time to time... 😉
Right words by Armaan..
yuhi kat jayega safar saath chalne se.Manzil aayegi najar saath chalnese
Thats what we all need in this OS... 🤗
The desination comes and they are to reach their own places.. Armaan wanna give them a lift.. but our Hardstone is all set to take things in the Military way.. sudherne mein time lagega.. but Nidhi hai na.. 😉😛
Nidhi looks him in surprise,, n they both know that they will meet once again.. !
Lovely n splendid , thoughtful OS Alka Di ! I am going to make this my home now.. I was longing for this kind of a story n i have find it in your beautiful writes.. Thank you so much di 😊😊
Will be waiting for the cute emotional gestures of Nidhi.. a jealous Nidhi.. 😉
And of course.. kuch bandhan jo judenge.. Ashu n Nidhi ke ... aur kuch jo aur gehre ho jayenge.. Armaan n Mallika ke..
@Bawa,this is going to be ff for sure😆😆😆

Yes it is going to be for sure ! 👍🏼 👏
Edited by bawaswift - 11 years ago
ttrocks thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#34
GOOD MORNING & HAPPY WEEKEND ALKABEN!! 😃

ttrocks thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Three parts are already up!! I am yet to read first part too... Will reply in the weekend Alkaben. 😃
aardhan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Sorry Alka, I just saw it. But I will read in the weekend and comment...these days I feel tired after coming back from work.
parmarA thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Lovely n beautifully written Alka di ! i am so happy to read a total different background of Ashu n Armaan's profession.. a military background ! 👏 The way you have introduced both of them in the OS.. its par excellence ! Loved it.. ! ⭐️

Armaan n Ashu are brothers.. n so are Mallika n Nidhi.. what a coincidence but a beautiful n realted to the story. ! Mallika is so sober n soft in her nature.. n Armaan is back to " meri jaan " Ashu is hardstone as ever n Nidhi a kinda chulbuli.. but thodi naraaz to Ashu.. loved Ashu in a repenting manner asking for forgiveness to Nidhi.. Ek lambe safar ki shuruaat ! 😉😛
Doordarshan ki newsreader.. 😆 How funny is the scene where the girls cud nit stop themselves laughing.. The chapter of laughs, giggles, knowing each other more and romance begins.. huhooh ! i am enjoying every bit of it !
Mallika's words to Armaan... She is so alone in her life, yet the family she is living with has given her so much of love, affection n adore that she is fully satisfied in her life.. She has everything n content.
Mere liya issse khubsurat duniya koi nahi hai armaan.

Loved this chapter Alka di, you have given a pure n blessed scenario to make us glued to this OS,, Thank you so much ! 👏😊

Thank you Bawa for your awsome feedback.Yes,i resect my Indian Army a lot.Ya,my mallika in this ff,jise sare pyaar karte hai aur woh bhi sabko pyaar karti hai.I want all to love her character.
Ashutohs is not only heartstone but truely a strict man.And his discipline is his life.

Dekhte hai nidhi use change karti hai ya woh nidhi ko😛
parmarA thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Haha,, kitni baar sorry bole Ashu 😛 What a lovely beginning of the chapter 3 ! ⭐️👏

Nidhi is happy that Mallika is happy with Armaan.. n so is Armaan.. This is the truth that Ashu n Nidhi are aware of. n this will be the beginning of their own lovely relationship.. Right ? O yes, me so very right ! ⭐️ Loving this feeling n imagining Ashni in the train .. 😉😛
They are on the same destination.. what a coincidence once again.. N Nidhi n Ashu loves pine apple ka achar.. hmm main bhi taste karoonga.. i have never ... 😛
Eating together n Nidhi taking care of the patient meanwhile.. making Ashu realise her caring nature n Nidhi also looking at him time to time... 😉
Right words by Armaan..
yuhi kat jayega safar saath chalne se.Manzil aayegi najar saath chalnese
Thats what we all need in this OS... 🤗
The desination comes and they are to reach their own places.. Armaan wanna give them a lift.. but our Hardstone is all set to take things in the Military way.. sudherne mein time lagega.. but Nidhi hai na.. 😉😛
Nidhi looks him in surprise,, n they both know that they will meet once again.. !
Lovely n splendid , thoughtful OS Alka Di ! I am going to make this my home now.. I was longing for this kind of a story n i have find it in your beautiful writes.. Thank you so much di 😊😊
Will be waiting for the cute emotional gestures of Nidhi.. a jealous Nidhi.. 😉
And of course.. kuch bandhan jo judenge.. Ashu n Nidhi ke ... aur kuch jo aur gehre ho jayenge.. Armaan n Mallika ke..
@Bawa,this is going to be ff for sure😆😆😆

Yes it is going to be for sure ! 👍🏼 👏

Thank you aagain Bawa.You will find a blessed relation of mallu and Armaan here.Armaan and mallika's love is really a turning point of nidhi's life.You will see it in next parts.
Yes,i want to show the pure relation and the values of our relationship.Who can understand the value.Ashu didn't knew any woman or girl in his life.Due to this incident at least he try to respect a girl and her desires.Only Ashu can control Armaan.But Armaan is very much cute and matured that ashu here.

Lot'sof more to come ahead Bawa.Main apne sare armaan nikaloongi is os ko khubsurat banane ke liye.at lease trry toh karoongi for sure.
parmarA thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Three parts are already up!! I am yet to read first part too... Will reply in the weekend Alkaben. 😃

Tupu,don't worry read it whenever time allow you to do so
parmarA thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: aardhan

Sorry Alka, I just saw it. But I will read in the weekend and comment...these days I feel tired after coming back from work.

don't worry Aardhan,i know you will surely read my os when time allow you.But youjust take proper rest.But wait for your review anytime

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".