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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

First to read.. Loved it.. even before editing... waiting for more to come, edited... !

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow Alka di, what an introduction to Armaan n Ashu..⭐️ Loved it.. loved the train n the two bogis.. me on highs as i know a very good n lovely story on the cards... Mallika with Armaan n Nidhi with Ashu... 👏🤗

will write down more later.. going home..

Di, i will be waiting for the third part as welll.

wonderful OS in making n going on n on ..

Jo nahi hua show mein.. ab yahaan hoga 😃⭐️

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parmarA

@parmarA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

part 3

Ashtuosh nidhi ke pas jakar

Ashutosh: sorry,dr Nidhi.Ab kitni baar sorry bolu?

Nidhi:it's ok major.

Ashtuosh: Ashutosh chalega.

Nidhi: woh kya hai na main aapko maaf nahi karti.Lekin di ko bahoot dino ke baad itna happy dekh rahi hoo.Aur woh bhi Armaanji ki wajah se.

Ashtuosh: ha,maine bhi bhai ko itna khush kabhi nahi dekha.

Nidhi: waise aapka patient ab puri tarah se theek hai.Bus dawai ka thoda suddession hai.

Ashtuosh:Aap jaisee efficient dr ho to use toh theek hona hi tha.

Nidhi:waise aap Military me?

Ashutosh: main samaz gaya ki aap kya puchhna chahti hai?maine Mechanical Engineering kiya hua hai.Aisa nahi hai ki main padha nahi isiliye militory me aaya.Lekin muze bachpan se hi desh ki sewa karne ka sapna tha.

Nidhi: abhi aap kahaa ja rahe hai?

Ashutosh: woh Kuchh me doctors logo ka bada seminar hone wala hai.Bade bade desh videsh ke drs aayenge.Toh unke security purpose ke liye ja rahe hai hum.Unki security bhi toh humari jimmedari hai.

Nidhi: what a co incident.Hum woh seminar attend karne hi ja rahe hai.

Ashtuosh: matlab humari manzil ek hi hai.

Nidhi: shayad

Ashtuosh:bhai,aap yahaa baitho main apni bogi me hoo.Theek hai

Armaan: theek hai chal.Waise Lunch aur dinner ke time me bula lena

Mallika: are Ashtuosh Lunch ka time toh ho hi raha hai toh chalo saath me hi kar lete hai.Humari DB aur Anty ne toh pure 10 logo ka khana bheja hai.

Armaan: usko mat bolo Mallika.Panctual hai pura.Usko khane me na thali bhari hui chahiye.Achar papad sabji roti daal chawal.Sub cut to cut chahiye use.Aur apna pine-apple ka achar toh saath me lekar hi jata hai woh.

Nidhi: mera bhi woh fav achar hai.

Ashtuosh:Bhai yeh kya aap meri tarif kar rahe ho ya burai?

Mallika:burai kyon karenge?Nidhi,chalo khana nikalte hai.Jyoti aa jao.

Ashtuosh: bhai,main woh baki sab logo ka khana dekhkar aata hoo.maine pentry walo se bola tha ki unka khana kaise banana hai lekin fir se check karke aata hoo.Thank you Mallika ji.

Armaan: yuhi kat jayega safar saath chalne se.Manzil aayegi najar saath chalnese

Sab logo ne khana khaya aur Nidhi is dauraan patient ka dhyaan bhi rakh rahi thi.baar baar pulse check karna aur Bp check karna.Ashutosh se yeh sab chhupa nahi tha.Woh apni tirchhi nigaho se Nidhi ko observe kar raha tha.

Yahaa Nidhi bhi jab Ashu,Armaan aur mallika gossip karte the woh unko ek najar dekh leti thi.

Aakhir me unka station aa gaya.Ashutosh ne pahele hi apne camp me inform karke apni van bulawa li thi aur saath me patient ko le jane ke sare arrangement bhi kar diye the.

Ashutosh: Dr Mallika,dr Nidhi,Dr Rohan,Dr Jyotika and dr Aman thank you ki aapne humare patient ka itna achhe se khayal rakha.Aur yeh rahi aapki Taxi.Waise toh hum aapko aapke hotel tak humari vanme chhod dete lekin yeh rule ke khilaaf hai.So sorry.

Tabhi Armaan aaya

Armaan: Ashu main inhe hotel tak chhod deta hu.

Ashtusoh: no major armaan.Aapko aur muze head office report karna hai.Aur us patient ki fomalities puri karni hai.Duty comes first.Aapne in logo se sikha nahi?yatri hote hue bhi apni duty ke prati kitne wafadar hai?

Mallika: No problem Ashutosh.Hum chale jayenge.Thank you for Taxi.

Nidhi was looking at him with surprise.Nidhi: Thank you Major

Ashutosh: Ashtuosh,fir milenge.

Mallika and Nidhi: Jaroor milenge.

Next part

Nidhi jealous for Armaan: Nidhi is too much possessive for Mallika.She didn't bear ki mallika uske alawa kisi aur ko bhi pyaar kare ya care kare.[it is cute emotion of her.Don't get frustrate over that]

Jyotika will solve nidhi's problem aur use samazayegi

Ashu,armaan,Nidhi aur mallika ki shopping.

Kuchh bandhan jo judenge

kuchh aur gehere ho jayenge

Ashutosh ne aajtak kyon shadi nahi ki?khulasa hoga

Sab agle chap me

@Bawa,this is going to be ff for sure😆😆😆

Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago

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Diksha

@Diksha_1991

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Me First..😛

After so long 😆

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Chapter 2 was such a delightful chapter... I was all smiles😃 after reading the chap. Ashu Nidhi Armaan Mallika first meeting was so mellifluous❤️.

Armaan: duniya bahoot chhhoti hai meri jaan.Aur bade bade shahero me aise khubsurat hadse hote rahete hai beautyqueen.

So Armaan n Mallika already know each other. And Armaan characterisation is the same bubbly n amiable friend image we have in mind from the show. Very endearing!!!

Armaan: badtameej,beta kamse kam ladkiya toh bol.Itni pyari khubsurat ladkiyo ko aurat keh raha hai.Sorry bol

So Ashu is the hearthstone!! Loved the adorable relation Armaan n Ashu share...just like Nidhi n Mallika do😛

Armaan:yeh bhi kuchh kum nahi hai.Yeh hume khadoos bhai behen kyon mile hai mallika?

This was so cute...khadoos bhai behen😆

Mallika: Armaan,zindagi se jitna manga zindagi ne usse jyada aur khubsurat ridhte diye hai muze.Ma nahi hai lekin DB aur shyama anty ko dekhkar sochti hoo ki ma toh har rang me har roop me hoti hai.Baba aur solanki uncle ki jubaan nahi rukti beti beti kahete.Aur Nidhi,meri parchahhi banake ghumti hai.Di yeh di woh.Jo nahi hai uska afsos kyon karoo?jo hai unki toh kadar karoo.KGH toh mera dusra ghar hai aur wahaa bhi mere sare apne.Mere liya issse khubsurat duniya koi nahi hai armaan.

This was beautifully written n is so heartwarming!! Mallika who is an orphan found a family...a family that adores her like their own child...n it is so true that we must cherish what we have instead of crying over wat we don't! Gives the reader an insight to the lovely relations she shares wd DB , col Verma n Nidhi !!

Beautifully written Alka👏. All emotions worth treasuring. It was a consistently beautiful read mostly because the people were so incredibly interesting and lived what they believed😊.

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Double bonanza😃 awesome chapter 3!!!

Nidhi: woh kya hai na main aapko maaf nahi karti.Lekin di ko bahoot dino ke baad itna happy dekh rahi hoo.Aur woh bhi Armaanji ki wajah se.

So beautiful wat Nidhi says...shows the loveable bond the two sisters share...not only Mallika cares for her baby sis but Nidhi too adores her sister Mallika!!!

So Ashu n Nidhi heading for the same medical seminar...unki manzil sachmuch ek hai😊

Ashu is true to his profession n doesn't want to violate any rules!!! He even admires Mallika n Nidhi for fulfilling their duties as responsible doctors!!!

Nidhi jealous...so she is possessive abt her sister...interesting to know wat u plan in the further chapters😊.

The story not only rings a chord with the reader but also leaves the reader with a long lasting thought...thots abt relationships , family , duties...perfect Alka👏

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Wow Alka di, what an introduction to Armaan n Ashu..⭐️ Loved it.. loved the train n the two bogis.. me on highs as i know a very good n lovely story on the cards... Mallika with Armaan n Nidhi with Ashu... 👏🤗
will write down more later.. going home..
Di, i will be waiting for the third part as welll.
wonderful OS in making n going on n on ..
Jo nahi hua show mein.. ab yahaan hoga 😃⭐️

Thank you Bawa for your awsome feedback.Next chap is also posted.

Ha main bhi toh yahi chahti hoo what we expected in our show.

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991
Me First..😛
After so long 😆

ha lekin comment toh nahi ki na?😛

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197
Chapter 2 was such a delightful chapter... I was all smiles😃 after reading the chap. Ashu Nidhi Armaan Mallika first meeting was so mellifluous❤️.
Armaan: duniya bahoot chhhoti hai meri jaan.Aur bade bade shahero me aise khubsurat hadse hote rahete hai beautyqueen.
So Armaan n Mallika already know each other. And Armaan characterisation is the same bubbly n amiable friend image we have in mind from the show. Very endearing!!!
Armaan: badtameej,beta kamse kam ladkiya toh bol.Itni pyari khubsurat ladkiyo ko aurat keh raha hai.Sorry bol
So Ashu is the hearthstone!! Loved the adorable relation Armaan n Ashu share...just like Nidhi n Mallika do😛
Armaan:yeh bhi kuchh kum nahi hai.Yeh hume khadoos bhai behen kyon mile hai mallika?
This was so cute...khadoos bhai behen😆
Mallika: Armaan,zindagi se jitna manga zindagi ne usse jyada aur khubsurat ridhte diye hai muze.Ma nahi hai lekin DB aur shyama anty ko dekhkar sochti hoo ki ma toh har rang me har roop me hoti hai.Baba aur solanki uncle ki jubaan nahi rukti beti beti kahete.Aur Nidhi,meri parchahhi banake ghumti hai.Di yeh di woh.Jo nahi hai uska afsos kyon karoo?jo hai unki toh kadar karoo.KGH toh mera dusra ghar hai aur wahaa bhi mere sare apne.Mere liya issse khubsurat duniya koi nahi hai armaan.
This was beautifully written n is so heartwarming!! Mallika who is an orphan found a family...a family that adores her like their own child...n it is so true that we must cherish what we have instead of crying over wat we don't! Gives the reader an insight to the lovely relations she shares wd DB , col Verma n Nidhi !!
Beautifully written Alka👏. All emotions worth treasuring. It was a consistently beautiful read mostly because the people were so incredibly interesting and lived what they believed😊.

Thank you deepali for your beautiful words.Yes,for me every girl deserves everything in life.And in ktlk shyama anty and DB love their children,Shyama anty love Nidhi and treat her as daughter.But here i want to show ki jab paraye apne ho jate hai toh woh fir paraye nahi hote.Yes,ashu is heartstone and Nidhi is not khadoos but possessive towards mallika.