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parmarA

@parmarA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Very nice chapter Alka di.. i will write more later ⭐️
And yes, next update soon plzzz 😊

sure Bawa.i will wait for replies and then will try to write the next part.bec i want to know everbody's opinion

Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: parmarA
sure Bawa.i will wait for replies and then will try to write the next part.bec i want to know everbody's opinion

Yes di, i know all the reviews are important... 😊

Will wait for that...

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parmarA

@parmarA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Yes di, i know all the reviews are important... 😊
Will wait for that...

Aap toh de do pahele.I want to know what you feel about this chap.So i can adjust my ff on that.Hope you understand this bawa

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: parmarA
Aap toh de do pahele.I want to know what you feel about this chap.So i can adjust my ff on that.Hope you understand this bawa

yes di, i understand.. i will write after lunch.. chalega na.. 😳

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parmarA

@parmarA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: bawaswift

yes di, i understand.. i will write after lunch.. chalega na.. 😳

sure bawa.Chalega nahi daudega.Enjoy your lunch bawa

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

aLKAJI,

Loved this Os.you have brought a new angle by changing Ashutosh and Arman's professions. Waiting for Nidhi to fall in love with Major.Ashutosh.

PL. post the next part soon. Waiting

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menaka

@ariyadasa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Thank got i got ur OS sure the os going to be a serial soon 😳

Totally different story line Ashuthosh in the Army and Nidhi as a Doctor 😛👍🏼

Mallika not a villan 😡

As usual superb creativity ALKA 👏

Thank god u had update short chap otherwise oi am in a mess as less time to read but this much chaps manageable 😳

LOVE TO SEE UR NEXT CHAP SOON 👏

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Lovely n superb update Alka di ⭐️ I loved each n every scene of it 👏

Nice way of jealousy by Nidhi shown for Armaan.. Mallika is such a glorious person that her personality is quite attractive. Loved the way she accepted Nidhi's wish that they will go alone to the market. But destiny drives to the goals. ⭐️

Jyotika rightly told her to give sum space to Mallika as her life needs to move on as a love life with Armaan. The jealousy, n more than this is the possessiveness abt her sis.. Nidhi is confused to look into this aspect of life,, Glad to see this kind of love between the two sis. !

The conference n later on the two sis taking lessons abt the new techniques from Dr. Walles,, shows their learning ability n their excitement towards their work. Very well written. ⭐️⭐️

Armaan dropping Nidhi to the hospital, shows his caring nature n then Ashu talking to her abt Mallika n Armaan's relation so far..His explaining her abt the love they both share n the long time love they have been hiding even from each other.

So, our Ashu ji cant see tears n cant tackle that.. 😛 batallion ko sambhalne wale girls ke tears se darr jate hain.. 😉 Yes di, it happens .. its a reality, looking at a girls' tears can shake a man and wiping them off is a real n true relief. 😉❤️

Liked the words from Ashu n Nidhi echoing.. hamari manzil aa gayi.. 😊

Very well written part 4 Alka di, i am in love with this OS... 🤗

Will be waiting to know the unique way of proposing, gehre rishtey n the awards.. waiting eagerly for the next.,

Thank di 😃

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Hello guys
Will u guys help to share kritika page on fb as her old page is deleted
If possible than help
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3781479&PID=94407276&#p94407276

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94407276

Edited by cooljaya11 - 11 years ago

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parmarA

@parmarA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
aLKAJI,
Loved this Os.you have brought a new angle by changing Ashutosh and Arman's professions. Waiting for Nidhi to fall in love with Major.Ashutosh.

PL. post the next part soon. Waiting

Thank you Jaysree,i will try to give my update soon

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