Os Pyaar ki intehaan [chap 30 page 137 - Page 8

Originally posted by: aardhan

Alka, I read all the four parts today.

Very nice introduction to the story. 👍🏼 And liked the new angle that Mallika and Nidhi are sisters (almost) and both a equally good doctors, dedicated and honest in their profession. Both are well loved in the hospital.

At the same time they share a wonderful relationship at home with the elders. Very ideal girls! 😃Even though everyone knows Mallika is adopted there is no difference between the two girls. Shows a healthy background, a caring family where relationships formed from the heart are more important than blood relations. And then you set the stage right away by sending the group of doctors to a conferences...

Originally posted by: aardhan

The second chapter saw the entry of the other two important characters Armaan and AShu, and profession you have chosen is nice. Somehow I feel military men are always more attractive. So that what's there two are but both are good men who get concerned about the sick colleague.

Armaan and Mallika are close school friends! That's another new angle, meaning Armaan knows a lot about Mallika already and maybe he has always liked her as well. And now with this chance meeting it seems like he wants to revive that love. And it also seems as if MAllika likes Armaan, and has always considered him to be a confidante. At the same time Ashu is slowly but surely getting impressed with Nidhi and her abilities...

But Mallika's words of wisdom about her adopted family is the highlight here.

Originally posted by: aardhan

Third part brings out another angle where Nidhi fears that she will loose Mallika, her sister from childhood. And maybe because she has always looked out for Mallika, who is an orphan she feels jealous when Mallika spends a lot of time talking to Armaan. She feels left out and becomes jealous of Armaan. But liked Jyoatika's timely intervention. Even though she could not convince Nidhi fully, she succeeded in stopping that feeling of jealousy.

At the same time AShu's dedication and professionalism has impressed her. 😃 He is truly a brave, honest military man who always puts duty first. And in a lot of ways he and Nidhia re similar. Even though she was relaxing and having some fun, she never forgot her patient and always cared for him.

Originally posted by: aardhan

Again the fourth chapter has shifted back to the professional front where once more Mallika and Nidhi impress everyone with their knowledge and dedication. But still Nidhi continues to feel jealous, though she knows she has nothing to fear.

The Ashu and Nidhi conversation where Ashu reads Nidhi and figure she has some problem. And unable to hide from him she blurts out the truth when he forces her. Shows how perceptive he was... and his words seemed to have affected Nidhi too. And she even understood and apologized to Mallika...

Nice characters Alka. They are all good, dedicated, upright professionals who are good at what they do. But Nidhi now faced some new feelings like jealousy. And so what happens when Armaan and Mallika want to get married... will Nidhi have some problems with that relation? And waiting to see how Ashu and Nidhi relationship will begin. 😃

Originally posted by: bc123456

Very nice alka just read it and thoroughly enjoyed it

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

First sorry for the delayed review
Wow!! fabulous update...Nidhi jealous of Armaan...very heartwarming!!
She n Mallika share that special bond that made her feel the void!!
Jyotika an amiable friend who sensed that Nidhi was upset abt something!!
But i think ur Ashu stole the show...❤️
Ashtuosh: Nidhi,zindagi me rishto ki khaiya hoti hai.jo alag alag log aake bharate hai.achha ek baat ka jawab dijiye.Aapke papa ki zindagi me jo aapke mom ki jagah hai woh koi le sakta hai?
Very beautifully written👏. So true that every relation in life has its own warmth...He explained a very simple yet important aspect so easily by simply quoting the example of Nidhi's mom n dad.
Ashtuosh: nidhi,ek ladki jab badi ho jati hai na toh uske saath uske sapne bhi bade ho jate hai.Palapte hai woh dil me.Mere bhai ki baat karta hoo toh woh bhale aapki di se bichhad gaya lekin di ki kami uski yaden aaj bhi humare ghar me bhai ki almaari me kaid hai.Humne unhe kitni ladkiya dikhayee lekin aapke di ne unke dil me jagah banayee hai woh shayad bhai kisi aur ko dena nahi chahte.Ab aap samaze main kya kehena chahta hoo?
There is nothing more precious of all gods' creations than the form of a young woman in all her innocents. Ashu easily understood what mallika n Armaan share n wishes them to b happy but innocent Nidhi cud not c Mallika beyond a sister. Very thotful Ashu⭐️
Ashtuosh: Miss Nidhi,main badi badi ladaiya control kar sakta hoo.puri batalian ko control kar sakta hoo lekin ek ladki ke aasoo se dar jata hoo.Please chup ho jaiye.Main aapko chup kaise karaooo?
Tears shed for another person are not a sign of weakness. They are a sign of a pure heart❤️Thats wat ur Ashu is all about!! He is mature , strong , yet so gentle n tender!!

Nidhi: Major Ashutosh.Thank you for everything.Main apni puri life aapki in bato ko bhooloongi nahi.

Ashtuosh: aap chup ho gai,mere dil ka boj utar gaya.

Ashu n Nidhi developing an understanding between them...It's so curious: one can resist tears and 'behave' very well in the hardest hours of grief. But then someone makes you a friendly sign behind a window, or one notices that a flower that was in bud only yesterday has suddenly blossomed, or a letter slips from a drawer... and everything collapses.
Magical❤️ update Alka...just like ur VMs...luvd n trasured evry word
Waiting for Armaan to propose Mallika

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Do dil mil rahe hain.. magar chupke chupke... ❤️

Humko ho rahi hai khaber chupke chupke... 🤗

Thanks for this lovely chapter Alka di,. the beginning of liking n romance... ⭐️

Will write more later.. !

Originally posted by: parmarA

Aapka itna comment.But will wait for your next comment.Bawa,yeh inke gehere rishte ki shuruat hai.Jaise gulabi thandi ka mausam hota hai waise inka pyaar dheere dheere parwan chadega aur fir yeh kitna gehera hoga iska in dono ko andaja bhi nahi hai.Just wait and watch theri beautiful journey of love.