MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

HEY GUYS...
I'm NELU.. New as a writer, i don't know how i write??
but I'm very Happy that you're supporting me... Feeling blessed..
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Support me like this Always...😊 love you

I'M GOING TO START MY FIRST SS ON MY MANEET...
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MG SS ~DILRUBA~

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INTRO::

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:
MD OF KC... A MAN OF FEW WORDS...
HE LIVES IN DEHLI WITH HIS FAMILY...😊... HE LOVE HIS FAMILY A LOT & WAITING 4 HIS DREAM GIRL...😉

GEET HANDA:
GEET IS VERY SIMPLE GIRL...
RESPECT HER ELDERS A LOT...
SHE IS PRINCESS OF HER FATHER...
LIVES IN HOSHIYARPUR WITH HER FATHER IN HANDA HAWALI...😊
HER FATHER IS HER EVERYTHING... SHE CAN DO ANYTHING FOR HIM😊
SHE COMPLETE HER STUDIES IN ARCHITECTURE...

~~INDEX~~

PART 1 {PAGE 1}
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed
PART2 {PAGE 2}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85364930
PART 3 {PAGE 3}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85446016

PART 4 {PAGE 4}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=4

PART 5 {PAGE 6}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=6

PART 6 {PAGE 7}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=7

PART 7 {PAGE 8}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=8

PART 8 {PAGE 10}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=10
PART 9 {PAGE11}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=11

PART 10 { PAGE 13}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=13
PART 11 {PAGE- 14}

www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3623368&PID=86135856�.
PART 12 {PAGE 16}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86293345
PART 13 { PAGE 17 }

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86368384
PART 14 { PAGE 18}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=18
PART 15 { PAGE 19}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86537252
PART 16 { PAGE 21 }

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed?pn=21
PART 17 & 18 {PAGE 23}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86701051

PART 19 { PAGE 26}

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86857840
PART 20 { PAGE 28}
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86965157

page 21 {page 29} :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87415859

part 22 {page 32} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87481703

PART 23 {PAGE 34 } : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87596611

PART 24 {PAGE 35} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87673086

PART 25 { PAGE 37}: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed

part 26 {page38 } : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87801815

PART 27 {PAGE 40 } : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed

PART 28 {PAGE 41} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3623368/mg-ss-dilruba-by-nelu-completed

part 29 {page 43} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88122213

{LAST A} Part 30 {page 43} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88122213
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last part B : {PAGE 44} : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88196927
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Epilouge A: {page 46 } : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88264387
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EPILOUGE B : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88344400
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Special Note : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88558292
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THE END 😊
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This is completed MG SS...
But still all the readers who will read this
Like & Comment please if u want 😊😊
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CHECK OUT MY MG writings:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3633654/mg-creations-by-nelufar
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With lots of love NELUFAR GURTI AAZMI 😊

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simran

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Congrats
nice cs
get well soon and start this beautiful ss

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Posted: 12 years ago

WAITING FOR IT NELU.LEKIN 1ST U GET WEL SOOON

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Nice concept
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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

HEY GUYSS...

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SO HERE IS PART 1:
~DILRUBA~

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GEET: {SHE IS CRYING & SHOUTING} DAD... DAD... ???? PLZZ WAKEE UP!!! DAD
plz apne akhe kholee!!! i'm sorry, plzz mujhe jawab dijiye... plzz dad wakee UP...
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""" HER DAD WAS FAINT... SHE DON'T WHAT TO DO... NOBODY WAS THERE TO HELP HER!!
SO SHE GO OUT RUNNING...
GEET APNE PAROSWALEE UNCLE KE PASS JATE HAI
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GEET : UNCLE PLZ HELP ME!!! DAD IS NOT RESPONDING PLZZ UNCLE HELP ME { SHE WAS BEGGING}

UNCLE: OK BETA CHALO.. I'LL HELP YOU...
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, "" THEY TAKE MR.MOHINDAR HANDA {GEET'S DAD} TO THE HOSPITAL"
GEET WAS SITTING OUTSIDE THE CABIN. CRYING...😭... SHE IS REMEMBERING WHAT WAS HAPPENED, A FEW HOURS AGO...
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A FEW HOURS AGO~~

GEET: dad, plz try to understant, mujhe apko chorke nahi janna... plzzz dad

mohindar: geet,tum mere waje se apne life kyun karab karna chate ho??? DEV is very
nyc guy., he will be good life partner 4 u... bete iss shadi se tum humesa
rahoge... ha kar do bete...
GEET: dad mujhe shadi nahi karne... uss DEV se bilkul bhi nahi... aap nahi jante woh kesa
admi hain... plz dad try to understand

MOHINDAR: ek tum mujhe bata nahi rahe ho us ne kya kiya hain upar se... ha bhi nahi kar rahe ho baat kya hain???
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GEET : Dad main apko nahi bata sakte... par yakein kijiye woh acha inshan nahi hain...
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they both arguing for long time...
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GEET: dad... MAA HOTE TOH ASSA NAHI HONE DE TE" KASH AAJ MAA HOTE"😭

"" thn GEET felt wt she say... how could she hurt her father?? he was her everything
after her mothers death... her father has give her everything... He never give GEET a
chance to remember her mom... bt today SHE HURT HIM"""
MOHINDAR: was really hurt... he love GEET lot... nd want her to settle... GEET HURT HIM
HE DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING ND LEFT... LOCK himself in his room...

Geet: {was hitting door} dad plz mere baat shuniye... i didn't mean that plzz DAD open the door...

...AFTER SOMETIME...
""""" MOHINDAR OPEN THE DOOR ND FAINT"""""

~~~~~~NOW~~~~~~~~
GEET IS CRYING BITTERLY😭 & JUST PRYING TO BABAJI...

PRECAP: DOCTOR: SORRY MISS GEET BT MR.HANDA .
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~~~~ NOTE: PLZZ GUYSS SUPPORT ME!!! I'M NEW AS A WRITER😆
READ, LIKE & big big comments...
nd SORRY FOR NO MAAN IN FIRST PART
WILL TRY TO UPDATE IT 2MMOROW...~~~~~

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

congrats

nice start..

like is not working...

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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update
geet hurt mohinder by her words
I know geet knows something bad about dev
now waiting for maan to come soon
precap is scary

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neethu

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice start...do continue soon...i have send u a pm request...please do accept it.

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aditimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsm bt painful ud nelu.start kiya ek shock dekar.diff hain.hope geet ka dad ko kuch nehi hoga.aisa mat kar.waiting

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Thnkss guys for ur support... NEED more...😉

so here is part 2:
MG SS
~DILRUBA~
PART 2

GEET was sitting in the bench nd waiting for doctor to come...

doc come out
GEET: DOC DAD KESE HAI??? WOH THIK TO HAIN NA...

DOC: MS geet we are sorry bt MR.HANDA
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IS GONE TO COMA... APKE MRS.HANDA KE JANE KE BAAD UNE EK BRAIN ATTECK HU THA & NW AGAIN... SO WE ARE VERY SORRY ...

GEET: 😭😭😭 DOC PLZZ asse maat bole ye plzz dad ko thik kar dijeye... plz plz doc

DOC: we try a lot...

geet: woh kab tak coma se bhar aayenge???😭

doc: not sure!!! abhi tak to woh respond hi nhi kar rahe the... bt you should talk to him...
i hpe he will recover soon... nd unhe yahe rehna hoga kuch din, unke medicine bohot
expensive hai... aur elaj ke paisa aap counter main jamma kar dije ga...

geet: doc give sometime i'll hv manage money..

doc: ok as i knw ur family... i'm giving u 1 wweks time... nw take care o hv to go

geet: okk doc. thnks...

geet: aab main keya karu...??? paisa ka intejam kaha se karu?? Humare mill bhi toh kuch din
pehle jaal gaye...😭 warna waha se kuch ho pata.. pl babaji help me

geet try to connect to some of his relatives bt they refuse her to help...

thn GEET decide to sell their field which was in her name...

so she went nd told an agency member to sell it... they tld him to wait 4 two day..
GEET ALSO THINKS TO FIND SOME JOB... bt it was very difficult in hp

THE AGENCY MEMBER CALL SOME1

ANGENY: SIR apne kaha tha hp main ko jamen ho to batau...
yeha bohot ache jamin mile hai... kya aap lena chahte hain??

MAN: okk i'll come 2mmorow to see it...
th he cut the call
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THN THE MAN MEANS MR.MAAN SINGH KHURANA

MAAN: FINALLY AAB DADI KA SAPNA PURA HOGA
UNHO NE KAB SE kaha tha unhe hp main ek school bana hai...

maan goes to tell dadi...

Dadi: 😛😃i'm very happy bete... aap kab ja rahe hain?

maan: kal dadi... maine tayare bhi kar le...😊.

so next day morning MAAN START THE JEEP TO GO HOSIYARPUR...

after reaching HP...
MAAN WENT TO THEIR OLD HAVELI ... " KHURANA HAVELI"

MAAN CALL THE AGENT: hello!! jee main woh jamen dekhna chahta ho...

agent: ok... MR.KHURANA... AAP TAYAR RAHE YE MAIN APKO PICK KARTA HU
MAAN: OK... COME SOON...

PRECAP: MANEET MEETING😊😉

NOTE: GUYS PLZ READ LIKE ND GIVE BIG BIG COMMENTS...😊😊

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