MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
yippeee me first so party time🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

amazing update👏

loved it❤️

geet is so sad now going to sell her land to meet her father expenses😭

maan going to buy geet land

waiting for their meeting eagerly so cont soon😉
Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
both p[arts are nice
poor geet
her opposition made her dad ill
n selling her land to maan
w8ngto c them meet in next pary
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
nice update...waiting for maaneet meeting...do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
part 2
nice...
poor Geet...
hope Maan gets the land at huge price...
then it might help Geet with the expenditure...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
congrates on new ss
beautiful cs
add me in
pm me too when u update
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Another shocking ud.Geet's Dad went to coma! ;-( nd Geet sold her land.this is interesting.m waiting eagerly 4 Maaneet meeting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
thnks guys... for ur support...

so here is PART 3

MG SS ~DILRUBA~
PART 3




Maan & Agent went to see the land...

MAAN: I LIKE THIS LAND... SO main iss jammen ke malik se mil ke sab baate fix karna chahta hu...

agent: ok SIR!!! owner ko bhi jalde he jamen bech ni hain...
so main unhe se kab meeting ki baat karu??

MAAN: aaj saam ko he... abhi main chalta hu... aap unhe sham ko mere ghar le aaye yee

AGENT: OK SIR...

"""SO NOW THE AGENT CALL GEET TO TELL ABOUT THE MEETING..."""

AGENT: MISS GEET, jo yeh jammen lene chahte hain woh aaj apse sham koapse milna chahte hain

geet: ok!!! main apke office main aa jaunge...

IN THE EVENING ...
GEET & AGENT WENT TO KH TO MEET MAAN

AGENT: SIR, YEH HAIN MISS GEET HANDA... USS JAMEN KI OWNER
THN SUDDENLY HE GOT A CALL & WENT TO HIS OFFICE. SO MANEET ARE ALONE😳

AFTER SEEING GEET, MAAN FEEL LIKE SHE IS HER DREAM GIRL...😳😳






THN HIS THOUGHT BROKEN BY GEET SWEET VOICE...

GEET: HELLO SIR!!!

MAAN: HELLO MISS GEET!! SO AAP YEH JAMMEN KAB SELL KARNA CHAHTE HAI?

GEET: I WANT TO SELL IT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE CUZ I NEED MONEY...

MAAN: CAN I ASK YOU WHY???

GEET: SIR CUZ MY DAD IS VERY ILL... i need money for his treatment...
{ a tear drop frm her eyes}😭

maan: {maan felt very bad to see the tear in his dream girl eyes} so he decide to buy this land with huge ammount!!!!!}}} MISS GEET I need ur land badly... MY dadi wants to open nd school there... SO I'LL GIVE U 10 CRORE FOR THIS LAND. IS IT OKEY??

GEET WAS SHOCKED: NO SIR!!! YEH LAND 10 CRORE KI NAHI HAIN ??? MAXIMUM 5 CRORE KI HOGE... AAPKO ITNE PAISE DE NE KI JARURAT NAHI HAIN... YOU CAN GIVE 3 CRORE...

MAAN WAS SHOCKED TO HEARD THE HONESTY IN HER VOICE... IN THIS GENERATION
NO ONE IS HONEST... BT SHE IS SO HONEST 👏

MAAN: BUT MISS GEET MUJHE KOI PROBLEM NAHI HAIN 10 CRORE DE NE MAIN..

GEET : BT SIR I HV PROBLEM!!! MY DAD TAUGHT ME, TO ALWAYS BE HONEST...
IF U WANT TO BUY THIS,U HAVE TO Give me 5 crore...




NW MAAN DON'T WANT TO ARGUE SO HE DECIDE TO FIX THE DEAL

MAAN : OK!!!! I'LL READY TO GIVE U 5 CRORE...😊


GEET: 😊THIK HAIN MAIN KAL PAPERS LE KE AAUNGE... NW I HV TO GO, I HV SOME WORK...

MAAN: ITNE RAAT KO KY KAAM HAIN APKO??

GEET: DAD SE MILNE JANA HAIN...

MAAN THOUGHT ITNE RAAT KO USSE AKELE JANE DE NA THIK NAHI HOGA SO

MAAN: CAN I COME WITH YOU😕?????

GEET: BUT...

MAAN: ACULLY I WANT TO SEE UR DAD.. SO CAN I???

GEET WAS CONFUSED BT THN SHE THOUGHT HE IS NICE GUY...

GEET: OK YOU CAN...

THN MAAN & GEET BOTH WAS GOING TO HOSPITAL...

IN THE WHOLE WAY MAAN WAS DROOLING ON GEET...😳😳😳


AND GEET IS GEETING MORE CONFUSED



PRECAP: IN HOSPITAL...

~~~NOTE: GUYSS PLZ HIT LIKE & GIVE BIG BIG COMMENTS...😊~~~



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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
superb update
maan totally fida on geet
geet is so sweet and honest
maaneet going to hospital
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
amazing.so maaneet met.it was lovely.maan thought geet to be dream girl.maan going to meet her dad nd drooling on geet.nd she is confusd.waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome story maaneet are so cute . Feeling so sad for geet plss don't let anything happen to her dad Becoz she blame herself then . Geet and Maan finally met😊 . Maan is already latoo on her and drooling too. Bechari geet is so confused😆
Waiting for the next update
Do add in in ur pm list😃
Waiting waiting and waiting 😊
Love aanya
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago

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