MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
thnkss guyss alot...

here is part 4:

MG SS ~DILRUBA~
PART 4


MANEET WENT TO HOSPITAL...

IN HOSPITAL:::

GEET SIT BESIDE HER DAD... & MAAN WAS STAND BY HER SIDE...

GEET WAS TALKING TO HER DAD
GEET: DAD KESE HO AAP??? I'M SORRY MUJHE THORA LATE HO GAYA... BUT KAL SE NAHI HOGA!!! AAP BAAS JALDI THIK HO JAO.. PHIR MAIN SAB KUCH APKO BAAT DUNGE PROMISE { SHE START CRYING} PLZZ DAD REPLY ME... PLZZ DAD KYUN AAP ASSA KAR RAHE HO... MAINE TO SOORY BHI BOLO... PEHLE TOH EK BAR MAIN HE MAAF KAR DE TE THE... PLZZ DAD UTHO NA...😭😭

MAAN WAS LISTENING EVEYTHING SILENTLY... THN HE PUT HER HAND ON GEET'S SHOLDER...

MAAN: SAMBHALO APNE APKO GEET... U NEED TO STRONG.. TUMHARE DAD KO BHI TO YE AACHA NAHI LAGE GA NA?? PLZZ CHUP HO JAOO...

GEET: SAB MERE GALTE HAIN... MERE WAJHE SE HE DAD ASE HALAT MAIN HAI..

MAAN: NAHI GEET ESSA NAHI HAI...

GEET: ASA HE HAIN... Agar main shadi ke liye na nahi bolte to dad aaj
dad mere sath hote😭
MAAN WAS SHOCKED: shadi??

geet: haa shadi... uss kamine dev se shadi...

thn suddendly sister come nd tell them to talk outside...

both went outside... thn GEET felt she was telling everything to a stranger... so she shut he mouh... & maan was fully confused... so he think to ask directly

maan: to kya tum aab usse shadi kar lo ge??????

geet { don't knw y she ans him}: nahi... main wese ladki nahi hu ke dad ki halat karab hone se kisi kamine se shadi kar lunge... main jante hu dad agar uske sach jante ho kabhi assa nahi chahte... main nahi chahte dadbaad main khud ko kosse mere wajhe se... I WILL NOT MARRY HIM



MAAN: {FELT VERY RELIEF AFTER HEARING THAT}



PRACAP: MAAN NEED ARCHITECT... TO BULID SCHOOL😳😳



""""""NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT UPDATE... NET PROBLEM KAR RAHA HAIN...
WILL PM LATER😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
WAOOO A DHAMAKA START NELU...LUVIN DA CONEPT AND THE STORY...U CAN DO IT DARLING...

BEST OF LUCK DEAR...
ITS AWESOOOME
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
AWESSSOME UPDATE DEAR
WAOOO MAANU FELT RELIEF HEARIN BOUT GEET'S SHAAADI...😆
DONT WORRY MAAN MERI JAAN GEET SIRF AAPKI HO❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Maan ko arcitecture chaiye, gud. Geet hai na,
Superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
nice update
maan needs architect geet hai na no worrys
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Lovely update . Me crying for geet 😭plsss let her dad recover fast be fit and fine soon . I love geet so much specially Becoz she said Kamina Dev😆Maan must be ecstatic while hearing this precap is quite interesting my intuition says that the architect is none other than geet 😳
Waiting eagerly for the update 😊
Love aanya 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awsm dear.Geet told everything to Maan nd Maan also felt relief.waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
part 3
nice part...
Maan is smitten by Geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4
nice part...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Thnkss thnkss thnksss a lot guysss... All comments means a lot to me😳... thnks guys... love you all😳
but wants more like...😭

HERE IS PART 5

MG SS ~DILRUBA~
PART 5




GEET: SIR abhi main chal te hu... kal apko papers de dunge!!

maan: itne raat ko kya jungle ja rahe ho??? { maan was trying to cheer geet as she was upset}

geet: main jungle kyun jaunge itne raat ko??? ghar jaa rahe hu...

maan: tumhara mood de
kh ke to lag raha bohot sa loo se bhuke hoo aur kise sher ko khane jaa rahee ho...😉😉

geet: very funny... but main apke tarah janwar khane ka sokh nahi rakhta..

maan: main bhi kache janwar nahi khata...

geet: now bye mujhe late ho raha hain..

maan: can i drop u??

geet: no sir... main chale jaunge... apko bekar main paresan ho ne ki jarurat nahi hai

maan: iss main paresani ki kya baat hain?? main jaa raha hu to tumhe bhi chor dunga... agar tumhe mere sath jane main prob hain toh it's alri8

geet: no sir i hv no problem!! chaliyee...



both were about to go thn suddenly maan's phone start ringing

maan: geet excuse me

geet: ok sir...
maan receive the call


maan: haa bolo adi arcitect mila??

adi: no sir!!! yaha sab important project main busy main but main try kar raha hu... koi milta hai to apko batunga...

maan: ok ad.. bt do it first...
thn he cut the call

on the other side geet was hearing their talk... nd she thought to help maan

geet: sir can i say something??

maan: yes bolo?

geet: sir maine arctitecture ki paraye ki hain... so kya main apke helpkar sakte hu

maan: wow!! it's great geet!!! mujhe uss jamen main school bana ne hain... so uske liye designs chahiye... nd u also knew the land & hp which is great... will u work 4 mee please????



geet: okk sir!!!

maan: ok geet toh hum kal iss bare main bhi baat karenge, ok???

geet: ok sir!!!

thn maan drop geet in her home... & went to his home


whole
nigGT maan was thinking about geet... 😳

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.precap: working together...😳


please guyss need more likes...

READ LIKE & BIG COMMENTSS PLZZ GUYS...😊

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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