MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic part
geet too confessed
dadi and annie met geet
maaneet moments were awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww amazing.lovely maaneet scenes.annie teasing maaneet.a big sry 4 nt comenting on previous uds.i was so much busy on study.now i read all the ud.my maanu went through so much.waiting 4 next.hope is 1 month main geet ki papa teek ho jaye
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditimaan

wowww amazing.lovely maaneet scenes.annie teasing maaneet.a big sry 4 nt comenting on previous uds.i was so much busy on study.now i read all the ud.my maanu went through so much.waiting 4 next.hope is 1 month main geet ki papa teek ho jaye


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thnks dear... nd its ok dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

awesome part

loved annie's teasings n full family moment

wowww geet's confession was awesome
n maaneet moment was awww

waiting for next update


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thnks you dear... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you so much for ur support guys...



MG SS ~DILRUBA~
PART 22
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AFTER 23 DAY:::::

MAAN IS IN DEHLI WITH DADI & ANNIE { geet tell him to go cuz he have to manage his business, they talk on mobile regularly} {Mr.handa is also getting well.. he can talk but can't walk}
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IN HANDA HAVELI:
SOMEONE KNOCK THE DOOR
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GEET open the door... She was highly shocked...
geet: dev.?????

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dev shukla: hey geet... abhi tak mujhe bhule nahi.???? {he give a devil smile}


GEET: stop ur nonsense... kyun aaye ho yaha??
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dev: ohh jaan abhi tak uss baat ko leke gussa ho??? jaan kaha na galte se ho gaya... {he was about to touch geet}
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geet: dn't you dare touch me... tumhare jese kamine insan see mujhe koi baat nahi karne... GET OUT...
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MOHINDAR frm his room: GEET bete hon hain...
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dev: uncle main hu DEV...
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GEET: DeV I SAID OUT...
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DEV: UNCLE se milne toh do...
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geet: koi jarurat nahi hain...
... thn mr.handa come their in wheelchair...
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MOHI: arre dev aao andar waha kyun khare ho??
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dev: woh uncle geet se baat kar raha hu... namaste uncle... I'M sorry main itne din london main tha iss liye apse milne nahi aa paya...
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mohi: it's ok bete... betho... {geet dev ke nashta le aao}
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geet: yes dad...
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geet in kitchen: ufff i hate him... par dad ko kuch bol bhi toh nahi sakte... MEERA tune mujhe kese kasam de di hain???? tere itna sab kuch karke bhi woh kamina aajad ghum raha hain...😡
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flashback:
last day at geet's clg
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geet: yeh meera kaha chale gaye... rajji tune dekha kya??
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rajji: woh toh dev ke sath clg ke 3rd floor main gaye hain..
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geet: kyun??? aur bhi dev ke sath... main iss ladki ka kya karu... kitni bar kaha hain dev acha insan nahi hain... woh sirf usse use kar raha hain...
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rajji: hum kya kar sakte hain??? agar meera mante he nahi... meera toh usse anndha pyar karte hain...
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geet: sahe kaha tune... tu yahi ruk main abhi aate hu...
... thn she went to meet meera...
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when she reach 3rd floor she hear that MEERA was scearming
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meera: help... help...DEV LEAVE ME...
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GEET: MEERA KAHA HAIN TU??? MEERA...
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THEN SHE OPEN A ROOM... SHE WAS SHOCKED TO SEE MEERA IN FULLY NAKED SITUATION...😲😲
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ND DEV WAS WEARING HIS SHIRT...
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DEV: MEERA U ARE VERY S**Y I MUST SAY...
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MEERA WAS CRYING LIKE A HELL.
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GEET CAME TO DEV ND GIVE HIM A TIGHT SLAP😡😡
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GEET: HOW DARE YOU DEV... HOW COULD U THIS TO HER... MEERA LOVES YOU & YOU...
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DEV: PYAR karte hain toh abhi roo kyun rahe hain... mene bhi toh pyar he kiya hain.ri8 meera????.
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geet: just shut up... YOU B*****... I WILL SPARE YOU... you just wait & watch...
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dev: ohh sweetheart mere bare main kisi ko batao ge. toh meera kon se bach payege??? uske toh mujhe se bhi jiyada badnami hoge...
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geet: meera ki tum fikar na he karo toh behtar hain... but main tumhe saza dile ke rahunge...
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dev: tum itna gussa kyun kar rahe ho??? kahe tum yeh toh bura nahi laga ke maine tumhare sath yeh sab nahi kiya...
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geet again give him a slap...
geet: get out... i don't want to see ur face...
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dev: main wese bhi thak gaya hu. main jaaa raha hu... agar tumhe mere jarurat ho to... main arms r always open for you...😊
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geet: GET OUT...😡😡
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THEN she call rajji nd they both take meera to hostel...
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meera: geet promise me tu yeh sab kisi ko nahi bole ge...
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geet: but meera...
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meera: mere mom-dad yeh seh nahi payenge... plzzz geet tujhe mere kasam... plzz i beg you... plzzz
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geet hugs meera: ok meera only for you. i'll not tell anyone...
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flashback end
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geet make tea for his dad & dev
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dev: uncle aap aap rest kijiye main yahe hu...
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mohi: ok bete... but i'm sorry bete maine geet ki shadi tumse nahi kar wa sakta...
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dev: why uncle??? main kuch kiya kya??
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mohi: nahi bete aap toh bohot ache ho par geet kisi aur se pyar karte hain...
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DEV : ohh thats great geet... devil smile
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geet: thnks...
.\ dad abhi aap rest karo...

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mahi: ha bete main ja ta hu... tum dev ko khana khila ke he bejna...
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geet: yes dad...
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... mohindar went to his room...
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geet: dev get out frm home now...
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dev: ohh jaan abhi suna nahi uncle ne kya kaha?? main abhi nahi jaunga...
pehle thora maza toh le lu...
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geet: don't u dare come near me...
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dev was coming more close.
dev: oh jaan i missed you so much... atleast itne din baad mile hain ek hug ya ki** toh bante hain... {she hold geet by her waist}
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geet: leave me you bus***... choro mujhe...
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dev: abhi nahi jaan thora pyar toh kar lu tumhe...
{he tried to kiss her neck}
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geet: leave me [she start shouting}
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dev: ohh jaan itna maat sataoo tumhare dad ko pata chal gaya toh...
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geet: leave me dev...
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precap:...
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hit like & big comments...
Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls save geet... Don't let anything bad happen to her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..babaji pls save geet.feel like killing dev😡😡.wonderful update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
that dev is such a bas***d
he is such a sick person
hope he doesnt do anything to geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally got to read all parts... wow awesome updates dear...loved it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ye dev kitna kamina hai. Nyc update

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