MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago



OMG OMG...

Dev b*****d he first raped Meera and now wanted Geet also...

please maan save Geet...

mohinder is in the house...then how can Dev act like this...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Poor meera. Now geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 20
nice...
so Geet's dad is happy with Maan...
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part 21
nice...
so Daadima and Annie like Geet...
lovely...
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part 22
OMG this rogue is so disgusting...
poor Meera...
hope Geet will be safe...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
maan gonna come to save geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
THNKS A LOT GUYS FOR UR SUPPORT... LOVE U ALL😊
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MG SS ~DILRUBA~
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PART 23:::::
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geet: I BEG YOU DEV PLZ MUJHE CHOR DO... dad ne dekh liya toh woh bardas nahi kar payenge... plzz leave...
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dev: itne jaldi kya hain jaan???? tum agar mera sath do ge toh uncle ko bhi kuch nahi pata chale ga...
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geet: ... NO NEVER...
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i'll never support... I CAN'T BREAK MY DAD & MAAN'S TRUST...
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SHE SLAP DEV & PUSH HIM
THN she start running & shouting more loudly: dad dad plzz help me dad...
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dev: you bitc*... THeN he hold geet's wrist very tightly & remove her duppatta..
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geet: dad help me...
... dev start kissing her neck & try to open her dress zip...
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AFTER HEARING GEET'S SHOUT MR.HANDA CAME OUT IN CHAIR
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MOHI WAS FULLY SHOCKED: DEVVV...
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GEET TRYING TO PUCH DEV...
GEET: DEV PLZZ SAVE ME...
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DEV: JO KHUD NAHI CHAL SAKTA WOH TUJHE KYA BACHAYE GA???
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MOHI COME NEAR THEM: he also try to hit dev... chor mere bete ko kamine...
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dev push geet nd slap mohindar: chup chap betha rah warna tere samne he sab kar dunga...
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then he push him {so mohindar was in floor}
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geet: dad...
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mohi: kamine chor mere bete ko... chor de usse...
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DEV again come to geet: clg main bohot attitude dikha te the na,, aur uss kamine meera ke liye mujhe slap kiya tha... aab dekh main tera kya hal karta hu
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he start pulling geet in room
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MOHINAR WAS TRYING TO WALK... BUT HE CAN'T
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after doing much effort
AT LAST HE STOOD TAKE THE flower vas ... thn take it & HIT DEV'S HEAD...

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dev get unconsices
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geet was crying like hell & hug his dad
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dad: chup ho jaa bete... kuch nahi hua... dekh main hu na tere pass...
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tu apne kamre main jaa main isse police main de aata hu...
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geet: dad plzz don't leave me {crying}
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dad:bete isse saza toh de ne hoge na... tu sambhal khud ko...
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geet: hmmm... she goes to her room...
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mohindar take dev to police station
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GEET WAS TOTALLY BROKEN...
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GEET: how can i meet dad eyes???? how will i face maan??????
ussne dad ke samne mere sath jo kiya... {crying}
main kash maar jaaate...😭
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HER MOBILE START RINGING...
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IT WAS MAAN... {when she see her name, she start crying more loudly}
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maan: yeh geet ko hua hain??? mere phone kyun nahi utha rahe???
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he was trying & trying but no reply...
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geet: i'm sorry maan... i can't face you nor also dad...😊
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but i really need you now...😭😭 i want you to hold me... plzz maan come back...
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maan: yeh geet phn bhi nahi utha rahe... aab main usse kese bolu mujhe 1 week ke liye london jana hoga???? GEET ki manjuri ke bina main jaa bhi toh nahi sakta... ohh BABAJI help me...
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Ek kaam karta huu, jane se pehle geet se milke chala jaunga...
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okk done assa he karunga... { then he start packing }
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GEET was crying & crying ::: HOW WILL I FACE DAD???
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MOHINDAR came to geet... he tried a lot to console geet... but geet was not stoping...
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so mohindar think to call maan
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MAAN: Hello...
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mohi: maan bete main mohindar...
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maan: namaste DAD... kese ho aap??

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mohi: main thik hu bete tum kese ho??
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maan: main bhi thiik hu dad... but geet kaha hain??? main kab se usse call kar raha hu... but woh receive he nahi karte... kaha hain woh??
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mohi: she needs you bete... come soon...
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precap: MAANEET...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
kam**n*a dev achha hua police station gaya..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Acha huya dev ko jail bej diya. Nyc update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
thank god geets dad came on time
maan calling geet but geet not picking
geets dad tell maan to come soon

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