MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
woww so lovely.now that dev have to face real msk.now waiting 4 maaneet passionate moment
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
dev you are gone
waiting for maaneet moments
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update.
Now dev face our Msk.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I changed my username from maaneetpriyanka to priya_21
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
new reader for this story
going to read from starting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: simm_bains

lovely update

new reader for this story
going to read from starting



thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



yes u r right she is feeling too much insulted when that b*****d tried to rape her in front of her father...she feels so much humiliated...

Maan is trying to take her out from that low feeling...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditimaan

woww so lovely.now that dev have to face real msk.now waiting 4 maaneet passionate moment


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thank you dear 😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
...MG SS ~DILRUBA~...
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...part 26...
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WARNING 17+
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GEET: today i want you to touch my soul...
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maan: JAAN I Wish main kar pata... par ...
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geet: par kya maan?? kya apko mujhe chune main sharam aaa rahe hain... kya uss DEV ke chune se main apke kabil nahi rahe???
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maan: GEET... tum assa soch bhi kese sakte ho???
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geet: toh kya sochu main MAAN??? Kyun aap mujhe apna nahi sakte??
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maan: main DAD Ko diya wada tor nahi sakta...
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geet: dad ko wade main yeh bhi kaha tha aap mere kahayal rakhoge,hain na?/
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maan: GEET abhi humhare shadi baki hain...
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geet: thik hain... MAIN apse aajke baa kuch nahi mangunge...
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maan: yah kese baat hui??? GEET main nahi chahta hum sab ka barosa tor de...
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geet: thik hain jesa aap kahe.,,, main chalte hu...
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maan pull her close...
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maan: kya chahte ho tum??
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geet push him angryily: mujhe apne body ko pure fell karwana hain... main sirf apka ehsaas apne yaad rakna chahte hu... aur kisi ka nahi.,,, bas iss liye...
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maan: tum aab bhi pure ho jese pehle the GEET...
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GEET: par main apne dimag ko nahi samjha pa rahe hu... .
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SHE START CRYING ...
GEET: main bhi nahi chahte hum sab ka dil rode... par main kya karu... mujhe kuch bhi acha nahi lag raha ... pllzz HELP ME MAAN...
MAAN: jaan TUM JO CHAHTE HO WESA HE HOGA... THIK HAIN AAB RONA BAAND KARO...
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geet: KYA APKO SACH MAIN LAGTA HAIN... MAIN AAB BHI PURE HU???
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MAAN: HA JAAN... main tumhare har dard har darr ko dur kar dunga...
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MAAN TAKE GEET TO HIS ARMS & WENT TO HIS ROOM...
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HE PUT GEET ON THE BED...
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MAAN: I LOVE GEET & I CAN DO ANYTHING FOR YOU...
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GEET: I LOVE YOU TOO MAAN...
BOTH HUG EACH OTHER VERY TIGHTLY...
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THEN MAAN take her lips into his lips for a soul touching KISS...
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BOTH VERY KISSING EACH OTHER HUGERILY...
LIKE THEIR WAS NO TOMORROW TO COME... JUST THIS NIGHT & THEIR LOVE...
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BOTH BREAK THE KISS FOR BREATH...
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THN MAAN SLOWLY REMOVED HER DUPPATTA... &KISS HER NECKLINE...
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GEET: MAAN {LIKE A MOANED}
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MAAN: I LOVE YOU...
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THEN he opened geet dress zip... & kiss her n***d back...
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he removed her dress...
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GEET upper boby was only with her b*a
geet felt shy & hug him...
maan: JAAN YOU'RE STILL PURE...
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GEET: I FEEL IT MAAN... I TRULLY FEEL IT...
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maan broke the hug & kiss her stomach ...

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MAAN: I MADLY LOVE YOU GEET... YOU'RE STILL PURE...
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GEET: U MAKE ME MAD FOR YOU MAAN... I WISH humare bich aaj koi nahi aata... BUT I UNDERSTAND MAAN WE HAVE TO STOP...
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MAAN: believe me GEET... i want to but i can't plz don't misunderstand me... i still love you...
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geet: i knw MAAN... I WILL ALWAYS UNDERSTAND YOU... THANKS MAAN FOR MAKE ME SO PURE...
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MAAN: ANYTHINGFOR MY PRINCESS... BUT GEET I WANT TO MARRY YOU SOON...
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GEET: I'M ALSO EGERLY WAITING MAAN... i want to be MRS. MAAN SINGH KHURANA AS SOON AS POSSIBLE..
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MAAN: MAIN kal he dad aur dadi se baat kar ta hu...
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geet: hmm {both hug each other & rest for sometime}
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then MAAN TAKE GEET TO HER HOME...
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MOHINDAR WELCOME THEM...
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MAAN WAS SHOCKED TO SEE MOHINDAR WAS STAND INFORT OF HIM...
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MAAN: DAD... YOU CAN WALK??? {HAPPILY}
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MOHI: YES BETE... AAJ HE HUA YEH SAB...
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MAAN: I'M SO HAPPY DAD...
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GEET: DAD i'm sorry maine apko bahot tension de hain na?? but i promise main aab se aapko kabhi taag nahi karunge... apne khana khaya??
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mohi: nahi bete... apne geet ka intezar kar raha tha...
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geet: main abhi aate hu... & she goes to kitchen
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Precap: WEDDING PREPARATION...

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Posted: 12 years ago


wonderful update...

I loved it...the reason is that after so much persuasion from Geet also Maan didn't cross his limits...now a days people feel that there is no wrong in having physical relations but I think what is wrong in waiting for marriage...

thanx for pm...

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