MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Amazing update
Hope maan recover soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
oye mera jaan ko accident hogaya.now geet also confesd.waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
MG SS -DILRUBA-
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...Part-- 11...


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Doctor shift maan to the ward nd geet went to meet him...
GEET start crying after seeing maan's condition..
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Maan was sleeping but when he felt geet presence he open his eyes...
He saw that geet was crying nd felt vry bad

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MAAN: GEET...
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GEET JUST HUG HIM very TIGHTLY, nd start crying more loudly
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GEET: Aap ne assa kyun kiya? Thore der pehle he to apne khaha tha na apna khayal rakhoge, kyun apna wada tor diya??? kyun mere liye apne life ko khatre main dala apne??? kya main itne bure hu ke koi mere pass mere sath rehna nahi chahta??

maan: assa nahi hain geet...main
{geet stop him}

geet: assa he hain pehle dad phir aap... koi mere fikar nahi nahi karta... agar apko kuch ho jata toh main kya karte... kese rehte apke bina??? boliye..
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maan: agar tumhe kuch hota toh main kese rahta??? apne saaso ke bina koi ji pata hain???
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geet: kyun mere liye itna sab kuch kar rahe ho??? { she ask so innocently}
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maan: 😛because i love you!!! i love you a lot...😃 tumhare bina jinna nahi chahta... tumhe har khushi dena chahta hu iss liye...
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geet: juthi baate maat bolo aap... pyar karte to apne jaan ko yu khatre main nahi dalte... apna wada pura karte... apna khayal rakhte...😭
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maan: mere liye koi bhi wada tumhare zindagi se barke nahi ho sakta,, samjhe tum?? main har wada har kasam tor sakhta hu tumhare liye...
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...geet was amazed to his love...

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geet: mere liye apko yeh sab karne ki jarurat nahi hai, main apko iss halat main nahi dakh sakte... mere life se jiyada apke life ke importance hain... main nahi chahte aap mere waje se apna yeh haal karo... nahi acha lagta mujhe apko dard main dekhna... pata hain apko asse dekhke main kitna daar gayi the...
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.maan: kyun??? mujhe asse dekh ke tumhe dard hua?? maine toh yeh sab kiya kyun ki main tumse pyar karta hu.. par tum
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geet: main bhi apse

{ then the nurse come & geet stop}
maan : { yeh nurse ko bhi abhi aana tha??? itna acha moment chal raha tha}

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NURSE: excuse miss... app bahar jaiye... mujhe inko sponge bath dena hain...

geet: kya??? aap kyun inhe sponge bath denge??? kise boy nurse ko boliye...

nurse: but maam yeh mera kam hain... so plz aap bhar jaiye..

geet: par...

nurse: maam hum apke liye rules to change nahi kar sakte plz aap bahar jaiye...

nurse get close to maan, she was about to open maan's botton geet stop her
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geet: rukiye... aap jaiye yaha se main inhe sponge bath dunge
nurse: par maam ...

geet: i said out... main kar lunge...
maan: par geet yeh kar denge... tumhe thore aata hain... { teasingly}

geet: aap chup chap lete raho... nd nurse aap bahar jaaoo
... nurse left...
geet : bohot maja aa raha tha nurse ko apne pass dekh kar??

maan: main toh bass..

geet: jante hu main... isse aap pyar kehte ho ri8??

maan: main toh sirf mazak kar raha tha... tum bhi na... acha aab mujhe bath kon dega??
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geet: main...

maan: kya???? tum...

geet: koi problem hain apko???

maan: nahi mujhe kya problem hoge...
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precap : sponge bath.😳😳

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
nice update
waiting for sponge bath
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Aww.awesome update
Waiting for spong bath
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
nice update
precap is interesting
update soon
thanx for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Yippee at last maaneet confessed ok geet almost confessed what next now ???????
Phewww Maan is alright
Bechari geet ok nervous breakdown hogaya
Waiting for the next update
Thank u sooo much for the pm
Love aanya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Aww maan confessed nw turn fr geet and sponge bath
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Maan sponge bath enjoy krna. K.
Superb update. Is nurse ko bi abi bich me ana tha.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
awesome update
waiting for sponge bath

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