MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED

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Priya21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Ye lo. Ye bi koi puchni ki baat h. Epilogue post kr.
Superb & beautiful part.

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aditimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

wow so cute ud.lovd maaneet sr.fantastic.the most amazing pt was maaneet ka princess ka born.waiting 4 epilog

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Read All the parts
Superb FF loved it very much

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

awesome ff

really loved how geet asked maan to purify her but yet they didnt cross their limits n their wedding was fixed

loved the sagaai n sangeet n wedding

hahahaaa annie ne mast gift liya maan se

n wowww maaneet become one n soon had a baby girl also

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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MG SS ~DILRUBA~

EPILOUGE (A)

INTRO OF MANEET'S CHILDREN:
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Mahila Maan Singh Khurana {maneet's elder daughter}-7years old {every1 call her mahi}
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Gurmeet Maan Singh Khurana {maneet's littile son}- 5years old
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Maya Maan Singh Khurana {maneet's littile daughter}-5years old
--Gurmeet & Maya are twins but gurmeet is 2minutes elder--
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<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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After a long happy 7 years later in PARIS
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Why paris??
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cuz Maan's littile princess {MAYA}want to visit paris...
& Maan can't say NO to his princess...😊
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Maya was running towards his dad with her littile & cute legs...
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Maya run & hugged MAAN: ohh papa aap kaha the?? {innocently}
aap ko pata hain na apke princess ko apke bina kuch bhi acha nahi lagta...
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Maan: ohh my littile angel papa toh apke liye toys lane gaye the na... yaad hain aap ne he bolo tha paris ke new toys chahiye apko woh bhi apke uthne se pehle... toh apke papa wahi lane gaye the...
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Maan give her new toys...
maya gets so happy & kiss maan's cheeks {as one day she saw geet kiss maan's cheeks when he went to office😳}
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maya: love you papa... u r the best...
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maan: love you princess... aab bolo apke mama kaha hain??
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maya: mama mahi di ke sath room main Gurmeet ko tayar kar rahe hain...
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maan: to hum bhi chale??
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maya: ok papa...
...MAAN & MAYA WENT UPSTAIRS ...
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GEET was dressing gurmeet as he was totally MAA'S BOY...geet was gurmeet's jaan...
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and MAHI was also getting readY {she is littile mature from maya & gurmeet} but she is JAAN of MANEET... MAHI loved both his parents a lot
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MANEET LOVE THEIR THREE CHILDREN A LOT...
None of them say that MANEET'S love him or her less...
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MAHI..GURMEET & MAYA Knows that their parents love them a lot😊
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When MAHI saw maan she run & hugged maan...
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mahi: papa were was you??? you knw na when i wake up & didn't see ur's & mama's face together i don't feel good... why u leave us alone in this big city like paris???
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maan: ohhh my sweetheart you knw ur sister na... she asked me to buy toys for her that's why i hv to leave... papa saying sorry sweetheart... aage se assa nahi hoga pakka promise...
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mahi: ok but i hv one condition...
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maan: i knw what you want sweetheart will give you three ice-creams & 2 chocolate box ok???
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geet: maan yeh aap kya keh rahe ho??? 3 ice-creams & 2 bowes choclate??? agr woh bimar par gaye toh,,, main aapko kese sambhalunge??
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maan: mujhe kyun sambhaloge??
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geet: ohh toh aap bhul gaye MR.KHURANA jab mahi ko fever hua tha tab apne pura ghar sar pe utha liya tha... aur to aur har city se ek ek special doctors le aaye the mahi ke liye...
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maan: ha toh mere sweetheart bimar hoge toh main kya betha rahunga???
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geet: iss liye toh keh rahe hu.. usko bimar maat hone do...
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mahi: papa mama ko bolo na ek din main kuch nahi hoga...
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maan: ha geet ek din main khuch nahi hota...
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geet: par maan... {before geet can complete gurmeet start}
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gurmeet: papa abhi mama ki baat nahi mann rahe ho baad main babaji na kare agar di bimar par gaye toh hum sab ko thore na acha lage ga?? bolo kya aap dekh pao ge di ko uss halat hain???
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geet: ohh my baby kitna samaj dar hain... dekho maan mera na sahe apke prince ki baat toh mann lo...
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maan: kya kehte ho mahi?? sab liye aap ice-creams or chocolate kurban nahi kar sakte?? {maan ask innocently}
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mahi: I can do anything for my FAMILY...
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then evryone came near mahi & hugged her..
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A FAMILY HUG...
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Epilouge B will post tommorow... 😊
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Plz the story is ending give big big comments...
love you all...😊

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago