MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely.kutte kamine dev.wanna kill him.hope maan cum back soon
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THANKS A LOT GUYS FOR UR SUPPORT😊
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MG SS ~~DILRUBA~
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part 24::

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MOHINDAR: MAAN plzz bete jaldi aa jao... isse pehle ki geet or tuut jaye... woh mujhe kuch nahi bole ge, par tum usse sambhal paoge
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maan: GEET... par dad usse hua kya hain??? bolo dad
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mohi: tum aa jao woh khud tumke bata dege...
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maan: plzz dad usse phn dijiye... plzz dad...
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mohi: woh apne kamre se bahar he nahi aate na hi mujhe se bhi baat kar rahe hain... main tumhe nahi bata sakta bete... kyun ki mene bola toh geetko aur bura lage ga...
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maan: I'M COMING DAD... GEET KA KHAYAL RAKHNA...
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MAAN tell dadi that he is going...
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MAAN was driving the car with full speed... like a crazy or drank man...
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on the other side geet was crying bitterly...
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geet: babaji kya MAAN mujhse abhi bho pyar karenge????? {crying}
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AT NIGHT IN HANDA HAVELI
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mohinar to geet: GEET bete maan ka phone aaya tha usne kaha hain,, uske ghar pe kuch important papers reh gaya hain tu maan ko mail kar de...
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geet: dad plzz abhi nahi...
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mohi: bete uska kaam jaruri hain na???? kuch nahi hua hain tere sath, tu kyu assa behave kar rahe hain??? hum sab hain na aab bhi tere sath...
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geet: plzz dad mujhe aab uss bare main koi baat nahi karne... main MAAN ka kaam karke aate hu...
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...GEET LEFT...
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MOHI caLL maan: maan bete tum sidhe apne ghar chale jao, maine geet ko waha bheja hain...
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maan: par...
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mohi: yaha woh mere samne tumhe kuch bol nahi payegee... MAIN rakhta hu...
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maan: ok dad
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THEN HE goes to KH & Start waiting for geet...
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<<<<<<<<<<...>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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AFTER SOMETIME LATER
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GEET CAME & SEE THAT THE DOOR WAS OPEN...
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GEET: YEH Door kisne khula chor diya???? andar jake dekhte hu...
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GEET: KON HAIN????

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MAAN: MAIN HU PRINCESS... Humesha tumhare sath...
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geet trun & she MAAN : MAAN {TEAR start rolling frm her eyes.}

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She run & hug him...



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MAAN: kya hua princess???? kyun roo rahe ho??
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geet: start crying more loudly...😭
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maan: mujhe bhi nahi batao ge???? plz JAAN bolo na kya hua???
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geet: *sob* kuch *sob* nahi...😭
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maan: Mujhse tumhare yeh halat nahi dekhe jate bolo geet plzz...
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geet broke the & about to go when MAAN pull her to the wall
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maan: main apne JAAN ko yu tarap te huye nahi dekh sakta, samje tum???
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geet: main thik hu... kuch nahi hua mujhe... jaane dijjiye...
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she push MAAN but maan stop her
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THEN MAAN START SINGING...

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Bebasi dard ka aalam
tum mujhe dedo aapne ghum) x2
Khamoshiyan bhi do
Tanhaiyan bhi do
Bechainiyan bhi de do de do naaa

MAAN hug her from back...
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Tear was rolling from her eyes...

(Bheeghi Phalkon se churaa lungaa nami
Rehanay dunga naa, kahin koi kami)x2
Tumko daaman naa bhigone dungaa
ab kabhi tumko naa rone dungaa
Uljane ghum ki perchaiyee HOOO
De do mujhe apni tanhaiyee
Gumnamiyan bhi do
Naakamiyan bhi do
Viraniyan bhi de do, de do naa




(Teri hothon mein saaja dungaa hasee
Teri raahon mein, bhicha dungaa khushi) x2
Tum Mujhe Apna Maanti Ho Agar
Yu Khafaa Hoke, Naa Jhukaaoo Nazar
Mushkile Apni Majburi
Ho De Do Mujhe Sari Benuri
Pareshaniyan Bhi Do,
Hairaniyan Bhi Do
Nhigebaniyan Bhi De Do, De Do Naa

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Bebasi Dard Ka Aalam,
Tum Mujhe De Do Apne Ghum
Khamoshiyan Bhi Do,
Tanhaiyan Bhi Do,
Bechaniyan Bhi De Do, de Do Naaa

hmmm de do naa... ...
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GEET HUG MAAN MORE TIGHTLY... {cring crying}
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MAAN: bolo naa geet...
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geet: MAAN ...
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he ... he *sob* tried ... rape me...😭😭😭😭
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MAAN shocked shocked...
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<<<<<<<<<< precap >>>>>>>>>>>>>
... THINKING...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mohi ne acha kiya maan ko bulakar
Ab maan aa gaya geet ko sambhal ne ke liye
Maan kya karenga?
Update soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ff amazing updates i hope maan geet ko sambal le
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Posted: 12 years ago



oh dev tried but Geet is saved...

thank god...

she is deeply effected by this incident...hota hai...when a good girl is touched wrongly by any man she will feel deep hurt...hope Maan will be able to bring her back to normal...only Maan can do this...

emotional update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Precap : maan dev ko fod dalenga.
Nyc update
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
geet told maan
now time for some action
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Posted: 12 years ago
hailaaa
geet toh pagal hogai hai
dev ne try kiya rape karne ki rape nahi kar diya toh aisa kyu boli???
shayad trauma main hai isiliye

n loved the song

waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago

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<<<<<<<<<<<<<MG SS ~DILRUBA~>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

...PART 25...
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Maan was shocked but more angry...
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Geet : He tried to RAPE me... {CRYING}
His rubbish hand touch my hand.. my wrist.. my waist.. my neck MAAN
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crying cring & more crying
MAAN: Woh kon tha???
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bolo geet woh kon tha??? jisne mere JAAN ko hath laga ne ki koshish ki???
I'LL KILL THAT BUS****... JUST SAY HIS NAME...
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PLZZ jaan maat roo main aa gaya hu naa... sab thik ho jaye ga... I PROMISE... just once trust me...
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GEET: i know MAAN aap sab thik kar donge...
main YEH BHI JANTE HU KE WOH KUCH NAHI KAR PAYA,, PAR main apne he dad ke samne uss janwar ke hath main the... Usne DAD ke samne mujhe... {crying}

[A innocent soul was being tried to rape by a rubbish man infort of his DAD...
She is thinking how can she face his dad...
A girl can tell his mom anything.. but with his DAD she share a respective relation!!
must be she is totally free but still she can't imagine herself like that infront of his dad]


MAAN: Chup ho jao JAAn... sab thik ho jaye ga... just trust me... plzzz I can't see you like this... plzz princess... for me
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she stop crying. {only for MAAN}
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{with full anger}: mujhe sirf uska naam bolo main yeh din uske zindagi ka aakhri din bana dunga... I SWEAR...

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GEET: DEV... Jisse dad mere shadi kar wana chahte the... yaad hain maine apko bolo bhi tha... Par hume yeh nahi pata tha ki woh janwar yaha aayega..
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MAAN: Just give me one minute JAAN... mujhe ek phone karna hain...
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geet: {again tear roll }plzz mujhe yu ekele chor ke maat jao...
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MAAN: {geet ko mere jarurat hain... uss bus**** Ko toh wese bhi nahi chorun ga .. par mere liye geet jiyada important hain}
: ok princess main yahe hu...
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geet hug him...
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geet: you knw MAAN i'm hatting my those boby part which was touch by him... I WANT TO KILL MYSELF...
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MAAN: don't you dare try to harm urself... IF U ever try to do that I promise tumhare saase {breath} band hone se pehle mere saase {breath} band ho gaye hoge...
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GEET: MAAN... plzz don't talk like that... I SWEAR i'll not do anything...
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MAAN: usne kaha chua tumhe??
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geet: my WRIST...
MAAN Slowly take her hand hand & kiss her wrist...😊
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maan: aur??
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geet: My neck...
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MAAN slowly & deeply kiss her neck..
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maan: aur?
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geet: my waist...
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maan bend on kness & kiss her waist...
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maan: aur????
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GEET: aur kahe nahi MAAN ...
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CAN i tell u something to do...
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maan: anything...
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geet: will you do it???
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maan: just say...

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GEET: Today i want you to touch my soul MAAN
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precap:...


Sorry for short part
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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yes u r right she is feeling too much insulted when that b*****d tried to rape her in front of her father...she feels so much humiliated...

Maan is trying to take her out from that low feeling...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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