MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

awesum story ...read in one go...waiting fr sponge bath eeeagggeerrllly...continue sooon...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

part 9
nice...
they have confessed in some way...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

part 10
nice...
OMG poor Maan...
but glad hes fine now...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

part 11
nice part...
shes possessive...
cont soon dear...

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aditimaan

@aditimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Wow nelu its amazing
hahaha nurse nd sponge bath
yaad a gaya Maaneet ka
waiting 4 precap eagerly

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nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

thkss alot guys... for ur support...

nd sorry for no update yesterday...
HAPPY KURBAN HUA ANNIVERSARY...😳😳😳

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here is part 12

MG SS ~DILRUBA~

PART 12
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GEET went nd sit beside maan...
SHE slowly unbotton maan shirt... { maan was just drooling on geet}
geet slowly slowly giving maan the bath
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.maan: geet tum mujhe kuch khene wale thi...
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geet: nahi toh mujhe kuch nahi kehna
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maan: plzz geet mujhe or tarsana band karo...
geet: maine kya kiya??? mujhe sach main kuch nahi kehna..

maan: acha???
thik hain phir tum mujhe bath kyun de rahe ho??? nurse ko bolowoh de de ge... tumhe mere liye paresan hone kki kya jarurat hai???
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.jaoo yaha se{ opps maan gets angry}
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geet: gussa kyun ho rahe jo aap??? main kya kiya??? aap chup-chap bethe raho or mujhe apna kaam karne do...
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maan: MAAN SINGH KHURANA KO CHUP KARWANE WALA ABHI TAK ISS DUNIYA MAIN AAYA HE NAHI HAIN... samjhe tum??? i said tum jao yaha se... i don't need you...
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geet: geet handa ko haq hain... main nahi jaunge...
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maan: kiss baat se haq jata rahe ho???
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geet: apne he haq diya hain... { she said slowly}
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maan: maine haq apne pyar ko de ya hain, usse nahi jise mere parwa nahi...
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geet: toh kon hain apka pyar jise apke parwa hain???
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maan: woh meri GEET hain... jo mujhe yaha laye... mere liye apne aasu bahaye... tum nahi...
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geet: acha ji... par usne to apse nahi kaha ke woh aap se pyar karte hain...
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maan: haa nahi bolo... kyun ki meri geet main tumhare dust aatma ghus gaye hain...
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geet: ooo!!!! apne mujhe dust aatma kaha...
main aap se khabhi baat nahi karunge,,,,,
she stood up to nd maan held her hand...

maan: ui mujhe chor ke chale jaoo ge??? asse halat main??
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geet: mere jese dust aatma ke pass apka rehna thik nahi hain...
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maan: ...mazak bhi nahi kar sakta main apne princess ke sath??
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geet: mere zindagi apke aamanat hain... aap j chahe kar sakte ho...

maan: soch loo geet!!! main kuch bhi kar sakta hu...

geet: soch liya... mujhe pata hain aap assa wesa kuch bhi nahi karo ge...
{ then she hug maan}
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precap: maan back to khurana haveli..

~~ NOTE~~ : SORRY GUYS FOR SHORT PART...
I'M BUSY WITH MY BROTHERS WEDDING😃 SHOPPING... ~~
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.do like & big comments plz...😊😊😊

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

nice dear😊

maan tease geet😃

geet angry😆

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

awesome update

haha thank god geet actually took the initiative to give sponge bath to maan 😆

aww they are sooo cute just love them 😃

when is maan gonna propose her marriage😉

waiting waiting and waiting😃

thank u for the pm😃

love aanya😃

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

lovely update

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

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nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Thnkss a lot guys for ur support...😊😊

ur likes & comments means a lot too me...😊😊😊
here is part 13
MG SS ~DILRUBA~

... PART --13...

NIGHT IN HOSPITAL......
Doctor came to check maan...

doc: mr khurana apki tabyat pehle behrat hain phir apko kuch din yahi rehna hoga...

maan: no doc... mujhe ghar jana hain... i hate hospital

doc: par mr khurana waha apka kayal kon rakhega??? yaha bohot log hain... kya apke family hain apke sath???

maan: MAAN SINGH KHURANA apna khayal khud rakh sakta hain...

doc: but...

geet: rehne dijiye doctor!!! yeh kisi ke baat nahi mante... baat discharge papers ready kijiye...MAIN INKA KHAYAL Rakhunge...😊😊
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...doc left...

maan: main apna khayal khud rakh sakta hu...

geet: i know sir... but i want to take care of you... can i??? plzzz
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maan: okk!!!!!
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geet: aajke din yahe ruk jaiye kal subhe chale jayenge...
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maan: okk wese bhi abhi raat ho chuki hain... tum ghar chali jao, tumhe bhi late ho raha hain...
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geet: main aaj yahi rukunge...
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maan: nahi geet tum ghar jao...
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geet: mujhe yaha rehna hain...
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maan: par

geet: par war khuc nahi agar aap nahi chahte main iss room main rahu toh main DAD ke room main chali jate hu...😔

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Maan: maine kab kaha mujhe tumhare iss room main rehne se prob hain?? tum yaha reh sakte ho... but tum he taklif hoge...
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geet: nahi hoge...
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...maan: ohhh!!! main toh bhul he gaya mujhe doc se dad ke bare main baat karne thi...
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geet: pehle aap toh thik ho jao...
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maan: main thik hu... mujhe kal doc baat karne hain... so agr main bhul jau toh yaad dilana, samje tum??
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geet: okk sir { dust danav asse koi hukum chalata hain??}
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maan: akele baat karna baad karo or soo jao... GOOD NIGHT
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GEET: gd ni8... raat ko kuch chahiye ho apko toh mujhe aawaz dena...
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maan: nahi dunnga aab soo jao...
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geet: aap agar awaj dene ka wada nahi karte to main saare raat jagte rahunge....
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maan: tum se behes karna bekar hain... main aawaj dunga... okkk aab so jaoo mere dust aatma😊😊😊
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geet: ok good night... { she sleep on couch }
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... IN MORNING...
DOC came with discharge papers...

doc to geet: miss geet aap inka thik se khayal rakhye ga...
aur yeh jiyada na chale to behtar hoga AS inke per main bohot chot lage hain...

geet: ok doc... aap inke dawaye mujhe de dijiye...
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... doc gives her medicine...

BOTH WENT TO KH...😊😊

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geet take maan to his room...
GEET: aap rest kjiye main apke k liye soup bana ke late...

maan: geet mujhe soup nahi pina...

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geet: soup apke sehat ke liya acha hoga... plzz thora saape lena... main banau?? plzz { innocently}

maan: tumhe blackmail karna bohot ache se aata hain... jaw leke aao...

geet: thnk u soo much... aab bohot ache hooo!!! mere cutee maan sir...

maan: main cute nahi hu!!!
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geet: aap bohot jiyada cute ho...

maan: main cutee nahi hu mere dust aatma...

geet: aap cute ho dust danav😊😊 { thn she run to kitchen }

maan: gggeettt... { smiles}
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~~~ geet made soup for maan ~~~
~~ she also feed him with her hand~~
😊😊 ~~mahi ve mahi mahi ve moment~~😊😊

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precap: { oppss} MAAN BACK TO DEHLI...

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago