MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

277

Views

141.9k

Users

36

Likes

2.2k

Frequent Posters

ushankitvc thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#81
awesum story ...read in one go...waiting fr sponge bath eeeagggeerrllly...continue sooon...
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#82
part 9
nice...
they have confessed in some way...
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#83
part 10
nice...
OMG poor Maan...
but glad hes fine now...
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#84
part 11
nice part...
shes possessive...
cont soon dear...
aditimaan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Wow nelu its amazing
hahaha nurse nd sponge bath
yaad a gaya Maaneet ka
waiting 4 precap eagerly
NelufarAazmi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#86
thkss alot guys... for ur support...

nd sorry for no update yesterday...
HAPPY KURBAN HUA ANNIVERSARY...😳😳😳


.
.
.
.
here is part 12

MG SS ~DILRUBA~

PART 12
..
.
.
GEET went nd sit beside maan...
SHE slowly unbotton maan shirt... { maan was just drooling on geet}
geet slowly slowly giving maan the bath
.
.maan: geet tum mujhe kuch khene wale thi...
.
.
geet: nahi toh mujhe kuch nahi kehna
.
.
maan: plzz geet mujhe or tarsana band karo...
geet: maine kya kiya??? mujhe sach main kuch nahi kehna..

maan: acha???
thik hain phir tum mujhe bath kyun de rahe ho??? nurse ko bolowoh de de ge... tumhe mere liye paresan hone kki kya jarurat hai???
.
.jaoo yaha se{ opps maan gets angry}
.
.
geet: gussa kyun ho rahe jo aap??? main kya kiya??? aap chup-chap bethe raho or mujhe apna kaam karne do...
.
maan: MAAN SINGH KHURANA KO CHUP KARWANE WALA ABHI TAK ISS DUNIYA MAIN AAYA HE NAHI HAIN... samjhe tum??? i said tum jao yaha se... i don't need you...
.

.
geet: geet handa ko haq hain... main nahi jaunge...
.
.
maan: kiss baat se haq jata rahe ho???
.
.
geet: apne he haq diya hain... { she said slowly}
.

maan: maine haq apne pyar ko de ya hain, usse nahi jise mere parwa nahi...
.

geet: toh kon hain apka pyar jise apke parwa hain???
/
/
maan: woh meri GEET hain... jo mujhe yaha laye... mere liye apne aasu bahaye... tum nahi...
.

.
geet: acha ji... par usne to apse nahi kaha ke woh aap se pyar karte hain...
.
.
maan: haa nahi bolo... kyun ki meri geet main tumhare dust aatma ghus gaye hain...
.
.

geet: ooo!!!! apne mujhe dust aatma kaha...
main aap se khabhi baat nahi karunge,,,,,
she stood up to nd maan held her hand...

maan: ui mujhe chor ke chale jaoo ge??? asse halat main??
>
.
geet: mere jese dust aatma ke pass apka rehna thik nahi hain...
.
maan: ...mazak bhi nahi kar sakta main apne princess ke sath??
.

geet: mere zindagi apke aamanat hain... aap j chahe kar sakte ho...

maan: soch loo geet!!! main kuch bhi kar sakta hu...

geet: soch liya... mujhe pata hain aap assa wesa kuch bhi nahi karo ge...
{ then she hug maan}
...



precap: maan back to khurana haveli..

~~ NOTE~~ : SORRY GUYS FOR SHORT PART...
I'M BUSY WITH MY BROTHERS WEDDING😃 SHOPPING... ~~
.
.
.do like & big comments plz...😊😊😊

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
dhakdhak22 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#87
nice dear😊

maan tease geet😃

geet angry😆
lizzy84 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#88
awesome update
haha thank god geet actually took the initiative to give sponge bath to maan 😆
aww they are sooo cute just love them 😃
when is maan gonna propose her marriage😉
waiting waiting and waiting😃
thank u for the pm😃
love aanya😃
kiran_rati thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#89
lovely update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
NelufarAazmi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Thnkss a lot guys for ur support...😊😊

ur likes & comments means a lot too me...😊😊😊
here is part 13
MG SS ~DILRUBA~


... PART --13...

NIGHT IN HOSPITAL......
Doctor came to check maan...

doc: mr khurana apki tabyat pehle behrat hain phir apko kuch din yahi rehna hoga...

maan: no doc... mujhe ghar jana hain... i hate hospital

doc: par mr khurana waha apka kayal kon rakhega??? yaha bohot log hain... kya apke family hain apke sath???

maan: MAAN SINGH KHURANA apna khayal khud rakh sakta hain...

doc: but...

geet: rehne dijiye doctor!!! yeh kisi ke baat nahi mante... baat discharge papers ready kijiye...MAIN INKA KHAYAL Rakhunge...😊😊
.

...doc left...

maan: main apna khayal khud rakh sakta hu...

geet: i know sir... but i want to take care of you... can i??? plzzz
.

.

maan: okk!!!!!
.
geet: aajke din yahe ruk jaiye kal subhe chale jayenge...
.
maan: okk wese bhi abhi raat ho chuki hain... tum ghar chali jao, tumhe bhi late ho raha hain...
.
geet: main aaj yahi rukunge...
.
maan: nahi geet tum ghar jao...
.

geet: mujhe yaha rehna hain...
.
maan: par

geet: par war khuc nahi agar aap nahi chahte main iss room main rahu toh main DAD ke room main chali jate hu...😔

.
.
Maan: maine kab kaha mujhe tumhare iss room main rehne se prob hain?? tum yaha reh sakte ho... but tum he taklif hoge...
.
geet: nahi hoge...
.
.

...maan: ohhh!!! main toh bhul he gaya mujhe doc se dad ke bare main baat karne thi...

.
geet: pehle aap toh thik ho jao...
.
maan: main thik hu... mujhe kal doc baat karne hain... so agr main bhul jau toh yaad dilana, samje tum??

.
.
geet: okk sir { dust danav asse koi hukum chalata hain??}

.
maan: akele baat karna baad karo or soo jao... GOOD NIGHT
.
.
GEET: gd ni8... raat ko kuch chahiye ho apko toh mujhe aawaz dena...

.
maan: nahi dunnga aab soo jao...
.
geet: aap agar awaj dene ka wada nahi karte to main saare raat jagte rahunge....
.
maan: tum se behes karna bekar hain... main aawaj dunga... okkk aab so jaoo mere dust aatma
😊😊😊
.
geet: ok good night... { she sleep on couch }
.
.
... IN MORNING...
DOC came with discharge papers...

doc to geet: miss geet aap inka thik se khayal rakhye ga...
aur yeh jiyada na chale to behtar hoga AS inke per main bohot chot lage hain...

geet: ok doc... aap inke dawaye mujhe de dijiye...
.

... doc gives her medicine...

BOTH WENT TO KH...😊😊

..
geet take maan to his room...
GEET: aap rest kjiye main apke k liye soup bana ke late...

maan: geet mujhe soup nahi pina...

.
geet: soup apke sehat ke liya acha hoga... plzz thora saape lena... main banau?? plzz { innocently}

maan: tumhe blackmail karna bohot ache se aata hain... jaw leke aao...

geet: thnk u soo much... aab bohot ache hooo!!! mere cutee maan sir...

maan: main cute nahi hu!!!
.
.
geet: aap bohot jiyada cute ho...

maan: main cutee nahi hu mere dust aatma...

geet: aap cute ho dust danav😊😊
{ thn she run to kitchen }


maan: gggeettt... { smiles}
.
~~~ geet made soup for maan ~~~
~~ she also feed him with her hand~~
😊😊 ~~mahi ve mahi mahi ve moment~~😊😊

.
.
.
precap: { oppss} MAAN BACK TO DEHLI...
Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-The Matchmaker’s Mistake-Ch-1-14-(Completed)-23.5.25

The Matchmaker’s Mistake Chapter 1: The Algorithm of Error The scent of cardamom chai, the soft rustle of silk sarees, and the furious...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

3 years ago

MG#4 khudrat ka khel- completed/note- pg 36- 14 july25

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

5 months ago

MG-Bhorer Alo-A Love That Stood the Test of Time-Completed-26.2.25. MG-Bhorer Alo-A Love That Stood the Test of Time-Completed-26.2.25.

Maan Geet: Bhorer Alo – A Love That Stood the Test of Time Prologue Murshidabad, Bengal – 1904 The first time Maan Singh Chaudhury saw her, the...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

6 months ago

SS||Without You||Epilogue page 7 [09/02] Completed SS||Without You||Epilogue page 7 [09/02] Completed

Chapter 1: The book that started it all Maan leaned forward in his seat as the driver slowed down in front of his home. His heart swelled with...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

6 months ago

Short Story ~ Objection, Your Honor! It’s Love ~ Completed

Had this scene flash in my mind a couple of days ago, and I just couldn’t shake it off… It’s nothing big, just a random moment of inspiration...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".