MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

part 6
nice part...
Geet is helping Maan...

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

part 7
nice...
oh she has started to feel something for Maan and Maan has realized his feelings...
cont soon...

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Read all parts in a go nilu gr8 ff loved ur write up u portray amazingly

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Priya21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Amazng update. Both sharng about persnl life. Thats gud.

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

AANYA84 REPLIED YOU IN PAGE 9

😳thnkss a lot guyss for ur support...😊😊

sorry for no update yesterday..😭

so here is part 8
MS SS ~DILRUBA~
PART 7
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MANEET TALK CONTINUE...

GEET: SIR AAP TOH HP KE NAHI LAGTE PHIR YAHA KYUN JAMEN KAREDI??

MAAN: YESS I'M NOT FRM HP.. MY DADA-DADI WAS LIVE HERE... ND DADA HAD A DREAM TP BUILT A SCHOOL FOR HP CHILDRENS... BUT AS HE DIED A LONG AGO.. MY DADI WANTS TO COMPLETE HIS DREAM... WE WERE SEACHING FROM A LONG AGO... BUT DIDN'T FIND IT... THN SUDDENLY AGENT CALL ND TELL ABOUT THE LAND SO CAME 7 BUY IT...😊😊

GEET: OH!!! WESE SIR AAP KAHA REHTE HO??

MAAN: DEHLI MAIN... WESE GEET TUM AUR TUMAHARE DAD HP MAIN KYUN REHTE HO,JAB BAKI FAMILY MEMBERS AMRITSAR MAIN REHTE HAIN??
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.GEET: BECAUSE THEY R JUST FOR NAME... THEY WANT OUR LAND & HAVELI NOT US... THATS WHY MY DAD & I CAME HERE TO LIVE PEACEFULLY...😊

MAAN: THAT'S GOOD... JO RISTE KE MAINE HE NAHI SAMJHTE UNSE RISTA RAKHNE KA KOI MATLAB NAHI HOTA...

GEET: RIGHT SIR!!!
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SIR ABHI MUJHE JANA HAIN,LATE HO RAHA HAIN!!! kya main kal baki designs complete kar du??

maan: ok!! geet kal aate waqt DAD ke reports le aana??

geet was shocked: dad ke reports?? apke dad ke reports mere pass kese honge??

maan: budhu mere dad ke nahi tumhare dad ke!!😊
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geet: but apne mere dad ko dad kyun kaha?? { she asked innocently}

maan: mann ki toh bol diya... woh to mere dad jese hi hain na?? kya main unhe dad nahi bula sakta??
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geet: nahi assa nahi hain..aap bura maat maniye, woh
apne achanak se bolo toh mene bass yuhi puch liya...wese apko dad ke reports kyun chahiye??

maan: mujhe apne family doctors ko unke reports mail karne hain... woh bohot ache doctor hain. main chahta hu woh ek baar dad ke reports study kare, woh unka elaz main hp ke doctors ko help kar sakte hain..

geet: aap itna kuch kyun kar rahe ho???

maan: kyun ki I LO😳
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MAIN DAD KO THIK DEKHNA CAHTA HU..
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THN SHE HUG MAAN
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...GEET : AAP BOHOT BOHOT ACHE HO...
THANKS FOR EVERYTHING
MAAN ALSO HUG HER BACK...

MAAN: YOU'RE ALWAYS WELCOME PRINCESS😳😳

... FOR SOMETIME, THEY WERE IN HUG

THEN GEET BROKE THE HUG
GEET: Woh
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main.
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main chalte hu... mujhe late ho raha hai... she run frm there
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😳😳yes yes she also love ME... she hug me like the same way i hug her... yes today i fell she also love...
😳😳GEET HANDA LOVES MAAN SINGH KHURANA😳😳

MAAN: NOW I JUST WANT TO HEAR IT... GEET JUST AFTER SOMETIME U'LL BE MINE PRINCESS😃 LOVE YOU JAAN..
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...GOOD NIGHT...

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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago