MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
.SCROLL UP FOR PART 17..
HERE
IS PART --18...
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...MG SS ~DILRUBA~~

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AFTER Lunch time in HP...
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GEET give her father the medicine & lunch...
.now mr.handa is sleeping so geet was in her room...
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geet: thank you so much babji... aap dad ko thik kar rahe ho...
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MAAN kab wapas aayenge?? mujhe unke yaad aa rahe hain.. kal se unko nahi dekha...😉.. .. aab main kya karo... ?? OH YES GEET
diary / letter...
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she again open the diary nd start reading...
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Geet you knw main 15 years ka tha tab mujhe mom-dad ki bohot yaad aate the... kyun ki har school funtion main mere sath dadi aate the... ek mene dadi se pucha mom-dad ko babji ne kyun apne pass bula liya??
dadi: babji ko unki jiyada jarurat hain isliye... aur apke parents apke liye ek princess jarur baje ge dekhna...
tab se maine apne drean girl wait karna start kiya...
humese soch ta tha kab woh aaaye ge...???
phir jab tum mile... i think yes u r the right girl for me... u r also like my mom... she always thinks for other... {like you}
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geet: maan is thinking I'm his princess sent by his mom... how can he think so pure??? teen din main mujhe pyar kese ho gaya unko??
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main nahi janta kyun aur kese main tumhe apna maan ne laga?? mujhe kuch nahi pata... tum soch te hoge kisi ko sirf teen din main tum se kese pyar ho sakta hain?? par main toh kabhi tum se dur tha he nahi... humesha se humara rista jura hua tha... humera kismat ek sath likhe gaye hain... mujhe pata hain u also like me... maybe love me... but u r waiting for ur dad,ri8??
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i promise geet jab tak dad thik nahi hote aur humare riste ko manjure nahi dete tab tak main koi galat kadam nahi uthunga...
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aur engegmant... shadi ... honeymoom sab baad main karenge😊😉
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geet blushing...
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geet u knw when blush for me... i fell like eat you alive...
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aur kuch nahi hain mere bare main bate ne ko... yeh sab mere life le important baate the jo aab tum jante ho...
... so i'm ending here ... but plzz read the last page... that was for you...

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""... LAST PAGE...
I LOVE YOU GEET...
I want to give you my whole life...
my soul ... my heart.. evrything...
i want to give you a shower of my love...
i want to play with our kids...
but i firstly i want a baby- girl first...
thn ur boy...
i want to grow old with you...
i want to spent each nd evry second of my life with you...
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I want to MARRY YOU...
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WILL YOU BE MINE & ONLY MINE
MRS GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA.????
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WHEN I'LL CAME I WANT MY ANS... { BUT no force}
u can also tell me NO if u want... BUT I'LL LOVE YOU STILL MY LAST BREATH...😊😊
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TAKE CARE😊😊.""
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PRECAP: A TIGHT HUG & geet meeting with dadi & annie...

~~ I'M NEW AS A WRITER SO IF I' DOING ANY MISTAKE PLZ FORGIVE MW~~
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DO READ LIKE ND COMMENT IF U WANT...😊😊

LOVE""NELU""
aanya84 plzz check the comment below again ... just now reply you...
Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yippee first let me read first then will comment ( I will give u a long comment becoz u gave us 2 update )
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84

Yippee first let me read first then will comment ( I will give u a long comment becoz u gave us 2 update )



.will wait for ur comments... nd may b u also miss part 16
at page 21 plzz check once...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nelufar10



.will wait for ur comments... nd may b u also miss part 16
at page 21 plzz check once...


Yes that's what I was commenting and u posted this so I think I have to give comment for 3 updates

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow. Amazing update. Maan is so sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautifully update...loved the way maan expressed his love for geet through his diary...do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute and sweet maan
lovely updates
than for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
shocking update..is he gonna alive or will leave geet allone in the world :O
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Posted: 12 years ago
fntstc dear..like this part..in next maaneet r going to meet hmm nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayyyooo nzr marny ka irada h kia :P dnt Mr khurana dnt do tht :P

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