MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: aditimaan
wow amazing.happy ending.really 4 children.amazing idea by maan

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thnks u dear 😊

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

lovely epilogue

awesome...like is not working

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Bhanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

I just read this story in one go and I really enjoyed it...there is innocence in Maaneet's characterization which I loved a lot. The way they fell in love, the care, concern and trust even when they just know each other for the first time depicting that unknown yet know feeling was beautiful.

Geet-Mohinder bond was also sweet...

I hate Dev...omg, he is such a filthy man...the way Mohinder came to know about his truth was sad, but glad he came there and saved her in time.

Then Maan consoling Geet was nice, though I still missed Maan taking good care (u know what I mean) of Dev..how I wish to see that, (I think u might have not shown it, but if you have, I will be cursing myself to have missed it and plz let me know in which part it is)

ohhooo..their marriage wow, that was a sweet part to read and then their journey thereafter with their cute children was awesome yaar and loved Maneet's upbringing reflecting in them

I really enjoyed reading it...waiting for more from you

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Awesome one nilu.. Loved the entire journey

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

epilogue B
lovely dear...
loved it so much...

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Cherishh
Hi

I just read this story in one go and I really enjoyed it...there is innocence in Maaneet's characterization which I loved a lot. The way they fell in love, the care, concern and trust even when they just know each other for the first time depicting that unknown yet know feeling was beautiful.

Geet-Mohinder bond was also sweet...

I hate Dev...omg, he is such a filthy man...the way Mohinder came to know about his truth was sad, but glad he came there and saved her in time.

Then Maan consoling Geet was nice, though I still missed Maan taking good care (u know what I mean) of Dev..how I wish to see that, (I think u might have not shown it, but if you have, I will be cursing myself to have missed it and plz let me know in which part it is)

ohhooo..their marriage wow, that was a sweet part to read and then their journey thereafter with their cute children was awesome yaar and loved Maneet's upbringing reflecting in them

I really enjoyed reading it...waiting for more from you

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thank you so much dear for such a lovly comment...😊😊
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dev ke bare main ek special note post karunge 😊

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Bhanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: nelufar10

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thank you so much dear for such a lovly comment...😊😊
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dev ke bare main ek special note post karunge 😊

woowww...thats cool. Will be waiting😃

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

MG SS ~DILRUBA~

Special Note 😊

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ABOUT DEV...MOHINDAR... DADIMA & HP SCHOOL...
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ABOUT DEV
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After MAANEET'S marriage MAAN called HP police that he will take cancel the rape report...
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police: but MR.KHURANA handa family ne case wapas le ne ki koi baat nahi ki hain...
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maan: aap chahe toh MR.MOHINDAR HANDA se confirm kar sakte hain...
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Police: ok aap thore der hold kijiye...
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maan in hold...
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police called mr.handa & confirm that... AS maan said him to do as he say... Smile
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police: ok mr.khurana hum mr.dev ko chor de rahe hain...
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maan: mera ek offiicer aaya hain aap usse dev ko le jane ko kahiye...
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police: ok...
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police tell dev to go with maan's man {GAUTAM}
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dev: y should i go with him??
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police: apko jisne bail dilwaye hain unho ne kaha hain aap mr.gautam ke sath jaiye warna woh phir se case file karenge...
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dev: {angryily} : ok i'll go with him...
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Gautam take dev with him in dehli...
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IN DEHLI:
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Maan's farmhouse...
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maan to gautam: now you can go... lunch ke baad yaha phir se aa jana..
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G: OK SIR...
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DEV to maan: who the hell r u?? or mujhe yaha kyun leke aaye ho??
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maan 😡: tumkare zindagi ke akhre pal ko sabse khatar-nak bana ne ke liye maine tumhe yaha bhula ya hain ...
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dev: what r u saying?? who r u?? {angryliy}
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maan: {with a smirk} : u'll know MR.DEV SHUKLA... Just wait & watch...
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dev : answer my quection or i'll call the police..
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maan: hahaha very funny ... i'm i like that much stupid??
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you can't do anything... 😊 i hv planed everything perfectly...
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u'll live till ur death in my under... u can't do anything... nd i'll make sure every second of ur life will be hell... everu second u'll beg for DEATH but u'll not get it...😊😊😊
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dev: {shocked}: who r u?? why u want to ruin my life??
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maan: CUZ U TRY TO TOUCH MY LIFE... U DARE TO TOUCH MY JAAN...😡
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Dev: what?? but i even don't knw you...
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maan: but i knw u very well ...
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dev: whatever give me side i hv no time too talk with u...
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maan's bodyguard block his road...
maan: not so soon u bust***
...maan punch him hard in his face...
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thn MAAN'S bodygaurd ...
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It's the daily routine of Maan's to beat Dev...
Maan's bodygaurd also beat him & maan enjoy every seen...
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if dev get sick they give him medicine & after he get well they again staart to beat him...
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geet tell maan about MEERA...
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BUT geet tell maan to not to beat him more... what if he died & police will get away maan frm her,,,
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so maan's stop beating him & still dev was in maan's under...
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After the long 1 nd half year DEV DIED With high fever...
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{Hpe all dev quection is solved }
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MAAN tell geet about dev before his death ...
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and one day he died with fever...😊
Mohindar Handel HP SCHOOL ...
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MAAN & GEET force him a lot to do his...
geet visits mohindar sometimes & mohindar also come to visit the...😊😊
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Dadi leaves with MAANEET...
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<<<<< HOPE ALL QUECTIONS GET ANSWERED >>>>>

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.With lots of love Nelu😊😊

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

hey nelu me reading the ff

u completed it

I want u to write another ff

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

that was nice yaar...Maan took his revenge for touching his life, Geet, but at the same time he didn't flow in his emotions and killed him...glad that Geet hold him in time...nice closure to Dev's character👍🏼

Loved the end yaar...me enjoyed it😊