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Shilalipi

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Posted: 12 years ago

(If u see any similarities of scenes with other ffs to mine, pls tell me, i will change it)

(Please 😊,No offense guys for using this banner, i first requested Shruthe to make this banner, bt some some reason i didn't use it then,so she posted it on her wall..& now when i am using it, i did ask Shruthe's permission first)

dil ki bekhudi jo Junoon ban gaya
jana mohabbat mein hai kitna nasha
agar ye ishq gunaah hai to gunaah karke mein dekhoon
teri mohabbat mein main zindegi tabah karke dekhoon
teri dil ki geherahioon me chain mera
ye PAAK GUNAAH karke to dekhu...

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Shilalipi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Prologue

Darkness...Darkness is all i can see around me...

Why is it so dark??

Oh!!..he he he..so funny! BHai & mommy are right! I am Sooo stupid...this darknes..is ...The Darkness of My Heart..

...It's so cold here,so damp, so suffocating...i don't like it here...

...I want mommy to hold me in her warm arms...WAIT!! She will not hold me...cause i am stupid..I am filthy...

...My mommy won't hold me..cause she...she...SHE HATES ME.

...Yes...EVEN PARENTS CAN HATE THEIR OWN CHILD...especially when they are unwanted...

...he he he so funny!! i actually heard my mommy & daddy talk ...i know..that i am mommy child, but not daddy's.

i know that I was result of mommy's cheating daddy...when he was out of town...i know...daddy let me & mommy stay cause daddy loves mommy...daddy is a good person...

bt mommy says everything is my fault..if i were not born...everything between mommy & daddy would have been fine...i guess mommy is right...i am the cause of their problems...

i wish...i wish...i was not born...janam lena...ye meri galti...nahi...ye meri GUNAAH hai...

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Shilalipi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Prologue- First page

Chapter 1- The day i met her

Chapter 2- Angels of her life

Chapter 3-The Lying Angel

Chapter 4-Sacrificed,for whom?

Chapter 5-Entry of the problem solver

Chapter 6- First step to recovery

Chapter 7- Hatred

Chapter 8- The ROSE Burns to Ashes

Chapter 9-The last strand

Chapter 10-Will you be my friend?

Chapter 11- Raha na Main Phir apne jaisa

Chapter 12- Who's the prettiest of them all

Chapter 13-Sunshine

Chapter 14- Dil...Sambhal Ja Zara..

Chapter 15--Dil kyun ye mera shor kare...

Chapter 16 - Yeh Laal Ishq

Chapter 17-The Bubble Bursts

Chapter 18- CHILDREN ARE NOT ANGELS OF GOD
Chapter 19- Last hug...Last touch of yours,that's all I want from time
Chapter 20- Kyun kisi ko wafa ke badle...wafa nahi milti
Chapter 21- And,in a Rainy day...We Meet Again
Chapter 22- Koi aur ho tum...
Chapter 23-Chup Gaye Badal
Chapter 24- Almost Human
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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was one fabulous prologue..very intriguing and hope to get such interesting chapters

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_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 12 years ago

Fantastic start ...👍🏼

Add me fr Pm pls ...

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Remya

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Posted: 12 years ago

congo for the new story..

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SweetestPari

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome emotional prologue...
Different concept yar... :-)
Waitinggg for the story to unfold :-)

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Zariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

ooohhh

nice n new concept do cntinue

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ahsaaspyarka

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey congrats for the new story...very emotional start but it was beautiful...waiting for more

dear please add me to your pm list😊😊

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Interesting prologue buddy.

Most probably its Geet's Pov,but where is she,why the place is dark and cold???
Is she mentally unstable or this is the ST of a new born???

Too many questions.

Pls update to answer.