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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
I pity Geet! She is a darling a perfect girl!
Hate her mother to core! She is not worth calling a mother!
I hope this teacher could bring some ray of hope in his student's life ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GEET HAS LOVELY FRIENDS
THEY ALL CARE FOR HER SO MUCH - ROHAN SEEMS TO BE IN LOVE WITH HER
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE:- For those who asked why MAAN DIDN'T CARRY GEET TO INFIRMARY- I didn't want portray him as some perverted teacher, who takes advantage of his student's vulnerable situation or vulnerable mentality. JUST IMAGINE< A TEACHER CARRYING THE HIS NOT SO CHILD STUDENT AT HIS FIRST DAY(yes age 15 means she is still a child, BUT a Girl's body starts to mature by that time).

I know my that my readers are sensible enough,bt still i again say don't be ROMANTICALLY INFLUENCED BY THIS(as it often happens). I guess due to shows like crime petrol most of u know that this kind of thing happens in real, & most of the time the former's intentions are ANYTHING BT GOOD. Afterall , all are not like the character maan, as DRASHTI said in one of her interview "people like him don't exist in real life".


Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 3-The Lying Angel

Flashback
Can u stand up??
she tried to stand up bt failed.
maan held her shoulder & lifted her with ease just as a mother lifts her baby from crib & he then made her stand.
can u walk ? he asked softly.
yes.
ok, lets go to infirmary, shall we..
she nodded, maan held her one hand for support & took her in infirmary.

****
Maan helped her to sit on the bed & bent down to examine her twisted ankle.
Then he stood up,can u tell me where the first aid box is? he asked gently.

Geet meekly & pointed the place,still not daring to speak,she was waiting for him to blast on her for assuming him as a student.
He applied the gel on her ankle & massaged slowly.
Is it paining?
N..n..na..nahi.
Hmm, which class are u in?
C..class...class VIII
O ho..u are a big BRAVE girl now.U can handle a little pain..now, can't u. He was actually trying to distract her,so that he can give her ankle the twist it needed..& he knew it will pain!!
What's ur name?
G..G..Geet.
Geet , hmm,nice name.I am Maan
W..wo..wo..
Hmmm,i am listening geet.
I...i..i..am sorry.
Sorry? for what?
Wo i thought u as a student na..

It's ok,u didn't say it intentionally,did u?
she nodded her head...so u will not punish me Sir?
No.Don't worry.I am not a monster. He said chuckling.
She smiled.
So tell me about ur school,he said..still massaging her ankle.

Geet started to tell about her school excitedly
& that's moment maan twisted her ankle to get rid of that twist.
She screamed in pain as maan again started to massage it.
U lied,she cried
U lied that u will not punish me. She cried more .
Geet..geet..i did not punish u. I treated ur twisted ankle,see it's all better.
She looked at him incredulously . He prompted her to stand...come on ..try to stand.
If i fall?
THEN I WILL HOLD U.
She slowly stepped down the bed.
It didn't pain anymore. She smiled broadly looking at maan still tears in Her eyes.

Maan stood with cross armed with an amusing smile, bt then his smile vanished.
Are why i didn't noticed it first.
He made geet sit & looked here & there. Then he almost ran to a certain direction & came back with a towel, & shoved the towel on her hand.
She looked at him blankly.
Wipe ur head, he ordered

She started to dab the towel on her head.
Maan looked at her as if she was an alien..
UFF!! aise to u will soon catch cold.Mujhe do..
she again looked at him blankly.
Aise kya dekh rahi ho , Towel mujhe do!
H..Ha, she gave the towel on his hand.

He took it & started to rub her head vigorously to get rid of the wetness of her scalp quickly.
Then he checked her temple.
Are, tumhe to abhi se hi thoda bukhar chad gaya. Ek kam karo,u lie down here, &...
he took out a paracetamol out of the first aid kit,
agar bukhar zyada ho jaye to take it ,ok?
Y..Yes.

The school bell rang indicating the starting of the first class . Ok..see u then.
He patted her head affectionately & turned towards the door.
W..wo..SIR..she called out.
Hmm,he turned back.

She lowered her head
I..I...I am sorry for thinking u as a student.
I told u it's ok, now take rest. he turned to the door.
SIR!
bolo geet.
U will not punish me na..
He sighed ..I promise geet, i will not punish u. He again turned to go.
W..W.. wo SIR
kya hai geet..he said defeatedly.
wo ..wo...meri class, principle...teacher...she couldn't form a word, out of shyness for her stupidity & also overwhelmed Maan's kindness.

It was her first time to experience the kindness of an elder other than the principle & pinki's parents.

BT maan understood her meaningless words & smiled.
Don't worry , i will tell the principle that u have a fever & thus taking rest,noone will scold u...ok..now TAKE REST.
he again turned to the door .
Wo SIR!.
Ab kya hai geet!!
wo..wo...wo..g..g..Good ..H..Ha..Have a Good day Sir, she said meekly bending her head down.
Maan Smiled Good day geet, now rest , i am getting late for my class.
He finally got out of the room...

smiling & thinking...Strange girl! Bt she is very sweet.



Present
So,that is what happened.
Yes, she told rohan still dazed,overwhelmed with maan's kindness.
Rohan did notice it.
Geet stay away from him
Why, he is so kind na.
No, he can be a pervert,kind people like that rarely exist & he may portray himself like that to get u.
BT..U are also sooo kind to me na.
Rohan blushed,bt maintained a stern face
Geet, pls understand, most of the time persons like this have bad intentions.
Like what? geet asked innocently.
Rohan sighed, U don't need to know that.
Bt he is our class teacher na. i can i avoid him?
Ok, u don't have to stay away like that, just tell me if he tries to touch u in wrong way.
ok.
****
Geet's mother was called to the school to take her home.
Her mother came & after talking with principle she took geet home.
All the way geet was very dreadful thinking of her mother's reaction when they reach home. Her mother was silent during the whole ride.
Her mother opened the door of the house & shoving her in locked the door behind.

WHAT THE HELL DO U WANT HUH!! KYA CHAHTI HAI TU??
Mamma, i..

CHUP!! She slapped geet hard . The force was so much that geet fell down. TUJHE SCHOOL ME JANE DENA HI CHAHIYE THA,LEKIN MUJHE KYA PATA THA KI TU SCHOOL ME JAKE SABKO YAHI JATAYEGI KE I DON"T TAKE CARE OF U! THAT I AM A BAD MOTHER!
mamma aisa nahi hai, kisiko maine kuch nahi kaha.

Ha..Tu to yahi bolegi..YAHI TO TERA PLAN HAI.BIMAR PADKE SABKE SAMNE MUJHE NICHA DEKHANA.TAKI SAB MUJHE KOSE,MUJHE DOSH DE.She slapped her again.

mamma, aisa kuch nahi hai, koi app ko na dosh dega. Mere hi laparwah hoke barish me bhigne ki wajah se mujhe thand lagi. Sab meri galti hai.

HA.SAB TERI GALTI HAI. SIRF TERI. AGAR TU NAHI HOTI TO MAIN MERE PATI AUR MERA BETA KHUSH HOTE. MANHUZ KAHIKI...AJ AGAR TU NA HOTI TO MAIN KHUSH HOTI, she said continuously slapping her haphazardly.
SAB TERI GALTI HAI , SAB TERI GALTI HAI, TERI GALTI.TERI GALTI...

Geet tried to protect herself by crossing her hand infront of her face
mammna i am sorry, i am sorry mamma,i am sorry, sorry,i am sorry mamma...



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Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
awesome update
haayee maan is caring for geet
nd geet first time experiencing love from some elder
poor she didn't get proper love from her parents
mistake was done by her mother nd geet is getting punish
geet thought maan will punished her
but he didn't bcoz he care for everyone
but when maan twisted geet ankle geet thought maan punished her
aur geet ek baar me nahi bol sakti thi
maan late ho gaya apni first class ke liye
toh princi to uski band bajaate na

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yeh rohan beech me kabab ki haddi toh nahi banega na
he was blushing with geet comments
nd geet mom how can she treat her daughter like this
nd geet have a brother too
want to know if he loves her or he is also like his mother

waiting for more
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
feeling so bad for geet...her mom is so selfish, how can she blame G for her stupidity 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Plz its request to update long part
Interest Ni baith tha reading small parts

Sorry by mistake I read below part
Awsome
Update
Feeling soo bad for Geet how her family is treating her
Update next soon
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
love maan caring
superb update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
MAAN TOOK CARE OF HER AND HELPED HER ANKLE
ROHAN IS RIGHT TO WARN HER AGAINST PERVERTED MEN, BUT HE DOESNT KNOW IT IS MAAN
GEET'S MOTHER IS AN ABUSIVE MOTHER WHO IS PUTTING THE BLAME OF HER MISTAKE ON GEET


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Posted: 12 years ago
MY MAANU IS SO NICE N TELL THAT ROHAN DARE HE SAY ANY BAD WORD 4 MY MAANU

FEELING HORRIBLY SAD 4 GEET
HOW HER MOTHER B SO CRUEL
IT WAS HER FAULT AGAR WO APNE HUBBY KO CHEAT NHI KRTI
BT SHJE TAKING HER ALL FRUSTRATION ON GEET GOSH SO MUCH HATE HER
WAITING 4NEXT

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