GUNAAH Thread 2 link given @ page 1

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Posted: 12 years ago
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(If u see any similarities of scenes with other ffs to mine, pls tell me, i will change it)



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dil ki bekhudi jo Junoon ban gaya
jana mohabbat mein hai kitna nasha
agar ye ishq gunaah hai to gunaah karke mein dekhoon
teri mohabbat mein main zindegi tabah karke dekhoon
teri dil ki geherahioon me chain mera
ye PAAK GUNAAH karke to dekhu...




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue
Darkness...Darkness is all i can see around me...
Why is it so dark??
Oh!!..he he he..so funny! BHai & mommy are right! I am Sooo stupid...this darknes..is ...The Darkness of My Heart..
...It's so cold here,so damp, so suffocating...i don't like it here...
...I want mommy to hold me in her warm arms...WAIT!! She will not hold me...cause i am stupid..I am filthy...
...My mommy won't hold me..cause she...she...SHE HATES ME.
...Yes...EVEN PARENTS CAN HATE THEIR OWN CHILD...especially when they are unwanted...
...he he he so funny!! i actually heard my mommy & daddy talk ...i know..that i am mommy child, but not daddy's.
i know that I was result of mommy's cheating daddy...when he was out of town...i know...daddy let me & mommy stay cause daddy loves mommy...daddy is a good person...
bt mommy says everything is my fault..if i were not born...everything between mommy & daddy would have been fine...i guess mommy is right...i am the cause of their problems...

i wish...i wish...i was not born...janam lena...ye meri galti...nahi...ye meri GUNAAH hai...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was one fabulous prologue..very intriguing and hope to get such interesting chapters
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Fantastic start ...👍🏼
Add me fr Pm pls ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo for the new story..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome emotional prologue...
Different concept yar... :-)
Waitinggg for the story to unfold :-)
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ooohhh
nice n new concept do cntinue
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hey congrats for the new story...very emotional start but it was beautiful...waiting for more

dear please add me to your pm list😊😊
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Interesting prologue buddy.

Most probably its Geet's Pov,but where is she,why the place is dark and cold???
Is she mentally unstable or this is the ST of a new born???

Too many questions.

Pls update to answer.

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