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Posted: 11 years ago
part 12
awesome...
poor Geet...
shes such a brilliant student but that witch spoiled everything for her...
hope Maan does something soon...
and seriously this Naintara and Sasha are good for nothing...
and Maan has caught her red handed...
and the party and the gifts Geet demanded for Rohan also was so nice...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update... i like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
poor NT😆
loved maan😉
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thanx fr pm
nice update
daadi was worried about rohan
rohan maan ko takkar dega
fabulous
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
nt she cheats her parents too!!!!!!!!!

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nice part
nt and her cheap tricks😡
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
NT TRIED TO IMPLICATE MAAN BUT ADI WAS SMART TO GET A RECORDER
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 13-Sunshine

Geet woke up & looked outside her window to see the sun...smiling brightly at her. The light breeze seemed as if dancing in happiness...just like her heart...It was the first time...she was happy one month in a row...& there was no interruption of sadness in it...Nor there will be...


Yesterday was so much fun...& so will be today...She smiled prettily taking in last warmth that lingered in her bedsheet. OH!!! She can't be late today!!! Today they were going for CAMPING!!!! SO FUN!!! She jumped out of the bed feeling so light & happy.

Good Morning Papa...she said with a bright smile.

GOOOD MORNING BEtA!!! Would you come for a morning walk with me today too??


Nahi papa!! You forgot!! Camping!!

AWWW!! Now papa will be sad & lonely for on week!!


Geet giggled cutely & hugged her father. I will be back in 3 days papa...

Hmmpp!! guess i can do nothing when you show that expression of yours! He sighed dramatically & patted her head...Then patted her back..Now GO GO GO!! Or i will cancel the trip...


PAPAAA!!! Geet wined...bt then ran o get ready for the trip...


******

The previous month was life changing for her. She didn't knew exactly why...her father came to her room & took her hands into him saying...


"You know & i know dear...that you were not born from me...That you were really not my child.."


Geet's eyes filled with tears.


Bt her father very lovingly had wiped her eyes with concern in his eyes.


"no no...GUDIA...it's not your fault...You know..i always tried to avoid you...thinking maybe i cannot bear the betrayal by...your mother & might behave badly with you..."


Geet cried more...now THIS TIME getting emotional..

"In my attempts to avoid you...i have missed the lovely person you have become ...that you are a sweetheart enough to make me forget my pain & betrayal.."


This time..Suraj's voice became heavy with tears...as a thin layer of tear surrounded his eyes...


"I know...i am not a nice daddy...no...i am not even a nice person...to ignore such a lovely bundle of joy like you..."


Geet nodded her head side to side..still crying ,while trying to say that it isn't true...


"Geet,i know i am a bad daddy...bt ..will you... will you give me a chance to amend my mistakes...will you permit me ...to become yours dad TRUly???"


Geet's eyes went wide...she stayed silent in shock...


"You won't?? " Suraj looked hurt .

"not that i blame you...it will only be natural for you to hate me" Suraj started to leave the room with heavy steps.


"Papa"

Suraj's feet stopped dead on it's track.

"Papa"

Suraj turned around as if tried to bask in...He saw geet smiling at him with tears in her eyes...did it really happen?? Did Geet really called him...

"Papa..won't you see my report card? I came First"

Suraj Almost ran to her & hugged her dearly.

"yes...papa will see your every report card & if you are bad at something,papa will help you."


"even Maths??"

"Umm...maybe papa should go buy icecreams for you & brij..."

"PAPA" Geet wined,you are running away from math!!!

Suraj scratched his head like a laddu chor..."eee...wo..main..i am a little bad with maths"

"PAPAAA!!!!"

Geet & suraj looked at one another...then bursted in laughter.


****


Suraj took his sip of hot coffee while relaxing . He didn't know that accepting Geet as his daughter would feel so...so...so natural,so Soothing...as if she was his own child...all thanks to that new teacher...Maan.

His thoughts drifted way to that very day...exactly one month before today...he was called for guardian teacher meeting for both Brij & Geet. After the day Geet had discovered the true relations Rina had decided that there was no need for "acting lovely" anymore,so naturally she refused to attend this meeting & SUraj went in her place.


After Brij's teacher's earblasting complains...it was time for Geet. Maan,being the homeroom teacher of class IX was the one to give away reports of the students to their parents.


He was at the last,leaving the room almost empty with only two people...Maan & Suraj.

He was surprised when maan went in & locked the closed door.


Why are you locking the door?

I want to talk to you about Geet & it's very personal.

Personal?? Suraj's mind went all over,thinking all the good-bad things...A teacher has to tell something so personal about a student that he had to LOCK THE DOOR!!! What could it be!!

Mr Suraj...you should give Geet more time & love. I know u have business to take care. Bt it's no excuse to neglect her. The way you are treating her right now...


YOU!! Stop thiS NONSENSE. WHAT DO YOU KNOW ABOUT US TO PREACH LIKE THAT. & WhAT DO YOU MEAN I AM TREATING HER BADLY!! MAINE KAVI USPE HAAT NAHI UTHAYA<USE NAHI DANTA...THEN WHAT IS THIS RUBBI


IT IS MY CONCERN WHEN I DISCOVER HER TRYING TO SUICIDE MR SURAJ! Maan also lost his cool. Ofcourse he couldn't tell him that he knew all about them. or he knew that how suraj had been avoiding the problems like a spineless human...bt he couldn't tell them...so he told him what he could tell.


2 weeks before,i was out for morning walk...when i saw her trying to commit suicide Mr Suraj...that was the day i took permission from you for her spending some hours at my house with dadi.


Ge...Geet...tried to...Suicide..>?!?!

Suraj couldn't even think of geet not being around him...That happy go lucky girl...always chirping around him whenever he was at home..calling him "papa" "papa"...

he didn't want to imagine a dead house without that sweet little girl.


Wo...Usse..kuch...

I don't know what exactly happened that day...that pushed her to the edge like that. Bt i warn you Mr. Suraj...if this happens again...

Suraj Exactly knew what had triggered this...that day...the TRUTH...

Maan noticed Suraj's shocked state...his gaze softened.

She will do that again,he said...Suraj's head snapped at his direction at this,terrified.

Bt she gets love...she won't do it again...EVER. She just wants love Mr Suraj.

Bt...you..i ...how can i...he stuttered in the verge of breaking down.

Why can't you? Maan asked .

You don't know any of the circumstances...Suraj said finally breaking down.

Are these circumstances greater than the fact that she is a lovely person? Are these reasons enough to overshadow the fact that this little girl does everything beyond her limit only to please her parents,only for a little love? Are these enough to ignore the pleadings of her to love her? Do these circumstances change the kind of person she is???


Suraj was dumbstruck by these tornado of questions...not because these questions were too many,bt because they were strong enough the break the barrier in his heart.


You know..Mr. Suraj...no circumstances can change the fact that you are lucky enough to have her as your daughter...no reasons are good enough to overshadow the fact that you are lucky that she has chosen YOU to call FATHER.


Just like that...the wall created in his heart was destroyed...the confusion which had tormented him for years was no more...the dilemma was no more...

He ran out of the room murmuring a brief thank you...,& he knew where to go...

All now felt perfect...Even Brij started to treat his sister more nicely when Suraj made him understand ...that he shouldn't treat his big sister like that...that all his mother was saying about Geet to him,were all WRONG..VERY WRONG.

****

Sasha,naintara ,Geet & pinki were in same tent. Obviously tent made ny Pinki & Geet with Yash's help while both of the phuljhariyan were too busy gossiping & ordering around while the teacher wasn't watching.


Wondering how NT got in class IX's camping trip? Well,Maan didn't blow that video up in big scale...instead,with Adi,Sam & Principle,they showed it to Nt's Parents,adding the fact that she didn't give exams.

NT's parents were recently busy with a BIG project so they didn't get time to supervise on their child & also they believed on her. Bt NT had proven that she was not worthy of that trust. Ofcourse they grounded her & stopped all her pocket money. Bt they requested to atleast be on class IX,the same class as previous year & not to demote her.

Bt after that incident all the failed students were given a fair chance to give a supplementary exam & prove themselves & surprisingly,sasha had passed!!!

****

CAMPING SIGHT

It was before the lunch,the students were entertaining themselves while the teachers were relaxing & taking with each other ,keeping eyes on the students.

Geet was chatting with pinki.

Geet,pinki...&...YASH..maan called Yash reluctantly,though he didn't himself know the cause of this reluctance.

Yes Maan sir?

Come on,i will show you guys a place.

What place sir?

Remember,i told you that the picnic would be in a place where you can scream all you can...

GEET,TU CHILLATI HAI!!!! Pinki & Yash screamed utterly shocked.

Ssshhh!! SSShHH!!! geet signaled them to keep quite.

Then looked at maan pouting,this is not fair sir,you promised that it would be a secret.

ACCHAAA!!! MAINE AISA KAHA THA!!! MUJHE TO YAAD HI NAHII!!!! Maan said dramatically.

Mujhe nahi jana,app Pinki aur yash ko le jao,geet said making a golgappa face.

Pinki & yash were watching this with their eyes almost coming out of sockets with a WIIIDElly opened mouth.

Geet!! & throwing tantrums!!!

Agar nahi chali to sack me bhar ke le jaunga. Because of your stupid promise i had to search for god knows how many days!!

Yash...pinki poked yash,still with her mouth hanging open...ye maan sir kya bol rahe hai!

Kya pata...latin ya GREEK hoga...mujhe nahi samaj aa raha hai!! Yash said equally dumbfounded.

Their happy go lucky ,mature,calm & collected maan sir...fighting like a child...that too with GEET!!!

They continued to watch the show standing on the side

Par app mujhe sack me bhar ke le jayenge,to wo Kidnaping hogi na?? Phir pakde gaye to papa aur ROHAN apke marenge...phir mat rona...ha

GEEET Maan gritted his teeth soundly.

Tum CHAL RAHO HO YA NAHI!

AA rahi hu,aa rahi hu...app apne DANT(TEETH) kyun tod rahe ho?

Maan rolled his eyes.

Chal pinki,chal yash.


Maan had already informed the other teachers about this, so they started walking...

Dekhan,gir mat jana,tum to girne ki queen ho. Maan teased

Main NAHI girungi. she retroted.

*THUD*

Ha wo to dikh raha hai...replacement jo dhund liya hai,chijo ke sath takrana...dekho,tumhara sir(head) to...pata nahi kisse bana hua hai,par in trees se aise BULLS ki tara mat takrana,unhe dard hota hai...he taunted while passing the bandage to her.

Aur..Aurr...apki to..apki to...

ha ha..bolo Geet ,main bohut handsome hu,smart hu...

DUSHT DANAV!!

Ha,,dusht danav hu...KYAAA!!!

Aur nahi to kya..dekha dekha..ankheen kaise danav ki tarha bade bade kar rahe hai!!!

Pinki & yash nodded their head with STILL open mouths!!!

The day sure was getting interesting!!!


PRECAP---- Special place FUN!!!!!Geet cooking & maan watching...bt there is a third person ,ready to spill it's collected venom

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. Awesome update
Loved geet n maan
Yash n pinky were getting shock by shock
Funny.
Geet called maan dd. love it
Edited by shah10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update


happy to see tat geet is finally getting the love tat she deserved and maan was the right person to tell suraj wat he was missing thought suraj loved geet but he was truly not giving her wat she wanted

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