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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
wow different concept
loved d way maanet met😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
hey great start...liked everyones introduction, geet is in real pain yet she wants to smile for everyone...god why a cutie pie like her is filled with only pain. hummm so maan is her teacher...it will be thrilling...wowww maan with very first look understood geet's pain...loved that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
excellent n lovely starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely starting...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
nice prologue, awesome update. you have introduced the characters very well. so maan is teacher here and geet is student in the same school.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
nice start
poor geet 😭
so maan is teacher
waiting for the next part


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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
that was a great start! do continue soon as its intriguing maan is a teacher and geet a student! whats there age??


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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

HAPPY MOTHERS' DAY
NOTE:- For those who didn't notice...is it possible to get full marks in LITERATURE such as bengali & hindi?? SO now think..geet's mom has beaten her cause she didn't get 100 in 100 in HINDI

Chapter 2- Angels of her life
Hey did u hear..sasha said to tasha..today a new teacher will join out school & i heard he will be khadus & all..
sacchi? tasha asked , bt how do u know? have u met him.
no,bt surely he will be more khadus than Khanna sir.
really!!
Hey guys u shouldn't say anything without knowing.
Hmp..Geet ki chamchi ab geet ki tarha bol rahi hai.pinki said.
Ha geet agar yaha hoti wo vi yahi bolti, aur isme galat kya hai? bolo..
sasha couldn't give reply to her immediately.

Naye teacher hamare class aa rahe hai, one boy suddenly screamed to the class.
The moments he entered the class gasped- all the boys & girls were awed by his charming persona.
hey guys..i am maan & from today i will take class of you guys in place of Ms suhana. Nice to meet u, he threw another charming smile towards his student.
***
dekha maine kaha tha na..ki he will the best teacher here, sasha said with attitude.
If it was another time, pinki would have fought with sasha for lying so openly,bt her mind was preoccupied with the thoughts of geet..Geet avi tak kyu nahi ayi?
wo to aisa kavi nahi karti.. i should go & check.
she ran to principle's office.
****

Geet YOU IDIOT!!! pinki screamed almost crying.
Geet you should have informed us through anyone we got mad searching for u...rohan said
Geet tried to say something .
Chup! mujhse to baat hii mat karna,yash said..
I am sorry,geet said lowering her eyes,she was so happy to get such friends..Pinki, yash & pinki's big bro Rohan. Well..he was two years older than them, bt some how they became friends , result of pinki' often dragging geet to their house.

are tu to senti ho gayi, chal koi baat nahi, are u ok?
ha bas pau me thodi moch aa gayi.
then how did you get here? i mean who bought u here? Rohan asked.

Geet went beetroot red at that question, how she was going to say her friends that she had mistaken a TEACHER for a STUDENT without seeing him!!
They are going to make fun of me, she thought...however, rohan did notice that,unlike the other two KIDS who were chirping among themselves.

Hey geet chodna wo sab, asli baat to yeh hai ki you are ok. Did u know that we have a new teacher in place of Ms. Suhana. Pinki said
Yeah is name is Maan Khuarana.yash said
U know geet,he is sooo tall & sooo good looking & charming...Sasha to pehle keh rahi thi...Geet went more red if it was possible , ROhan was loking at her with intense sceptical eyes, something has happened,warna geet aur itni chup!!

Waise tere pau me zyada dard to nahi hai na..
nahi wo actually teacher na..held my ankle & suddenly twisted with..u know, a crack sound came & my pain was gone.
They didn't ask her questions about who was this "HE" ,since they thought it was the old man attending Infirmary...
then u will be ok i guess.
yeah.
NO. rohan said.
kyu bhai?? pinki asked confused.
She got fever.
pinki checked geet OH MY GOD!! GEET!! U ARE BURNING!
no i am ok pinki.
NO YOU ARE NOT & YOU WILL NOT ATTEND SCHOOL UNTIL U ARE BETTER...rohan said in a commanding tone, which he seldom uses
Bt...
No buts geet bhai is right.
ok u rest we will go now..rohan literally dragged the other two out of there.

Then he came back in a few moments.
Geet tell me what happened?
she remained quiet.
Geet ..u have shared with me ALL the TRUTHS OF UR LIFE NA..

she nodded.
Then why are you not saying to me now?? Is it something serious??
No, actually i made a mistake...she described what happened in the field.
So u want to say that u mistook a teacher for a student!! rohan asked amused.
Yes,
So did he say he will punish u?
NO!! actually he helped me..
***
Flashback
Can u stand up??
she tried to stand up bt failed.
maan held her shoulder & lifted her with ease just as a mother lifts her baby from crib & he then made her stand.
can u walk ? he asked softly.
yes.
ok, lets go to infirmary, shall we..
she nodded, maan held her one hand for support & took her in infirmary.

Precap- MAAn & Geet in Infirmary😛

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Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
nice dear😊

sasha again😆4

geet tell to rohan about maan⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am regularly reading ur all FFs...so no point in ignoring it...I am huge Maan-Geet fan so I am everytime available to read...

so Maan took her to Infirmary...he let her walk didn't [ick her up...yeh galat baat hai...usse uthana chahiye tha...

Rohan is Pinky's big bro...is he attracted towards Geet or just friend...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
superb update...loved
waiting for next..cont soon
thanks for pm

happy mothers day u too😊

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