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AHEM AHEM..I can see that my yesterday's update was more than a volcano blasts on my poor poor reader's mind...Don't worry. today all your questions will be answered . So before reading the update, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE... See the things YOU MISUNDERSTOOD/FORGOT & I CLEARED.
So first on line..
Geet is 16. As at the start of the story she was 15 & recently was her 1st birthday party..well SHE IS 16!!!
To sdlife19...Yeah,I don't like this stupid Geet too. She is unreasonably stupid..no? As i have told before,all my characters exists in real life(with a bit of paint!It's a fic afterall!!). That means i have seen them somewhere. YES,i have seen a person so HUNGRY FOR LOVE,he/she is totally blind to the fact that people are using him/her in name of giving love.
Geet is not stupid like..BIMBOS...she just believed everyone's Good. Believes everyone. Hungry for love,loves everyone & wants to be loved passionately..for that she will do ANYTHING (maybe even drink poison)
To everyone, when Maan-Rohan convo happened none of them & even Geet imagined what horrible things would happen next.
To 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6,though i had fun reading ur comment,😆but Maan & Rohan were not fighting like bandar..s . As a mother i hope you can understand that at Geet's age,making manipulated decision which she would regret later is common. Rohan just declared her love openly & said Maan to protect Geet from bad things while he isn't there(Abroad study & well,geet definately has a lot of enemies,clear from the video incident). After that,let Geet decide what she wants,whom she wants. Cause then she would be mature enough to know what she really wants.
To TheSunShine,Yes marriage before 18 is illegal & geet knows it too. But here she willingly said yes to her mother's wish,so no question of leagal illigal
& about Suraj...when daughter is on the verge of dying due to starvation,mind doesn't really think like that..does it? Suraj did protested,didn't he?? But then Geet started starving herself to death,so he had to say yes.
About Maan>> Think like this,the girl you are thinking about proposing to,suddenly says that she loves someone so much that she can't wait till leagal age,let alone complition of studies,what would be your recations?? Shocked? Heartbroken? UNABLE TO THINK RATIONALLY?? That's happned to maan.
About Geet being unware of Rina's plan...YES SHE IS UNAWARE...SHe is the Girl who craves for love & Thinks EVERYONE is good. & the reason she said yes...
THINK ABOUT IT,a person,trying to comiting sucide INFRONT OF UR EYES... u will SAY & DO EVERYTHING to stop him/her,right? Here that person is Geet's MOTHER. & There is no way that a naive girl like geet could understand what is fake suicide,even adults sometimes get fooled,right?
To maneetarsh, It is NOT fishy when geet says she loves Dev. Remember... i mentioned in the update that Dev lives in the SAME AREA!!!
To spvd,do you think Nt ,sasha & gang will attend school for nxt few days?? & for the video incident,he doubted them,but had yet to collect proofs. & nope,Rohan has no idea cause he already went to abroad,giving Geet's zimedari to Maan till then...but if she is marrying with someone else,maan has no right on her...RIGHT?
& As i said to THESUNSHINE Maan was shocked heartbroken & what not by geet's PASSIONATE declaration of love for dev to THINK anything.
Chapter 21- And,in a Rainy day...We Meet Again
(ITLAlics are thoughts & dialogue.Rest are BOLD COMIC)
The alarm rang again,exactly at 4 AM. Not that it matters.I don't need an alarm to make me remember this time ..Since i could never fully asleep,specially THIS TIME... 4 AM...
I wonder...Should I call this an cursed hour or a blessed one?Geet thought as she laid on the bed staring at the ceiling without blinking.
The door knob moved. She closed her eyes immediately.Two figures stealthily entered the room. Geet knew who were they.
Pinki & Yash sat by her both side on the bed.
Ajkal she is sleeping. Pinki whispered a she lovingly smoothed Geet's hair.
Tumhara job dhundne wala idea accha tha. She will be now exhausted enough to sleep. Work mein aur kuch sochne ka waqt nahi milega.
Pata nahi kya sapne dekh rahi hogi? Yash whispered, She looks relaxed.
Agar koi sapne na dekhe...to hi accha hai. Pinki whimpered,trying not to cry
...Hamari Geet hi kyun Yash? She looked at her husband teary eyed.
Yash couldn't answer...instead he tried to gulp the pain rising in his throat.
Chalo pinki. Geet ko thodi der aur sone do.
He said as he took his silently crying wife out of the room closing the door behind.
The room became dark again.
Geet opened her eyes. She couldn't let them know that she still couldn't sleep properly. Specially not at this time.
Sorry yash,Sorry pinki...par tum dono ko aur pareshan nahi kar sakti...isiliye...
She started to think about how much she has changed in this past few years...the Geet who naively loved everyone,believed everyone...died.
Geet almost laughed at that word... BELIEVE!!! What a disgusting word...eh! Kisika sab kuch nichod ke le jati hai,phirbhi... this word never dies...
Like herself...after all the bitterness she tasted from this word...she still believed on people,but only a few that is...
Sirf kuch hi log hai...jinpar main yakin karti hoon...
Mere papa,jinse main kabhi mil nahi sakti...kyuki unka biswas maine khud thoda hai...
Yash aur pinki,jinhone mera tab saath diya jab mujhme kuch baki nahi tha...
...
AUR...
Geet Uth ja,tera aj interview hai na?? She saw pinki come in & scream.
The breakfast was uncomfortable like any normal day.
The house was silent with the three adults. The only noises were coming from Geet's mechanically biting on the toast.
Geet aj umbrella leke jana. Tv mein dekha rahe the mausam ka koi bharosa nahi hai aj. Yash tried to indulge her in some conversation
Geet's lips crooked upwards a little.
Mausam ko kyun kos rahe ho Yash? Wo apna kaam karti hai. Balki Insano pe bharosa bharii parta hai. I am not going to carry an umbrella for a stupid unreliable one prediction.Waise bhi,i am always right on NOT BELIEVING this tv report. SHe wiped her mouth.
I am done. Bye Pinki. Bye Yash.
As soon as she exited the door,pinki's face fell.
Ye kabtak chalega yash. Ye hamare sivaye kisi pe yakin nahi karti..aise to wo apne app ko...
Pinki,she is doing a lot better than when she came here,remember?
Pinki shuddered at that memory.
5 month ago,one morning at 6 am,their doorbell had rang. After opening the door,at first they were delighted to see their best friend with whom they had lost their connections after her marriage.
But then she closed the door & stripped of the overcoat which had covered her...She was covered with dried blood.
But there was no panic in her face. She had just asked like a robot...
Can you give me some cloths & tell me where the shower is??
They were horrified,not by just her appearance,but by her behaviour too.
After coming out of the shower she sat on the dining table with them & started to munch on the toast just like today...
They had asked...
G..Geet,why are you ...like this? With b..blood? & Where is ur husband?
He died in accident today. I survived.His family said that i was not needed. So i came here. She had said nonchalantly chewing the food in her mouth.
Yash & pinki were horrified to see how casually she had said this,without pausing or slowing movements for once!! Like as if she was talking on a normal topic on a normal day.
They had feared that she might be in shock...but whole day,she had acted just fine,asking about yash's mother's demise,which had somehow caused their early marriage at 20 years old..about yash getting his mom's job & what not!
But at night,they had discovered,what she endured that day...was more than her husband's death.
Out of concern pinki had decided to check on her at night...4 am to be exact.
The sight had scared her...a sight she didn't want to see again,nor did yash..but which they had to see for one month...
In that dark room...Geet was lying stiffly,looking at the celling,her whole body trembling ,her eyes wide with fear,her mouth open to scream...But without any noise...she had continued to look up in fear while trembling & her moth wide open...as if there was someone on top of her,making her unable to scream.
Only when Pinki ran to her & gathered her in her arms,her body relaxed...after a few minutes,she had asked...
Tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho???
Geet had refused to go to any physician or psychologist...but her attacks of 4 am had stopped after one month.
Maybe it was because of the loving comforting touch she got everytime during that moment...
Main use kabhi bhi waise nahi dekhna chahti yash!!
Main bhi nahi...par her husband died..wo na royi,na...
Kya karu yash!!Wo kuch aur batati bhi to nahi...pehle din jo bataya,uske baad,she didn't utter a word about what happened in those 5 years...
God know,kya hua tha ki hamari geet itni badal gayi...Ab wo sirf thik ho jaye...humko nahi,shayed koi use mil jaye jisse wo apna dard bant sake.
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Kya socha aur kya ho gaya!!! Maan sir pehle kitne acche aur friendly the!!! Humne socha tha ki after ki comes back from his long vacation,he would be more cool & more smiley!!! One employee sighed.
Aur uska ulta ho gaya!!! From the day he came back from his vacation...5 years ago,it's like another man came with maan sir's face. Another added.
Yeah! It's like he has turned into a heartless monster!
MAIN APP LOGO KO GOSSIP KE LIYE SALARY NAHI DETA. AGAR GOSSIP KARNA HI HAI TO GIVE ME YOUR RESIGNATION & GET OUT OF THE OFFICE! A thick voice thundered.
O..Ok Sir. Sorry Sir!
Maan went into his cabin & locked the door.
I KNOW DAMMIT!! I KNOW THAT I HAVE CHANGED!! I KNOW WITHOUT ANYONE TELLING ME THAT I HAVE NOW TURNED HEARTLESS.He leaned his head on his chair & closed his eyes
Kaise hoga...jabki dil uske pass reh gaya tha...kaise main banu wo insaan! Wo to uske pyaar mein kab ka mar gaya.
(i hope you remember this part)
Nature sometimes has weird ways...THAT DAY,i took her to that lake only to fulfill my promise & mark the end of my task...bt i didn't know that ... that will be the beginning of my heart's ruin. That day, I didn't know that i was celebrating my own destruction..
Maan smiled sadly...
I don't know why,bt THAT DAY...maybe to alarm me,Mother Nature had responded to her that way...
I wish Geet...I Wish...that i could get the signal & run away from you as soon as possible ...as far as possible...
Bt i didn't...
Instead,everyday,every hour,every minute,every second...i let my self be destroyed,without knowing...
Let my heart be captured like an innocent child...
Let fate destroy me in such a way that i forgot to smile again...
It wouldn't have happened,only if ...
I Had run away from you...
Only if i have run away before you could capture my heart ...
...
...
Geet...I . LOVED YOU...with all of me.
And now see...Kya kiya tumhare pyaar ne! You destroyed me Geet!!! Your LOVE destroyed me! MAAN SING KHURANA IS DEAD!!
His intercom rang! It was Adi's voice.
Sir you have a meeting at 3 pm in ###. You should leave for that now.
ok Adi. Get the car ready.
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Adi looked at his friend who was looking outside as the car skidded through Mumbai roads in the rain.
He knew that though his friend was clamly looking outside,his inside was anything but calm.Because,rain made him remember of HER.
The car came to a hault.
Kya hua bahadur? Yaha nahi aur thoda samne wo raha office,waha gari rukwao. Adi said
Sabji Gadi kharab ho gayi hai . Age nahi ja sakti.
Maan threw a threatening glare at the driver & came out of the car. Adi & the drive followed him with the umbrella.
I hate rain. Maan muttered as he started to walk.
He stopped when he had bumped into someone...
Adi knew what maan would do,for 5 years,every rainy day...he would do the same thing.
If he saw any girl on ground in rain ,he would run to help them,...in hope,maybe...just maybe, she would be HER.
As expected...Adi saw Maan go towards that direction...he followed.
I am sorry. He said to that Girl.
No it's ok,i was not looking infront of me...she looked up after collecting the files.
Maan's world stopped,he could only hear the sound of the rain & see the drenched girl infront of him.
Geet....he whispered.
(ANY SIMILARITY IN SCENE NOT INTENDED. IF THERE IS,CONTACT ME FIRST)
PRECAP- Meeting after years,one broken,one burned...how will they react?? (UPDATING TERI BAHOON MEIN TOMORROW)
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