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Posted: 11 years ago
part 13
awesome...
oh wow Suraj accepted Geet and is professing his love openly...
Geet is finally getting love...
and Maan made the man realize this and Brij too is somewhat good with Geet...
what about that woman?
Maan and Geet's fight is funny...
who is watching them?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
so glad that suraj finally ccepted geet as his daughter
geet only wanted her parents love

and maan has become a kid with geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful part.

Its awesome that Suraj accepted Geet as his daughter.And d camping war seally fun.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Finally geet is getting love from her father
Brij too showing concern :)
Maan is sooo genius yaar :D
Nt promoted!! :O
Well loved the argument of maaneet :P
Lolzz yash n pinky :P
Becharas ko kitna shock lag raha hai one after one :P
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Posted: 11 years ago

if u want pms for this ff,then add TIRTAS in your buddy list.

TIRTAS-http://www.india-forums.com/member_profile.asp?PF=726088

IF THERE IS ANY SIMILARITY IN SCENE,TELL ME ,I WOULD BE HAPPY TO CHANGE

Chapter 14- Dil...Sambhal Ja Zara..
(Sorry for tha late guys,i wanted to find THE PERFECT place which maan is going to show to geet & the place had to be quite & beautiful YET not TOO INTIMATE,i was trying for days...& MAYBE ..I THINK i got the one,please do forgive me if you think the place look too intimate. & ZEBA thank you dear for trying to search for me. PLEASE do tell me if the LoCATION looks inappropriate in the situations & relation MAAn-Geet are in NOW)

Sir hum kaha ja rahe hai? Yash asked.
You guys will see,actually your friend here looked very eager to scream & nearly had made me deaf screaming near my ears all the time... i thought i HAVE to save my ears,so i found this place where she could scream all she wants without making anyone deaf!
By now yash & Pinki were tired of opening & closing their mouths like fish all the time cause of one after one surprises...so they chose to leave open their mouth.

Sir main chillati nahi hu. Geet sulked.
Accha?? Then who was making me & my poor dadima deaf that day by screaming?
App ..app,...MUJHE NAHI JANA..
AA...see,here she is screaming.
Sir,are you sure that she is our geet,not some alien kidnapped our cute geet & left a clone of her?? Pinki asked.

PINKIII!!! Geet smacked her.
Ouch !!kya hai! Shock bhi tu de rahi hai aur marr bhi?/ This is not fair??
Sir sir...
Yes yash
I know,she is not geet,maybe some atma has possessed her,or do you think she is a chudail transformed herself into geet's face.
YASSHHH!!

Hmmm,i think yash,you have a point...maybe she is not geet,she is some...
Chudail,yash suggested.
No...more stronger something yash,afterall chudail can't be out on daylights!
Point Sir! Yash said looking thoughtful.
Ha...mujhe pata hai,pinki said.
Bolo..
Medusa,u know sir,that sneak heads wali...

Geet dropped her bag & started to literally & physically throw tantrum irritated at her friends' & teacher's teasing...
She made a cry face,mujhe nahi jana tum logo ke sath,main yahi baithi rahungi.
Dekhlo geet,today we have a great menu. maan teased more.
MUJHE NAHI JANA KAHI,APP LOGO BOHUT BURE HO,MUJHE CHUDAIL <MEDUSA ...AUR AUR..PATA NAHI KYA KYA KEH RAHE HO...HAMESHA MERA MAZAK UDATE HO...angry tears gathered in her eyes.

Maan smiled,that's exactly what he had wanted to see,her expressing her feeling,throwing tantrums like normal kids... this little explosion was needed for her to release all the anxiety & stress caused by the sudden changes in her life. It was needed for her to become truely adjusted in her new life.
Pinki & yash looked at Maan,
Maan signaled them to go to her & they happily obliged.
Geet,dekh hum to mazak kar rahe the.Pinki said
Geet sniffed,sacchi.
Ha baba sacchi. Yash tu bol na.
Main kya bolu,plan tha maan sir ka,aur ...
KYA!! Geet looked at Maan,he abruptly looked another way trying not to smile.

S..I...RRR....Geet looked accusingly at maan.
Kya? maan tried to look innocent,thought he couldn't wipe off the smug smile from his face.
Main wapas ja rahi hu. Mujhe nahi dekhna kuch bhi.
Ha sir,we also made geet cry listening to you ,Yash also threw an accusing glance to maan.
Pinki tried to say something similar to that,bt maan stopped her.
Stop pinki,before u start too...Accha baba, I am sorry,bt at least see that place,i am sure u guys will love that place.

par wo kaha hai,yeh to jungle mein ek chote se raste mein hum kabse chal rahe hai
A few feet more...
Ok.
Lekin agar wo place accha nahi laga to you have to buy us dairy milk. yash said.
Ok. But yash ,do you really like chocolate? I thought you hated it.
Not for me,for PINKI..
...
...
Yash blushed bt tried to maintain straight face
& & ...GEET
Maan smiled knowingly & shrugged his shoulders.
Bada wala dena sir geet added sniffing her now red nose.
Ok,ok,ab chale,or we will be late.
..
*****

Geet pushed the bruch away to reveal lush green medow. She was walking while looking down as she didn't want to fall again. So that lush green piece of land only adored by soft green grasses was the first thing she saw.

But when she raised her eyes from the ground...the beauty of the view struck her heart...
(if you want to know about the place,as far as i know it's in

Munnar ,kerala. I got this in the name of MUNNAR LAKE,bt in

some place they were showing same place from different angle

calling it ECHO POINT,so i am a little confused. But this is in

MUNNAR that's for sure.Search google typing MUNNAR LAKE & the first pic would be this😊- forgive me if i am wrong anywhere,i do not mean ANY disrespect)


The view was breath taking ...so silent,so beautiful,so gentle...as if it was Mother Nature herself with all her love,care,beauty & kindness. She felt as if the place was drawing her,calling her to become one with nature,to become a part of it...

She breathed as carefully she could,as if trying not to pollute the place with her breath...The chirping of Birds & sounds of insects were the only thing she could here,not that they disturbed the quiet of the place...instead turned the place into an open Church,a Temple,A Masjid...with the sounds as it's prayer song.

Her leg gave out with the magnitude of the sheer beauty of the view. She sat down & looked on dumbfounded at the lake that stretched far beyond her sight...

Not only geet,Yash & Pinki became silent looking at the serene view.

Geet,maan tapped on her shoulder.
Will you not scream?
Geet nodded her head.
No? Why?
This place...she whispered...i can't ruin this place's beauty.
Maan laughed softly.
You know...Mother Nature is more Gracious than you think geet. She will be very willing to take up your pent up emotions & relieve you from it. She will be very willing to talk to you.
Sacchi?
Maan didn't answer it in yes or no...he just smiled & said... TRY IT.

Geet stood up & went near the lake...drew her breath & Screamed.
MY NAME IS GEET ....

...
...
GEEt GEET GEET...that is what echoed in that bog silent lake.

APP SE MILKE MUJHE BOHUT ACCHA LAGA,she screamed referring to Mother Nature

Accha laga..Accha laga..Accha laga..

Geet's eyes teared up,she didn't know why...
I AM VERY HAPPY
...
...
HappY HAPPY HAPPY...echoed in the area,as if Mother Nature was herself celebrating her happiness.

Maan smiled looking at her ...My work is almost finished...he whispered to himself,bt felt empty as soon as he remembered that...

He didn't know why...he brushed off his thoughts & urged Pinki & Yash to follow Geet.

YASH & PINKI ARE MY BEST FRIENDS.
...
BEST FRIENDS...BEST FRIENDS...BEST FRIENDS...
...

...
The more her words echoed,the more she got excited like a child,her smile widened & screamed more,now joined by Yash & Pinki.

Geet ,Yash,Pinki,it's time to return,or we would be late for lunch.

Ok Sir. Yash & Pinki returned reluctantly to him,while geet still stood near the lake.
Geet,masti time over. RETurN nOW. Maan ordered geet as little sternly.
Giving freedom to kids was ok,bt not too much freedom should be given that they take everything & everyone for granted.

Geet turned to maan & pleaded
Ayi maan sir,bas last bar.
She has such shine in her eyes that he could not say no to him, Oh GOD!! When i was weak to these PUPPY DOG LOOKS!! He thought
Ok.
She turned to the lake again & for the last time,screamed..

THANK YOU MAAN SIR.THANK YOU!!!
...


******


Nature sometimes has weird ways...THAT DAY,i took her to that lake only to fulfill my promise & mark the end of my task...bt i didn't know that ... that will be the beginning of my heart's ruin. That day, I didn't know that i was celebrating my own destruction..
Maan smiled sadly...
I don't know why,bt THAT DAY...maybe to alarm me,Mother Nature had responded to her that way...

*****

THANK YOU MAAN SIR.THANK YOU!!
...
...
...Thank You Maan.....Thank You Maan...Thank You Maan ..echoed the place.

****

I wish Geet...I Wish...that i could get the signal & run away from you as soon as possible ...as far as possible...
Bt i didn't...
Instead,everyday,every hour,every minute,every second...i let my self be destroyed,without knowing...

Let my heart be captured like an innocent child...

Let fate destroy me in such a way that i forgot to smile again...

It wouldn't have happened,only if ...

I Had run away from you...

Only if i have run away before you could capture my heart ...


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Geet...I ...

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Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update and the place was superb yaar..

looks like u too so much of trouble in it..

but loved the way geet is getting open now.. as she needed to be
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
geet was so happy n d credit goes to Maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing
Now she is free from stress
Poor maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
all teasing geet
n she finally got angry like all
she screamed n her voice ecoed the place
she was feeling happy
but maans heart has lost in her..
superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...👏 👏...Geet is happy......All are teasing her...😛...feeling bad 4 Maan...😔...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

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