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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
maan wants geet to resign
maan behaving rude with geet😡
but at the same time his love and care can b seen😉
pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.. interesting to c how Geet will survive with all odds
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh this man is hell bent in thworing her away
but 100% sure he cont do that still huh

wow geet is such a gem here uski real life usko bahut kuch seekha diya

she is not normal geet any more

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 23
nice...
so i was right...
those 2 witches are working with Maan...
poor Geet...
and Maan he has become a sadist...
and he has started hurting her so much as if she doesnt have enough on her plate...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u post the link when u update in this thread dear?
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Posted: 11 years ago
ghosh!! woh dono chudaile bhi KC me hai!!!!!!
pehle unn dono ne geet ki kaafi insult ki thi now i think geet unka band bajane waali hai coz she is no more what she used to be before
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the part but disapprove Maan's ways
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting😭
pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

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if u want pms for this ff,then add TIRTAS in your buddy list.

Hey guys,thanks for responding to my ff well. But you misunderstood a little. Maan was keeping an eye on both sasha & nt even after he left school & then gave them jobs in his company so that he could keep an eye on them always & be sure that wherever geet is,she is atleast safe from these two.
Chapter 24- Almost Human...

Hey did you hear? Nt & sasha are coming back from Pune. One of the girl employee said.
Really? Oh no!!! Come on yaar ! Thodi din hi to aaram mila tha! Ab phir se shuru ho jayegi dono.
Yaar ek baat ,how can they badmouth us? I mean i know that they are in higher position. But that doesn't mean that they can order us,whenever maan sir is not around. Koi complain kyun nahi karta? Ye uski company thodi hai!!! Another employee cried out in frustration.

Shayed uski hii company hai.
Matlab?
Tujhe nahi pata, Maan sir kept that two chudails here on job as architect. Hai na...tujhe to pata hai ki sirf the best ko hi KC mein rakha jata hai. Par despite of their good marks on result sheet,they are the worst architect ever. Unhone itne bekar kaam kiye hai ,itni galtiya ki hai kii in dono ko abhi tak to kaam se nikal dena chahiye tha...par...

So you are assuming,maan sir is keeping Nt & her chamchi because he might like Nt?
Yes.
So...that means he will marry her? The employee shuddered.
Yes, & Nt bhi aisa hi sochti hai. isiliye hii to aisa rudely behave karti hai..jaisi wo yaha ki malkin ho.another girl told bleakly.

Par yaar agar aisa hua to hamara kya hoga? Jo bhi ho,Maan sir hume bina waja nahi dante. He is always in bad mood & it's easy to anger him...but not once he has done anything without any reason,but this Nt,she screams at even dresssing style, to wearing glasses. Sirf adi sir ko kuch nahi bol sakte wo ...aur sirf adi sir ke hi waja se, hum "chasmish" ki job bach gayi! Ye bhi koi reason hai bhala? Abhi se ye haal hai,pata nahi shadi ke baad kya hoga!

Ha yaar! & that sasha, to uski chamchi hai hi,taunting queen! Usko yaha na hoke fashion critic ka job karna chahiye tha!!

Par ek baat bata,galtii na hote hue bhi naukri se nikal de,aisa maan sir nahi hai. Phir kaise glasses pehne employees ki job jane wali thi?

You are right. Maan sir will never do anything so low. Par untak ye details reach kare tab na!! Nt is a very manipulative talker & big fat lier...agar adi sir bech mein na aatein toh...

Accha Sameera mam bhi to hai! Wo kitni acchi hai.Wo to unki bachpaan ki dost hai. Maan sir ka unse shadi karne ka koi chance nahi hai?

The other employee sighed dejectedly. Agar hota to achha hota,par she is already engaged with Adi sir. They love each other.

Ok..let this bitter subject go. Did you guys hear that Maan sir's new secretary came?
Ha...

bet lagani hai?
Kiski bet?
Kis baat pe bet laga rahe ho tumlog? Others employees jumped in too.

Maan sir ki nayi secretary pe.
Oh!! Wo nayi wali? Wo to one month probetion period pe yaha hai. Agar kaam accha laga to wo permanent kar lenge.

Tune use dekha?
Nahi yaar,maine suna . I didn't have any chance. She came here at 9 am & tab se maan sir ke pass wale secretary ke room mein kaam kar rahi hai. Waha jake usse mil bhi nahi sakta,bilkul maan sir ke pass mein cabin hai. Wo dekh lenge aur mujhe kaccha kha jayenge!

Hmp! Kaam kar rahi hai ya 1st day impression!

Dekhte hai,to kya bolta hai,kitne dino ki bet? Jo jitega usko sab Rs.1000 denge.

Mera one day ka bet...
6 days...
1 week...
2 days...
4 days...

Permanent... Adi commented as he passed the eager employees with his face buried in a file with a serious expression,but still failing to hide a little bit amusement.

All the employees got silent for a moment.

Then one spoke.
Ye adi sir pakka harenge. ...So..your bets....the young employee's voice stuck in his throat as the door of the secretary's office opened & the lady in question came out.

Calm,elegant,proud...all became silent looking at the girl,who exited out of that secretary room in pure white collar neck full length salwar.

She just exuded an air of calm strength,which silently screamed that she can take whatever is hurdled on her gracefully & will overcome it .

She didn't even spare a glance towards to entire staff while all the eyes were on her. She gracefully moved towards the xerox machine & copied some papers & went back into the cabin shutting the door behind her softly.

yaar... I am changing my bet,one of the employee said still dazed.

She will be here permanently...


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Accha Nt,ajtak tumne aisa dekha? Ye aj office ke logo ko kya ho gya hai!

Pata nahi. Par jarur koi gadbad hai. Warna ye aise itne concentration ,apna kaam kar rahe hai,jabki MK inhe nahi dekh rahe hai...! Sasha...pata lagao. Nt headed to her cabin.


Hey! Nalini! Where did you get that dress! It's so awesome! Sasha said.
Nalini looked up from her computer screen & smiled.
Sacchi.
Yes,tumhe bohut suit kar raha hai...jaise tum ho,third class..sasha said with a smirk.
Nalini's face darkened. But she didn't argue with her as always. Instead she looked back & started working at her computer saying...

Let my work decide from which class do i belong.

Sasha was gobsmacked. She had intended to directly ask nalini about the change in the office staffs,but couldn't resist a taunt...& as usual she expected an argument & as usual,she would have complained about it to Nt,who would have obviously taken her side,humiliating Nalini further.

But what reply could she give considering Nalini actually didn't taunt or argue with her,but still virtually placed a tight slap on her face!!!

Ye achanak itna change!! She manage to say...Kiska asar hai!!

The new secretary.
Oh ho!! She advised you to be so rude?
No,actually...we couldn't even talk to her. When maan sir was out for an hour...we went to talk to her...'She had just smiled & said...

"Pehle kaam kar lete hai,phir aaram se baat kar lenge."

What's her name?
Don't know.
She was so rude to all & you are praising her?
We thought so too at first . But actually she was not being Rude...just being professional.Infact ... Nalini recalled their meeting with Geet.

...

...

Pehle kaam kar lete hai,phir aaram se baat kar lenge. Hai na?
All were angry for being so rude. They were going out of her cabin thinking "ok we also don't want to talk to a rude person like her."

Uh,Mahesh sir. Rukiye,ye apke accounts wale files,lonawala wale,ye hai kanci nagar ka,ye...ye sare sort out kar diye hai,Ye lijiye. She handed the heaps of neatly organised file to the astonished older male.
Kamal sir,ye rahe apke #@#@ files. Sab ke list inme hai. Kuch mil nahi rahe the na. Wo actually archive mein the,old files ke sath.
Nalini maam,ye apke saath clients ki meetings ki details . Including their likes & dislikes,their budget,area location...area description...I also gave the details of the two meetings you will have with maan sir for discussing all minor projects.

Simi maam . Yaha par sare contractors ki list & details hai. Unki pay...

After her long list ended & she was finished giving all stuffs sorted files & cds,she looked at the silent astonished office stuff infront of her.
Umm...office ke baad mein humlog ek dusre ko introduce kare? She said with a smile.

...
Tumhara matlab hai she sorted everyone's work & made it easy?!!
Yes.
Hmm,dekhte hai. Accha...suno, Wo dekhne mein kaisi hai?
Nalini finally removed her eyes from her computer screen & said with a smile...
Breathtaking...
Sasha went to Nt to report it to her. Afterall,only then they both go & harass the secretary so that she would leave the job. They have been doing it from ages...so that Maan doesn't have a chance to fall in love with anyone.


Dekhte hai kitni hoshiyaar hai yenayi ladki . Nt said with contempt as she swung open the door of Geet's cabin...They were Flabbergasted to see Geet.

Specially Nt. Cause she knew about Maan's feelings for her almost from the start...just didn't know how deep it was. Now that she was grown up & had understood how much power ,position & money Maan has including his greek god looks...she had planned to woo him to marry her.

But if Geet was here...it was not possible & if she looked as breathtaking as this in just a simple white salwar.

Oh..Geet. Kaisi ho? Sasha asked in a not so friendly tone.
Maan was aware that the two devils had entered Geet's cabin. But he said nothing,but instead silently watched the show through the blind.

Geet was going to answer her,when Nt interupted .
Ye sab chodo Sasha. Pata nahi that we have to maintain here a strictly professional relation hai na?She asked looking at Geet
Yes mam. Geet answered.
Geet looked really busy with all thw works handled to her by Maan.
If she doesn't finish it...Nt thought evily knowing the consequences.
Good that you know it. Now bring me a cup of coffee to my cabin. I will be waiting. She turned to exit the cabin,when Geet's voice stopped her.

Sorry mam. I can't bring your coffee.
Nt whipped around. How dare you!What do you mean?
I can't bring coffee to you.
You are a secretary . Don't be so impolite.
I am not being impolite mam. Geet spoke calmly... I am Maan sir's secretary. So i will do only his work.
Huh!! Big talks hai na? Mujhe mat sikhao kya karna chahiye. Aur tumne to baki logo ki madat ki hai...Sirf mere bari mein hi...

You are wrong mam. I didn't help them. What i did was for maan sir. If i give them sorted lists. They will work faster,ultimately helping Sir.
Phirbhi,ek secretary ko refreshments lana,resturent book karna,ye sab kaam bhi karne parte hai pata hai na? So bringing coffee to me comes under your work. Bring it to my cabin. Nt turned to go back.
But again she heard Geet's voice.
I am sorry mam. You are right. Bringing coffee does comes under my work.
Nt smirked triumphantly
Geet continued ....But bringing coffee to YOU doesn NOT come under my work. Only sir can order me this.
Maan burst into laugh hearing Nt's scream & her red face...
ARRRGGHH!!! TUMHE MAIN DEKH LUNGI GEEET!!!!
he had laughed like this after ages...He was being almost human after ages...

Precap- Office Next day...some naughty😛,some haughty🤢
Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update dear
yeh sasha aur NT apne kaam se kaam nahi rakh sakti poore office aisa koi bhi nahi hai jo inhe ike karta ho but phir bhi madam aisa baneg jaise poori duniya inki hai
i love the positive reaction all gave for geet
pehe sab log bet laga rahe the ki she wil not stay in office for more then 1 week but abhi all want er to stay permanently unhe yeh nahi pata na ki future me toh wohi permanently yaha ki boss ki boss hone wali hai
wah geet kya jawab diya uss chudail ko even maan laughed hearing her reply after a long time
waiting for more nd want to know about geet past what happened that she changed so much
Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
me 2nd..nt and sasha dono ke juban ko lagam laga diya geet ne,maan laughd,magic of geet,waiting 4 next
Edited by trishtej - 11 years ago

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