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Posted: 11 years ago

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(If you find any scenes similar please tell me first,cause it would be purely unintentional)

Chapter 16- Yeh laal ishq


So Rohan...what are you doing here?? Maan said trying to not show his annoyance.

What are you doing SIR . Isn't this a kids party? But Rohan (if you don't remember he is pinki's big bro in same school & knew about geet's problems at home & also LOVES GeetTongue) though was VERY clear about his similar feelings.

A vain on maan's head almost popped.

Well well i am not the only adult here, am i? he said with a smile while gritting his teeth.

Principle & adi sir & sameera mam knows geet from years . So Geet ke first birthday party mein aana unko banta hai. Par apka kya kaam Mr NEWCOMER.


ARRRGGHH!!! This guy!!!! He always gets on my nerves!!!

Hey Rohan!! Geet came to them.

Kya kar rahe ho?

Kuch nahi wo maan sir se kuch puch raha hoon.


Are!! Main to bhool hi gayi,mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana tha.

Kya?

Ummm..kya...kya...KYA HAI ?? MUjhe kyun puch rahe ho.

GEEET!

Well that's Geet for you. She surely managed to tell a bunch of lies about her mother & things related to them,maybe because she herself believed in those lies. But being a naive girl,she really sucked at lying about other things & Rohan knew that & so did Maan.


Seeing no other way she leaned on Rohan's ear to whisper in his ear sending a shiver down his spine & a VERY VERY VERY strong feeling of anger (umm,maybe more) to maan.


Are buddhu don't you know Sameera mam & Maan sir like each other,so give them some time together na...

Rohan looked at Geet's smiling face. Sure she was the girl he liked. But for now,she looked like an total airhead with her "i know secret smile".

Is she really that airhead to see what's infront of her??? How the hell can she say that when it's clear that Adi sir & sameera mam likes each other & Maan sir... Oh well!!!!


DON'T YOU THINK THAT WHISPERING INFRONT OF A TEACHER IS BAD MANNERS??? Maan said irritated .

Sorry sir. Geet apologized sincerely.

& Also geet take two steps forward please.

Why?

DO IT.

Geet took two steps forward without any further argument.


Ye distance thik hai...

Huh?? Geet titled her head on one side utterly confused.

Ahem. I mean...uh...HA!! You were standing on dirt.

Sacchi? Wo ye garden mein hai na...isiliye wo pata nahi tha itne log ho jayenge. Isiliye papa ne bola ki bahar party rakhte hai.

Hmmm...

waise wow sir,apki aankhe to kamal ki hai. Yaha lights aa rahi hai,par corner mein hone ki waja se thoda kam...par apne grass mein dirt hai ye bhi dekh liya!!! Wow sir.

Though Rohan knew that the "dirt " Maan was referring to was Him. Maan said it cause Geet was standing too close to him...but it seemed that today smart Geet crossed all level of airheadedness with flying colours!!!


Ye Geet bhi na...Rohan mumbled.

Kuch kaha tumne Rohan?

Accha Geet what are you eating here?

Ye Brij wala birthday cake hai ,chocolate.

Oh,looks yummy.

Hai na?? Ruko,i will get some for you.

Wait. Don't bring another one.

Kyun?

Dekho,if you bring it & then i don't like it...then it would be a waste na??

Wo to hai.

SO let me TASTE FROM YOUR PLATE. If i like it,then you can serve me another fresh piece.

Par ye to mera jhota hai na?

to kya hua? You share tiffin with Yash & pinki ,right? & waise bhi i am using a different fork.

To thik hai.

Rohan glanced at maan whose face was now beetroot red & sent a almost not noticeable smirk.

to maan as he took a bite from geet half eaten cake .



Maan what are you doing here,come the principle is calling you. Sameera almost dragged him out of there.

Bye bye sir...Rohan waved cheekily at maan ...waise geet i like the cake but not too much,so we can share this piece hai na?? he added applying the last bit of mirchi from his stock for today.

Ok... Geet said innocently not understanding anything.

*****

It was late night, a few days after Geet's birthday party .As these three friends didn't get much time, now Adi & Sameera were staying over at maan's place.

Maan ,you are acting weird these days.

WHAT WEIRD. Maan almost barked still angry.

See,you are barking. Adi added.

I am NOT BARKING.

You are...sameera said.


They glared at each other for some moments...then they burst into laughter.

Accha ye chor,tu bata aur kitne din ye chalega? Adi asked.

Kya?? Maan asked confused.

For how long will you continue to be teacher? I mean isn't your mission accomplished?

Yeah Maan ur work finished wayyy long. So what are you still doing here?Wasn't your mission to make her family situation better? So what are you waiting for?

I know that my work is done here ,but still i have to watch for a little bit until i am sure.

So i long you take to be SURE Maan? Don't you have other responsibilities?? Sameera asked a little rudely.

Adi knew that Sameera was being cynical of Maan's goofing around as she herself had to make sacrifices for her family in early age.. SO before the situation went worse,he wanted to fix it...so in hurry,he uttered the most unwelcomed words...


Kahi teri na jane ki waja ye to nahi ki tujhe Geet se Pyaar ho gaya hai??? Adi asked jokingly,expecting Maan to shrug it off casually..

But the blank look on his face made Adi's laugh silent.

K...kya baat kar raha hai. Tujhe a..aur koi mila nahi kya?? Main..Ge...uss choti ladki se kyun pyaar karne chale?? Duniya mein aur koi nahi hai kya?? Tu to janta hai na...ki mere aas paas kitni ladkiyaan ghoomti rehti hai?? To unke rehte why will I Lo...Like that KID?!!!??

Sameera became alarmed,as much as she was irritated with her friend's goofing around,she was still concerned for him.

Accha ye baat chor,tu ye bata...teri ye "DEAL"...of ur freedom in exchange for her happiness...isn't it a bit weird? I mean why did you except in the first place? Sameera asked with her heart hammering in fear...she didn't want her friend to be unhappy,but what she was fearing...if it was true...then...


Ha yaar,it's a really strange request you know?? Meddling in another person's family affair...then making them understand...one could get into serious problem for this. The Maan we know usually kept far from these type of deep emotional troubles...though you helped others before too... But you know it's a VAST difference...

Main...

Ha & the problems you helped with were almost always somehow economical...Sameera added

...I...

Bata na...why NOW???

...Main...

Tell na Maan?? Why NOW??

Did you have so much work pressure that you wanted to escape?

No,actually...

Then was your hobby of being teacher so important ? Even more than ur family that you could leave them alone??

Main..

Tell na...

Ha ,bata na?

Tu bata kyun nahi raha ,ki why did you accept this ridiculous request??

Was it some other reason???

Was it...

BECAUSE I LOVE GEET...Maan screamed.

...

...

...

But instantly he understood what he said...

I need fresh air. He mumbled & went outside.

****

Finally the truth is out ha...the truth which I even hid from myself...he thought as he silently stood in the terrace drenching in rain.

...How could i tell them that i was going to reject the request when i heard it for first time??

...How could i say that if i didn't saw her picture by accident,i wouldn't have accepted this deal in first place????

...

...

How could i accept it so easily that my heart fell for that girl the first time i saw her...even though i didn't realize it????


He looked at the dark sky & closed his eyes,feeling the rain drops as they tried to wash away his agony.


He took a deep breath...


Maybe it's time...TO LEAVE...


PRECAP - Can he finally leave?? Or Maybe ...


Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...⭐️...beautifully written......loved it...❤️...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
rohan is teasing maan n making him burn..
finally maan told his love to his friends..
geet still so innocent n dont know what rohan is talking..jalli..
will maan leave n go..
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow rohan sure are trying to make him jealous arent you
now thats not really good thing mate
well he had to test it right
wow he cant see her with anyone else
and we all know why thats the case
his friends were right for sure
why did he take that job
as he fell for her in first glance
and the more he stayed with her the more he fell for her
ahhh but she is still too young for him
so will he wont he finally leave
and if he does what does that mean for them
what about that NT i wonder
maybe it will be better for him to leave
before things get more complicated
which they already are
first he denied he feels for her but he soon confessed
oh boy i feel bad for him
but what can he do if he fell for her
cheers for pm
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
rohan to maan ko jalane ka pura plan banake aaya tha...
finally maan accepts that he loved geet...
he fell in love when he 1st saw her...
now maan wants to leave..
what will happen now??!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update

so finally he accepted and rohan.. yeah i really liked the way he was making maan angry and poor geet thinking maan and sameera likes each other
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan confession of love decide to leave oops
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Posted: 11 years ago
ROHAN AND MAAN WERE LIKE TWO DOGS FIGHTING OVER THE SAME BONE - GEET
GEET IS SUCH AN AIRHEAD - SHE CANT SEE WHAT IS IN FRONT OF HER
MAAN FINALLY ACCEPTED THAT HE LOVES GEET
WILL HE LEAVE HER
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Posted: 11 years ago
datz awesome
loved it
thanx fr d pm
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part... maan in lov with a very young geet...

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