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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...& geet's dialogue

"kya jab koi pyaar se sir (head) par hat bulata hai,to aisa lagta hai?" and

"pehli baar koi mere liye garma garam khana bana raha hai,wo bhi mere pasand ka!!"

made me emotional...& the maaneet part at the end is very funny...waiting for next update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
GEET WAS SO TOUCHED TO FINDTHAT SOMEBODY WAS WILLING TO MAKE HOT FOOD OF HER CHOICE FOR HER
AND SHE THOUGHTMAAN WAS A 9 YEAR OLD BOY
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww geet fel so sad for her
so much pain in such a small age😭
n she was going to suicide
thx god maanu came there n took her to his house
omg daddi is master piece eating maggie aww me too wanna eat NOW!!!
N geet bahu aww daddi gr8 i lv daddi n her sense of humor n behavior😆
she knew at geet n want her as her DIL ohh wow
lv the way daddi showered her lv on geet n geet feelig so warm with those being loved feelings
aww she was blushing saying abt her fav
n she thought daddi takng abt her some 9-10 old year pota🤣🤣🤣
n there maanu was cvhecking his software n talking with geet through SF omg it was all so hilarious🤣🤣🤣
i was literally rolling on the floor 🤣🤣🤣🤣
n danav teacher wonder wt will geet do seeing her danav infront of her
i lvd it so much🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part..oh poor geet 1st tim saw someone caring for her ..geet n maan convo was super funny..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful part filled with all the emotions-bravery of Maan,naughtynes,love and care of Dadi,pathos created by Geet's simple innocence,Maan's humour.I mean it was jam packed with everything.

Loved d part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesumly fab part...loved it...continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely updaate...
Poor geet...feel so sorry fr her...
Waiting fr next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
(If u see any similarities of scenes with other ffs to mine, pls tell me, i will change it)


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Chapter 11- Raha na Main Phir apne jaisa

(TODAY's UPDATE is VERY special for this ff,maybe u will realize why i am saying this after reading the update...i will explain in the next update😊)

Geet opened the curtain only to be shocked.

M..mm...mmm...

Ye bakhri ki tarha main main ky akar rahi ho? Maan said in fake anger.

S..sss...s...

Are!!! Ab kyun bolti band ho gayi? Ab tak to chapar chapar kar rahi thi...Aur main tumhe DANAV LAGTA HOON!!!

Geet's eyes went wide...she was HELL scared of what punishment he will give.

N..nnn...

Maan sensed it & made it a joke...

Pata hai tum jise DANAV keh rahi ho,ladkiyaan uspar marti hai. Waise kise keh raha hu,tum to LADKI HO HI NAHI.He said looking at her from corner of his eyes,smirking.

Dadi was shocked,cause as look conscious he was,if someone says something about his looks he would suck like a child & here he was teasing GEET!!!

Geet's mouth hung open...


Ap...

Kuch kaha tumne...he said dancing his eyebrows.

Ap Danav nahi ho.

Dekha,now you know my cha

AP DUSHT DANAV HO!!!!

...aarm "(charm" ,which was cut in half by Geet😆) He gaped at her...

Kya kaha tumne?

AP DUSHT DANAV HO,AP KO PATA THA KI AP BACCHE NAHI HAI

(ofcourse he knew,didn't he?!!😆 ) ,PHIRVI AP NATAK KAR RAHE THE! EK TEACHER AISA KARTEIN HAI KYA?????she screamed more loudly this time...

...

...I am SORRY

ANOTHER MIRACLE!!! DADi thought she would die out of happiness & shock today!

...


there was silence in the room.

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More silence...

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AAA!!!!!! Geet screamed.

Maan & dadi closed their ears quite amused.

Ab kyun chilla rahi ho?? I said Sorry.

NAHI ,MAIN APP PE NAHI CHILLA RAHI HU,MUJHE NAHI PATA THA KI CHILLANE KE BAAD ITNA ACCHA LAGTA HAI, geet said screaming , but THIS TIME...she didn't know that she was screaming...she looked very happy & excited,her eyes were glistening ,as if she had discovered something new!

Geet geet...he held her from both shoulders...

You are still screaming,

SACCHI (baby,u r still screaming😆)

Ha,bt you know na that we can hear you in your normal voice just fine.

PAR APP YE KYUN KEH RAHE HAI?? (oh dear,she was putting all her heart,OOPS,LUNGS in this case & energy so that Maan & dadi can hear her LOUD & clear😆)

Maan thought now his ears will burst with the overdose of geet's screaming,well,atleast dadi was in a safe distance & enjoying her show,with only popcorn missing in her hand...

Kyun ki,agar tum aise chilla ke baat karti rahi,to mera kaan phat jayega (my eardrums will tear.)

OH I AM SORRY (do i still need to tell you that she is STILL screaming??😆)

Geet...maan called her in a warning tone.

Oh,i am sorry.

It's ok....though maan said it,he was feeling like a CYCLONE just stopped dancing in his ears!

& Dadi,i am SURE THAT GEET IS PRETTY HUNGRY NOW,SO CAN YOU MAKE HER BREAKFAST, maan said ...NOPE,Not screaming😆,he just said that as usual...gritting his teeth.


Waise why are you screaming that much?

WO KYA HAI NA..

Geeet...

(Now ,seeing all the smileys,i feel like in this whole update ,till this part,i am laughing too much,bt it's upto you if it is as funny as i thought it is)

Oh ,i am sorry,wo kya hai na,this is the first time,mujhe gussa aya,aur main kisipe chillayi.

You mean you haven't screamed before?? Maan was surprised...cause...u know,after all,he IS our ANGRY YOUNG MAN!!!

Geet nodded looking down with a faint blush & shy smile

Ok,then i will take you guys to a place for tour where u can scream as much as you can.

Sacchi...nahi..par main nahi ja sakti hoon.

Kyun?

Main akele ..

Kha nahi jayunga tumhe,it's the school tour. The place was not decided,you actually helped me to select a palce. Thank you.

T..thank you?

Ha,tumne madat ki na...

Maine...Madat...kiya...??!!

Yes.Now you should concentrate on dadi's parantha, She makes really yummy paranthas. Bt zyada khaogi to moti ho jaogi..aise,he mimicked...

Geet laughed at this...laughed loudly & for the first time...so freely ...

Dadi came in with parantha,while munching one by herself.

Dadi ye kya,ap geet ke liye khana la rahi hai ya apne app ko serve kar rahi hai!! Maan said a little irritated.

Wo..Main,dadi tried to talk between her full mouth.

Hum TASTE kar rahe the.

Ha..wo mujhe dikh raha hai...kaise app taste kar rahi hai...Geet,dekha tumne,bilkul baccho jaisi harkatein hai in...ki...his words died in his mouth as he saw her staring at the prantha.

Kya hua geet?Dadi asked.

Nahi wo,kaise..thandi khane ki adat hai na (that was an understatement,what she got to eat was the joota of brij & leftover dishes of yesterday)

To koi baat nahi,main dikhati hoon.

She teared the paratha & dipped it in cool dahi ...

Ye aise ise tod ke chota sa piece dahi mein doobo ke aise..aaa..muhn mein dalte hai.

She fed her a piece lovingly.

Unknowingly Geet's eyes teared up & dadi knew why...

Main khila doon appko.

Geet nodded smilling.

*****

Maan was sitting on the same chair, in same position for past half an hour,with his hands on his cheek with a VERY bored expression.

How did this happen?? He asked himself.

For past half an hour,he was watching these two ladies infont of him, chatting,NO actually they were talking about his BAD TRAITS INFRONT OF HIM as dadi fed geet. He at first tried to glare at them to shut them up,bt then his eyes got tired of continuously glaring at them & he had to raise the white flag.

It was certainly a day of firsts today...firsts for Geet,firsts for Maan ...

He looked at her as she smiled, laughed ,made faces... didn't know why ,bt he felt fascinated & continued to look without thinking...

Dadi,ab mujhe chalna chahiye.

Kyun> Apke papa ne permission diya to hai.

Nahi,main aise,sir ke ghar meiin..unhe disturb hogi.

Well,then what should i say to pinki ,yash & Rohan?

You called them here??

Then what did you think that i would play ghar ghar with you?? He said arrogantly

YOu..You...DADI..dekhiyen na.,,she wined...for the first time.

MAAN...Dadi glared at him fakely

ok ok,i will play with you for a little bit until they come...

SACCHI!!

Bt noways i will play GHAR GHAR!! Computer games ho to bolo.

The rest of the day,they enjoyed games joined by others later ,with maan every now & then staring at geet as she laughed & enjoyed with her friends.

********

Nt ,kaisi ho?? Sasha chirped with over enthusiasm..

I missed you SOOO MUCH,waise what you bought for me from italy?

NT was the only daughter of a really wealthy family. She was what you call a bigdi hui shehzadi(princess)

Perfume from Dior babes..

WOW I LOVE YOU.

In this world,there are many kinds of friendship,some from heart,some from sharing same interests...& some were friends for ONLY ONE"S BENEFIT...

YOu know when you were on vacation that geet was getting all the attention from our new teacher.

Chill babes,we have class,don't ruin that by thinking about that low class chippo.

Bt NT,this new teacher..you HAVE TO SEE,He is REALLY HOT!!! & l tried to offer him EVERYTHING,tried all my signals for rising my marks & passing me,bt he ignored ALL!! & now i have to be stuck on class 8 & that geet is again 1st!!

That means the teacher is khadus.

NOPE!! He is very cool,bt he is that honest type. Waise you have to be in geet's class Nt. Cause though you were one year senior than us,you didn't take the exams,u jst went on a vacation in Italy.

OH Don't worry,what you couldn't do, i will do. That new teacher..i am sure he can't reject ME...THE NT!! She smirked

Precap- Just what you are thinking...maan nt amna samna!! & YES..that LAST bt not least CHUDAIL is NT.

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...👍🏼...Geet is so cute...😃...loved it...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
awe i luved this
bas maaneet ke aise scenes hi deti raho

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