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Posted: 11 years ago
Who did this jo bhi hai hope maan ushe achi tarah se sabak sekahe yash aur pinki ko kya hua vo dono to geet ke friends the na waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg such a sad update...
feeling sorry fr geet...
Hope things clear soon n the person responsible is caught...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg... U had given biggg shock of our life mimu...
M soo shockd.. :-O speechless...
Couldn't believe.. I mean everything was going so well..
Suddenly this shock... :-O
Who can do such work.. ?? Brij Nt or geet's mom ???
Poor geet... Feeling veryyy bad for her :-(
Now wat will happen to geet...
N geet MUd her frnds... They r angry but not her but on the person who made such stupid video... Arrrggg... Who could it b.. ???
N thank god .. U did not give double update yar...
Agar second update sath mein deti tho... Shock se mar hi jaate hum..
Needed time to digest this blast of urs...
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Posted: 11 years ago
What the!!! Who the hell did that???
At least I expected yash n pinky with her side :|
2nd bubble burst :O
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updates
finally maan has told his feeling that he loves geet
omg kisne kiya ye sab😲
eagerly waiitng for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
thats a shocker update😲
who can be that person due to which she faced so much humiliation?
please update next soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
seems like brij n nt did or her mom was involved in all this...
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 18- CHILDREN ARE NOT ANGELS OF GOD


(SORRY GUYS,I THOUGHT IN TWO UPDATES I COULD REACH WHERE I WANTED. BT IT'S BECOMEING TOO BIG. SO It's now three updates --with one more update,{super maaneet wala}...i will swirl your minds. By the way sorry for late update,got fever!)


"Nt you are awesome!!!! Sasha squealed in delight...Kaise kiya tumne ye!!! I mean wo video!!! I couldn't imagine that Geet was like that."

Nt smirked,"She ISN'T like that."

"Matlab?"

"I made the video with some help."

"So the video is totally made up????"

"No,But it's EDITED. Ofcourse with some help...!"

"Help!!!"

"Sashaaa..."Nt purred, "If you have money...you can buy ANY service you want. You know that."

"Ha...magar,uske ghar me..."

"I HIRED PEOPLE WHO ARE MORE SKILLED THAN PEOPLE IN PAPARAZI. They easily collected information about her & took video from geet's poorly guarded one house. It was pretty easy they said. Then some edited the videos to my liking. All i did was to pay them a little."

"So...You mean...all those were FAKE!!! Geet is innocent!!"

"I said EDITED,not FAKE. & yes Geet is innocent."

"Phir wo scene jaha her mom was blaming her for causing her pain??"

Nt laughed. "It's actually the other way around. GEET is the one who was treated badly by her mother until recently. Her mom got frustrated over her & started yelling that day. But ofcourse,when her dad came to know about that ,all of those yelling suddenly stopped."

"Then...that part when she was telling her brother to do her homework??"

Nt laughed more..."Actually it was GEET who was handing Brij's homework after reviewing it."

"To phir wo scene jaha uska bhai ro raha tha & she was standing beside him with a wooden scale?"


"Areee that was her mother who was biting her son with that scale. Geet stopped it & snatched the scale,then ofcourse Mother GEET was busy consoling his brother after her mother left the room. I cut the scene in such a perfect timing na!!!! " Nt smirked.


"Ok ..then what about the last picture?? That scandalous one??"

"Oh, THAT PICTURE!!!!! I give myself TOTAL credit for that picture you know!!! That party of Geet & Brij...do you remember??"

"Ha...to?"

"I spotted Geet with Rohan & Maan Sir. I thought maybe i could catch something interesting..." Nt smirked..." JUST AS I THOUGHT... Bechari geet!!! All she did was to lean near Rohan to whisper something which is TOTALLY innocent...but NOT WHEN THE PICTURE WAS TAKEN IN SUCH A SCANDALOUS WAY!!! " Nt laughed more.

Now Sasha was feeling a little bad. Ofcourse she wanted to look down on geet...But not like THIS.

"Uh...Nt? Why did you do something like this to Geet? As long as i know she has done nothing bad to you."

"Why ...you ask??? Hmmm... Let me see,two reasons actually. First NAINTARA RATHOD doesn't like to be compared with ANYONE!!! & everyone was sooo busy comparing me with HER!!!! " She stressed on the word "HER" as if something filthy

"& the second???"

"I know a certain someone,for whom i had to repeat my years!! For whom i had to face SUCH HUMILIATION!!!!! I wanted to hurt that person so badly. But when i searched about him...i knew that i couldn't even TOUCH him with all of my parent's power or money. So i figured what would hurt him the most..." Nt smiled evilly.


"You are saying that hurting GEET,would hurt that person so badly !!! Who IS HE!!!!???" Sasha asked incredulously,not really believing her.

""I will not tell you the name,but itna bata deti hoon...Believe me Sasha...more than ANYTHING in the world,THIS would hurt him most..." Nt smiled satisfied with her revenge.

*******
Now Mr & Mrs Suraj...will you explain what it is?
They were dumbstruck too after seeing the video. Suraj was totally in loss of what to say & Rina was thinking about her own.
Ofcourse she was not so stupid to do something knowingly. If that cursing scene & the beating scene was shown alone,everyone would have thought her as a bad mother!

It must have been in those days when Suraj started to love geet & i was frustrated & beat brij & yelled at Geet... But ofcourse when Suraj came to know about that he warned me to stay away in exchange of my freedom...Rina thought.

Mr Suraj!! Answer us please. Brij ...
Wo...wo homework ...i always do di's homework. Brij lied to save himself,not understanding what Geet have to go through for this lie.

Principle ,who knew that it was all wrong ,said controlling his anger...
Brij sach sach batana...waise bhi hum ek test lene wale hai ye dekhne kii tum sach bol rahe ho ya jhoot.
But principle,what is the need of the exam. All is clear. Geet always makes her brother do the homework. This test thing will frighten him. One of the teacher protested.
IS THAT ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY!! SAMEERA ALMOST SCREAMED. Oh! How she hoped Maan was here!
Mr. DAS YOU WANT TO SAY THAT GEET,WHO IS ALWAYS READY TO GIVE ANSWERS TO EVERY QUESTIONS,ASKED ANYWHERE...IS THE CHEATER & BRIJ WHO FAILS IN EVERY CLASS ONCE IS THE ONE HELPING HER HOMEWORK!!!!

BUT MAYBE HE DOES BAD BECAUSE HE HAS TO DO HER HOMEWORK FIRST!!! Mr DAS reasoned.

Oh really!!!! Then lets have a test of them both. It will be clear who is lying. Haina ? Or is it that you are afraid that truth will be out...that you pass Brij by cheating,just because he is your student & Geet refused to be ur student?

It's not like that. Mr Das protested,thinking that he would somehow pass the questions to brij

Brij,still being a kid became afraid & was forced to tell the truth... NAHI!!! Wo homeworks actually mere the. Di hamesha mera homework karti thi kyun ki mom ne kaha. Phir kuch din se wo di ko mera homework karne ko nahi bolti thi... Par di ne mujhe homeowork samjhaya aur correction bhi kiya tha...

Then...Mrs. Suraj???
I...i am sorry. I had fought Suraj & was angery so i yelled at geet. But apko pata hai no mother says them from heart.

& what about that picture with geet close to a boy? Mr das asked still trying to find a chance.

WE WERE THERE. Adi said ,his patience finally broken... It was Brij & Geet's brithday.

How do you know that this pic is from then?
Look at the picture closely Mr das!!! It has the signboard peeking in there.

Oh yes...i remember that! I was there also. Principle said. But i don't remember seeing something so...

THERE WAS NOTHING Principle SIR!!! Sameera said.

I was just infrontt of her. She was just whispering something to one of her friends...which is not wrong...Ofcourse,if Mr Das has problem with this also... Sam said sarcastically.

I assure you Mr Principle. My Geet is innocent. Someone played a disgusting prank with her...She can never do something so bad..Suraj finally spoke breaking out of the shock. He knew his daughter well.

Ofcourse. Now that it's solved. Geet,you can return to your class. We will try to find the person behind this...& Mr Das...I have to talk to you...

(I want to say that if i had used maan here as GEET's scandel rescuer then it would have a little too similar to SHINING MOON' YOU & ME ONE & ONE...I promised Maaneet scenes & i WILL give one,so intense to make you CRY. But on next update tomorrow,as this part became longer than i THOUGHT!!!! )


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Things just doesn't get sorted out by saying ok or sorry...Geet learned it the next day...HARD WAY.

The first thing she noticed when she entered the school was everyone whispering around her looking at her...knowing smirks...specially from boys... disgusted looks by girls...
Her desk was filled both outside with papers & writings with permanent ink..."wh**e","DISGUSTING","SHAMELESS","PEOPLE LIKE YOU SHOULD DIE","DID YOU GET FIRST BY GETTING LAID IN BED?"

"HOW MANY TEACHERS DID YOU SEDUCED??"

"I WOULD KILL MYSELF BEFORE HAVING A CHILD LIKE YOU"

These words haunted her. The teacher noticed those writings & made everything clear to the students...but still they wanted to believe what they WANTED to believe...so thought the papers & scribbling were no more...students would still point at her & talk.

She could have bear it all...if she had pinki & yash...but they didn't come to school since then...& from her call to their house...she knew why...

They didn't want to see her.

"Agar maan sir yaha hote,to wo meri problem aise chuu karke uda dete" she mumbled alone ...since no one will talk to her.

But then she noticed...maan was really absent for days...In all the chaos & suffering she failed to notice this...She became worried for him.

So mustering all her courage...she went to some girls.
Suno..tumhe pata hai kya ...ki maan sir kyun nahi aa rahe hai?

He is ill. Kyun??

Nahi...wo...tum sab mere sath chaloge unhe dekhne?? Sir hum log jab bimar padte hai tab hamari khabar lete hai na...to hume bhi chalna chahiye. Hai na...she uttered almost crying that someone was talking to her.

Nahi. Hum TUMHARE SAATH nahi jayenge.

Her shoulders slumped. She had expected this...but still...it HURT!!! But what could she do...no matter how many times she told them...no matter how many timed TEACHERS told them..their doubt was ever lasting. Maybe they wanted to doubt...wanted something juicy,& what can be more interesting than something like this about the SPOTLESS Ms. FIRST GIRL!!??

She turned around & started to go from there.

Nt came to the students Geet was talking to.
Hey !!!..what was that girl saying??
That bitch was saying that all of us should go together for home visit as maan sir ill. One boy spat
Hmp!!! As if i would go with her & spoil my name!!! another girl said

Nt thought a little,then smirked... I HAVE A PLAN.

****
Geet ruko ruko!!
She turned around & was happy to see those girls & boys from before.

We are sorry geet...we were thinking that we will go with you.
Sacchi??
Yes...Ofcourse. What are FRIENDS for!! They looked at each other & smirked unknown to geet.

PRECAP- A PLAN, A TRAP, A LOVER WITH MINDLESS DESIRE!!!!!
UPDATE TOMORROW PAKKA😃 WITH LOTS OF MAANEET MOMENT AS YOU CAN SEE FROM PRECAP😈
Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update

but really hate NT as she nt only spoiled geet life but somewhere she killed the innocent geet too and still she is not leaving her..

and pinki and yash this shows tat they were never her real frds.. but will she and maan again fall in NT trap as this will only lead to more dreadful for geet then maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
Now how will be NT exposed ???

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