My First Fanfic(Part Twenty One)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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So sorry ppl for the late update, it was my cousin's weddin and there was somethin wrong with my comp, so cudn't update it for so long.

Previous Parts

Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Part 7: /forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Part 10:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/343324/my-first-fanfic-part-ten

Part 11:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/354228/my-first-fanfic-part-eleven

Part 12:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/355250/my-first-fanfic-part-twelve

Part 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/356562/my-first-fanfic-part-thirteen

Part 14:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/367962/my-first-fanfic-part-fourteen

Part 15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/368671/my-first-fanfic-part-fifteen

Part 16:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/381849/my-first-fanfic-part-sixteen

Part 17:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/385740/my-first-fanfic-part-seventeen

Part 18:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/386366/my-first-fanfic-part-eighteen

Part 19:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/386630/my-first-fanfic-part-nineteen

Part 20:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/393317/my-first-fanfic-part-twenty

Scene 54

Bajaj residence, three days later

Rajeev was goin thru sharad's post mortem report, and as usal Prem and Mukti r sittin together and romancin. Namritha is sittin next to Rajeev and she was holdin his hand and playin with it. Sneha is talkin on the phone with Rajveer, both of them seems to have hit it off.
Suddenly, Rajeev looks up.
Rajeev:Prem?
Prem: Yup.
Rajeev: Did Sharad have any steel rode inserted in his hand?
Prem (thinks): Don't know. As far as I know, he doesn't. Why don't u ask Sneha?(Namritha gets up and go to call Sneha)Does the dead body have one?
Rajeev: Yeah.
Sneha comes with Namritha.
Sneha: Wht happend?
Rajeev:Did Sharad have a steel rode inserted in his hand?
Sneha thinks: No...why wht happend?
Rajeev:U sure ri8?
Sneha: As far as I know he hasn't. I will call up mama and find out.
Rajeev:And also ask her whether she knows any1 who got 1.
Sneha:ok
Sneha calls up Kamini and talks to her. After she keeps the phone.
Rajeev: Yeah?
Sneha:He doesn't have one. But their driver has one. Why wht happend?
Rajeev: oh my god.
Sneha understands, she asks slowly: He is not dead.
Rajeev: No. And it looks like he killed his driver, and tried to frame Mukti.
Sneha just goes inside. Prem follows her, and sees her sittin on her bed and cryin.
Prem goes and sit next her and put his hand around her.Sneha turns and keeps her head on his chest and cries.Prem just holds her and doesn't say anythin. After sometime Sneha stops cryin.
Sneha: I thought now I can move on in my life. But he is back and he is never gonna leave me.
Prem: No Sneha don't think like tht. He doesn't mean anythin to u. He betrayed u. In a way even I am responsible. If I can go back and change somethin in my life, then I wud have stood by u and Mukti. I know I can't do tht.(Prem eyes gets filled wih tears) U shud move on in life. I know u started to think abt ur future, but now I don't want u to go back, and be miserable for a guy who doesn't deserve u or ur love......U know wht we all want?
Sneha just looks at him.
Prem: We want u to marry Rajveer. (Sneha was abt to say somethin, but Prem continues)I know u r not ready, but he loves u and I know u like him, 'coz u guys have become gr8 friends in just 3 days and u r always on the phone talkin to him. He is a nice guy and we all like him. Even though he is a happy go lucky type, u deserve some1 like tht in ur life, 'coz u need some1 to make u smile, make u forget ur past......U know wht today mornin Ma said??she said tht after u met Rajveer, u r always happy, u r not moody and u becomin like the old Sneha. She was so happy today.
Sneha: We r just good friends.
Prem: He loves u, he told me tht and he doesn't want to rush u into anythin. He is willin to wait till u r ready. A guy who loves u so much tht he is willin to put his life on hold for u..... Don't let tht love go for a past which only gave u sadness.
Sneha smiles. Prem hugs her again.
Prem: I love u sister.
Sneha: I love u too (smiles)little brother.

After sometime Prem comes back to the hall. Sees Rajeev gettin ready to go somewhere.
Mukti: How is she?
Prem: She is fine now.
Prem looks at Rajeev.
Prem: Where r u goin?
Rajeev: To police station and then to court.
Prem: Even I am comin with u.
Rajeev: Okay.

Suddenly, Prerna,Bajaj, Anurag and Sam comes in.
Prerna:All the arrangements r done for the weddin. Now only shoppin is left. For tht u both have to come.(She realises tht all of them r kinda tensed)Wht happend?
Rajeev tells them everythin.
Rajeev:So I am goin to police station, I have to tell them, it is the driver who is killed and have to get charges on Prem removed and have to go to court and have some work there.
Anurag and Bajaj: We will also come.
Prem looks at Prerna: Ma, u stay here. Sneha might need u.
Prerna nods.
Prem: Ma, can u call u Kamini aunty and ask her whether she can come and give a statement in the police station?
Prerna: Yeah ok.
Rajeev: Will she do tht?
Prerna: Yeah, she will. She knows, to wht extend can Sharad go. She will surely help us.

Scene 55

Outside Police station.

Bajaj,Anurag,Prem and Rajeev r thankin Kamini for her help. After she leaves.
Rajeev: U all go back. Prem and I will come in a while.
Bajaj:Okay.


Much later Prem and Rajeev comes back home.
Bajaj: How did everythin go?
Rajeev: Yeah everythin is fine. All the charges r removed and they r lookin for Sharad.
Anurag:Where did u go after we left?
Suddenly Prem takes out a gun. Every1 gets shocked.
Prem: For self protection, since we have a psycho behind us.
Mukti gets tensed.
Prem: Don't worry. Its just incase anythin happens. Be4 tht Sharad will be caught.

After tht every1 sittin and talkin and they all r happy.Talkin abt Prem's and Mukti's weddin.
Mukti: U all r forgettin somethin.
Prem:What?
Mukti looks at Prerna:Didn't u promise Rajeev tht u will convince his parents for his weddin with Namritha.
Prerna: Yeah. We will be goin.
Rajeev: I am plannin to go back today, so y don't u all come with me.
Prem:y today?
Rajeev: I have lot of pendin works. I was in the middle of another case, when I came here.
Prem: So u can't stay till the weddin?
Rajeev: No....but i will come for the weddin.(he looks at Prerna)So comin with me?
Prerna: Yeah. All of us will come.....After all Namritha is my daughter.
Prem: But wht abt Mukti?
Prerna rolls her eyes: Yeah Prem, she is also my daughter. U r becomin so irritatin now.
Prem acts insulted: I didn't mean tht. Wht I meant is can she travel now? She is already tressed out with the case and the event.
Prerna: Yeah thts also true.
Prem: I will stay with Mukti here.
Prerna: U and Mukti alone???Here???No way.
Sneha: i will stay with them here.
Prerna: Yeah alrite.

After sometime, all of them gets ready to leave.
In Prem's room, Rajeev is packin and Prem is sittin with him.
Rajeev: Prem, I know a person, who is good in trackin down people, he is an ex-police officer, I will ask him to look for Sharad. Incase the cops can't find him.
Prem: Yeah thst a good idea.
Rajeev: I will call u if he finds somethin.
Prem: Yeah.

After every1 leaves, at night Mukti, Prem and Sneha r sittin together watchin tv. But actually Sneha is thinkin abt Rajveer. Prem and Mukti r romancin and playin kissin game, where if Prem kisses her on her cheeks, she also kisses him on his cheeks. And they keep gigglin.Suddenly the land phone rings and Prem picks it up.
Prem: Hello?
Some1 whispers from the otherside:Prem?
Prem:Yeah who is this?
Rajeev:This is Rajeev.
Prem: Why r u whisperin?I can't hear u properly.
Rajeev whispers: I found out where Sharad is?
Prem:Wht?where is he?
Rajeev: he is stayin at his beach house. I am standin outside, his house.
Prem screams:Wht???How did u get there?
Rajeev: I was abt to board the plane when I found out abt him, so i didn't go. I am goin in to get him.
Prem: R u crazy???he is dangerous. Just get out of there.
Rajeev: No he is leavin the country by a ship.So v have to stop him be4 tht.
Prem: Then wait for me. I am comin. Don't go in alone.
Rajeev: Okay.

Prem keeps the phone and sees tht Mukti and Sneha r tensed. He tells them everythin.Mukti and Sneha tries to stop him from goin.
Prem: No I have to go. Rajeev is in danger.
He gives them the gun.
Prem: Keep it with u guys. I will come back fast.
Mukti: But take the gun.
Prem: No I don't want to worry abt ur safety. Keep it. i will call the cops on my way.
Prem hugs both of them and leaves.


Prem is drivin, he was abt to call the cops, when the phone rings and he sees tht it is Rajeev.
Rajeev: Hey gr8 news. My parents agreed. u mother was abt to give a big bashan and all.
Prem: Wht the hell r u talkin abt???Where r u now?
Rajeev: In delhi. Whts up?
Prem realises it was a trap. he tells Rajeev everythin.
Prem turns the car.
Prem: I am on my way back. Mukti and Sneha r alone at home.
Rajeev: Yeah hurry. Call the cops.


At Bajaj Residence.
Some1 rings the bell and Sneha opens the door and sees Sharad.


Concludin part:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/412184/my-first-fanfic-concludin-part



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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank u so much for all the comments... really sorry for the late update, i will post the concludin part very soon.....and pls do comment
Edited by kuku_10 - 19 years ago
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omg..dat was juz fantastic!plz cont soon!
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nice work !! continue soon!!!
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wow, continue soon, i want to know what will happen. 👏
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wow please continue soon 😛
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wow!that was a really great part!continue sn!!
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FANTABULOUSE...I JUST LOVE READING UR WRITING! 👏
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😲 it was a trap 😲 😲 😲 sharard is
well continue soon!!!!
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I JUST LOVE READING UR Fanfic continue soon 👏

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