My First Fanfic(Concludin Part)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Part 7: /forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Part 10:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/343324/my-first-fanfic-part-ten

Part 11:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/354228/my-first-fanfic-part-eleven

Part 12:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/355250/my-first-fanfic-part-twelve

Part 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/356562/my-first-fanfic-part-thirteen

Part 14:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/367962/my-first-fanfic-part-fourteen

Part 15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/368671/my-first-fanfic-part-fifteen

Part 16:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/381849/my-first-fanfic-part-sixteen

Part 17:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/385740/my-first-fanfic-part-seventeen

Part 18:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/386366/my-first-fanfic-part-eighteen

Part 19:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/386630/my-first-fanfic-part-nineteen

Part 20:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/393317/my-first-fanfic-part-twenty

Part 21:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/406684/my-first-fanfic-part-twenty-one

Scene 56

Bajaj residence

Some1 rings the bell and Sneha opens the door. She sees Sharath standin there.
Sneha is shocked and she doesn't move. Sharath pushes her and gets inside and locks the door.

Mukti sees Sneha fallin down, and runs towards her, helps her get up and sees Sharath.
Mukti:Sharath?
Sharath slowly starts walkin towards Mukti and Sneha and takes out a gun from his pocket, and both of them keep goin back. They stop when they hits the wall, and Mukti remembers the gun Prem had given her and she takes the gun and points it at Sharath. Seein this Sharath starts laughin.
Sharath: U think tht u can kill me???
Mukti: If u come near me I will kill u.
Sharath goes near her and struggle with her and gets the gun from her, and keeps his gun in his pocket.
Sneha:Wht do u want Sharath???Y r u doin all this???
Sharath screams: 'coz u took away my freedom, u ruined my life, u send me to jail.
Sneha: U deserved tht, 'coz u raped Mukti.
Sharath: So a driver's daugther is more important to u than me????
Sneha gathers all her courage and replies: YES
Sharath gets even more angry.
Sharath: U both, ur 2 fathers, ur mother and Prem ruined my life. When I heard abt Prem was in love with u, I decided tht u both will never be together. Thts y I framed u in my murder case, but ur Prem saved u, and
traped me in my own game, by provin tht I am alive. So I decided tht I will kill u. (suddenly he smiles)Heard tht u r pregnant Mukti. First I will kill my dear wife, then we both will wait for Prem to come back, then when he comes back I will kill u, so tht he can watch u and his baby die and then I will kill Prem. Then tonight I will leave the country, no 1 will be able to catch me then. With three of u dead, ur Prerna,Mr Bajaj and Anurag Basu will live with the pain of ur death.
Mukti: U r insane!!!

Sharath takes out the gun to shoot Sneha. Suddenly
Prem shouts: SHARATH!!!
Sharath turns back and sees Prem there. He points the gun at Prem, but Mukti and Sneha tries to take the gun from him. Prem comes towards him and Sharath shoots Prem,Prem gets shot on his hand but he keeps walkin and starts fightin with him, and the gun falls down from Sharath's hand. They both keep fightin, and both falls down, Sharath falls down near Sneha and Mukti, he gets up and takes his gun from his pocket and points it at Sneha. Prem sees his gun lyin on the floor, he takes it and points it at Sharath.
Prem: Sharath!!!
Sharath turns back and sees Prem.
Prem: Drop ur gun. The cops r on their way, u can't escape now.
Sharath turns and points the gun at Mukti and starts walkin towards her.
Prem:Sharath stop!!!I said stop Sharath.
But Sharath keeps walkin. Prem shoots him. Sharath turns back and points the gun and Prem, but Prem shoots him again, Sharath falls down and die. Sneha and Mukti run towards Prem and hug him and starts cryin.
Prem: Its okay, everythin is over now. he can't hurt u again.

Scene 57

6 months later

Hospital

Prem is really tensed and keeps walkin up and down the corridor. Every1 else is there. And Rajveer and Rajeev r grinnin, Namritha and Sneha r a little tensed. Prerna, Mr Bajaj and Jeevan r also tensed. Anurag and Sam r also there, they also seems a little worried.

Prem: Why is it takin so long???? Its been like 4 hrs, since she is been inside.
Prerna: Sometimes it takes time.
Prem starts walkin again.
Bajaj and Anurag looks at each other and smiles.
Rajveer: I think Mukti is enjoyin the peace.
Prem: Wht peace???
Rajveer: U know, u r not there. She might be enjoyin the solitude now without u always runnin behind her sayin No Mukti don't do tht, don't walk so fast, don't run, don't move like tht, don't don't don't thts all u said in the last 6 months.
Prem: Lovin husbands r like tht.
Rajveer: Namritha is pregnant, we don't see Rajeev do all tht.
Prem gets irritated: If my sister didn't love u so much and if u were not gettin married to her next month, I swear on God, u wud have been dead long back.
Rajveer starts laughin.
Prem glares at him and starts walkin. Rajeev who is also little tensed abt Namritha delivery feels bad for Prem.
Rajeev: Just relax Prem, everythin will be fine.
Rajveer: Yeah, I know u r scared 'coz Mukti's mother also died in child birth.
Prem turns back and has shocked expression on his face:What????
Sneha kicks Rajveer.
Rajveer looks at Sneha and whispers:He didn't know????
Sneha just glares at him.
Prem: Wht did u say?
Rajveer: Nothin.
Prem:Mukti's mother died in child birth???
Rajveer: I don't know.
Prem: Then y did u say so???Who told u tht???
Rajveer: Sneha.
Prem: Sneha, did she really die???
Sneha: Yes. Mukti told us not to tell u. She didn't want u to worry abt it.
Prem: Thts it, I am goin in.
Prem walks towards the labour room and opens the door. One guy tries to stop him by tellin him tht he can't go in, Prem picks him up and throws him out.

Rajeev and Rajveer helps tht guy get up and says sorry.

After sometime, Prem comes out and he looks so tired, and he had two babies in both hands. Every1 sees Prem and goes towards him and Prem gives them a big smile. Prerna takes one baby and Bajaj takes the other baby.
Prerna: My god she is so beautiful.
Prem says with a proud smile: They look like Mukti.
Prerna: Howz Mukti??
Prem: She is fine.
Rajveer: Did u know tht u were gonna twins??
Prem: No. We told them we didn't want to know anythin, since we wanted to be suprised.
Every1 starts crowdin around the babies and Prem is left out.
Suddenly they hear a sound, THAP.
Rajveer: Whts tht sound???
Bajaj turns back and looks.
Mr Bajaj smiles: It looks like Prem is no Daddy cool.
Every1 turns and looks and sees Prem lyin on the floor.
They all burst out laughin.
Rajveer: Prem Bajaj swooned.

Scene 58

Next day mornin, in Mukti's hospital room.

After Mukti and babies had a good nights sleep, and Prem woke up from his faint, every1 had gathered in Mukti's room. Prem is sittin on Mukti's bed with one baby and Mukti with the other. Rajeev and Rajveer were teasin Prem abt his faint.
Prem: Lets see wht u guys do when u r goin to have a baby.
Rajeev: We know we will be tensed, but wht ever happens we won't faint.
Rajeev and Rajveer starts laughin.
Prem smiles and looks at his daughter.
Namritha: So did u decide on any names yet??
Mukti: We had one name, now we have to find another name.
Prem: Actually, I have two names.
Mukti: Wht names??
Prem looks at the baby he was holdin in his hands: Every1, this is Prerna Prem Bajaj, (he looks at Prerna) named after my mother.
Prerna smiles and her eyes r filled with tears. Every1 smiles.
Mukti: Wht is the other name???
Prem grins: She will be named after the one woman who taught me how to love, she is Basanti.
Every1 burst out laughin.
Mukti gets irritated: NO!!!
Prem: Y not????I like tht name.
Mukti: I don't like it. Another name.
Prem: Whts wrong with Basanti?
Mukti just glares at him.
Prem: Alrite. U have any other name???
Mukti: Hmmm....................How is Tamanna??
Prem: Yeah thts nice........ So every1 this is Tamanna Prem Bajaj.

After sometime.
Prerna: Lets all go home now. We will give them some privacy.
Bajaj: Yeah thts ri8.
They all kiss both the girls and leave.
Suddenly Rajeev opens the door and puts his head inside.
Rajeev: Prem did u see today's news paper??
Prem: No, why??
Rajeev: Here.(And he throws the paper at Prem).
Prem opens the paper and in the front page he sees his picture.
With the headin.
Board of Director of BTN and Major share holders in many profit makin companys, Prem Bajaj faints.

Mukti starts laughin. Prem smiles.
Prem looks at Mukti: I love u.
Mukti: I love u too.
Prem: They r so beautiful Mukti. Just like u.
Mukti smiles. Prem kisses Prerna and then Tamanna. He looks at Mukti and she smiles at him. With one baby in one hand he puts his other hand around Mukti and kisses her on her forehead.


Then they lived happily ever after.



**********THE END**********


Ppl i have started writin another fanfic in the Karam Apna Apna forum. If u r interested u can read it. Heres the link
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=486853&KW=sh ivgauri



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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwww i wanted you to continue!!
good job!!!!!!
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wooooooooowwwwwwwww great fiction I will miss that
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ppl pls do comment, and i want to thank all of u for all the wonderful comments u have given me. it really did encourage me to ri8. i am plannin to write another ff on pm which is a trangle love story with prem mukti and sharath, it is somewht like mujhse dosthi karogi. if u guys r interested do tell me. i will start it sometime next week. thank u so much for all ur comments.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww ๐Ÿ˜ณ i was smiling the whole time ๐Ÿ˜Š i love the prem fainting scene ๐Ÿ‘ it was too good
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mumma itney jaldi end kar di ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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start a new f ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ anfic on PM if u have got time. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww ๐Ÿ˜› luvly fan fic!!! sad it had 2 end ๐Ÿ˜ญ!!!
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kewll awesome fan fic
prem fainted lol that part was really funny

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