My First Fanfic ( Part Sixteen)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Previous Parts

Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Part 7: /forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Part 10:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=343 324

Part 11:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/354228/my-first-fanfic-part-eleven

Part 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/355250/my-first-fanfic-part-twelve

Part 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/356562/my-first-fanfic-part-thirteen

Part 14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/367962/my-first-fanfic-part-fourteen

Part 15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/368671/my-first-fanfic-part-fifteen

Scene 38

Prerna: What?Sharad escaped?
Mr Bajaj: Oh God! Everything was gettin back to normal.
Anurag: What will we do now?
Mr Bajaj: I don't think we should tell every1 abt it. They will get tensed now.
Prerna: Yeah thats right......... Mukti and Sneha was slowly gettin over the trauma.
Anurag: He might come for Sneha, since she sent him to jail. And also for Mukti.
Mr Bajaj: Prerna, ask Mukti to stay with us tonight, I will talk to Jeevan abt it.
Anurag: Yeah I think thats a very good idea.
Prerna: I will talk to her now.

Mukti was comin back inside when Prerna comes. Seeing her Mukti wipes her tears.
Prerna: Mukti, is everythin alrite?
Mukti: Yeah Choti Ma, everythin is fine.
Prerna: Then y r u cryin?
Mukti: I was not cryin, I accidently hit my eyes, so it started waterin, now it is fine.
Prerna: Okay, Mukti I want u to stay with us tonight.
Mukti: Why Choti Ma?
Prerna: Why? there shud be a reason for my daughter to stay with me?
Mukti: No, nothin like tht Choti Ma. I just asked..... I will come.


Scene 39

Bajaj residence.

Mukti is lyin in her bed and cryin. Some1 knocks on the door and she opens the door, and it is Namritha and Senha.

Namritha(excited): So what happened? Where is Prem? Didn't see him after the show.
Mukti: I don't know.
Sneha: Mukti, is everythin alrite?
Mukti starts crying.
Namritha: What happened Mukti?What did Prem say?
Mukti: I didn't talk to him.
Sneha: But why?
Mukti tells them wht happened.
Namritha: But he said he didn't hug her ri8?
Mukti:But I know it is not true.
Namritha: Mukti, I know how much he loves u. He cares for u so much.
Mukti: No he doesn't love me. He just wants his baby.
Sneha: Mukti, u r lettin ur past decide ur future. Don't do tht.
Namritha: Prem really loves u. Why don't u sleep now and we will talk to u in the mornin. Good night.

Scene 40

Bajaj residence next morning.

Every1 is in the dinning table eatin breakfast except for Prem. Mukti is very upset and Prerna and Bajaj r very tensed, they keep givin each other worried glances.Suddenly Birjukaka comes.
Birjukaka: Sir, Police have come.
Mr Bajaj: Police?
They all get up and go to the livin room.
Mr Bajaj: Wht is it Inspector?
Inspector: Who is Mukti?
Mukti: Me? What happend?
Inspector: You r under arrest.
Mr Bajaj: What?Is somethin wrong with u Inspector?
Prerna: For what?
Inspector: For Sharad Gupta's murder. He was stabbed and then his body was burnt.
Mr Bajaj: Then how do u know it was him?
Inspector: His watch was on the body.
Mr Bajaj: Just because his watch was there it can't be him.
Inspector: We found this near the body.
He shows Mutki's handbag and inside tht her ID card is there.
Inspector: Isn't this urs?
Mukti: Yes, but I didn't kill him.
Inspector: We found ur things and his watch. He was send to jail for rapin u right? So it adds up to u bein the killer and Sharad Gupta was murdered.
Prerna: She was with us last night.
Inspector: I am sorry, but we have to arrest her.
They take Mukti away and a very shocked Sneha keeps starin at Mukti.

Scene 41

Prem is walkin back to car and hears his phone ringin.He picks it up and it is Namritha.
Namritha: Prem, Where r u? I have been tryin to reach u for such a long time.
Prem: Wht is it?
Namritha: Where r u?
Prem:Panchmeshwar.
Namritha: What r u doin there?
Prem: This is where Mukti told me she loves me. So just came here and I am in the Mandir where she took me. I am in the same position she was.I had given up Namritha. She will never take me back. But I didn't do anythin wrong this time.
Namritha cud hear Prem's desperation in his voice.
Namritha: Prem u have to come back right now.
Prem: What happened?
Namritha: Mukti is in jail.
Prem: What????But for what?
Namritha: She is arrested for Sharad's murder, but she was with us last night.
Prem:But Sharad is in jail.
Namritha: No he escaped from jail.
Prem: Namritha, tell me wht happened?
Namritha tells him everythin.
Prem:I will come now.
He was abt to keep the phone, suddenly: Namritha?
Namritha: Yeah?
Prem: How is Sneha?
Namritha: She was kind of in a shocked state, there was no reaction at all for sometime. Later she broke down. She is at home now. Anurag uncle, Sam aunty and Tusshar is there with her. We r at the police station. We r tryin to find a lawyer, since Mahesh uncle is not here. They r interogatin her and v can't see her now.
Prem: I will come as soon as possible.
Namritha: Okay.

Scene 42

In the Police station.

Prem walks into the Police station. Prerna,Mr Bajaj, Namritha and Tusshar r there.
Prem:Inspector, I killed Sharad Gupta.

Next Part:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/385740/my-first-fanfic-part-seventeen

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Posted: 19 years ago
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sorry for the late update.... the story i had thought was a little bit similar to kzk be4 the leap.....where Prerna takes the blame for Sneha and I had thought of Prem takin the blame for Mukti. So thought of changin it, but cudn't think of somethin from where i had stopped, so decided to continue with wht i had thought.
pls do comment.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome yaar do continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 aww tht was gr8 👏 👏
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great like prem well really do that he could even save his own mother....but ur fanfiction is great
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg its awesome !!!! i love ur fanfic its great!!! u r a really nice writer i appriciate it dude!!! 👏 pllllllllllllllzz cont sooooon!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank u so much for the comments guys....will update soon.
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thats greattt plz cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 👏

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