My First Fanfic(Part Eighteen)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Previous Parts

Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Part 7: /forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Part 10:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=343 324

Part 11:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/354228/my-first-fanfic-part-eleven

Part 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/355250/my-first-fanfic-part-twelve

Part 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/356562/my-first-fanfic-part-thirteen

Part 14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/367962/my-first-fanfic-part-fourteen

Part 15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/368671/my-first-fanfic-part-fifteen

Part 16:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/381849/my-first-fanfic-part-sixteen

Part 17:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/385740/my-first-fanfic-part-seventeen

Scene 47

The Next day,Police Station

Rajeev walks in and goes to the inspector.
Rajeev: I am Prem Bajaj's lawyer. And I want to meet him.
Inspector takes him to a room.
Inspector: Wait here, we will bring him now.
After some time, they bring Prem and they go out and close the door.
Prem looks up and gets shocked.
Prem: Tum?
Rajeev: Rajeev Agarwal, I met u a few days back.
Prem angrily: Yeah, I remember.Wht do u want?
Rajeev kinda gets irritated with Prem's rude behaviour.
Rajeev: I just came by to ask u, whether u got any news of Mukti? Is she back?
Prem gets shocked: U came here to ask me tht?
Rajeev: Yeah can't get her out of my mind.
Prem: We r gettin married.
Rajeev: But since u r in jail, don't know how long u will be here, do u think she will wait for u?
Prem:Ofcourse, she loves me.
Prem turn back to go.
Rajeev: I met her.(Prem looks at him), She said she was never out of town and she is really shocked tht u lied to her,and asked me to tell u tht she doesn't want to see ur face again.
Prem suddenly feels like his world fallin apart.
Prem: No, she won't do tht to me. She loves me.
After seein Prem's expression Rajeev feels bad, and decides to tell him the truth.Prem is abt to go.
Rajeev: I am ur lawyer.
Prem: Kya?
Rajeev (He puts his hand forward to shake hands with Prem): Rajeev Agarwal.(Prem just looks at his hand)Ur lawyer(Prem keeps starin at his hand) Namritha's boyfriend.(Prem suddenly looks up and Rajeev smiles at him. Prem smiles and shake hands with him)
Prem: I can't understand anythin. U Namritha's boyfriend?
Rajeev tells him everythin.
Prem looks shocked: She fooled me. She made so jealous, tht I saw everythin in red.
Rajeev starts laughin.
Prem: And I thought she was my best friend, and she never told me abt u.
Rajeev:U had ur own problems, thts y.She always want people around her to be happy............ Now can we get back to the case.
Prem: Yeah sure,by the way howz Mukti?
Rajeev: She is fine, though cryin, even ur mother is.
Prem feels bad: Aur Sneha?
Rajeev: She is actin kinda weird accordin to Tusshar. She cried in the beginin, but then she kinda accepted everythin, and decided to move on in life and she says she is only worried abt u now.......... What I think is tht since she knows tht he is dead, she might have accepted tht fact, he is not a part of her life anymore and will never be. The only reason stoppin her from movin on was tht he was alive and he cud come back to her life anytime.
Prem nodes.
Rajeev:Okay now the case, fast we have to move the bail application. There is a good news by the way.
Prem: Wht is it?
Rajeev: The judge for this case is the same guy who was the judge for Mukti's case.
Prem:So how is tht a good news?
Rajeev: 'coz he knows who Sharath is and wht he is capable of doin and ur statement was one important reason for him goin to jail..... He knows u and Mukti thru the case and how Mukti fought for truth and u helped her in the end, so it will be easy for us to convice him tht u r innocent.
Prem: Okay.
Rajeev: Wht did u tell the cops?
Prem: Just tht I killed him and had her handbag with me and I accidently left it there.
Rajeev: Okay, I think I will be able to get u on bail today itself.
Prem: But how is tht possible? The case hasn't begun yet.
Rajeev: Thts okay, I will go to his house and talk to him.
Prem: Wht r u goin to tell him?
Rajeev: Okay, I have some doubts........... u have known Sharath for a long time ri8?
Prem:Yeah!!!
Rajeev: Does he any other enemies other than u guys?
Prem: As far as I know no.
Rajeev: Thought so. Then a guy who escapes from jail, is killed the same night and his body is burnt and coincidently his watch is left on his boday, half burnt along with Mukti's bag.
Prem gets confused: Wht r u tryin to say?
Rajeev: I am tryin to say tht wht if Sharath faked his death and left behind proofs so Mukti gets accused for his murder and go to jail and he gets his revenge and his freedom.............it won't be all tht dififcult to convice the judge tht he faked his death, since he has alredy done tht be4, and as long as it is not proved tht Sharath is the one who is dead, it is not right to make u a suspect and put u in jail.
Prem: Yeah wht abt my statement?
Rajeev: As far as I know Mukti had gone thru alot and the whole country witnessed it, and every1 have a lot sympathy for Mukti and to save ur love, u lied and plus she is pregnant and u strongly believe tht she was framed, I will manage it, u don't worry......By the way I didn't tell any1 at home tht I am tryin to get bail for u, since I didn't want to give them hope and ur bail gets rejected.
Prem: Yeah okay.
Rajeev: I will meet him and tell u wht happend, okay. Bye


Scene 48

Bajaj Residence


Every1(plus Anurag and Sam) is waitin anxiously for Rajeev to return.Mukti and Prerna r prayin. Namritha decides to call up Rajeev.
Namritha:Hello Jeev.
Rajeev: Yeah Nam, wht is it?
Namritha: Wht happend?Did u meet Prem? Where r u? Y r u takin so long?
Rajeev: I am comin back, I am almost there ,will tell u all wht happend, when I come there....Bye.
He keeps the phone.

Mukti: Kya hua?
Namritha: He said he has almost reached and he will tell us wht happend.


Suddenly the bell rings and Mukti runs and opens the door. It was Rajeev.
Mukti: Wht happend?Did u meet Prem?How is he?
Rajeev moves and Prem is standin behind him. Prem smiles at her, and Mukti stares at him
Mutki: Prem?
Prem comes forward and Mukti hugs him and starts cryin. When every1 heard Prem's name mentioned they all come forward and see him and they all run towards him and hugs him. All of them huggin Prem and Mukti from all sides. Rajeev just looks at them and smiles.

Later Prem is sittin and a cryin Prerna on his left and a cryin Mukti on his right and he is tryin to console both of them at the same time. Rajeev is again ignorin Namritha and she feels bad 'coz of tht and Rajeev tells every1 how he got Prem out.

Sneha gets shocked when he says tht there is a slight chance tht Sharath is alive. Prem gets up and sits next to her.And puts his hand on her back as a way to console her.
Prem: U alrite?
Sneha: Yeah I am fine.
She looks at him and have tears in her eyes.
Sneha: Its just tht I thought he died and I cud move on.
Prem: Sneha, u shud move on, even if he is alive u shud, u can't let him stop u from livin ur life, as long as u don't move on, u r lettin him win, u shud get ur life back. U know, God always give everythin to bad people, and he always keep testin the good people, but in the end always good wins over the bad............. and he is testin u, but he will always be with u, woh thumara saath kabhi nahi chodtha, kyunki,thumne sach keliye apne pyar ke kilaf lada, u r a very nice girl and there will be love and happiness in ur life, but for tht, u shud stop, blamin urself and move on in life.
Sneha just gives him a weird look.
Prem: I know wht u r thinkin, how come I am talkin abt God and good and bad and all tht ri8.
Sneha just nodes.
Prem: BASHAN!!!! Meri Ma ki Bashan!!! ( He turns and looks at Prerna) Yeah I listen when u lecture me, 'coz it was very difficult to ignore u tht time.

Sneha starts laughin and Prem also smiles and hugs her and Prerna smiles lookin at both of them.Bajaj and Anurag also smile seein them together.

Rajeev tells every1 tht they won't discuss the case today, and every1 agrees to it and they decide to talk abt other things. Rajeev tells every1 how he fooled Prem tht day and every1 starts laughin at Prem and tease him by talkin abt how he behaved when he thought Munna was Mukti's date. Prem decides to let them make fun of him, since Mukti was laughin and she had forgotten abt the case.

Its night and they all decide to go to bed.
Prerna: Prem, Rajeev is also sleepin in ur room.
Prem and Rajeev gets shocked.
Prem: Wht?
Prerna: Yesterday, since u were not here, he slept in ur room, as all the other rooms r occupied.
Prem gives him a weird look: Y can't he sleep on this couch?
Prerna: Prem he is our guest.
Prem: Okay let him sleep with Namritha.
Rajeev's face lits up when he hears tht: I don't mind.
Prerna: I mind!!! He can't sleep with her.
Prem:I have a gr8 idea.
Prerna: What?
Prem: Let Mukti sleep with me and he can sleep in her room.
Prerna starts glarin at Prem.
Rajeev signs: Looks like its both of us then.
They all go to their room.

Scene 49

Prem's room

Rajeev and Prem r lyin in the bed together. They both r lookin on ceilin and lyin.
Rajeev: When r u gettin married?
Prem gets excited when he hears abt marriage: Very soon.
Rajeev: Even me, ur parents promised me tht they will talk to my parents.
Prem: Thts gr8, I am sure they will be able to convice them.
Rajeev: When did u realise tht u were in love with Mukti?
Prem: After I found she is pregnant, but I have always loved her, was just too stubborn to understand it. And u?
Rajeev: Do u believe in love at first sight?
Prem thinks abt it 4 sometime: Yeah, actually I do.......... Love can happen to any1 anytime......... for some at first meetin, for some at tenth meetin... Y do u ask?
Rajeev: Even I believe in love at first sight. My grandfather saw my grandmother in the road and decided tht she was the 1 for him, they got married and lived together till he died. My father met my mother at party and he fell in love with her. And they r pretty happy. And I met Namritha at a party and fell for her there, but was pretty difficult convincin her.
Prem smiles: She is a nice girl.
Rajeev: Yeah I know, ur Mukti is also very nice, she loves u alot.
Prem smiles even broadily: I know............. me goin to sleep now, didn't sleep last night.

Suddenly Rajeev gets an idea.
Rajeev: How can u sleep here with me, when u know tht Mukti is in the same house? I am not gettin any sleep, all I can think abt is tht Namritha is there down the hall.
Prem: I am tryin not to think abt tht.
Rajeev: Y?
Prem: 'coz next to there room is my mother's room.
Rajeev: She is sleepin.
Prem: When I do somethin wrong, the first ones to find tht out is my mother or Mukti.
Rajeev: If ur mother sees u wht will she do?
Prem: Woh lecture doongi.
Rajeev: Thts it?
Prem: Thts it? She never lectured u, so u don't know.
Rajeev: If she catches us also I will save u, I am a lawyer I can handle any1.
Prem: My mother is not any1. She can take Hitler single handed............Look if u want u go sees Namritha, I am not comin.
Rajeev: Tht means u don't love Mukti as much as I love her.
Prem gets irritated when he hears tht: Alrite lets go.

Prem and Rajeev r walkin like thieves, Prem is walkin in the front and Rajeev is followin him. When Prem reaches in front of Mukti's room, he starts to call out her name silently.
Suddenly Rajeev puts his cell down and it made alot of noise since it was night.
Prem turns back and glares at him. Ask him to keep quite.And he turns back and starts to softly call Mukti's name.
Rajeev feels tht some1 is behind him and he turns back and look, it is Prerna. He puts his hand on Prem and Prem gets irritated and turns back and sees Prerna.

Prem: Ma?
Prerna: Wht r u doin here Prem?
Prem: Nothin Ma.
Prerna turns back and look at Rajeev.
Rajeev: I didn't want to come, but he forced me to come.
Prem turns back and look at him:Wht?
Rajeev: I told him, v shudn't do this, as u trusted me and I cudn't break ur trust by doin all this. He said its okay, even if u sees us, u will just give us one big bashan thts all.
Prem: Wht r u sayin?
Rajeev: Y r u actin like this Prem? Didn't u tell me, tht ur mother will lecture us if we get caught?
Prem: Yeah but then.....
Rajeev interupts: Yeah thts wht I am sayin, I told him, tht if he wants he can go, but I am not comin. Then he said tht means I don't love Namritha as much as he loves Mukti, and I didn't like tht, I just had to prove it to him tht I love her more than him. Sorry.
Prerna keeps glarin at Prem.
Prerna: Both of u go back to ur room, Rajeev don't let him get out of the room.
Rajeev: Yeah I will do tht.
Prem and Rajeev goes back to Prem's room and Prem is really angry.
Prem: Why the hell did u do tht?
Rajeev starts laughin: Revenge.
Prem: Revenge???For wht?
Rajeev: Tht day u lied to me abt Mukti, If u hadn't, I wud have met Namritha bit more earlier, u know how scared I was thinkin abt her, not knowin where she is and how she is.
Prem kinda feels guilty: Yeah I am sorry for tht, but u had ur revenge in jail ri8?When u said Mukti didn't want to see me anymore.
Rajeev: But I was not satisfied then.
Prem: Now u r?
Rajeev: Not very, but since u guys took good care of Namritha, I am willin to forgive u, but Namritha she is goin to have a tough time, I am not goin to forgive her so easily for scarin the life out of me.
Prem sarcastically: Thanx.
Rajeev smiles at him: U know, now we can be good friends.
Prem smiles at him:Yeah alrite, since Namritha is my best friend, I will have to tolerate her husband.

Next Part:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/386630/my-first-fanfic-part-nineteen
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey,sorry for no prem mukti scenes, will have more pm scenes in the nextpart. Pls comment and thnk u so much for all ur comments.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yaar its lovely i can also imagine the scene where prem n rajeev tries to sneak into muktis room......your fanfiction is great to count soon!!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...... i just loved it... 😉 👏 👏 keep going 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its a gr8 yaar 👏 👏 👏
continue soon
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thats really gud plz continue soon 👏
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WOW!!!I loved it! continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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