My First Fanfic(Part Seven)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello people I am back…….. thank you so much for the comments….. okay I will continue.

Previous parts for those who haven't read it.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Scene 18

Rehearsal place

Prem is being grumpy all morning and screaming at everyone. Mukti is very confused with Prem's behavior. Namritha is very happy with her plan working.

Namritha: Hi Prem. How r u doing?

Prem: What do you want?

Namritha: What happened Prem why r u in a bad mood?

Prem: I am not in a bad mood.

Namritha: What Prem? Ever since u saw Munna's photo u r acting like this. Don't tell me u r jealous.

Prem: I am not jealous. That too for that Basanti?? No way.

Namritha: Then why were u asking Mukti so much abt Munna. U even said Munna is not all that good looking. I think he is very hot and a very nice guy too.

Prem gets suspicious: U told me you have never met him, then how would u know whether he is nice or not?

Namritha: Er……..er…………that's 'coz Mukti keeps talking about him.

Prem gets angry: Don't u have practice. Go and stop irritating me.

Namritha: My practice for the day is over.

Mukti comes there then.

Mukti: Prem in the morning u didn't sign these papers. I need to drop it off at my office today.

Prem gives Mukti an angry looks and sign the paper.

Mukti (to Namritha): Whats happening?

Namritha: Nothing. We were just talking abt Munna.

Mukti gets excited: Munna? What abt Munna? U shud meet him Prem.

Prem(angrily): For what? Here's ur papers. Now go.

Mukti feels bad.

Namritha: Can I come and see ur office Mukti.

Mukti: Yeah sure.

Namritha and Mukti leaves.

Scene 19

Same place parking lot.

Prem is walking towards his car when a black C class Benz comes there. When Prem looks a man gets out of the car and he sees it is Munna. Prem gets even more angry.

Prem: Excuse me, may I help you.

Munna: Hi, I just wanted to know something.

Prem: Yes.

Munna: Does Mukti work here?

Prem: Why do you want to know that?

Munna: I need to meet her.

Prem: Why?

Munna: Why do I have to tell you that?

Prem: 'coz I am the boss here.

Munna: Oh! U might be Prem then. I know Mukti works in an event management company, and I wasn't sure which one and when I went to this event management company, they said that there is in fact a Mukti working there and if I need to meet her, then I should come here and if I don't meet her, then I should talk to Prem as u people r family friends too right.

Prem thinks for sometime and a plan strikes him: Mukti Deshmukh works here and she is my family friend. But she has gone on a family trip. Will be back only after 10 days.

Munna: 10 days? Do u have any no to contact her?

Prem: No. she has gone for some religious trip so didn't take her cell.

Munna: Oh! Can u please do me a favor?

Prem: What?

Munna gives Prem his visiting card and says: In case she contacts u and u see her, can u pls ask her to give me a call. Please don't forget.

Prem: Sure. I won't forget.

Munna: Thank u so much. Bye.

Prem: Bye.

After Munna leaves Prem looks at his visiting card and sees Rajeev Agarwal, lawyer and his cell and home no.

Prem: Rajeev Agarwal??? But Namritha told me his name is Munna? Might be his pet name………….. and Mukti calls him Munna??..........Mukti is going away from me. And all this happened just because I wanted to take revenge on Namritha for interfering in my life?

Prem throws the card on the floor and leaves.

Scene20

In a hospital

Mukti wakes up in a hospital bed and when she looks around Namritha is sitting there.

Namritha smiles at Mukti: Are u alrite Mukti?

Mukti: Yeah but what happened?

Namritha: When we were leaving ur office u swooned.

Mukti: What I passed out? But why?

Namritha: I don't know. Doctor was abt to tell me something. But she got a call, so she went out.

Doctor walks in.

Doctor: Hey u woke up? How do u feel now?

Mukit: I am fine doctor. But what happened to me?

Doctor smiles: Congratulations Mukti. You are going to become a mother.

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Edited by kuku_10 - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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great work yaar!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyy ur fanfic is soo goodd continuee soonnn i can't wait to see prem's reaction when he findss out and this whole mystery about munna and that rajeev guy.. all sooo interestingg.. continuee soon lol dun be like ekta and keep us waitinggg.... :D
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey i had accidently written Mukti sharma instead of Mukti Deshmukh.....it was a mistake 😳

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