My First Fanfic (Part Five)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Previous parts

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=332225


Scene 13

The next day.

Namritha is talking to Mukti. Prem is standing nearby and listening to them talk.

Namritha: Mukti, can I go early today please? I need to meet someone.

Mukti: Yeah no problem, anyway you have learned the dance well. So I don't think there will be any problem of u miss practice for one day.

Namritha: Thank you so much Mukti.

Prem thinking to himself: Let us see how you go early today Namritha.

Scene 14

Same day, evening.

Namritha is about to leave.

Prem: Namritha, where are u goin?

Namritha: My practice got over, so I am going.

Prem: What? No way, you need to practice more. The event is around the corner and you can't just go like that.

Namritha: Mukti told me I can go.

Prem: She is not the one who decides everything. I decide everything over here.

Namritha: Please Prem try to understand, I have to meet someone. Its very important. He will be waiting for me.

Prem: Call him up and tell him you can't come.

Namritha: He doesn't have a cell.

Prem: Then send someone and stop wasting my time and money.

Prem walks off.

Namritha sees Mukti.

Mukti: Namritha, thum abhi thak gayi nahi?

Namritha: Prem told me that I can't go and I need to practice.

Mukti: Oh.

Namritha: Can u please do me a favour?

Mukti: What is it?

Namritha: In my orphanage there is a boy who I am very closed to. Since Prem gave me some money as advance for the show, I thought I will get him some gifts and show him the place. Can u please do it for me? He will be in station now please Mukti?

Mukti: But Namritha, how can I go? I need to be here right?

Namritha: That's okay I will manage everything here… please Mukti.

Mukti: But what do I do with him?

Namritha: Mukti, he is just a boy of 12 yrs. Just shop him around…… he is a darling, you will love him. Please Mukti.

Mukti: Okay. I will do it. But how will I recognize him?

Namritha:. I will give you his photo. By the way his name is Munna.

Mukti: Alrite.

Namritha: I owe you big time.

Mukti: No problem.

After sometime Mukti leaves.

Scene15

In the evening.

Prem is looking through some files.

Prem (screams) : Mukti.

One girl: She is not here.

Prem: Not here? Where did she go?

One girl: I don't know. She was talking to Namritha before she left, she might know.

Prem goes to Namritha who was looking at some picture with a sad expression.

Prem: Did Mukti tell you where she was going?

Namritha: Yeah I send her somewhere.

Prem: What? When did u start making decisions here?

Namritha: It was not my decision. It was ur decision.

Prem: My decision? Are you out of mind?

Namritha: Didn't u tell me that I can't go, if I want I can send someone else to tell the person that I can't come, so I send Mukti.

Prem: When will she be back?

Namritha: I don't think she will be coming back today. Munna's train is at 9, so she will come only after that.

Prem gets irritated : Alrite.

Prem was about to leave when he sees the photo lying next to Namritha. He takes the photo before she could anything. And he sees a handsome guy's picture.

Prem: Who is this? Your boyfriend?

Namritha gets tensed.

Namritha: He is no one. Give back the photo.

Prem: Tell me cupid, who is this? What is his name?

Namritha: Er………er…………er……….. he is Munna.

Prem starts getting tensed: What????????????????????? He is Munna???? I thought Munna was a small boy.

Namritha: No he is Munna.

Prem: Who is he? Is he your boy friend?

Namritha: No he is not my boyfriend. Don't ask anything about him please.

Prem: If he is not your boyfriend then who is he? How can you just send Mukti to meet him. What is he doing? Where is he from?

Namritha: I don't know anything about him.

Prem: What do you mean you don't know anything about him?

Namritha: Because I haven't met him in my life.

Prem: What?

Namritha: Er……….er………..er………. DATE!!! That's it!! I was supposed to go out on a date with him. My friend fixed us up.

Prem: Date???? Then why did Mukti go? If she went to tell him that you can't meet him today then why is she staying with him till his train leaves?

Namritha: She is going with him as his date.

Prem: Date??????? How can she go in your place?

Namritha: Er………….er……………er………….BLIND DATE!!!! That's it!!! It was supposed to be blind date.

Prem: Blind date???? She will go as you?

Namritha: She will go as Mukti only………… She will manage everything…….. She is a smart girl.

Prem: But………….. how can you send her on a blind date just like that………. You don't even know this guy…….Munna- what is he?a baby?...........what if he is not a nice guy? What if he is a serial killer, a rapist or something like that?

Namritha suddenly forms a plan.

Namritha: My friend knows him very well. He is going somewhere, and his next train is only at night. So he will be alone here as he doesn't have any friends. So I just needed to give him company till he needs to leave. So my friend said why don't u just make it a blind date. She thinks its time for him to get married as he is well settled in life. That's it. Anyway I was just doing it as a favor. I don't know what will happen between him and Mukti.

Prem: What???

Namritha: I don't know y u r getting so hyper overall this. Anyway its her life, she can do whatever she wants.

Prem: Why can't you just stop interfering in our life?

Namritha: I am not interfering in your life or anything. If she didn't want to go she would have told me right. I think she practices what she preaches unlike you.

Prem: What do you mean?

Namritha: You both keep saying that you both have moved on….. well looks like she has and you haven't. Anyway I need to go. I have practice. Where is that photo? (She takes the photo from Prem) By the way Prem, he is very hot right?

Namritha leaves with a victorious smile.

Prem: Mukti on a date with someone else??? Oh god.

To be continued soon. Please do comment.

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

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